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Potions Under Duress The Reluctant Mother
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The Reluctant Mother

1: Chapter 1

2: Chapter 2

3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

The Reluctant Mother

cocoachristy

67 Reviews   |   67 Ratings, 0 Likes, 141 Favorites )

Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 75,753 Words 13 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus decides that he wants an heir. He chooses Hermione to be the surrogate mother, but will she agree? My response to the Surrogate Mother Challenge posted on WIKTT.

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Chapters (13)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13


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10/10

Cristee

I've just re-read this and I still love it.  Being able to sit down and read it in one go instead of as it is posted makes it all the better.  I'm not sure if you realize that you have some typos though.  Something going on with your 'M" in Molly and Madame around chapter 8 or so. (I should have wrote it down but I was too into the story.) Anyway the mistake happens for a few chapters...other than that I thank you for a lovely afternoon with a lovely story.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

! I am so happy you liked it enough to read more than once!I didn't realize about the M's. Thanks

10/10

HBAR

Love such a happy ending!!!

10/10

HBAR

Severus is finally there!  Even if it took a series of attempted murders to get him to that point.  RIP snarks. :(

10/10

HBAR

If Lucinda thinks Severus is kidding in his threats, she better think again.  What a horrible woman!  I am glad that the Malfoys seem to be cheering for our favorite couple.

10/10

HBAR

Lucinda is a horrible person!  Still no match for Hermione, though.  Love the kneazle kitten!

10/10

HBAR

Well, we made lots of progress in this chapter, but tomorrow is concerning.  Hopefully up next, Lucinda is flattened by the Knight Bus.

10/10

HBAR

He's totally going to cave.  But probably not just yet. *shakes head at Severus*

10/10

HBAR

Sometimes I just want to smack that guy.  Although, can't decide if I'm speaking of Severus or Harry.  Maybe I can just knock their heads together!

10/10

ShilohDarke

Nicely done... Oh man! I hate that Lucinda... Severus will kill her if she harms one hair on Hermione's head! I am very much looking forward to an update! Thank you so much for thinking up this story! I enjoy it greatly!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks so much

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

! I am happy you are enjoying my fic.

10/10

notsosaintly

Wow! Just wow. I have a knot of fear in my chest right now, wondering just what that you-know-what Lucy is going to do to Hermione. I hope that Severus catches wind, or that petite little blonde speaks up, so that he can hex her a thousand ways to Sunday. Permanent hexes. The kind that don't come off.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Lucy is insane I think, she does several things. Severus does get to a breaking point..and something permanent will happen. As to what..stay tuned! ;-)

10/10

HBAR

I think I'm going to love to hate Lucinda.  And why does Severus have to mess things up when this night was just perfect.

10/10

HBAR

They could have cut down on their problems by doing it the old fashioned way.  Or with these two, that may have made it worse.  Poor Hermione, already bonding with baby.

10/10

ShilohDarke

Awesome! I love it! It is funny how the liquor brings truths out that we would rather keep hidden most of the time. It was on a similiar night that I confessed my love for my husband. But, looking back on it now... It wasn't a bad thing at all. I hope this hasn't been a bad thing for the two of them... Maybe they can move forward in good ways now? And PLEASE Let Severus tell that BITCH Lucinda to go f... off! Oh... goodness... Excuse me! Sorry.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

LOL! Glad you hate her! I do too. Yes, I think sometimes confessing things while slightly drunk is easier for people, especially if they are insecure. Severus will deal with old Lucy..eventually!

10/10

HBAR

And so it begins, indeed!  At least Hermione has folks on her side.  Actually, it's seems as if everyone is on her side.  Now on to the approaching storm.

10/10

HBAR

Poor Harry has bad blood with Snape, and didn't grow up in pure blood society.  It's going to take him longer to come around.  I know Severus is trying to protect his feelings, but he doesn't have to be such a jerk in the process.

10/10

HBAR

You know, if these two were just upfront and honest, it would save so much heart break and drama.  Of course, wouldn't be much of a story, would there?

10/10

HBAR

I must have read this before when I was stil lurking.  I can't remember exactly how this goes, but I know they have a wild ride ahead.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

That wrapped it up nicely.  Loved it.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks so much. And thank you for reviewing each chapter! That was sweet!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks so much. And thank you for reviewing each chapter! That was sweet!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Yes but I still say the monster should have died.  I'm happy nevertheless.  You're a great storyteller.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thank you so much! I'm very happy you liked it!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thank you so much! I'm very happy you liked it!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Love Actually! Perfect!  Lucinda needs to die a slow painful death and not the kind she will enjoy.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks! I loved that movie!Yep, she does.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks! I loved that movie!Yep, she does.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

The calm before the storm.  lol

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Yep, always how it happens!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Yep, always how it happens!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I'm happy for them but I'm also scared, too.  Let's see if I have reason to be.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks! Keep going...

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks! Keep going...

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

This  chapter has pulled so many emotions out of me.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks! That's always awesome to hear!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thanks! That's always awesome to hear!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Smack her hell I want to  beat that bitches ass.  I know I wondered about them not telling their feelings and all but damn this makes for some awesome story.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thank you so much! Hell yeah, kick her ass!

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Thank you so much! Hell yeah, kick her ass!

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Isn't she the one who has the moodiness?  Hormones and all?  lol  Lovely party Malfoy!  lol  I was sick up until the last month of my pregnancy.  It was hell.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Me too! With my last, I was so sick that I only gained 15 lbs the whole nine months.

Response from cocoachristy (Author of The Reluctant Mother)

Me too! With my last, I was so sick that I only gained 15 lbs the whole nine months.

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