What the Future Beholds: 1978
Chapter 2 of 24
starmomSet in the time of Voldemort's first rise, this is a tale of choices and consequences, darkness and light, love and hatred, laughter and tears, and of trust and betrayal. Lily Evans, Severus Snape and Peter Pettigrew each provide a piece of the puzzle and, by telling their individual stories, the whole is revealed. By the time we reach that fateful night in Godric’s Hollow, we learn that truth is neither black nor white, and that we are all vulnerable to evil.
This novel-length fic was completed before the release of DH. Illustrations are by anemonesque.
~ 2008 Quill to Parchment Runner-up: Best Marauder Era Fic ~
ReviewedWhat the Future Beholds: 1978
- Three Years Earlier -
Severus Snape
It was the end of a long, dull day, and Severus was alone in Amberson's Apothecary cleaning up the phials and cauldrons and straightening up the Preventative Potions counter. As he scrubbed a particularly nasty spill that had landed on the workroom floor, Severus pondered on how he had come to be here and, more importantly, where he was going. Whatever his future beheld he knew it certainly wouldn't involve cleaning armadillo bile. He sat up and inspected the floor. It shone. He could have used his wand, of course, but Severus didn't think it would have done the same job. Besides, he didn't mind getting his hands dirty. Sometimes it was the only way.
Seamus Dayfwyd, the owner of this establishment, had approached Severus after his graduation from Hogwarts last year and begged him to take the job. Despite passing 6 out of 7 of the N.E.W.T. courses he had taken in his final year, Severus loathed all of the career paths that his Head of House, Horace Slughorn, had recommended, especially since most of them were in the Ministry of Magic. Severus believed he was destined for greatness...for something important; for the rest of the wizarding world to finally recognize and acknowledge his unique abilities. No...there was no Ministry job worthy of his talents. He knew Lord Voldemort was recruiting Death Eaters, and he had already had two...offers...to join their ranks. Despite his intrigue and fascination with the Dark Arts, the persistent encouragement and support from Lucius Malfoy, and the challenge and enjoyment in fulfilling his patron's 'Special Orders', Severus couldn't see himself being a slave to anyone...not even the greatest and most feared wizard alive. However, he knew instinctively that the time would come when he'd have to make a choice. Until then, he still had ends to meet, so Severus had grudgingly agreed to accept Seamus' offer. Besides, Severus didn't mind creating potions and elixirs in the back of the shop where he could work in solitude while Seamus dealt with the customers. He also had the freedom to further his own experiments and develop his skills. Still, Severus felt his impatience growing alongside a certain feeling that his life was about to change. The question in his mind was whether this was a change he would make for himself or if it would be made for him.
Severus was placing the last of the clean glass phials in their cupboard when the tinkle of bells at the shop door indicated that a last-minute customer had arrived. Irritation flared in Severus. Their unwanted presence would delay his return home. He swooped down to the counter, his black robes swirling, and glared at the customer, a young woman with a child. She was young, in her mid-twenties and had long, auburn hair. He felt his irritation increase. The woman took a step backwards, clearly startled at his advance. Severus noticed she had green eyes.
"Yes?" Severus snapped, not even trying to keep the annoyance out of his voice. "We're about to close. What do you want?"
The child, a girl of about five, burst into tears. Severus smiled grimly. He often had that effect on children.
Lily Evans Potter
Sirius Black, James Potter's Best Man and best friend, held up his glass to the crowd assembled in the Potters' garden and called them to attention.
"I'd like to make a toast to the lovely bride and her less than lovely groom! James, I don't know how you actually succeeded in making her fall in love with you. I guess you must have cast some special magic, since begging and pleading for over six years was certainly ineffective...and being my friend was certainly no help! And, lovely Lily, we all thought you were the smartest girl in school, so I can only surmise that you must have completely lost your mind in agreeing to marry James!"
Everyone laughed, none more so than Lily and James, holding hands at their wedding feast table.
This was happiest day of Lily's life. Not even her sister Petunia, who had been forced to come and was now sitting alone in the darkest part of the garden, could ruin this moment. The ceremony had been beautiful, and she'd treasure the memory of James' tears as he spoke his vows. The summer's day had brought sunshine, casting its brilliant light on the garden filled with an explosion of roses, gardenias and, of course, lilies. Most of all, she felt grateful that she was able to share this day with all the people that she loved and cared about the most: James' parents, who were, they feared, nearing the end of their very long life. It was a blessing they were here to see their beloved, only son wed and happy. Lily's parents, yes...even her sister, her dearest friends Alice, Annette and Helene, and her mentor from the Department of Mysteries, Corran Masten. She was also pleased that her former Headmaster, Professor Dumbledore, had agreed to come. For the briefest moment, however, she felt a slight twinge as she felt the absence of one good friend who was not there.
After the toasts were complete and guests made a beeline for the wedding cake, James kissed her lightly on the forehead and asked, "D'you mind if I have a word with the gents?"
Lily raised an eyebrow. "Gents? Do we have some of those here? Oh! You mean that motley crew of yours? Well, since they did clean up rather well for today...off you go!" Lily laughed, pushing him away. "But remember your promise!" she admonished with mock seriousness.
"No pranks...I promise!" James bowed, his hand over his heart. He kissed her again and bounced over to his old school mates: Sirius, Remus Lupin and Peter Pettigrew.
She smiled as she watched him lope off, his attempts to keep his hair in one place having failed miserably. Lily pushed back the strands of her own auburn hair that had escaped her attempt at keep them atop her head and got up to seek out her own best friend. Alice was pouring herself punch, some of which promptly spilled as soon as Lily put her arm around her shoulder.
"How perfectly just like me," Alice grimaced, looking at the damage to her robes. "How they ever agreed to let me train as an Auror, I have no idea." She took out her wand and removed the spill with a quick motion.
"Because you're bloody clever and can keep a straight eye and wand when you put your mind to it, that's why!" The two friends sat down together. "Besides, spilling punch at a wedding must be an omen of happy times!" Lily teased. "I'm so glad your wedding is next week!"
Alice's face flushed. "Once Frank heard that you and James were tying the knot, he insisted we do the same."
Alice was the only person in the world Lily allowed to use the shortened version of her name. Her heart warmed to see her friend so happy. "You love him so much, don't you, Alice?" Lily squeezed Alice's hand as she nodded. "He's a wonderful man. He's lucky to have you!"
"Well, it took him long enough to notice me at school, didn't it?! We had to lock him in the dungeon before he'd even talk to me!" Both girls laughed at the memory of their plot to force the two of them together in their sixth year.
Alice went silent, and then suddenly grabbed both of Lily's hands, looking serious. "Lily, I was going to wait until later, but, well, I think it's important."
Lily was startled at her sudden shift in mood. "What is it, Alice? Is anything wrong?"
"Oh, no... nothing's wrong!" Alice started to rub her arm, an old habit that she fell into when faced with uncomfortable situations. "I'm sorry! I'm just not good at doing this. I told them someone else should do it, but they said that since I'm your best friend I"
"Alice! Stop rambling and tell me!!"
"Sorry, Lil! Okay. Well... I know you love your new job in the Department of Mysteries, although I hate that you can't tell me what an Unspeakable does...."
"Alice! Focus!"
"Right... well." Alice took a deep breath, looked around, and then leaned forward lowering her voice. "Dumbledore has formed a special group...Frank and I are in it. He felt the Ministry wasn't doing enough...the casualties are so high...." Her voice dropped off a bit as she paused. She took a breath and continued. "So we have all sworn to fight You-Know-Who, together. It's very dangerous and very secret."
"Alice!" Lily exclaimed, feeling a bit hurt and more than a bit surprised. "How can you have been involved in something like that without telling me?! I'm your best friend!"
"Well, the whole point of a secret organisation is that you can't tell people, silly!" Alice rolled her eyes and poked at Lily. "Besides, you keep secrets from me, don't you?"
Lily couldn't argue with this. She knew her friend hated not knowing about her work. Lily didn't respond, so Alice continued.
"Anyway, at our last meeting Dumbledore and the others agreed that with your abilities at charms and potions and James' defense skills, you and James would...be how did Dumbledore put it?" Alice steepled her fingers below her chin and looked over imaginary spectacles, using her most Dumbledore-ish voice, 'invaluable to the cause'!"
Lily laughed and shook her head, slightly astonished at having this unexpected discussion on her wedding day.
"We want you to join, Lil, and I've been asked to extend the invitation!"
Lily glanced at James whom she noticed was talking with Frank Longbottom, apparently having the same conversation. James looked over to her at the same time and, in their moment of eye contact, both nodded in silent agreement. Lily turned back to Alice and smiled.
Alice started rubbing her arm again. "I'm sorry, Lily. I'm a dolt, bringing this up today...of all days!"
"Alice, it's all right!"
Alice looked dubious.
"No, really! Of course we accept!" Lily took her hand and looked directly into her dear friend's eyes. "You know that whatever needs to be done, we'll be there." Alice smiled broadly and they hugged. They stood and Lily hooked her arm into Alice's and walked towards the cake, which was now considerably smaller. "Does this 'secret group' have a name? Is there an initiation ceremony? A secret handshake? Tell me everything!"
Peter Pettigrew
When Peter came to, he found himself blindfolded with his hands tied tightly behind him. He was momentarily befuddled and thought he might be dreaming, except for the pain on the right side of his head. Then he remembered: he'd been on his way home from work when two masked figures had approached him; the last thing he recalled was a feeling of terror when the taller one pulled out his wand.
Peter started shaking so badly his feet gave way beneath him and he crumpled to what he felt was hard, cold dirt. He couldn't see but heard laughter...he assumed towards him. Well, he was used to people laughing at his expense, but this felt...different. He sniffed to see if he could figure out where he was. The air smelled damp, musty. The laughter echoed. He heard the distant sound of the sea. He guessed he was in a cave. But why? Why would Death Eaters (for he had recognised those masks) want him? Whatever the reason, Peter knew this was bad... very, very bad.
"Hullo?" he called out. "Why am I here? What do you want? There must be some mistake!" Peter pleaded with...well...with whoever was nearby. No one bothered to answer, but he suddenly felt himself grabbed roughly, dragged some distance and thrown to the ground.
"Leave us."
The sound of this new voice made Peter's body chill like it had been cast into a deep vat of ice. As footsteps faded, the blindfold and bindings disappeared. The space was lit so dimly, however, that Peter still found it hard to see clearly. He squinted around, rubbing his wrists.
"Pettigrew. So nice of you to join us," said the voice, gently caressing each word. "I hope you had a pleasant journey. Stand up."
He tried to move his legs, but found his lower extremities frozen with fear, as if they had become one with the earth beneath him.
"Get UP!"
An unseen hand or some terrible force...lifted him with a jolt to his feet. Peter struggled to maintain his balance while still shaking furiously. He didn't want to look at the voice, yet felt his head compelled upwards until his eyes beheld the form of a man...or something resembling a man. Although Peter had never seen him before, he knew it was Lord Voldemort.
The eyes. The eyes were both wondrous and horrible, black with flashes of red like the pit of a fire in full force.
"I have important work for you Peter. I understand you are an Animagus?"
He didn't know how he managed to get his own voice to work but Peter responded, "Yes... I am... but no one knows about...."
"I know everything, Peter. I know about you, and I think you can serve me well."
"Me?" Peter squeaked. "I'm not that special.... Sir... I'm sure you're mistaken. I...I don't think I'd be much use...." He tried to back away, but he was frozen to the spot.
"Oh, I disagree, Peter. You can, shall we say, squeeze into places undetected and you have, I assume, excellent hearing." Peter tried to avert his gaze, but was unable to avoid the glare of the eyes boring into him.
"I have found that your friends...and other old school acquaintances...have become quite a nuisance lately. I need information, and I think you'll be very helpful in providing it to me."
Peter could hardly take in the enormity of who was in front of him, let alone what he was being asked to do. And yet... here was the most feared wizard in the world, needing his help! Peter Pettigrew...helping Lord Voldemort!
He was uncertain how the words found themselves escaping from his mouth. "You want me to... to spy for you? But...."
Voldemort hissed. "There are no 'buts,' Peter. I don't make requests. Do you understand?"
Instinctively, Peter bowed his head. "Yes, sir. I understand." He thought he was going to be sick.
"Good!" Voldemort replied lightly. "I'm sure you won't want to disappoint me."
"No, my...Lord," Peter said, his heart beating fiercely. He tried to remember to breathe.
"You will, of course, tell no one of this. Even my Death Eaters won't know of your involvement."
Peter looked in the direction from which he had been dragged. "But what about the two that brought me here?" Peter asked. "They know about me."
Lord Voldemort laughed. It was a horrible laugh...high pitched and piercing. "Don't fret about them. They're already dead." He put his hand on Peter's head and stroked it with his long fingers. "I don't want to share you with anyone, Peter. You're mine. All mine."
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50 Reviews | 8.92/10 Average
Excellent, as usual! But, you made me cry . That cheery little scene at home with the Potter's with Harry taking his first steps that Halloween night, James and Lily so proud. That was just cruel to the reader! I'd always figured that with Harry being 16 mo. old that he had started talking and probably walking by the time J & L were killed. But, it was sad to read such a happy moment in their lives being the same night they died. --- I'll get over it in time for the next chapter though.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
I'm just an evil woman. Next and last chapter to be up soon!Thanks!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
I'm just an evil woman. Next and last chapter to be up soon!Thanks!
Oh my gosh! That was an evil cliffie! And I always wondered how Wormtail had Voldemort's wand? Clever! Does Severus realize Lily is dead? Because I remember in book 7 that Dumbledore told Severus that Lily was dead and he broke down in his office.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Livvy
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
The next and last chapter will be in the queue shortly! Remember, this was written before DH came out. You can see for yourself how close I came!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
The next and last chapter will be in the queue shortly! Remember, this was written before DH came out. You can see for yourself how close I came!
to lose your parents and not have a good relationship with your sister is ruff. when peter swore to loyalty he never said to what he was loyal. and Severus is dead on.
You wrote: '... Severus finally met the Headmaster’s gaze and ignored the pain that seemed to tear at his throat as he uttered the words, “It is as we feared, sir. Voldemort has decided it is the Potter boy.” ...'I'm just curious about you having Severus referring to the Dark Lord as Voldemort, even if it is in a private discussion with Albus. It's been a long time since I re-read the books and I may be confused with fanon, but I thought Severus was alwas adament about not using LV's name.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
I'm not certain, but I seem to recall that he refers to Voldy as the "Dark Lord" with Harry, but nothing when in conversation with Dumbledore. So it's a bit of poetic license at this point!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
I'm not certain, but I seem to recall that he refers to Voldy as the "Dark Lord" with Harry, but nothing when in conversation with Dumbledore. So it's a bit of poetic license at this point!
I don't know if I have reviewed before now or not, but anyway, I just wanted to let you know I think this story is brilliant! It had been wonderfully written and each time the end comes, I can't wait for the next chapter - even though I know it's going to end in tears!
I do hope that the eighth book that Rowling mentioned she might do would be a book on the Maurauders Era. There are still so many questions unanswered. But, whether or not she does, I'm glad you've written this!
Livvy
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thanks for your very kind comments, Livvy!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thanks for your very kind comments, Livvy!
Just lovely… all of it. I love exploring the Marauder's era so deeply. You are taking us on quite a journey. You are so insighful about Peter. And I love how you have set up the circumstances that lead to Lily and Severus' fall out.
I think babies are smarter than adults. This chapter was well put together. Your brilliant you know it . The way you tell a story is awesome.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thank you for your very kind words, Arabella!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thank you for your very kind words, Arabella!
Another amazing chapter! Not only do you write a believeable story, [well, believeable within the realm of fantasy] but [and I too thank your beta readers!] I do not have to trip, stumble and fall over bad grammar, mispellings and dreadful structure. It's heaven, believe me!
Your story has just given Severus even more humanity than I had accredited to him ... and that's saying a lot! That he decided he needed to stop before the 'big bang therory' that was Lily's death at the wand of Voldemort. Of course there is also the thought that he was never as bad as 'all that' and he joined the Death Eater's at the behest of Albus in his quest for a spy - though why he would feel obligated to do a favor for Dumbledore is beyond me.
With your creation of Lily being empathic, I can see that tying into the "Book Harry" always seeming to have an intuition about things. [Not that he was right about SS.] Which sort of brings me back around to poor Peter and the screaming Harry. Was the baby just startled, or did he, like a kneazle, just know there is something off about Pettigrew!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
If you've ever had to manage babies, this is pretty typical, startle-reflex behavior. Peter IS a stranger to baby Harry. But we can give the babe some extra-sensory credits if you like!!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
If you've ever had to manage babies, this is pretty typical, startle-reflex behavior. Peter IS a stranger to baby Harry. But we can give the babe some extra-sensory credits if you like!!
This story just gets better and better. THe tension is building and I cannot wait to read your description of the Potters' deaths and how everyone reacts to it.
Livvy
I liked how James and Peter became friends. Lily as an empath—interesting take. I think it totally fits her as we know her in canon.
"Coming to Hogwarts, Severus allowed himself just a flicker of hope that his life would finally be his own" Aww =(
Albus payng attention to Severus as a student. Yes. And of course he would have. He probably had a plan in mind for him even then, or was watching closely to see what would become of such a strong, young wizard. I liked that inclusion. You think of so many little details to put in!
Your description of Lily and Severus meeting (officially) for the first time was wonderful. Different than canon as we now know it, but still good nonetheless. I like how she purposely ditched the Gryffindor lot, not only because of their unruliness but to actually be able to work with Severus.
Great chapter! (I'll get caught up on reading eventually!)
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Hi! I'm so glad you stopped by for a read! This was completed before (by about one month!) the release of DH. I got some right, some close and some not at all. But I think it hangs together pretty well, nonetheless!Happy reading!
Have I said before how fascinating this story is. I loved the way you worked in the line, 'Potter’s need to seek attention...', that being such a point of contention of Sev's with the teen Harry. Makes me wonder if you've gone through the books with a fine-tooth comb or does it just gel together for you?
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Do you mean can I quote chapter and verse? hehehe...Sometimes...I did try to weave in echoes of the 'future' into this story, as a way to build up the characters to the point at which we meet them in JKR's tale.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Do you mean can I quote chapter and verse? hehehe...Sometimes...I did try to weave in echoes of the 'future' into this story, as a way to build up the characters to the point at which we meet them in JKR's tale.
So baby Draco had be born to this evil world his nasty family has helped to make. And Severus and Lucius know Lily is pregnant. Peter is a bastard trader. Finally a fic that has James as a dotting father, usually it's all Lily. Thank you. And Severus got to tell her well part of it anyway. Cool.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Yeah. I always imagine James as a great stay-at-home dad!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Yeah. I always imagine James as a great stay-at-home dad!
I love that Neville's parents are in this story. They rarely are in fanfic. Sirius seems to always found trouble. lol I am going to say this now I do not and will never like Peter the Rat. For those who do, I am truly sorry for you. lol. But I don't. Oh no Severus is the one who killed Regulus. No wonder Sirius can't stand him. Well one of the reason anyway.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Yes,, Peter is rather pathetic - in his own peculiarly cluess way.I don't think Sirius ever knew about Snape offing Reggie (in my version!), but then Sirius never needed real reasons to hate him.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Yes,, Peter is rather pathetic - in his own peculiarly cluess way.I don't think Sirius ever knew about Snape offing Reggie (in my version!), but then Sirius never needed real reasons to hate him.
This chapter was an emotional roller-coaster. You have definitely not turned me off from the story, and I am eager to read more.
I have to tell you that I very much appreciate the way you wrote this chapter. There is no honor, no glory but at the same time the reader is not left awash in confusing double-talk, vagueness or flowery cover-up. You spit it out and left no room for imagining that war can not be that bad.
Because HP is a 'children's book', the evilness of the Death Eaters is not developed to the fullest. But adults surely realize that once the 'soldier' has joined, freely or was coerced into participation, they do what they will because they are as fanatical about the Cause as the Dark Lord, or because they will be killed if they don't do as told. The Death Eaters need to learn the Unforgiveables somewhere... unless their mum is Bella Black, it's not usually something they learn at home. While Dumbledore's Army was learning Jellylegs Jinx and Rictusempra, the Death Eaters are using Sectumsempra and Avada Kedavra. No wonder it took so long to do in Voldemort.
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thanks! Yes, my vision of Voldemort and the Death Eaters (does that sound like a rock band?) is pretty different from most fanfic writers. I think they'd need to be a pretty organized group of trained terrorists to be as effective as they were - especially in the first war. The leaders are smart and deadly, but with a purpose, as opposed to just death and torture for its own sake. So you'll never see my Voldemort on a throne or throwing around 'Crucio's'. Even, Bella, as sadistic as she is, isn't nearly as wacko as she becomes after spending a few years with Dementors.
I just wanted you to know that I've been reading since the beginning and I don't think I've reviewed before, but I wanted you to know that I think it took a lot of guts to write what you wrote. I agree, war is evil and evil acts are committed in warfare.
What was interesting was the sexuality of Severus' examination. I find it interesting that he would make a woman do that under the Imperius Curse. Is Snape deep down a misogynist? Residual mom issues? Lily issues? That he would make a woman do something to a part of her anatomy that is sexual and also to mutilate, as you said, breast, a word he had never said outl oud before, that is very interesting.
Good work on what must have been a gut-wrencher to turn out.
Livvy
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thanks so much livvy! I really appreciate your response to this very difficult part of the chapter. Yes, it was horrible and excruciating to write this and the upcoming parts of this chapter. I honestly hadn't given much thought to the sexuality issues when I wrote this. The idea that a woman would be picked for Severus for his 'test' seemed perversely right to me. On reflection, though, I think that there is some hatred-of-mother and emulating-father thing going on behind it all. It's just horrible, no matter how you look at it.Thanks for sticking through this!
Response from livvy6 (Reviewer)
Absolutely, my fics are SS/OC and I think there is so much sexual dysfunction and stunted development there with women that it comes out in my writing, not to mention he is a very tense and respressed son of a gun!
I got a very interesting review on my latest story. She commented that my fics seem to deal alot with themes of abuse and rape. What can I say? I think he has an obsession with Lily that is out of control and basically he is a psychiatrist's delight! There's more than enough dysfunction to go around.
Livvy
I love this story, and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thanks so much! The chapters are going up as fast as the mods push them through the queue!
Your depiction of Severus' possessiveness of his finished potions speaks of the Dark Magic's possessiveness of him. I think of him as being very duty and honor bound, so doing the best he can in his work would be of utmost importance to him. So eager that he does not notice the darkness drawing him in?
Poor boy is so desperate for acknowledgement. It's so sad to think if just one or two things had ever gone the right way for him, he would never have accepted the Dark Lord and could have been one of the most acknowledged, brilliant of wizards to come out of Hogwarts. All but for Fate. [Yes,
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
knows Severus Snape is a fictional character. Really, she does.]
Wouldn't it be funny to listen to Voldemort lisp, 'possessiveness'! He'd get stuck and hiss on forever.
This chapter has a lot of details that help put things together and move the story along.
I liked how you gave a relationship to the Potters and the Longbottoms. You are telling pieces of the story of which I had never given any consideration! Like James' and Lily's wedding, how they got involved in the Order, what Snape did with his life other than at school or once he was a Death Eater . . . And if I didn't know better, didn't know the story or the character, I'd feel almost sorry for Pettigrew. I would be hoping that he would somehow break free or hide or get the Order's help or just flat out refuse in the end. I'd have been hopeful for him, but it makes the story all the more tragic and real, knowing what he will do as per canon as I watch you lead into that. Great stuff so far!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
I did try to fit in EVERYTHING that had been unexplained before DH. Fortunately for me, most of it is still unexplained! And the bits that were... well... I think my versions hold up as possible!Thanks again for reading!
This story looks like it will be a wonderful read. I really enjoy stories that elaborate on canon, especially on events that occurred before Harry was born. I look forward to reading this!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
I welcome you to my small, but hearty band of readers! Thanks for coming on the ride and for leaving a comment!
Finally nagged myself into leaving a review. I love this story! I've been with it since the 4th chapter and can not believe hardly anyone leaves you a review ... including me .
So I sing your praises for a wonderful, believable story. For being prompt with updates, for long chapters, for not whinning about lack of reviews and for just getting on with it because you want to.
I am in no way a fan of any of the Marauders, much less Pettigrew, but you have given Peter life, demension and reason for being the way he is. I've always wondered about how he ended up in Gryffindor, friends with Potter and Black, how he landed in the Death Eaters ... but didn't care enough about him to think about it .
On the other hand, I'm amazed the Snape fans have not found this story. [Yeah Severus!] Maybe he just isn't prominent enough in the story...
Enough blathering. I like the story!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Thanks for making my day!!! I'm so glad you pushed yourself to leave a comment, especially as there are only a handful of you actually reading it!! This is very much a Severus story, more so as time goes on!
Yay to you!
starmom
Oooo, his boss, eh? I loved how you worked the Prewett brothers in! Can't wait for the next chapter (I'm crossing my fingers that Snape's in it, lol)!!
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
Hey, there! Thanks for being one of my small band of readers,
Response from starmom (Author of Trust and Betrayal: A Prequel)
!! And for leaving a review! Yep, Severus is coming up... and he's not doing so well.
I feel like I could envision it all happening.
Seeing it from everyone's point of view makes it easier to get where they are coming from and to see what they went through.