The Reluctant Mother
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Severus decides that he wants an heir. He chooses Hermione to be the surrogate mother, but will she agree? My response to the Surrogate Mother Challenge posted on WIKTT.
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It is so funny how everyone, well not Harry, is out to get them together, even Hermione. And Lucius, too brilliant.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! Glad you like that!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! Glad you like that!
What I don't understand is what he did to get her to like him in the first place? He is so acting like a dickwodd. lol
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Well, his feelings developed while they were making the potion.Now he thinks he's protecting himself.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Well, his feelings developed while they were making the potion.Now he thinks he's protecting himself.
I love that you put their thoughts after what they say. Cool touch. What happens if they decide to stay together after the baby is born, when the contract says she can't have anything to do with the baby or him? And what is up with Harry? In love with Hermione? or Losing it after having much to do after killing Voldemont?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think that Severus would have the authority to destroy the contract.... Harry just losing it!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think that Severus would have the authority to destroy the contract.... Harry just losing it!
Wonderful. This chapter makes me wonder why they fight their feelings so hard or why you think they fight they feelings for each other?
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! (Well, see, I'm what you would call an angst queen...) :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! (Well, see, I'm what you would call an angst queen...) :D
This is a great first chapter and take on this challenge. I love that he is going to use her debt to him to get her to have his baby.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you! This is actually my first fic... So excuse the extreme fluff! ;-)
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you! This is actually my first fic... So excuse the extreme fluff! ;-)
Aw!Drunk!randy!Snapey!It's about time!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! I know that's right! :D
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! I know that's right! :D
Hee.Worrywart!Snape.And Harry is a prat.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you! Yep, he is!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you! Yep, he is!
Hell yes! Come and touch me, please.::snerk::Great chapter! And one of my friends consistantly started getting sick the first week with each child she had. With her daughter she claimed to have gotten sick the next day and continuing for the first 4 months. :P
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! I did too! From the beginning to the end with my son, and the first 3-4 months with my daughter! That is how I knew I was pregnant before I even took any tests!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! I did too! From the beginning to the end with my son, and the first 3-4 months with my daughter! That is how I knew I was pregnant before I even took any tests!
Poor Hermione. Knocked up and she didn't even get a good shag out of it 
I like seeing them settle in together. I hope they bump into each other in the shower more often.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
I know! That has to suck, I say!Keep going...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
I know! That has to suck, I say!Keep going...
Severus is such a cold jackass.Poor Hermione.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
True, he is. He's trying to protect himself, but hurting himself instead.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
True, he is. He's trying to protect himself, but hurting himself instead.
Snape's such a doof.He'd rather play the evil overlord than just tell her he thinks she's the perfect woman and the ideal canidate and let her figure out things from there.I hope she's not totally niave about all this.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! Yep, he is. They both will be doof's before the fic is finished! teehee!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! Yep, he is. They both will be doof's before the fic is finished! teehee!
Ah, pride. How complicated it makes things...
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Too right. It's one of the seven deadly's!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Too right. It's one of the seven deadly's!
I'm really interested in seeing how Severus approaches Hermione.
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you, my dear! Keep in mind, this is the FIRST fic I wrote, so (for me anyway) there are some cringe worthy times... But, as it was my first, it is special to me!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you, my dear! Keep in mind, this is the FIRST fic I wrote, so (for me anyway) there are some cringe worthy times... But, as it was my first, it is special to me!
This was just an amazing story! I've never read one of the surrogate mom stories before and wasn't sure how I'd like it but once I started reading I was hooked. So here I am, several hours past my bedtime, having just finished after reading it straight through since I could not tear myself away!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you so much. This was my first story! (And my challenge) I am so happy you enjoyed it!
Wow, that's such a great ending! They finally admit to their feelings and Sev lets her stay! I'm so happy for them I want to cry! I've been reading this all day, when really I should have been revising, but I couldn't stop! I loved your epilogue, having the twins matched up to Angelgina Johnson and Katie Bell was a great idea! I'm going to have to look out fro more of your stories, as I love your style! Keep posting please!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks so much
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
! I am so glad you enjoyed it! This was my first fic, so it has a special place in my heart.
awww such a sweet ending. loved the story
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thanks! I hope not too fluffy! ;-) Glad you enjoyed! Thank you for reading!
Nice story! And I loved the way you brought Sense and Sensability and Love Actually into it. You're a clever witch!
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
Thank you much,
Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)
! Glad you enjoyed it~