The owl attack was scary but then I loved how you described Hagrid's care for him - good chapter and good story.
Poor Severus - he seems to be losing the human part very fast as the animal part takes over.

Oh no - I loved the part where he was rushing towards her but then he is caught by a bird - poor Severus.

No wonder Crookshanks attacked him - a Hare. Oh no - what is heading for him??? Another good chapter.

Oh crap - double it - what did she curse him with and why did he not stop?
This is good - bites nails

Great chapter - I loved how you turned the tables on Severus and how strong Hermione was in this chapter - this is so good - I cannot wait to read the next chapter.

Wow for so little contact this chapter was incredibly sensual - I loved the descriptions of the "Hunt" - good work

Great first chapter - I loved the way that your wrote the emotion and feel of the final battle and the tole - very good work indeed.

OH NO-Did Severus just get picked up by a hawk or owl or something? I think he has learned his lesson! Make him a man again!

HERMIONE! She has been after him for months and then she gets cold feet? Good heavens, did she change him into a toad or something?

Mr. Pouty pants doesnt like the tables being turned on him does he? Ha! YOu go Miss Hermione!

That twisted Slytherin! Poor Hermione is probably in a great state of frustration as well! On to the naked parts!

I am glad they could have that cathartic cry together. Perhaps that is the seed of their adult relationship?