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Potions Under Duress Second Life
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Second Life

1: Chapter One

2: Chapter Two

3: Chapter Three

4: Chapter Four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

7: Chapter Seven

8: Chapter Eight

9: Chapter Nine

10: Chapter Ten

11: Chapter Eleven

12: Chapter Twelve

13: Chapter Thirteen

14: Chapter Fourteen

15: Chapter Fifteen

16: Chapter Sixteen

17: Chapter Seventeen

18: Chapter Eighteen

19: Chapter Nineteen

20: Chapter Twenty

21: Chapter Twenty-One

22: Chapter Twenty-Two

23: Chapter Twenty-Three

24: Chapter Twenty-Four

25: Chapter Twenty-Five

26: Chapter Twenty-Six

27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

30: Chapter Thirty

31: Chapter Thirty-One

32: Chapter Thirty-Two

33: Chapter Thirty-Three

34: Chapter Thirty-Four

35: Chapter Thirty-Five

36: Chapter Thirty-Six

37: Chapter Thirty-Seven

38: Chapter Thirty-Eight

39: Chapter Thirty-Nine

40: Chapter Forty

41: Chapter Forty-One

42: Chapter Forty-Two

43: Chapter Forty-Three

44: Chapter Forty-Four

45: Chapter Forty-Five

46: Chapter Forty-Six

47: Chapter Forty-Seven

48: Chapter Forty-Eight

Second Life

Lariope

3,012 Reviews   |   3,012 Ratings, 1 Like, 1,269 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 235,067 Words 53 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hermione is forced to lead a double life when she agrees to Dumbledore's plan to protect Professor Snape. Inspired by the Marriage Law. Warning for student/teacher relationship, though Hermione is of age.

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Chapters (48)

Chapter 1: Chapter One

Chapter 2: Chapter Two

Chapter 3: Chapter Three

Chapter 4: Chapter Four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six

Chapter 7: Chapter Seven

Chapter 8: Chapter Eight

Chapter 9: Chapter Nine

Chapter 10: Chapter Ten

Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve

Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen

Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen

Chapter 15: Chapter Fifteen

Chapter 16: Chapter Sixteen

Chapter 17: Chapter Seventeen

Chapter 18: Chapter Eighteen

Chapter 19: Chapter Nineteen

Chapter 20: Chapter Twenty

Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty-One

Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-Two

Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty-Three

Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Four

Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Five

Chapter 26: Chapter Twenty-Six

Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Chapter 28: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Chapter 29: Chapter Twenty-Nine

Chapter 30: Chapter Thirty

Chapter 31: Chapter Thirty-One

Chapter 32: Chapter Thirty-Two

Chapter 33: Chapter Thirty-Three

Chapter 34: Chapter Thirty-Four

Chapter 35: Chapter Thirty-Five

Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Six

Chapter 37: Chapter Thirty-Seven

Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Eight

Chapter 39: Chapter Thirty-Nine

Chapter 40: Chapter Forty

Chapter 41: Chapter Forty-One

Chapter 42: Chapter Forty-Two

Chapter 43: Chapter Forty-Three

Chapter 44: Chapter Forty-Four

Chapter 45: Chapter Forty-Five

Chapter 46: Chapter Forty-Six

Chapter 47: Chapter Forty-Seven

Chapter 48: Chapter Forty-Eight


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0/10

mysticforce

"No, what you need to do is to find him someone else to snog."ROFL! Professor Snape has an answer for everything. "And he’s always sort of coming in and out of fashion, isn’t he?"LOL The scary thing is that some people really think like that. Lavender is a likely candidate indeed.This chapter was brilliant. The ring, the crossword puzzle... Cheer

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad we see these characters in the same way. :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I'm glad we see these characters in the same way. :)

10/10

Maddie

A clever way to bring Lavender into the picture.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you!

10/10

Sampdoria

Thank you so much for the update. I had high hopes for Severus there a moment, thinking he finally would let him self have someone he could trust and count on, but alas, his low self esteem made it self known at the ending:-) But, it is early days, for him to "surrender" to Hermione so soon would not make him the snarky Potions Master we love so much. More time is needed, and even if he took a gigant step bacwards at the end, I do think he made some tentative steps in the rigth direction first.  The new idea with the rings flaring was also brilliant, I would not be surprised if Hermione get her self a startling reaction if/when her ring flares gold. Update again soon!!!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I think you're right and it's still too soon for Severus to "surrender." :) More is in the queue...I hope you continue to enjoy it.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I think you're right and it's still too soon for Severus to "surrender." :) More is in the queue...I hope you continue to enjoy it.

9/10

harrypotterwanter

I am glad that Hermione doesn't feel too bad about Ron being with Lavender. I am sure she will feel even better about the relationship once she starts having more of a relationship with Severus. I wonder how Albus wants them to act towards each other. Does he want them always to be strangers?

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I think Dumbledore has some confused notions about what he wants to happen between them, mostly because he made assumptions about what would happen. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I think Dumbledore has some confused notions about what he wants to happen between them, mostly because he made assumptions about what would happen. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

Mint Stick

Poor Severus. I'm hoping Hermione will end up proving him wrong!


Loved the way he suggested setting Ron up with another girl. I was wondering how you'd handle the Ron situation in HBP! This works so well.


Crossword puzzles was a great idea. It does sound like something Dumbledore might come up with.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I hope so, too. And I'm glad the canon/AU-ishness is working for you. :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! I hope so, too. And I'm glad the canon/AU-ishness is working for you. :)

9/10

CharmedForce

Who could love Severus Snape? No one, it seemed. Not even his wife.


I think this line sums up Severus' trauma perfectly. Even those who are supposed to love and care for him and do everything that is necessary to protect and help him cannot do so. In his mind at least, and in fact for some people.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! And I agree; he's been very undervalued despite his bravery.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! And I agree; he's been very undervalued despite his bravery.

0/10

OpalJade

Loved it!! Great chapter...as usual!I enjoyed the way you portrayed Hermione: strong, smart with a hint of Slytherinism (is that even a word?)I like how your writing not only delivers a yummy plot but also gives us witty insights into the character's personality. Example: Harry being a tad jealous of Hermione's time with Headmaster, Dumbledore's message shows that is quirky but at the same time very sharp! So well done!Can I become your pseudo-Beta so I can read your chapters in advance!!!!? Ha! Ha! :) 

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

, I'm so spoiled by you. *hugs* Thank you for this lovely review. And if Slytherinism isn't a word, it should be.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

, I'm so spoiled by you. *hugs* Thank you for this lovely review. And if Slytherinism isn't a word, it should be.

0/10

faula_tara

wow snape really knows how to be an ass but o well he is confused and he obviously has feelings for our dear hermionehow hard it must be on him poor bastardthis was well written and i cant wait fro the next chapter thanks againjulie

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much! More is on the way.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much! More is on the way.

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Excellent chapter.

How devious of Severus and Hermione setting Ron up like that.  Hope Lavender chasing him brings us some amusing reading.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! Yes, Hermione definitely showed her Slytherin side. Severus is rubbing off on her, perhaps?

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you! Yes, Hermione definitely showed her Slytherin side. Severus is rubbing off on her, perhaps?

10/10

livvy6

I like how you are continuing to weave canon into this fic. And Snape's idea of getting Ron a girl - that was pure Slytherin - definitely Snape's style. He is a very jealous and possessive man, that's a part of his emotional immaturity, I think you're continuing to do a great job!


Livvy

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much! I'm glad the canon aspects are still working for you.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you so much! I'm glad the canon aspects are still working for you.

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

I am enjoying your story and hoping for the happy ending.  You're torturing Severus and Hermione!  Please don't torture them for ten million chapters and then send me sniffling away to bed!  ;)  Looking for the next installment -- and thanks for your work!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you for the review! I know I'm torturing them...and I'll be honest, there's a fair amount more torture to come. But I hope it will be worth it in the end. Thanks for reading.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you for the review! I know I'm torturing them...and I'll be honest, there's a fair amount more torture to come. But I hope it will be worth it in the end. Thanks for reading.

0/10

tulaksam

you know, making me cry in the middle of my breakroom was not fair.  however, i would not trade a second of this story for it.  thank you.

10/10

Horserider

Loving it! I hope you have more soon! Great Snape, and I like how you were able to craft him such that it didn't take him forever to begin to warm to her! Refreshing! ~HR

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thanks for such a lovely review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! More is in the queue...

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thanks for such a lovely review! I'm glad you're enjoying it! More is in the queue...

10/10

ladyluv

The marriage consummation was a good scene but Severus goes and blows up and puts Hermione on the defensive - cannot wait to see what happens next.  100 points and he was the git to begin with - he should take points from himself.  I do love Severus just not when he is being such an arse.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thanks. I kind of love him all the time...even when he's horrible. :) This may be classified as some type of disorder....Next chapter is in queue...I hope you continue to like it!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thanks. I kind of love him all the time...even when he's horrible. :) This may be classified as some type of disorder....Next chapter is in queue...I hope you continue to like it!

0/10

mysticforce

why didn't I get private lessons like that when I was Hermione's age? Life isn't fair... We all should have a Professor to teach us the good things in life Thank you for this story, I was so depressed after reading another MLC with evil!Snape and I needed something happy.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I know. Where is that professor when you need him? I'm glad you liked the story. :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I know. Where is that professor when you need him? I'm glad you liked the story. :)

10/10

blue artemis

Wow, what a jerk. She probably walked out of there absolutely furious.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Who wouldn't? Thanks for reviewing. :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Who wouldn't? Thanks for reviewing. :)

10/10

faula_tara

this is really a work of art to bad it wont have a happy ending or middle when dumblrdore dies and snape must return to the death eaters poor hermione is going to fall in love isnt she lol

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

It'll be a long one, that's for sure! And we can always hope for love. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

It'll be a long one, that's for sure! And we can always hope for love. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

MrsBrown

Like a mug full of melted dark chocolate. Mmmmmmmore, please! Thank you so much!!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Oh, my! Thank you so much.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Oh, my! Thank you so much.

10/10

Maddie

Her first experience seemed like love making to me. I am surprised Prof. Snape would make such an admission. Hmm. I'm glad Hermione snapped. I wondered if she was going to remain in shock for being treated again like a student again and sent to her room. Class should be very interesting.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

It seemed that way to me, too, though I don't know if he was truly admitting it or just goading her. :) Classroom scene is in the queue...I hope you enjoy it!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

It seemed that way to me, too, though I don't know if he was truly admitting it or just goading her. :) Classroom scene is in the queue...I hope you enjoy it!

10/10

ylang_two

hummm.... some honeymoon.  Hope that they can steal more time together.  But she has to get her acting down pat.  Yummy.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you...I hope so, too. :)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you...I hope so, too. :)

9/10

irishredlass

Oh now there is definately going to be rocky road ahead.  I do not think that dear Severus thought that he would enjoy it so much and now he is angry so, of course, Hermione is going to have to bear the brunt.  I hope that they can get beyond this.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I hope so, too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

I hope so, too! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

0/10

surfmistress

Amazing, absolutely amazing. You've portrayed Severus, Hermione and Dumbledore perfectly. Dumbledore is manipulative to a fault to get what he wants, Severus is once again trapped between his loyalty to both Lily and Dumbledore and Hermione has let her enthusiasm and sense of honor put her in the middle of a very sticky situation.

The scenes between Severus and Hermione after the ceremony read so very realistically. It’s definitely not a romantic first time, but it was incredibly seductive, nonetheless. Severus taking points was actually rather funny (especially since it seems so in character) and Hermione’s fit of temper to cover her unease was priceless. I absolutely loved the last line!

I will eagerly be awaiting further updates :-)

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you for such a lovely review. Your comments mean a lot to me. Keeping everyone in character is what I worry about most. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you for such a lovely review. Your comments mean a lot to me. Keeping everyone in character is what I worry about most. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

10/10

Merlinsbeard

Excellent chapter.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thank you!

10/10

OpalJade

I'm so sorry Lariope but I'm going to have to be redundant and tell you again how much I love your story and your writting!This chapter was hot and touching at the same time. I particularly enjoyed Hermione's realization that "giving" can be as powerful as "receiving". You wrote it so well too:" There was no wave of pleasure, not like before, but she could feel that he had found it, for he shuddered above her, wracked by something she could not see. And the feel of him undone in her arms and the sound of her name had brought her a different kind of satisfaction. She had made this; she had done it, and it was better than magic, better than victory, better than anything. "Beautiful!I also enjoyed the repartee at the end and I thought it was realistic (and in character) for Snape to remove points from Hermione. Can't wait for more!

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Are you apologizing for complimenting me?

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

, thank you so much. Reviews like yours are what keep me going!

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draegon_fire

Well, things started out so well. Of course, once the sex was over, they'd be back to square one. Obviously the relationship will take a bit of time to develop. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Response from Lariope (Author of Second Life)

Thanks!

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