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A Different Kind of Love Story
fizzabella230 Reviews | 6.63/10 (230 Ratings, 0 Likes, 57 Favorites )
Deathly Hallows Prompts 6 and 8.
6. The kids leave after Snape dies. He sits up and realizes he is a ghost. (I changed this to a portrait instead of a ghost.)
8. As Hermione, Ron, and Harry watch Snape die, Hermione is devastated because she has been secretly in love with him. (The prompt calls for Hermione to use a Time-Turner to go back and rescue Severus, but I wanted to comply with the book and see if I could write a story where Hermione develops a strong, loving friendship with the Severus Snape she meets as a portrait many years later.)
Time: After the Epilogue. Place: Hogwarts. Hermione is teaching at Hogwarts and is Deputy Headmistress to Minerva McGonagall. Her children, Rose and Hugo, live at Hogwarts with her; her husband Ron manages the All-England Quidditch League. When Minerva McGonagall dies, Hermione is appointed Headmistress and moves in to the Head’s office.
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I'm Lynnette. I'm a wife, stay at home mother of 9, with 5 daughters and 2 sons still at home. I have two grandsonz and one granddaughter:)
I LOVE to read, I LOVE to write, and am thrilled to be published here on The Petulant Poetess. I love the Harry Potter books because of my kids, and hope to get good enough to become an accredited beta reader at some point:)
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A great chapter. You've set up well how grief-stricken everyone is with Minerva's death. I can't wait for more Snape action!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Darling Severus is very much the focus of the story, later on:)
Never fear:)
HBV
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Darling Severus is very much the focus of the story, later on:)
Never fear:)
HBV
I like how Draco and Hermione have presumably become friends in this future time. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:)
HBV
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much:)
HBV
Very good! Look forward to more!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
You're so kind, thank you:)
HBV
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
You're so kind, thank you:)
HBV
Love the correspondence. Promising start!
Wow. So officious. Sounds like it could be a ministry meeting!I like how Draco is emotionally upset by Minerva's passing, and not a complete prat to the trio.
Very sweet and touching end to Minerva's life. I could feel tears in my eyes when I realised ahe had died, not just gone to a meeting.
This is really interesting.
Oh, a tidbit of Snape, who actually supported Hermione! It'll be great to see this story develop. Good job!
I really enjoyed this story. Is this the final chapter or will there be more (I hope!)?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much for the compliment:) There is more to the story:)Hidden Before Voting :)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you so much for the compliment:) There is more to the story:)Hidden Before Voting :)
Draco was made for this part. It fits him great. And Severus only wanting Hermione for the job, makes me wonder if there is something more besides what is told in this chapter.
I'm glad Albus was there when she pasted. I think its wonderful how even that Ron isn't there he still trys to comfort her. And Harry always a great friends.
Great start. I like the usage of letters.
I really like Draco's characterization here. :)
Excellent story!
Interesting beginning. I particularly liked Kreacher's involvement and the name he called McGonagall. I'm getting a good sense of tired sorrow from this, like 'we're all very sad, but we push through because we have to so we can mourn properly after'.
I really like this...is it just a one shot? Hope not.
Great chapter - I loved her conversation with Severus. This is what she wanted all this time and it was deliveried so well.
Snape's outburst was trully brilliant. But what is Ron's problem?
Great chapter - a sad event but good story.
Having written an epistolary fic myself, I full sympathise with the efforts involved. I look forward to seeing the progression of the plot.
Wonderful beginning. So very different. Sorry to see Minerva out of the picture so soon, but it sounds like that may not be the last we hear from her. I look forward to your next installment. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you very much:) Sincerely,Hidden before voting:)
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you very much:) Sincerely,Hidden before voting:)
Very interesting, wonderful start! I hope you will be updating soon and often. I wonder when Severus's ghost will pop in?
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
You're so kind:) I have 12 chapters written, and am in the process of editing them, then sending them to my beta reader. You will see a lot of him once the elements of the story are in place.Thanks for taking the time to review my story, I am very glad you are enjoying it.Warm regards
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
You're so kind:) I have 12 chapters written, and am in the process of editing them, then sending them to my beta reader. You will see a lot of him once the elements of the story are in place.Thanks for taking the time to review my story, I am very glad you are enjoying it.Warm regards
Oh this is so sad... I love the use of the letters to express the story. Well done.
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
Thank you for taking the time to review:) I love stories told in letters, as well, but I am finding it harder to write than I thought:)Sincere thanks
I am sitting here with tears streaming down my face! What an amazing, touching, beautiful story! Sniff!
Very beautiful story. I couldn't stop reading from beginning to end. This story shows how true love can stand the test of time and barriers that seperate one from the other. Well Done!
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so thrilled that you liked the story:) You're so kind to take the time to tell me how you felt:)Warm regards,Fizzabella
Response from fizzabella (Author of A Different Kind of Love Story)
I'm so thrilled that you liked the story:) You're so kind to take the time to tell me how you felt:)Warm regards,Fizzabella