Chapter 3
Consequences of Meddling with Time
Chapter 3 of 54
beaweasley2Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidently alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.
Disclaimer: Not mine. I just borrowed them for a while. I promise to put them back when I'm done. Oh, nope, no money either...just for fun.
I want to give a great big thank you hug to EverMystique for combing through this to point out my numerous errors and help me make this presentable for reading. You're the best, thank you!
Severus entered the room, surprised to find it still dark. He lit one of two wall sconces and walked over to the bed to see if she was still there. Hermione was asleep, rolled toward him slightly with one hand placed by her cheek, and the blankets pulled to her chin. One strand of hair lay on her cheek, and he thought about brushing it back for a second. She looked almost pretty when she slept: her eyelashes in two delicate fans against her skin, tiny freckles on her nose, and her lips slightly parted. She had a dreamy kind of smile on her face. He turned his head, contemplating leaving the sheets on one of the benches when she stirred, her head moving slightly.
He held his breath, not wanting to wake her. Hermione seemed to settle back down, and he expelled the breath he'd hadn't realized he'd been holding for so long. She moaned, shifted subtly, sighed contentedly, and inhaled deeply. It was nearly hypnotic watching her. He swallowed and forced himself to breathe. She's only a kid. A little kid, he reminded himself. Hermione inhaled deeply again as if in response to his thoughts, rolled onto her back and stretched, both of her hands rising up to the head of the bed, her legs out straight, and her breasts straining upward against the blankets, which slid down to reveal bare shoulders. His heart skipped a beat. She's naked? No! She wouldn't...couldn't! He swallowed again, fully aware now that she wore next to nothing under the covers, and the part of his anatomy that shouldn't have reacted to a thirteen-year-old girl did. Or fourteen...she might be... Oh, shite! Get a grip! She's just a little girl who will leave at the end of the week!
She relaxed again, and he willed his body to do the same. He stepped forward about to dump his sheets and blanket on her bed when she stretched again, making the blankets slip a bit further, revealing the top curve of her breasts. He nearly choked. Her eyes fluttered open and she mumbled, "Good morning," huskily with a yawn, making his penis stiffen even more.
He dumped his bedding on the foot of her bed and turned quickly before she could notice his shameful reaction to her. "Morning," he said and hurried from the room, praying that no one was in the corridor and would see him. Good, Mother of Merlin! I'm not a pervert! She's...she...oh shite! Gods, I hope she didn't see. He hurried to the loo. It's still early. Everyone's asleep, I hope.
As he'd promised, he'd brought new bedding for her and had hurried off to breakfast. Hermione had stretched and looked up at him, greeting him with a groggy, yawn slurred "good morning," but he'd turned quickly and had dashed away, barely mumbling "morning" back at her. She'd risen, stripped her bed, and replaced the sheets. When she tucked the pillow under her chin, she noticed that the pillowcases had been used, although this time they smelled nice, not rank. There was an herb and smoke scent to his sheets, mixed with his own scent, which she found quite appealing. She inhaled the pillowcase before setting it down. Nah, not bad. His sheets must have been exchanged yesterday. She wondered how often housekeeping exchanged the sheets at Hogwarts. She'd never seen anyone but Mr. Filch doing any cleaning and wondered how the staff managed to move about so efficiently. They must do the dorms while everyone is in classes.
Hermione knew that she'd have to dress quickly. She'd apparently had a bit of a lie in since he'd already been by to see her. She hoped that he'd return soon with breakfast. The robes he had given her smelled different than the sheets he'd just left and were of better quality than he usually wore. He wears second hand ones like Ron does, so whose are these, I wonder? She shrugged, performed a Refreshing Charm on her robes at the foot of her bed, and dressed. He'd found her a brush and a toothbrush, or made them for her since they looked unused, but Hermione found brushing her teeth in a cup of water unsatisfying. Maybe tonight he'd take her to the bathroom again. What I wouldn't give for a sink! Even one like in the Potions classroom.
She went to the desk to sort out the books she'd read from the ones she hadn't and sat down to wait him with Physical Shapeshifting Through Transformation by Phaedrus Goldschlager. She opened up the page to the author's preface and began reading. His take on techniques and the essentials of concentration of purpose was fascinating, if not a bit dry. He reiterated, numerous times, on maintaining one's focus on the desired effect, having unwavering determination to make the change, a firm concentration of the image desired, understanding the foundations of the shape to be transformed into. Nevertheless, Hermione found that he had several good points, which he was obviously trying to drive home. The suggestion that one must know the anatomy of the creature or object not only being changed but that of the desired shape made sense. Professor McGonagall had said that numerous times. But it made Hermione aware that she was woefully ignorant of the anatomical structure of animals, even though she was well versed in her own anatomical structure.
"Thinking of changing your appearance?" Severus asked, frightening Hermione momentarily so that she nearly jumped out of her skin.
"It was on the desk...I didn't hear you come in!" she quickly stammered her explanation.
"Obviously," he said, setting down an enlarged plate of food and crossing his arms as he waited for her to join him. He seemed upset about something, distant. Hermione stared at the impressive amount of food and he frowned. "I still have no idea what you like for breakfast, so I brought a little of everything."
"Toast and jam is usually enough for me," she said, getting up to retrieve her plate and cutlery. "I occasionally have a bit of egg and sausage or bacon." He was sitting, waiting for her when she turned around. "But you must be starving."
He hadn't moved, still sitting with his arms crossed and staring blankly at her. "No," he said, waiting until she took a Scottish egg and slice of toast. "That's it?"
Hermione nodded as she sliced the egg in bites. "It's enough. I don't think I'll be getting loads of exercise over the next few days, so I won't get as hungry as I would normally."
"Oh, right," Severus replied, pulling the plate towards him and picked up his fork. "That's a poorly written book," he said after a while, pointing his fork at the book by her.
"He has some good theories," she replied, still perplexed by his cool attitude.
"How far did you get?" he asked, filling the pitcher with water.
At least he was talking to her. Maybe someone said something to upset him earlier. "Up through the author's notes and into the introduction," she said conversationally, hoping he'd get into a discussion about the book.
"It goes downhill from there," he said dismissively, pouring water into her cup. "Black had the book for ages his fifth year."
She sighed. Apparently he didn't feel like talking about it this morning. "Thank you. I was wondering if you'd be going to the library today?" she asked, looking up at him hopefully.
He smirked at her in a way that was all too familiar but friendlier than his older version. "I go there every day, sometimes twice. It's where I am during the day when I'm not in class. Why? Have you read everything all ready?"
Hermione indicated the books at the end of the table. "Those, yes."
His eyes widened in surprise for a second. "I'll exchange them. You like to read, don't you?"
"Very much," she replied.
"Good," he said, bending over his plate as he ate.
Hermione stretched and yawned, wondering what time it was and how soon Severus would come to see her. He'd said yesterday that he'd have to eat occasionally in the Great Hall or his friends might become suspicious of his absence so he'd been gone most of the day. He'd brought her food at breakfast and lunch but had left shortly after. She'd only seen him at dinner when he'd worked on his essays at the desk with her until his bedtime.
She got up, dressed and made her bed, then looked around. There wasn't much to do. She walked over to the benches and wistfully caressed his cauldron. "I'll ask him if I can use them," she said softly to herself. She looked at the food still under stasis and selected a chicken leg, apple, and cheese for breakfast. She scanned the titles, choosing The 1000 Year Leap: The 100 Great Ideas That Changed the World, and walked back to the bed. She settled down to read, her feet swinging in the air as she bit into the apple. She was reading about Ignatia Wildsmith's discovery of Floo Powder in 1291 when Severus came into the room. He tossed a grey wad of cloth next to her extra robes and picked up his cauldron.
"Hi," she said cheerfully, scrambling from the bed to greet him.
"You might as well read," he said grumpily.
"Why? What are you going to brew? May I help?" she asked, walking over to him.
"Everlasting Floral Fresh Potion and Blue-Eyes Color Change Elixir," he said gruffly. "And no. These are sixth-year potions...way above you."
Hermione bristled at his comment. "I was only offering to help. I am quite capable to follow directions, and I could brew them if I wanted..."
"I don't need help," he said sharply.
"What's got your wand in a knot?" she asked softly, placing her hand on his back.
He stiffened and shrugged her off. "Nothing."
"Nothing?" she asked, bewildered.
"Yeah, nothing," he snapped again, picking up a box from under the bench she'd not noticed before.
She fought back the angry tears at his curtness. He was the only one she could talk to, the only one who even knew she was here. "So why are you snapping at me over nothing?" She was so bored, and she'd looked forward to seeing him, just to have someone to talk to... and he was being a prat.
"I'm not snapping at you," he snapped again, turning to set the box on the desk they shared.
Hermione quickly averted her face so that he wouldn't see the tears that threatened to fall.
"Oh, of all the... Fine," he said exasperatedly. "But if you ruin my potion, I'll spank you."
"You'll what?!" she gasped in shock, whirling around to stare at him, tear-filled eyes forgotten, hardly believing that he'd said 'spank.'
"Oh, for the Mother of Merlin," he said, turning away from her and pulling out indigo leaves from a pouch, and then taking several Phoenician sea snails from his pocket. "Do you know how to extract the mucus secretion from the hypobranchial gland?"
If he thought that by giving her the more disgusting ingredient preparation she'd change her mind, he was sadly mistaken. "Yes, but I'll have to borrow a brass borer from you. I obviously don't have mine."
He handed her the tool with a smirk. "Be sure to get as much as you can."
Hermione suppressed a smug smile and turned the snail over in her hand. She carefully stimulated the lower third of the sail's underside to encourage the creation of the secretion. It would take an hour at least to get him enough secretion to fill the small measuring spoon he set in front of her. She looked up and saw a bottle of saline in his kit. "May I use that, please?"
"Why?" he asked.
She looked at him in surprise. "Because you...I mean my Potions instructor told us that using tiny amounts of saline induces the snails to produce more secretions," she explained, thankfully catching her slip in time. It was true that he'd told her that, but in her time, not his, and she had no idea if he knew that fact yet or not. Oops! Now he does! I have to watch what I say! Damn it. Well, maybe he made the discovery anyway.
"Salt will harm the snail and ruin the secretion," he said, reaching out his hand to take the snail from her.
"No it won't!" Hermione exclaimed as she jerked her hand holding the snail away from him. "Salt...yes. Saline in a teeny amount, won't."
His eyes narrowed suspiciously, then widened. "Blimey, you were told that?"
"Yes, in Potions," she admitted and sighed as she sank a bit in her chair. "I'm not supposed to tell you anything about my time."
He handed her the saline. "Well, you did, so you might as well show me."
Hermione poured a small amount out on the cap and touched just the tip of her tool in the saline, flicked her wrist to eliminate the excess and gently rubbed the tip on the snail's underside. The secretion oozed out around the borer. She held the tip of the tool over the measuring spoon and softly said the spell to make the secretion slide off and into the spoon. Severus watched her without any hint of expression to give away his thoughts, nodded once and turned back to his shredding of the indigo leaves.
An hour later when the potion was finished, he set it to cool and walked over to pick up his bag. "I have class," he said and turned to go. "I'll bottle the potions later."
"I can do that for you, if you like," she offered sweetly.
Might as well. "Fine," he relented. He reached under the benches and pulled out an old crate. Hermione's eyes went wide when she saw it materialize. "What? I use this room to brew my potions because my dorm mates don't like the smells."
"No! I just don't remember that being there when I stacked the benches," she said, accepting the crate of bottles.
"It was under the desk. I moved them to the wall before I made your bed," he explained, wondering why it would surprise her that he had extra bottles in his potions lab. "Look, no one comes in here because I'm willing to brew potions for them. The Everlasting Floral Fresh and Blue-Eyes Color Change Elixir are for two of the girls in seventh-year. They're paying me for them."
"Okay," she replied with a shrug. "I didn't ask you or expect you to explain. I was just amazed, that's all."
He shook off her remark. "I cannot come back until late. Avery wants some help with something, so I can't come back until tonight."
"That's fine, I'll read or something," she said with a smile.
The 'or something' bothered him. So far, she'd been cooperative and had stayed in the room as he'd asked. "Look, you cannot go out and..."
"Be seen. I know, I was only teasing you," she'd finished his sentence, although that was not what he'd been about to say.
"I'll exchange the books you read for others tomorrow," he offered, hoping it would keep her from going crazy. "At this rate you'll have read every book in the library."
"That is my personal goal," she replied, smirking at him.
Somehow he actually believed her. "See you later."
"Bye."
He shook his head and left. He hoped Avery believed that he'd brewed both potions in an hour and a half, but he doubted it. So far Rosier and Mulciber hadn't noticed his absences, but that was pure luck, and Severus knew he was rarely this lucky. Thortenson was starting to talk to Severus more, but Miss Linnet kept him sufficiently occupied as of late. No, the only one noticing, was Avery.
Hermione woke that morning and made her bed quickly. She'd found the grey flannel nightshirt Severus had left her and was once again struck by his thoughtfulness. He'd been right; the room was cold, especially at night. She'd started using his robes, since hers were a bit rank after wearing them for a few days. She tried washing her knickers, and they were drying on one of the desks in the corner. A draft wafted up under the robe when she'd moved around, and it made her feel naughty, but it couldn't be helped. She only had the one pair. She'd changed his cup into a chamber pot that she'd stashed under her bed and cleaned it after each use. At least he'd thought to bring her a roll of toilet paper and an old cauldron. Which reminded her, she'd need another roll if she had to stay much longer, and neither of them seemed to know how long she'd be here.
She sat at her desk and waited for Severus to arrive after breakfast as had become his normal routine.
Severus was so different from what she'd expected. Whereas Professor Snape stood tall and erect, exuding confidence, his younger self was usually stooped, wary, and suspicious. Well, maybe the suspiciousness wasn't all that different. This Severus seemed more affable, but he still didn't like to talk about himself. He did, however, quote books and references when they talked, especially when it became a heated discussion. And he liked to debate, frequently taking a devil's-advocate position on the subject. He was so well read, so smart, and, in a way, funny. He was snarky, had a sharp wit, and a dry humor. He was guarded around her unless they talked about academic things or when she told him about things that had gone on in London during his time...her past. He was greatly amused that she loved the Beatles, Chicago, Elton John and Fleetwood Mac. They both liked the Rocky Horror Picture Show, and he had laughed at her because she'd refused to see Jaws.
Hermione tried so hard not to add to his burden, but each day when he'd look at the Time-Turner, he'd scowl and put it back on her makeshift shelves.
Severus watched her from between the curtains of his hair. Hermione had her head resting in her hand, the other one holding the edge of the page ready to turn it as soon as she reached the end. She had a cute, pert nose and soft, curving eyebrows over her warm, brown eyes that were so trusting they reminded him of a doe's. She was smart...too smart...and liked to show off what she knew. She was a voracious reader and read everything and anything he brought her. Twice now, he caught her trying spells that were way above her level, managing to accomplish the difficult charms.
He casually wondered how many of the spells she'd tried from the books he'd brought her. She was quite good at Charms and Transfiguration, loved Arithmancy and Runes, even Alchemy. He wondered what other subjects she was taking in school. Knowing the wide selection of books he'd brought her, there wasn't a subject, discipline, or practice of magic that didn't interest her, except for the Dark Arts. He'd been careful at first to bring her books that had the number three and four on the shelving code, but he'd seen her frequently reading his books he'd left in the room.
Not for the first time he wondered how his older self knew Hermione. She was Muggle-born; she'd confessed that to him her third day. Magic simply enthralled her. She had spent the summer hols with her parents, Christmas hols her first year skiing, and her last Christmas at Hogwarts. She'd gone on and on describing the decorations: everlasting ice cycles, mistletoe, the Christmas garlands, the Christmas trees, and the magical crackers as if he'd never seen any of these things. She was also quite fond of Hagrid, the Keeper of the Keys and grounds keeper. Nevertheless, he'd enjoyed the way her eyes had lit up as she'd talked.
Truth was that if she was a few years older and not from another time, he'd have really wanted to get to know her. She was bright, but way too trusting and far too open. She was bossy, but smart and fun to rile up. She wasn't conventionally pretty, but he wasn't anything to look at either, so they complemented each other. Her hair was always an unruly mass of curls, and she had stains on her fingers from the ink she used... Her fingers were long and straight though, and her nails were nice, but her front teeth were really big. Of course, he had horrible teeth, so he shouldn't have cared about hers.
He scowled and forced himself to read his book. She was most likely leaving tomorrow anyway. The sands in the Time-Turner had finally started to look like she'd described them, just not as shiny as she'd remembered them being. So, if by tomorrow the sands looked right, she would leave, and that was that. He'd fulfilled his promise to himself, and his life could go back to normal.
He looked at her again. It's too bad you are not from my time, he thought again. No, this is best. She wouldn't survive the war anyway. She'd never submit to being subservient to pure-bloods and certainly considered herself equal to them. She was due for a rude awakening someday. Not today though.
Hermione's hand moved to reach for her cup, and he immediately lowered his eyes to his book. He flipped the page so that she wouldn't know he'd been woolgathering about her.
~ T. B. .C. ~
Prompts used:
9. Hello, It's Me
a. Snape has a Time-Turner, and he 'bumps' into a later/earlier self as he's going about his day-to-day business. What happens next? What do they get up to?
8. Fix a Wrong, See a Right
a. Someone is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. (Hermione) Only once when using it, a mistake is made in counting or a slip of fingers, and he/she goes forward/backward in time. Who does the person meet/see? Your choice. How would he/she fix a wrong once back in the right time?
1. Suggestion: You could have someone steal a Time-Turner.
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718 Reviews | 7.25/10 Average
Just wanted to stop in and say hi. I was reading this quite some time ago and fell behind while I finished school. I am just getting back to reading all of the WIPs I'd been working on, and it is going to take awhile, but I'm excited to see that another chapter is coming. Of course, after all this time I will need to start at the beginning. Just wanted to cheer you on since it had been awhile.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Hi and thank you for your kind hello. This site is quite behind with this story. Its posted on ash and was on grangerenchanted and I've put it up on ffnet up to chap 60. On those sites it's only missing the eppilogue. I am glad you've enjoyed this story and Thank you for reading. hope you have a wonderful April
Oh, please keep going! I absolutely love this story and am really excited to see how it ends!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
It's done. On my disc. I'm posting it on ff net due to delays, complications and such.
I'm so glad that you have continued this story. It's one of the best HG/SS stories that I've read.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you. Actually the story is fully written, (61 chapters) and since posting moves a bit quicker, I'm about to post 58 on GE and Ash. Just fyi
Am still very much loving this! Was reading it on Ashwinder but that seems to be down so I had to go around searching til I found it here.One of my favourite parts about this story is the amount of detail you've put into it like things from detailing the potions process to using slang words from the time she was sent back to (something a lot of time travel fics seem to forget)The amount of work you must of put into some of this stuff is amazing and can't wait to see where the story goes! Thankyou!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm posted on GrangerEnchanted and Ashwinder as well as here, although the other sites are usually ahead of TPP. I thank you for the compliment, I was born in the early 60's so the sland is what i grew up with, as well as from the 'what the kids say now' game my aunt and uncle like(used to) play with me (so they'd be hip and current) but, yes, I do know how Severus as a teen would speak and the slang is a little old. I have a great Brit picker and she says frequently that the slang I choose is old. lol It works. As for the POtions and history references, I love searching for plants and thier uses, insects, etc. and I stick in bits all the time for fun. I'm delighted you like that. Thank you for reading and taking time to leave a review.
Response from Seymourbutz (Reviewer)
No problem! Congratulations on your nomination in the sshg fanfic awards on lj. I saw it there and was like O:
I keep wondering why Severus doesn't bring FOOD with him when he sees her! The house-elves can keep that a secret, can't they? Well, I am glad Ron is still gone, and hope that Hermione can work out that Animagus transformation - but it's only natural for her to be afraid of not being able to change back. THANK YOU for the update!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. Well... missing food went noticed in the books - the elves were sending food to the Room of Requirement but were stopped (and Dobby was kicked out of the castle) and that was why the kids started going through the portrait to the Hog's Head (and Dobby ended up cleaning glasses for Aberforth) - the RoR made another tunnel. AND Hermione didn't ASK for Sev for food. Had she, he would have. But yes, the little darling house-elves would keep a secret - but they can be tortured into spilling their secrets. Yep, Ron's still on the bunk so to speak. Hermione and the Animagus spell - wait and you'll see. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I absolutely love this story as well as The Enchanted Tower Room! You would have to be one of my favorite authors! I hope that you can get the rest of the chapters uploaded soon, for I am on the edge of my seat with anticipation!Wonderful work!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Oh, thank you, you've make my night. I'll try to get 54 out as soon as I can. It takes a while. One of my betas is going through some huge changes in his life and the other has been really really busy. but I have this one all written out, just not cleaned up yet. (GE and Ash is up to 54)Thank you for reading and for the review.
To the tune of Happy Birthday:
Happy Tuesday for me,
happy Tuesday for me, there's an update from beaweasley, Happy Tuesday for me!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
. I'm dleighted that you enjoyed it. Thank you for reading and sticking with me and for the song review.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Ah, thank you
I think this is becoming my favorite out of all of yours but Self-Writing is still #1. You've written Severus' dialogue very much in line with his character and the growing tension between the two is beautiful.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you so very much. I like S-WP too, and will be hacking aaway at his this week. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I'm glad Hermione was able to figure everything out with regards to Severus. Her belief in him shows how much she still cares for him. I was hoping that her showing Harry the note would help him change his mind about Severus, but I guess it was too much to ask at this point. I really loved how she dressed herself up for the Dursley's; they had no idea what to expect from her, which she obviously used to her advantage. I hope Hermione gets a chance to communicate with Severus; he's so worried about her it's nauseatingly sweet.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
She's a smark cookie. SO yes, she did, not that he didn't give her the clues she needed. I had fun having Hermione off-foot the Dursleys. I'm glad you enjoyed that bit. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Ooooh! This is getting closer and closer to the end of term... It was really promising too that he answered a screeching Hermione instead of retreating. I'll be waiting for the next update! Thanks for the wonderful story :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
He's not a coward, and he is trying to discern what's made her act so coolly toward him in class. This was so not like her, and once he heard why, well... he did't want to ruin what they had between them, right? BUt as we get closer to term, things get more tense: Draco's task, Dumbledore's halth, Potter's interferrence and Hermione is the only good in hs life right now.
You are most welcome for the story, I'm delighteed that you are enjoying it. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Response from persefone (Reviewer)
Oh, I didn't mean he was a coward (I'm sorry if it was implied, English isn't my first language). I meant to say that, when accussed, I was kind of expecting him to fall back to the ' It-is-none-of-your-business-you-are-overstepping-your-boundaries' speech, so I was very glad when he didn't and tried to explain himself instead. For me, it shows just how much he cares about Hermione right now.And I just saw that the next chapter is in queue... That was fast! Thanks again for keep on writing this story :)
So, Hermione finally knows who the Half-Blood Prince is. Coincidence that there are no invented dark spells on the pages of the book that Hermione worked with Severus on potions during her time turner trip? I don't think so. I think this is an example of Hermione's positive influence on Teen Severus. She definitely has a positive influence on adult Severus. Really liked the conversation in the classroom when Hermione confronts Severus about the spells. Very enlightening. They've share quite a few meals together as student and adult, too. This is quite telling, the breaking of bread together and all. Very good chapter. We're just about at the end of the school year, aren't we. And we all know what is coming up. Not sure I'm ready for this. Well, I am, but I'm not sure Hermione is. This is going to be hard for her, as well as for Severus. Looking forward to how you're going to handle the whole thing. I know it will be with your usual talented flair.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Coincidence? Or is it possible that the pages for the potions they brewed together had his 'early notes' - Severus, teen Severus, since he probably had the book when he and Lily had been friends - he used the book to experiment on potions. He and Hermione mostly brewed healing potions - ones that would have been needed by a young wizard who was bullied and frequently hurt. The spells were written on the sides, bottom and corners of the pages, not where he wrote his potions experimentataion notes. Yep, they've shared meals and have had a lot of talks/training that all in all, have brought them closer. I'm glad you liked the conversation they had in his classroom. Yes, we know what's coming. I am following the books. It will be hard on both of them. Thank you fo reading and for the review.
So many updates! I loved this chapter and I love the mutual dreams/thoughts they seem to be having about each other. Is that a coincidence? I can't wait for more! Fantastic work as always :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yep, well the stroy is fully written and betaed and so I have them all redy to go in so, I've been submitting them as soon as the the previous one posts. What do you think - I mean, they were friends, and obviously care about the other... More coming. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Again, wonderful as usual. Love the dreams they're both having. Could this be foreshadowing? And the infestation- when Hermione helped Severus disinfect the room at Sirius' home, I felt you would use that information later, but didn't know when that would be. You're going to make me go back and reexamine your other tidbits now, too. Like I need an excuse to re-read your story! Keep 'em coming!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thankyou,
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. Could be...? maybe -- it is a SS/HG and the reating... that means at some point... more than a kiss may happen between Hg/? lol Yep, I brought the bugs/clean up back - figured that Draco made more then just two lame attempts on Dumbledore's life, and it's rather funny that Hermione is the only one to figure it out.
As soon as I have a chapter clear - I'll submit another. I promise.
Actually its really flattering when someone says they re-read your story - that means it's good enough for a second go through. I'm so happy that you are enjoying this one. Thank you for reading and for the review. (yep, if you take the time to write me, I'll write back. seems the very least I can do. )
I feel so frustrated Hermione hasn't figured out Malfoy's plans yet, because she's getting sooo close... Great chapter. Thanks for this wonderful fic!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Sorry, but this is one of the things that I'm trying not to change from the books. Yes, she's getting close to the answer, but she has other concerns as well, and other distractions to think on, too.
You're most welcome, I'm glad that you are enjoying the story and you liked my chapter. Tank you for reading and for the review.
This is going to be one of those chapters that I read over and over. Just love it. It feels a bit like the calm before the storm - apparition lessons, visiting Hagrid, private conversations. It's all going to hit the fan soon enough. And because of that, this was a very enjoyable chapter. Thank you very much. The next chapter is posted already. You're spoiling us. Spoil away, I say. I'm interested to see your spin on the upcoming events and the year on the run. Thanks, Bea
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
This is one of the calms before, as you say, the shit hits the fan, and her world turns upside down. Actually TPP is behind in posting, I just got 54 back from my beta and I'm working on the final chapter. I hope to have it all caught up soon (I there are 10 to submit) so as soon as the next one is posted, I'll sumbit another. More is coming and hope this isn't a spoiler, there are changes to canon in the DH year... I know! I hope you like them.Thank you for reading and for the review. I hope you like what comes next.
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Thanks for the spoiler -I love spoilers, by the way. I think you've done a remarkable job of weaving this story with very little deviation from canon. And as far as I'm concerned, the more you deviate from DH, the better. Can't wait for more - but I guess I will. Also, thanks for always responding to your reviews. It means a lot.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
SPOILERalertwarningI kept in all the camping. I know bummer, but on the flip of a good side, I assumed that you've read the book and can remember all the camping bits. I'm right, aren't I?Now, if you have a claendar of DH or have worked out what dates what happens and where, which I did, then you'll notice that there are gaps - days inbetween the things JKR wrote in the book - You know what that means, don't you?Those in between gaps are where other things happen. Excursions and outings, moments, Hermione will go shopping (really, did you really beleive that she was fully prepared for every eventuality they would face and stuffed it all in that little beaded bag - I didn't.It gets bloody cold in England/Scotland or Wales. Hermione is not a Healer, mediwitch or super-witch-know -it-all no matter what Severus calls her. Scary brilliant, capable, but a 18 year old girl. People get hurt.Food runs out.Phineas Black's protrait frame has a little surprise to itRon didn't think to bring his owl, did he?Dobby and Kreacher and Toopsyand Slytherins that are not really on Voldemort's side... I set quite a few 'options' in the previous chapters, if you think about it. =:-)
Response from Sharn (Reviewer)
Bea, you're too good to us! I had forgotten about Severus' group of Slytherins (just momentarily, mind you). And I'll be looking forward to the 'gaps' being filled in. Praise and thanks goes to your writing muse.
Funny how they are both having naughty thoughts about each other then chastising themselves. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Yeah, funny that. lol Thank you for reading and for the review.
Oops, lookds like someone in a portrait was spying. :0
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Or shy, trying not to be seen. but then that is one of the roles/duties of the paintings - to report suspecious or dangerious happenings in the school. Than you for reading and for the review.
Yes, I really do like that reviewers comparison of James and Harry as well. I like how James is given positive those positive attributes amoung the negative ones he has and how it points out the negative and bully tendencies Harry has.Well its nice to be back to this fic. Its been a couple years I think. Its still one of my favourites and absolutely an amazing read. All the details and research that goes into it. As usual I started from the beginning again and its just wonderful how much love and wonder I feel for it gets repeated each time.I tried to leave a review earlier where I thought I left off last time but the site was giving me a hard time so I realized I can copy and paste a review from notepad. But as I read further in that chapter (summer before fifth year ) I remembered later parts of it. I think I last left off mid fifth year and don't remember them at all going to MoM.I find it highly curious why you decided to have so many students go too and am wondering on your reasoning.I like that you are planning to do something about the brains attack. It always bothered me how their MoM attacks in the book seemed to have no lasting effects. I saw it used only a few times in fanfiction and I don't think anytime in the last number of years having to do with the brains. However it seems that Hermione's attack is less serious here. Severus is only giving her the one potion, and if I remember canon correctly she received 10 and was in the hospital for awhile.I wonder if we will get to see any flashbacks or mentions to the missing years since Severus' sixth year up to the start of HG's time travelling.Extremely happy to see that this fic is continuously worked on over the years. And knowing that I am lucky to have many more chapters present to read, curious to see how you handle the upcoming school years. Sixth is without a doubt my favourite book (and third year is still my favourite year in this story), so let's see what you do.P.S. My phone wouldn't let me copy and paste from notepad so I to then email it to myself and copy it from there.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Father - son and the apple from the tree. Although, Harry is a better person imho. Welcome back and thank you for coming bak to my story. Yes, well, the DA is more active in this story then in the books, and why not? Yes, you'll see some cause and effects from the brian incident - although, you're right about Hermione's curse hit and her scar - I'd forgotten about that. But you see him giving her one of her potions - There are more, and given at different times so that they don't intereract or have an adverse reaction in her stomach.I'm still plugging along with this one, although in all honesty I'm working on the last chapter. It's jsut taking awhile to get them all posted up. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I've been following your story for a while now and I love it! And it's so good to see them both finally making a bit of progress... Thank you for this wonderful story. It always makes my day when I see a new chapter up! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for sticking with me. I'm absolutely delighted that you are enjoying the story. Yep, progress. There is more coming, and I hope it posts soon. Thank you for reading and for the review.
Well, my goodness, where to start. Hermione during apparition lessons was spot on. Only she would have expected to perform a new, complicated spell the first time. And Severus' demeanor during their conversation on the Astronomy tower is very telling. I wonder Hermione didn't pick up on that. It's interesting that he has to remind Hermione to use her magic for apparition and yet he forgets to use his magic when he finds her floating in the prefect's bath. Although I liked that little interaction as well. At the end of the chapter, you showed us Severus' thoughts about the recent incident but not Hermione's. Is she too preoccupied with Ron's recovery to consider Severus' reaction? And the sadness Severus feels thinking Hermione will hate him after events with the Headmaster conclude. Wonderful chapter as usual and well worth the wait, although I'd rather not wait that long for the next chapter which I see is in queue. So, you have the story finished, do you? Do we get a steady diet of new chapters till the glorious end or are you going to make us beg (which I'm not above doing)? BTW, just got back from a vacation in your wonderful state. That's why the delay in reviewing. Had to get back home to mull over the new chapter properly. Thanks again for the new chapter and a wonderful story.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'm glad that you like how I wrote Hermione's pov on the Apparition lessons. She was a little distraught, so yes, she missed the tell-tale of his demeanor. You didn't though. And I'm glad you liked the incident in the pool. No, I just didn't show Hermione's. If I had, the chapter would be another 1,000 words! kidding. But yes, she's a lot on her plate this year. (this story is finished. it's posted in full elsewhere. But I'm trying to get the chapters in here at TPP) Thank you for reading and for the review.
Love this story so much! Thank you for sticking with it and updating! :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
You are most welcome. It's fully written, all I need is to clean it up with my beta and I'll sare! Thank you for reading and for the review.
This is a wonderful story! I absolutely love the development of their relationship, and the characters are portrayed very well. Just my cup of tea. :) As all your stories are! Extremely well written, and the wait for future updates will be long, even if you updated tomorrow. :)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Thank you very much. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this one, and thank you for the compliment on my writing. I appreciate you reading my stuff and thank you for the review.
I've been reading this story for days and I just can't get enough. I'm in love with how you wrote these characters and the continued interactions are just marvelous. Incredible work and I look forward to the next update. Seriously, this is amazing.
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
, thank you for the kind words. I'm delighted that you are enjoying the story. The next is in queue and I ahve another ready to go in as soon as that one clears. In fact I have 45-50 ready! I know, this one is a long story, but i hope you enjoy what is coming up next. Thank you for reading and for the review.
I know at this point it would be inappropriate for Snape and Hermione to have any sort of intimacy, but THIS IS KILLING ME!!!
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
I'MSOOOOOO SORRRY! How about a teeny spoiler - they will eventually and at the most crazy time. in his rooms! This is not a teacher shaged a student fic, he won't cross that line. not in this one. sorrry. You know what is coming, right? Thank you for reading and for the review.
Merry Christmas and Happy New Year, bea! Like Isode, I have been thinking about this story, too, and I'm tickled to read this update. It was a delightful turn of events when Hermione and Severus got to work together again. Practice makes perfect. I hope Severus will be able to figure out why she wanted permission to access the Restricted Section. Once Madam Pince tells him the title of the book she checked out- and the only one- I think he'll know that Magick Moste Evile is the only one to mention anything about Horcruxes. Go, Hermione! And go faster, Severus!Thank you for this chapter. It's a wonderful Christmas present. Beth
Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)
Beth, Merry Christmas and Happy New Year to you too! I hope your Christmas was wonderful and that you have a safe and happy New Year that lasts the whole year through. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter. There is another in queue, but queue has been really slugish so it may be a long while before it goes out. sigh.Oh, he knows, well, he has an idea, but the right one. It will plague him for a while. Severus will not only know the ones she picks out, but which ones she read as well. library magic.You are welcome, swweetie. Thank you for reading and for the review. Hugs~