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Melangell
Tarah_Fae112 Reviews | 112 Ratings, 0 Likes, 84 Favorites )
Machiavellian wooing at its finest - a tale of love (or something like it), ancient magic and good old revenge. (Marked "Alternate Universe" for not complying with the events of HBP).
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Tarah_Fae
Member Since 2005 | 4 Stories | Favorited by 32 | 53 Reviews Written | 85 Review Responses
The quintessential Gryffindor - brave, loyal and ultimately devoid of any shred of common sense.
I've been writing for few months, but nothing spectacular has leapt from my pen yet (in my opinion anyway).
I dabble in art and love making icons. For a few Knuts, I'm even open to requests.
Reviews for Melangell
Plotting!Severus! ;-) the best kind!!! I like this story a lot...
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Mwahaha I like my Severus _Slytherin_! ;)
What a great first chapter! I could picture him holding her and crying with her. Off th chapter 2...
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Poor man finally broke down. Never bottle up your emotions kids! (Unless they can get you killed of course...)
Oh man.. too funny. I wonder if she will have learnt her lesson. Teehee.. silly man.. he should have shagged her a little more before "birding" her up. Good story, doll! I've enjoyed it!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Well, Severus didn't learn HIS lesson, per se... :D I figure Severus is the kind of man who values revenge above release - in the short term he can be tempted though. Thanks for reading it all AND leaving so many lovely reviews!
bwahahahaha... pay back is a mofo, eh? cant wait to see what he's got in mind!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Oh something... poetic... I can assure you ;)
ahhh.. lovely, i say. nothing like a row..then a smooch
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
*sighs happily* Make-up sex is the best kind, no? :)
ah lovely so far! i'm glad he's back to himself!! cant wait til he wakes.. muahahaha
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
He will have... "rude" awakenings. ;)
oh poor snape. he's losing his "mind" hehe.. lucky Crooks, getting to curl up around him. moving along...
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Crooks has a heart :) Afterall, cats know how we feel. They don't _care_, but they know. :)
oh poor thing!!! i'm nervous for him now. of course a ruddy predator would come for him.. ahhh! k, moving on
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Well... *cough and looks uncomfortable* owls eat hares? :)
ahahahaha... too funny!!! That'll "learn" him hehee.... I wonder what's coming for him.. woohoo off to the next!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Yeah, spankings are too good for the likes of him. Also, hares are really cute - so it is a DOUBLE punishment.
oh man! poor snape! lol... she went after him and then gets mad when he wants some. ahahahaha... cant wait to see WTF she did to him.. moving on to chapter five
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Mmmmmmaaaaaaaaaybe she didn't want some of that roughrough luvvin in the corridor? :D How tacky! ;)
sneaky! hermione, eh? ahahaha... i love it! that'll teach him. I'm glad he's caught on now... muahahha moving on to next
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
A review for each chapter?! Southern, you are a GODDESS! Read on! Read on!southern_witch_69's response: Most definitely. I had to take breaks.. dang net went down too. I loved it though. I told my friend, Christy, to come have a read. She'll love it.
ah, i do love a sneaky severus! how delightful. good job. moving on to chapter two. cheers.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Sneaky!Severus is so... sneaky! And sexy! And... _Severus_! :)
ah what a sad yet informative prologue. Now on to the next bit. looking good so far.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Hey! It is southern! Southern is reading my fic everyone! *point!* Welcome aboard - be sure to keep your seatbelt fastened at all times.
Oh! That was so deliciously evil. Revenge is a dish best served ... after sex!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Of course! You ladies would have flayed me alive and made me crawl across the largest salt flat you could find... BOTH WAYS... had I let him get his revenge BEFORE he got teh hawthawt luvvins! You can't deny that! ;) Was it what you thought was gonna happen back in chapter 10? :)
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Heh. Something like that. But the form it took? That was funny. By the way, you certainly deserved the nomination over on MF.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Shucks... *kicks at dirt*. S'too bad that Melangell didn't really fit perfectly into any category, but c'est la vie! It is an honour just to be nominated! Lessee how it does. :)
OMG!!!!!!!!! Now that was unexpected! I got a good laugh from it... Thanks for updating so fast!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
*bows low* I am at my readers' beck and call. *waggles eyebrows* Glad I could still surprise you. :) Thank you for reading!
Can't the fool leave good enough alone? He's alive, he's got the girl begging for him. *Sigh*.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
We're talking Severus here - total control or no control at all. :) Don't worry, he's just having a little temper tantrum - the fragile male ego and all. ;)
OMG!! She should have gone with her original instincts and kept her guard up!! What the hell did he do? I can't imagine that he would turn her into a fluffy hare, but something else... LOL Your killing me! Once again I'm left on the edge of my seat wanting more! Great work!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Mmmm maybe a flobberworm? Or a blast-ended skrewt? I wonder what it could be... ? Any guesses? :D On the edge of your seat is where you should be! It means I am doing my job right! :) Final chapter should be up soon.
Payback time! Oh my!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Indeed it is! ;) Thanks for reading!
*sigh* I was afraid he was still mad. One can't really blame him. But that's no way for a man who calls himself a Slytherin to get what he wants! Men can be so stupid!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
The silly man - his ego was bruised and now he's acting out. He's still desperately sexy though, so we'll forgive him this once, won't we? Oooor... we can give him spankings until he's learnt his lesson. ...I vote for the latter option.
Eek! What did he do? I'm really enjoying your story, a very interesting and different tale indeed.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Thank ye kindly, Lady Destiny. :) You will find out in the next chapter (which is waiting in the wings, all beta-ed and ready to go). ;) Until then, entertain me with guesses! :D
ARGH!!!! What a Cliffhanger! And I get called bad! Geez! Update... Soon would be good.... Like yesterday?
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Cliffhanger?! WHERE?! I don't see no cliffhanger! Whatcha talking bout? *innocent!* :) We're taking a short break and then betaing the final chapter a bit later - it will be up in time for dinner tomorrow (barring freak weather that knocks out my radio dish!).
Response from ShilohDarke (Reviewer)
Oh... ( smiles sweetly) Ok... Goody!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Yeah, it is all written up, never fear! :) It will be with you folks as soon as you've all read (*ahem* and reviewed *hopeful*) chapter 10! :)
Absolutely loving this!!! LOL At least Severus isn't a cute fluffy hare anymore! LOL Ohhhh, and that kiss, just delicious! I can't wait for chapter 10.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Pity... I kinda liked Severus as a hare - he had a much sweeter disposition. :) Chapter 10 should be up before the end of today (depending on your time zone).
AARGH!!! WHY DID you stop there????I need the next chapter!!!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Stop where? What do you mean? *innocent* Next chapter should be up iiiiin *checks watch* 12hours? Gotta space these out ya know. :)
Yay! Gotta love a good screaming arguement followed by a good snog. I hope Hermione remembers that she wants the snarky bastard before she wombats him again. ;) I wonder if they'll manage to have sex before they kill each other? *snicker* :)
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Pft she won't wombat him again! And to find out the answer to your question - read the next chapter! ;) It'll be up in about 20hours - synchronize your watches.
'Bout damn time there was a good kiss. But there is this vague feeling of need.... Hey! I know! Kill Severus with sex!!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Get in line, sister. *waggles eyebrows* Oh, you folks are gonna hate me for the next chapter. *wriggles in devious glee*
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
Hmmm ... you couldn't upset me by killing him. So, it must be that there's no sex!! Darn.
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
*doesn't say ANYTHING to either confirm or deny those allegations!*
Response from notsosaintly (Reviewer)
By the way, queenp is right: we need the next chapter. But you said you were going to bed!!
Response from Tarah_Fae (Author of Melangell)
Hey! I gotta sleep eventually! :) Next chapter up before the end of the day and right after I figure out Multifaceted.