Chapter 5
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 5 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I just borrowed them for a while. I promise to put them back when I'm done. Oh, nope, no money either...just for fun.
I want to give a great big thank you hug to EverMystique and DuchessOfArcadia for combing through this to help me make this presentable for reading. You're the best, thank you!
Because of the diary, Severus knew that he'd been in a fight with Potter and Black after Ancient Runes on his way to Herbology. He knew where, right after he turned the corner to head for the stairs, but not precisely when, just approximately. So, if I wait, if I stall for time, maybe the fight wouldn't happen. Maybe I'll get to Hermione before either Potter or Black see me, or her, and I can avoid the fight altogether. He checked the corridor to see if any of the Gryffindors were around as he exited the classroom and walked as casually as he could, given that his nerves were on high alert for an attack. Merlin, I hate second-guessing this. That thought alone made him determined to take better notes than his older self did. In fact he'd write down all his 'encounters' with Potter and Black and maybe avoid them all... Who am I kidding, a lot of good that would do me now!
He saw Danny Wang in the corridor, apparently catching up with his friends. "Wang, wait up a moment," Severus called out, holding up a hand to get his attention. He'd rarely spoken to the guy and never outside of class, so it was no wonder that the guy looked back at him suspiciously. The four Ravenclaws stood together as Severus approached.
Now he had to ask the guy something without sounding like an idiot. "I was wondering if I could ask you something about the essay assignment for Arithmancy," he lied. It was the best he could think of.
"Okay," Wang replied, his eyes still narrowed suspiciously. All four guys looked at him expectantly, two with their arms crossed defiantly.
They all took the subject, so he'd have to come up with something quick. Now what? "On the length, did Professor Goddard mean that the assignment was to be a total of four feet or are the individual questions to be four feet each?"
All four looked at each other in confusion as if Severus had announced a new theory. Wuhin shrugged, Wang looked at Severus with wide eyes, and Cox shook his head and shrugged. It was Daniels that answered, "All four total, I think."
"Oh. Well, er," Severus pretended to stammer as if that wasn't the answer he'd expected.
Wang took the bait. "What? Is that wrong? Is it four feet per question?"
Severus could see Black waiting at the junction of the corridors, pointing in his direction. He turned his attention back to Wang. "I thought it was four feet per question, and I have finished the first three questions, but I can only get two feet of material on the third, Ferris' theory, including a comparative to Wentworth's equation of equal congruent probabilities." It was a lie. He could write a book on the improbability of Ferris' theory since he thought the wizard was a dunderhead.
"Well," Wang stretched out the single word as his mind went into gear. "There is the obvious hole in his theory about using triad equations... and Kincaid's principle..."
Severus snuck a quick glance and noticed that Black was moving away. "Great, because I was going to factor in parallel versus congruent probabilities with multiple vectors," he said, resisting the smirk when Wang, Cox, and Daniels looked impressed. It was hardly a stretch as the theorems were compatible anyway. "Okay, thanks, I have to go."
He walked to the junction of the corridor and knelt to retie his shoe, slyly checking his watch. She is due any moment...unless the wizard was wrong. But then his older self had said that Hermione appeared in the middle of the duel and had been hit. No telling how long the fight had gone on in the old wizard's time, but in his time, the fights with Potter and Black were usually rather quick. Neither Black nor Potter wanted to be seen firing a spell at him by a professor...but if he was seen firing a spell at them...that was a whole other matter. He adjusted his sock and glanced down the corridor. Lupin was coming, which didn't bode well. Severus switched position to retie his other shoe. Lupin nodded as he passed and kept going. He couldn't wait any longer. He opened his bag as if checking something and saw Potter walking up to Lupin. Severus stood, backed into the corridor out of sight and collided with a stunned Hermione Granger.
"Ouch!" she exclaimed and then smiled even though she still looked a bit confused. "Oh, hi."
"Quiet," he hissed, taking her hand in his to make her run with him. "This way. C'mon." He took off for the end of the corridor, dragging her along, dropping her hand when they reached the statue of Anuguard the Stout. He had to get her to the dungeons from the fifth floor and not run into the Gryffindor bullies that were still in the corridors on their way to Charms or run into any of his house mates.
"Why are we running?" she asked softly enough.
"Because I have to get you safely tucked away before I am late to class," he said, leading the way down another corridor. He was going to be late to class anyway. At least she was keeping up with him, or trying to, considering the bag she carried. He knew from experience it was really heavy and full of books, and not just her school books either. He pulled his wand out and charmed the bag to be lighter so she could keep up with him better.
"Thanks," she said, picking up her pace. "Why don't I hide in the library until...?"
"Are you daft?" he asked, nearly breaking stride from turning his head too quickly to look at her. "You cannot be seen. Remember?"
"When's lunch?" she asked.
He silently swore. "Had it," he snapped, willing her to be quiet. "Dinner is in four hours." He didn't want to attract any more attention than could be helped.
"Oh," she said, and he could hear her disappointment.
"Yeah, oh." He stopped and turned to consider the fact that she might have missed hers. The book told him what time she arrived, not when she'd left. It could be a long time to dinner for her. "Are you hungry?"
"I can wait," she replied, shrugging and hitching her bag up on her shoulder.
He nodded once, opened a door, and hurried down a spiral stairway.
"Does this go to the Ravenclaw common room?" she asked, her voice carrying loudly in the stone stairway.
"I have no idea, but it goes down to the first floor. I...the only ones I know are Slytherins' and Gryffindors' common rooms," he answered her, growing a bit impatient with her questions.
"Why is that?" she asked, stopping on the last step as Severus stopped to the opened the door.
"Always good to know where the vipers nest is," he said. He pulled out the small blue box and opened it. "Put it in here again. That way the setting won't change, unless it has while we were running."
She pulled the chain over her head and dropped the Time-Turner inside. "It should be all right," she replied with a frown as he pocketed her Time-Turner.
Severus checked to see if the coast was clear, ignoring her apparent disappointment. So far they'd lucked out; they hadn't been seen by any of the professors and very few students.
When they got to the main stairs, Severus hesitated and held his wand ready in case he had to make a diversion. "Okay, make a nogtail and run for the dungeons. Don't stop. I'm right behind you." She took off running, and he easily caught up to her, smirking at her nice, even stride. She ran like a deer: she maneuvered quickly, was sure footed, and her footfalls made only light thuds on the stone floors.
Once they'd made it to her room, Hermione gasped at the changes Severus and Snape had made that his older self had suggested. They had done as much to the room as they could to give her a comfortable living space. "I made a few changes," he said as he pulled out her Time-Turner and checked it carefully. "Good, no damage. But the sand is clear, and it's really hot."
"How is it that you know when I'm going to appear?" she asked, crossing her arms as if cold.
"I can't tell you that," he said and turned to go. "I'll be back after Herbology. So don't go anywhere."
"No, I'll wait for you," he heard her say before he left. He ran all the way to class, hoping he wasn't too late and that Professor Sprout would buy the excuse that he'd been trying to avoid a fight with Black.
Hermione looked around the small classroom. What had caught her eye upon entering were the Slytherin four-poster bed in the corner and the tapestries on the walls to cut the cold. The green drapes of the bed were tied back, and she could see an extra quilt folded at the foot of the bed. A bedside table with a lamp stood against the wall and a rug lay on the floor so she'd be able to slip from the bed and not freeze her feet on the stone floor. The desk she'd transfigured into a kind of trunk had been modified and now stood a few steps from the bed at the edge of the carpet, making a definite sleeping area. He'd placed a large pitcher and wash bowl with a few hand towels on it for her use. There was even a comfortable chintz chair next to a reading lamp near the foot of the bed. Her gaze swept across the room, noting that the teacher's desk still stood next to the enlarged student's desk she and Severus had used to read and revise the last time she had been here. She wondered where the bed had come from, then assumed that he'd found the bed and moved it in here for her.
The benches were stacked just as she'd left them, and the blankets were still stacked neatly on them along with her plate, cup and cutlery. His two cauldrons, some potion ingredients, a pile of books and some utensils, scales, and a set of measuring spoons and cups took up one bench. She touched the old scales reverently with a soft smile on her lips. I wonder what he'll brew while I'm here...or if he'll brew anything?
She walked over and peered under the bed. Her chamber pot was still there as well as six rolls of toilet paper. Hermione stood and laughed. She sat on the bed and gazed around again. He has really tried to make this as comfortable as possible for me. Such consideration astounded her. Sure, he had been really thoughtful the last time she'd accidently bounced back to his time, but that time he'd really only seen to her needs. He hadn't gone all out for her like this. She ran her hand on the green and black quilt, smiling at the feeling of the velveteen. The drapes were a heavy, green damask with sheer white curtains underneath. They would be prefect if she wanted privacy but still wanted to have some light while sitting in bed.
She walked over to look at the items in the trunk. The robes he'd given to her to use were neatly folded inside along with three pairs of socks and two nightshirts, one grey and the other white. Her hairbrush and toothbrush were in the trunk as well as shampoo, conditioner, soap, toothpaste... even flossing mints. Severus had thought of everything.
She walked over to set her bag down on the table and wished she'd had her books to write her Potions essay for Professor Snape, then chuckled at the irony of her situation.
Severus ducked down the stairs to the kitchens after Herbology. He still had Charms, but if he hurried, he could make a quick stop at the kitchens and then see Hermione for a bit before class.
His older self had suggested enlisting the help of Mystery, one of the house-elves that took care of the Slytherin dormitories. He had no idea how he could convince the elf to help him, since they didn't like to get involved in students affairs and wouldn't keep a secret from Headmaster Dumbledore.
All the elves gathered around him the moment he entered the kitchens.
"Is sir wanting something?" a female in a tea towel-toga asked as a male who had his towel tied around his waist asked, "How can we serves you, sir?"
"I was wondering if I could have something to eat?" he asked, not sure of what Hermione would like. "You know, snacks."
Several of the house-elves sprang into action, bringing all kinds of food, from sweets to a variety of fruit, corn, chips, chicken legs, cheese and crackers. Another elf handed him a platter as Severus started selecting various foods for Hermione, and the eager elves helped him pile on the goodies.
As he turned to go, a female elf handed him a pitcher of pumpkin juice. "Does sir want anything else, sir?"
"Ah, no. Thank you. This is so much... more," he said, trying to open the door with his hands full, "than I expected."
A small elf pushed the door open for him, grinning with a huge smile. "Thank you, sir. We is glad to haves served you, sir. Bye, sir."
He set the pitcher down and cast a spell to keep the food from falling and added a Notice-Me-Not on himself, the tray, and then the pitcher. He made it to the dungeons without incident and kicked the door to the old classroom with his toe. "It's me, let me in."
"Severus?" Hermione asked as she opened the door with her wand held ready in her hand.
"Well, who did you think it was?" he snarled as he carried the overloaded tray and pitcher to the desk.
"Well, I dunno, Filch, maybe? One of your house mates, possibly? Even Professor Dumbledore," she rattled off with her hands on her hips. "It's not like we have a secret password or a code or anything."
"All right, I'll use Menelaus," he said sarcastically, turning to face her.
"Funny," she snorted and put away her wand. "You are not my father, and although my father says my mum is the most beautiful woman in the world, she never sank a thousand ships."
"So you are up on your mythology," he said, impressed despite himself. Interesting. Well, she had a Muggle background, and her father liked reading historical stories to her. If she was from a wizarding family, she would know her wizarding mythology as well... "So you've read the stories of Helen of Troy."
"I've read all the stories of the Greek legends and mythology. My father loves history and mythology, so he'd read it to me as bedtime stories," she stated.
"I remember you saying something about that last time. So, now, what to do with you?" he asked, leaning against the desk he used as a workbench. "Last time you managed to stay in here pretty well, but this time the Time-Turner might take longer to become usable. As I recall, you got a bit stir crazy at the end, and I have to know that I can trust you."
"I couldn't help it. I'm sorry," Hermione apologized and looked at the floor as her face flushed a bright pink. "Why do you think that it may take longer?" She looked up, the blush still present, tinting her cheeks. "And how did you know me, last time? How is it that you knew when and where I would show up? Why are you hiding me and not the Headmaster? Does the Headmaster even know I'm here? Or Professor McGonagall? Shouldn't I be under their supervision?"
Severus let her get all her questions out. He'd rolled his eyes at the second question and had ran his hands over his face into his hair at the fourth one, and his hands fell to his sides at her last. "Are you through, or are there more?" he asked, exasperated by the endless questions that he couldn't answer. "I cannot tell you how I know you or how I know any of this. I assure you it isn't by Divination. As for the Headmaster, I dunno. I didn't tell him anything. But I think that since I'm apparently the only one to know, its best we keep it that way, all right? The fewer who know about you or see you, the less influence and interference there is on my...your timeline. This...us...it's risky enough, but if you mess around, I'd hate to think the consequences you'd cause."
She sighed heavily and looked at her bag on the floor. "I don't have enough work to keep me occupied for a week, let alone longer."
"I'll bring you books. We can brew together, if you like. We can... I dunno, practice spells," he suggested, remembering what his older self said. He doubted he'd enjoy brewing fourth-year level potions, but it would keep her occupied. At least she seemed to cheer up at his suggestions, and he could give them to Slughorn to fulfill Madam Pomfrey's request list. "I usually spend my time in the library when not in classes. I think I can come here at least one break a day without notice. I'll bring food, and I can come here in the evenings, like last time." Although, Avery was getting pretty curious last time. "But if my house mates start getting suspicious and start looking for me...at least none of them come in here. They know I come in here to brew, though. The bed can be hidden if that becomes a problem..."
"I appreciate that, and I'll keep to this room as much as possible." She turned to look at his potions kit on the benches. "What were you brewing?" she asked, sounding hopeful.
He smirked. "Whatever I damn well feel like, actually. You know that I sometimes brew potions that my house mates want for money. Lately, when Pot-er, Madam Pomfrey needs something for the hospital wing, Professor Slughorn gives me extra credit to help out." He cursed himself mentally. He almost told her that he'd been brewing his own potions to relieve whatever Potter and Black did to him. He even kept a journal of counter curses and hexes in his pocket, but he didn't want to tell her that either.
"I'd love to learn Healer's potions," she said enthusiastically.
"All right, we'll do Burns, Sprains, and Fever Potions after dinner for the next few days. Madam Pomfrey is always glad to have those on supply. We can do Pepper-Up and Pain Potions as well, if they aren't too difficult for you," he suggested. "Of course, you did all right last time we brewed together." Besides Madam Pomfrey had already said she'd pay him for his potions. The improvements he'd made alone on the Burn Pastes had really impressed her. He wanted to try and improve the Anti-bacterial Salve for cuts so that it stung less when it was applied.
That night he showed her his directions for the second and third degree Burn Paste.
"You write in your books?" she asked, looking up at him as if he'd committed a mortal sin.
"Yeah, I write in my books. Don't you make annotations while revising?" he asked, knowing that all of his books were covered in his handwriting.
"I use a journal or a notebook," she stated, fingering the page with a look of regret. "I suppose I respect and treasure books too much to deface them."
He scoffed at her and pulled his book away from her. "You sound like Madam Pince."
"I like her," she stated as if talking about a long lost friend.
"No one likes her," he scoffed at her and started to pull out the ingredients he'd need from his cauldron.
She tipped her head to the side and smirked at him. "You do...well, you will, and the professors get along with her well enough." She picked up the coffee filter and furrowed her brow in confusion then set it down. "There is a rumor that she and Mr. Filch are a couple."
He laid the filter on the spouted glass jar. "Okay, that's a visual I didn't need, thank you very much." He passed her the comfrey. "Do you think you can press the sap from the stems and then dice the leaves?"
"Sure," she said, reaching for the trenched cutting board and pestle he'd borrowed from the Potions classroom. He watched her carefully as they worked, only having to correct her technique a few times.
By the time the second potion was simmering, he was even slightly impressed. She was quite proficient at following his directions. She had only needed to be told or shown things once and had only asked pertinent questions while they worked. Maybe this won't be so bad after all. He looked at his watch. "Damn, it's late. It's past curfew already!"
"I can finish up here, if you like?" she offered.
He quickly gathered up his utensils. "I have to clean my utensils and there isn't a sink in here." The potions needed to sit for a few hours.
"I'll watch the potions. The first is nearly done and the second still needs an hour to simmer according to your directions. Since I'm here anyway, I'll take care of them. Really. It's not like I have anywhere to go or anyplace I have to be tomorrow."
He checked the timer and the potion.
"When the timer goes off, lower the flame until it's barely visible and let it sit another half hour," she said as if reading his mind. "Then turn off the flame, and let it cool another fifteen minutes before bottling. You said we're using the clear, brown jars for the Burn Paste."
"You're sure?" he asked, not wanting to trust the potion with anyone but himself, even her. He was getting six Sickles per cauldron for these potions.
"I'm sure," she said, looking up at him with pure sincerity in her large, soft brown eyes.
He hesitated, lost for a moment in her gaze, then turned his head and grabbed his utensils. "Thank you."
"No problem," she said as he hurried for the door. "Good night, Severus."
"Night."
The next day, Severus collected a mountain of books on all subjects, still not sure which ones Hermione was taking. He'd simply grabbed at random from each section. Madam Pince raised an eyebrow as he set the pile on her desk. "You are certainly becoming an avid reader," she sneered. "You have a twelve book limit, Mr. Snape."
"Some are for Avery," he lied, wondering what Avery's book limit was.
Apparently, Madam Pince didn't know either as she had to look it up. "He never checks out more than three."
"He's in the hospital wing for a week, Ma'am," Severus stated, mentally crossing his fingers. He was in the hospital wing, recovering from a bad reaction from being hit by two different spells. "I thought it would help him keep up on his class work."
"Very well, but you'll have to sign for them," she replied. "And you will be responsible for their return...and their condition."
"Absolutely," he agreed, knowing that someone who loved books as Hermione did wouldn't deface them. Hermione's delight at seeing the books made carting all twenty books down to the dungeons worthwhile. "I had no idea what subjects you take, so I grabbed something from each subject..."
"Oh! This one was lost...and this one had been off the shelves forever!" she exclaimed, picking up the top books and reading the titles. "This one was in the card catalogue as missing... and you have Mortensen's Aquatic Botanicals! Oh, Severus, thank you!"
"Oi! That's for my Herbology! I need that one!" he said, taking it back. "It's about class level six... I can't believe you're reading sixth-year Herbology books!"
"I wanted to know about the coral of the lophelia in the Darwin Mounds of Cape Wrath," she said, eyeing the book wistfully.
"It's a potions ingredient for Nail Strengthening Potion," he said, placing the book in front of him as he separated the books he'd gotten for his own essays from the ones he'd checked out for her.
"Used in hair and nail strengthening potions, actually," Hermione stated, still eyeing the book hopefully.
"Figures a girl would know that," he scoffed. He'd not taken her as one of the type of girls that worried about their appearance. She sure didn't while she'd been here, except for requesting regular trips to the showers.
"My dorm mates, Lavender and Parvati, are into all that girl stuff. I'm interested in the coral, how it's harvested and its properties..."
Severus snorted a laugh and handed her the book. "We'll share it," he said. "Well, happy reading. I have class. I'll be back at lunch."
Hermione picked up the book and hurried over to her chair by the bed. He shook his head as he left her to her amusements.
~ T. B. .C. ~
Author's Notes:
Do you see much of Professor Snape in young Severus' actions?
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Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~