A very touching story. I laughed at the little notes you included about whether or not 4 weeks was too early to have morning sickness. LOL. I was right there with you, heaving to hell and back before I even knew I was pregnant. I also loved the way Hermione didn't realize she was really in labor until her water broke. My favorite story is that I had no contractions at all until my water broke.I feel you had just the right amount of angst, and you worked well making certain no one truly was able to pull the wool over the eyes of two highly intelligent individuals.Nicely done.

Aw! Sweet ending! This was really cute. I was hoping to see one more installment of the evil Malfoy cousin one more time in a grand send off, but alas, no.

Not teh kitteh!!! That was not nice. and Lucinda needs to be more than banished and smacked. 

Determined, isn't she? Severus is going to do something worse than killing her, I hope.

<i>No worries, Draco. If I want a bit of a slap and tickle with Ginny, Tonks is more than capable of making that happen. </i>Quote of the year.

Loved the sotry!!... and Alan Rickman's appearences too =P

Oh wow, this one ran the gamut of emotions!  I am so glad I read it! 

Wonderful! 

Amazing I actually cried in some parts that was such a good story

possibly the best story I've read for this challenge!

This was WONDERFUL!!!!  I agree with Southern's wishes to kick Sev's butt at the beginning and also with her wanting to do some damage to Lucinda. Both "annoying" parts, but also what made this all that much more fun to read.  I enjoyed it all from start to finish and will probably just head back to the beginning to begin again. ^.^

*shouts with joy* Thank you!  finally, someone elso who thought colonel brandon was the right guy from the start!

Well, I'm just elated that things worked out for everyone in the story, except maybe Lucinda (but who cares about her, right?). That was definitely one of the sweetest Herms/Snape stories I have read. I love the children at the end. Actually, I loved everything about the ending! It was just so happy, which is just what everyone deserves after what you but them through :o)Thanks for the effort you put into this story, it really paid off!Peace, Love, and Potter,Sue.

just read this story.......... it's excellent.... very entertaining and gripping. am an avid follower of another story of yours as well......."one vital ingredient".... love your writing style and the twists and turns!!!!!!!!

Loved your story. I like happy endings! I've enjoyed your other works, too, and hope to see many more.

definitely release the fire ants.

Awww! so sweet. loved it!

Great Story. I'm happy that Lucinda got what she deserved.

Oh!!! That was just so special. I know I will end up having to read it again. Just because! I loved it. You are going on my favorite authors list. That way I* can keep track of what else you will write! I loved it! Truly Loved it!

Damn, damn... double, triple, quadruple DAMN!!!! I got to this chapter and wanted to scream!!! PLEASE tell me the update is coming soon... Like now? LOL... I am loving this story! It is definately a new approach and I love how it is developing!

A slice of lemon....okay, that was quite a large slice of lemon, I'd say, with a bit of lemon juice on the side. (Mwahahaha!) Nice job!!

Did you say there is going to be a slice of lemon in the next chapter? Really? Oooohhhh goody.I am really glad there are people behind Severus and Hermione who want to push them together. Any more suspense and I might just pass out.

Okay, that's it--I'm adding you to my list! *g* Hope you update this thing soon!

Definitely going to keep reading.

Going to keep reading--I'm curious.

AMAZING STORY!!!!  I JUST LOVE IT!!  Gosh.... it was just fantastic!!  Keep up the wonderful writing!!