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Mea Culpa
floorcoaster76 Reviews | 5.86/10 (76 Ratings, 0 Likes, 73 Favorites )
While on vacation in Italy, Hermione stumbles into an unexpected and dangerous adventure.
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I love writing! And Harry Potter! :D
Reviews for Mea Culpa
A well-crafted story with a thrilling premise; Snape as spy is very fitting. Thank you for a wonderful story.
Oh my God! This is amazing! I wish you had posted this on ashwinder so that I had found it earlier!
*does a little dance and runs off to continue reading*
This PG13 fic is a breath of fresh air; I've just been through too many NC17s, some of which ignore the characters' personalities completely. Er, moving on... I like how they remained IC despite the whole spy business. And the ending is perfect. Snape didn't say "I love you" to the letter, but it did sound "just about right". And it's really more of a beginning; it's not irritating and/or hasty but quietly hopeful. Congrats on the nom!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Wow, thank you so much for your thoughtful review! It totally made my day, I assure you. You're right, this story is more of a beginning, a shedding of preconceived notions, of breaking past the initial barriers between Snape and Hermione. Of introducing them to each other for the first time, really, as a man and a woman. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it!
I loved the dialog between Severus and Hermione, especially at the beginning of the chapter. It made me laugh! Congrats on your SSHG Awards Nom.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you so much! Glad you're enjoying this. And YES! I'm thrilled and honored and blown away at the nomination. :)
what a phenominal first attempt! thanks so much and i look forward to reading other offerings.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it! I'm quite fond of it for a first attempt. :)
Wow! I have been addicted to this story from first to last, and I'm very glad to say it kept on getting better! The way you handled Severus's feelings for Lily was very well done, and I particularly loved the hopeful note you ended with. The plot was fantastic, well-thought out and clever. I hope to read more SS/HG stories from you in the future!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this! It was a lot of fun to write and quite a learning experience. I can't make any promises about future SS/HG, since it's not my OTP, but who knows? :) Thanks again!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! I'm thrilled you enjoyed this! It was a lot of fun to write and quite a learning experience. I can't make any promises about future SS/HG, since it's not my OTP, but who knows? :) Thanks again!
wonderful action, keep it up!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thanks! :D
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thanks! :D
wow!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
LOL - thanks!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
LOL - thanks!
hermione stupefied harry! oopsie. very exciting chapter. i'm glad it didn't take too long for her to find out severus was still alive - that was painful when she thought him dead.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
LOL - she did! Haha. I'm glad you liked this chapter! Thank you for the review!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
LOL - she did! Haha. I'm glad you liked this chapter! Thank you for the review!
Thanks for this exciting chapter. It really IS like a movie, as other have already said. I am enjoying it very much. It's quite different from anything else I've read.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! I'm so glad to heat it! This story would be neat to see on the big screen - especially with Snape and Hermione!! :D
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! I'm so glad to heat it! This story would be neat to see on the big screen - especially with Snape and Hermione!! :D
Wow, what a fascinating story! I enjoyed the twists and turns you weaved into this plot! Kept me riveted all throughout.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I'm glad to hear that! Thanks for the review! :)
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I'm glad to hear that! Thanks for the review! :)
Severus has to notice that Hermione's instinct was to go to him and make sure he was okay, rather than run for Ginny. That has to speak volumes for him.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I'm quite certain he noticed, being the extremely astute and observative guy he is. Thanks for the review!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I'm quite certain he noticed, being the extremely astute and observative guy he is. Thanks for the review!
So what will he do to them? And how will everyone deal with Severus being her lover?
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
You will see! Thanks for reading and for the review!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
You will see! Thanks for reading and for the review!
Whew! That was nerve racking. Yeah, this could be a movie with spies, action, romance... I think Severus would be a wonderful James Bond! Now we are ready for the romance of our favorite couple.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I think he'd be a stellar spy hero! Thanks for the lovely review, glad you're enjoying! :D
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I think he'd be a stellar spy hero! Thanks for the lovely review, glad you're enjoying! :D
That was like a scene from a James Bond movie.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Yay! Glad you liked it! Thanks!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Yay! Glad you liked it! Thanks!
This is great fun, original for HP fanfiction. Thank you for another couple of enjoyable chapters.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! That's a wonderful compliment! Glad to know you're enjoying this. :)
The excitement continues ! great chapter!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed! :)
That was a lovely chapter. I like Harry bursting in and saving Snape.
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thanks! I appreciate the review! That part was one of my favorite parts. :)
Ah, evil cliffy!! I hope you'll be updating soon!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
I will update next week, if all goes according to plan! Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)
Oh UST cakes!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
LOL! So good, yeah? Thanks again!
Sneeky Hermione!
Sensing the beginnings of some UST!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Very good! Do you have the spidey sense? :) Thanks again!
Hum, Claire seems like she's gonna be trouble ...onto chapter 3...
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
What ever gave you that idea? *wink* :) Thanks for the review!
Ah, the man of mystery is even more mysterious! Nice work :)
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! Welcome! :)
i had fallen behind on this story when i was on vacation and only now just managed to catch up. wow - i missed a lot! you've managed to maintain a high level of adventure and excitement through each and every chapter. venice - versailles. uh oh. i look forward eagerly to the next update!
Response from floorcoaster (Author of Mea Culpa)
Thank you! Welcome back! I'm glad you're enjoying this. This was my first action/adventure story, so I'm pleased to hear it's been exciting all the way through! Thanks for the review!