that's well written, he is believable as a portrait who can see all yet do little, even so he can offer support and comfort in his own way.

Oh, that's so lovely. 

Death is always hardest on the children, isn't it?

Almost there. While I do enjoy the setup for the story and appreciate seeing how everyone has changed in the last 20 years, I can't help thinking how long it is taking to get to the actual prompt. Granted the chapters are short and I do understand that you have chosen to divide it in a way that each scene is it's own chapter, so it moves quickly, but given that so little happens in a chapter (I am used to stories that have multiple scenes per chapter), it is difficult to find something to say in the reviews. I will also admit that I took a break from the story because it didn't seem like the plot was really advancing from chapter to chapter.This doesn't mean this is a bad story, it isn't, it's just that for me it is a very slow moving story and it's hard for me to keep going. I hope that you won't take this the wrong way. I mean it as constructive criticism. If this were not a challenge fic, I probably would not have read this far because so little has happened. Generally you have one or two chapters if you are lucky to grab a reader's attention and this one didn't do so after the first chapter. If you wish to discuss this further, I am more than happy to do so by email - realizing you probably won't want to do so until your identity is revealed.

That would definitely be a draining day.

I can see those two portraits having it out on a regular basis.

I don't envy her having to make that announcement.

Hmmm... Now why would Draco be waiting for her?

You know part of me wishes that Hermione would not have appologized to Molly after she snapped at her. Hermione is the wronged party here. Molly should consider her audience before spouting off. After every chapter I wish there was another. This is a sign of an excellent story!

It really is sad that she has obviously been in love with Severus Snape, but now only has his portrait to talk to. I am sure she wishes to have the real Snape there with her during such a trying time.

oh goody!  now we're getting to the good stuff.  you write all the characters very truly and i look forward to more.  thanks so much                                       

This is a great chapter! You are fatastic!

God Hermione really has her plate full, I really feel sorry for her.

Sadly sweet.  I'm glad she's taking the high road, though. 

The beginning of a real friendship is developing between Severus and Hermione. It's very well done and tasteful for the situation at hand with Minerva's death.

I know I have told you before but I just adore the friendship they have as adults. Everyone is mature. Well everyone except for the AWOL Ron. Whats up with that? It would be unforgivable if he didnt show up for Minerva's funeral...

I really like the interaction you have between Daraco and Harry. the seem to be able to tease each other comfortably about things that seemed so real when they were teenagers.I wonder whats going on between Ron and Hermione.

You know I hope it is just distance and not an affair with Ron.  If they have drifted apart it would be understandable, but I really have started to dislike the "Ron is a horrible troll" stories.  I certainly think that is a sunken ship but still, I mostly like the character, just not for Hermione.  

great update.  i love the idea of draco and harry being friendly that way.  look forward to more.  thanks

Are you going to do the time turner part?  Gosh I am so excited!  Your notes made me think you are a first time author, whether you are or not I would love to read something else by you, so after the contest when you can come out of the closet so to speak try a new plot bunny.

Hehehe... Potty and Ferret. I love that they have turned names they used in hatred during teenage years to names used in jest and familiarity in adulthood.

Welldone! :)

Aww, I love the relationship between Hermione and this mature Harry.  I can hardly wait for more Snape!

Oh, I enjoy the chatter between the portraits!

Damn these short chapters! I do enjoy seeing how Harry has matured into a grown up. Its nice Hermione doesnt have to still be running their lives as adults. As always I look forward to the next chapter

I like the way it is going