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A Different Kind of Love Story
fizzabella230 Reviews | 6.63/10 (230 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
Deathly Hallows Prompts 6 and 8.
6. The kids leave after Snape dies. He sits up and realizes he is a ghost. (I changed this to a portrait instead of a ghost.)
8. As Hermione, Ron, and Harry watch Snape die, Hermione is devastated because she has been secretly in love with him. (The prompt calls for Hermione to use a Time-Turner to go back and rescue Severus, but I wanted to comply with the book and see if I could write a story where Hermione develops a strong, loving friendship with the Severus Snape she meets as a portrait many years later.)
Time: After the Epilogue. Place: Hogwarts. Hermione is teaching at Hogwarts and is Deputy Headmistress to Minerva McGonagall. Her children, Rose and Hugo, live at Hogwarts with her; her husband Ron manages the All-England Quidditch League. When Minerva McGonagall dies, Hermione is appointed Headmistress and moves in to the Head’s office.
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I'm Lynnette. I'm a wife, stay at home mother of 9, with 5 daughters and 2 sons still at home. I have two grandsonz and one granddaughter:)
I LOVE to read, I LOVE to write, and am thrilled to be published here on The Petulant Poetess. I love the Harry Potter books because of my kids, and hope to get good enough to become an accredited beta reader at some point:)
Reviews for A Different Kind of Love Story
Ron! He cannot even be happy for her! Becoming Head Mistress of the school is a big deal. He could have at least faked it. Men.
Uh oh, Ronnie has "issues"
Nice handling of the kids questions wasn't it?
So is Potter's Hollow the house in Godric's Hollow?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
No, it's Harry and Ginny Potter's house in Hogsmeade. In my world, Godric's Hollow would remain as a memorial, but since Harry is teaching at Hogwarts, he wanted a place close to the school. The name is commemorative of Harry's birthplace though.
Nice to see the families supporting each other
I suppose it gets boring being a portrait which is why they sleep so much, passes the time.
I just knew something was up with Ron. I hope he does not do anything to ruin this special moment for Hermione.
I guess this mysterious thing with Ron is coming to a head. I can't wait to see what happens next. Good job!
Ouch, Ron's got his drawers in a twist doesn't he? Great chapter.
Ah, Ron found someone else? And told Harry and Ginny first? That is so sad.
'That's the good thing about families. We all mostly believe in the same things, and you always know what to expect from us."A lovely sentiment. Now where the hell is Ron?
This was another touching chapter. You really show how the family is dealing with grief really well.
That was very sweet of the girls, and I believe the family was handling their grief well.
again, i just love this large extended family. that was a lovely explaination and i loved their gesture for mourning...beautiful idea. thanks so much but when do we get to the love story part?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
It's coming, I promise. I will let you in on a secret-this was SUPPOSED to be an attempt at a drabble. And the characters had their own story they wanted to tell, in thei own way. I worried that the start would be a bit slow but this is the way it told itself, and I have learned to respect that. Thank you for the wonderful comments. And a longer chapter Nine is in the mailbox of the moderator:)Another tiny note-chapter nine was formerly 9, 10 AND 11. I decided to see if that suited the flow of the story:)-HBV
Oh I love the braclets! That was really touching.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
My own kids wear those bracelets all the time-my 16 year old has about 12 of them, her own and the hot pink one I bought as a souvenir when we saw "Wicked" on my birthday last year. It sort of wormed it's way into the story.-HBV
I totally love how Ginny, Harry and Draco are comfortable enough to tease each other. Another lovely chapter.
I would have reminded the kids that they could visit her portrait, however that is only my humble opinian. Sqee for longer chapters!
I like the easy way that this adult Hermione interacts with Kingsley. I can really see they're old friends.
This was remarkable sad, But nicely done.I would hope that you'd use more of the second prompt... but it will be interesting to see where you take this story. Well done.
Clearly Hermione and Draco must be good friends if he can take a snooze in her office. I am all sorts of curious about how Hermione will take the offer of Headmistress....
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
If they just BUILD A BRIDGE AND GET OVER the Gryffindor/Slytherin thing!!!! I decided I wanted to make that happen:)
HBV:)
I like the interactions between the characters, especially the thought of Hermione and Draco making nice. :) :)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you much:) I think it works well.
HBV:)
What a sad chapter. It must be terrible to have to deal with all the preparations, and not have her husband there to support her.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Hermione is very strong, though and she has her family and friends:) Don't worry, she isn't alone :)
HBV
That was so sad. Poor Hermione.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
She will do fine, you'll see:)
HBV
What a sad chapter, I'll miss Minerva (I know she died earlier, but it just hit home so to speak) and once again Hermione has to deal with a mess.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I love Minerva, too. I hope she is happy with her mentor and friend, though. And Voldemort took from her so much of the joy that should have been in her life.
HBV
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I love Minerva, too. I hope she is happy with her mentor and friend, though. And Voldemort took from her so much of the joy that should have been in her life.
HBV
excellent update. thanks so much and i look forward to further developements.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you:) I hope you continue to enjoy the story:) More updates are coming:)
HBV
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you:) I hope you continue to enjoy the story:) More updates are coming:)
HBV