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Chapter 15 of 22
Fawkes_07* * * November 1, 1997 (continued) * * *
Draco woke a dozen times during the night with a dull pain in his jaw from grinding his teeth. When at last he woke to sunlight streaming between the velvet draperies, he felt about as rested as if he'd spent the night boxing with a kangaroo. And to make the morning complete, he could hear a muffled male voice out in the common room.
Slept on the divan, did you? At least you didn't make it into Granger's bed. Draco wasn't particularly hungry and he definitely wasn't in the mood to come face-to-face with Harry Potter, so he pulled up the bedclothes and settled grumpily into his pillow.
But Draco was not in the habit of allowing himself to be trapped in his own bedroom, and quickly became bored. He always kept a carafe of water on the bedside table, not liking to wake up thirsty in the night, and he decided a bit of entertainment was in order. He Summoned the potion, mixed a drop into solution, and hurled it at the bedroom door, all without getting up.
Potter was half-reclining on the divan, his hair resembling a sheepdog's arse even more than usual. Bare shoulders poked out above the blanket--the same white blanket that Granger had once draped over him. Granger was in a red bathrobe he'd never seen before, sitting in the armchair. At least she wasn't in his lap this morning.
"... nothing for today or tomorrow; I thought maybe we could go Diagon Alley. Ron's in London right now. He's probably hung over from the party last night but later on I'm sure he'd love to see you."
Granger gave him an indulgent look. "I have homework, Harry. And besides, I can't just get up and leave. I'm Head Girl, I have to behave!"
Potter snorted. "Hermione, please. You can't fool me. You've read all the books to the end of term and have the homework done for the next two weeks."
"I don't either! I've spent the past week taking care of things for the party and the ball; I'm behind on everything!"
"Meaning you only have one week's worth of homework done in advance." He rolled his eyes. "Give it a rest! Have some fun with us."
"Not right now, Harry, okay? Maybe later. Christmas hols are coming up soon, we can plan--"
"Mother of Merlin, I refuse to plan a fun afternoon more than six weeks in advance. I swear, you'll drive me stark raving mad someday." Draco nodded in silent agreement before he remembered who was speaking.
"Hey," said Potter in a sharper tone of voice. "I know just the thing. In three weeks, Ron and I are going to America. They have this holiday coming up called Thanksgiving. All they do is lay about all day eating roast turkey and watching Quidditch. Absolutely brilliant, if you ask me. Anyway, we're opening the exhibition match between the American and European all-stars. Ron's going to throw up the Quaffle, and I'm releasing the Snitch! Viktor will be Seeking for Europe--and that's right, Fred and George are doing the pre-game show! They competed with forty other fireworks dealers for the contract, and they've promised it'll be spectacular.
"Come with us, Hermione! We'll spend the whole day stuffing ourselves silly. We've got a private box, and dinner with the teams afterward! It'll be a lark, won't it? Say you'll come!"
She was cringing as though trying to squeeze under the leather cover of the cushions. "I don't know, Harry. I mean, you know how these things are. No free lunches. When's the press conference?"
Potter mashed his lips in distaste. "Look, Ron and I will take care of all that. All the 'duty' is before the match: We ride in a parade that morning and wave at all the kiddies, then there's a meet-and-greet, and then we open the game and we're done. You don't even have to arrive until the game starts, if you want."
She eyed him suspiciously. "But dinner with the teams... That sounds like a photo op."
Potter sighed. "Strictly candids. They promised no reporters. The players don't want to work the press all through dinner, either."
Hermione folded her arms defiantly. "I don't like the sound of it, Harry. They told us the same thing in Cairo that time, and we ended up stuck at the 'dinner' for five hours. I missed the Pyramids!"
Nodding, Harry gazed glumly at the floor. "I haven't forgotten."
"Not to mention that with all those famous athletes AND the two of you, there's bound to be a line of autograph hounds waiting outside!" There was no mistaking the accusation in her tone.
"Oh, come on. That even happened here, last night, for heaven's sake. It's just part of the life, Herms."
She scoffed. "And will you be sending out your 'entertainment director' to pick them over?"
Potter grinned wickedly at the real source of her resistance. "Well, that depends," he purred, settling back into his pillow, "on whether you'll let me bring you up to my room that night."
Draco's fists clenched, but Granger's expression of utter scorn kept him from casting a hex right through the door. "Oh, right, Harry. Next you'll be telling me that you and Ron will be drawing straws to see who gets the privilege."
"No way! I'd never leave it up to chance like that. Besides, that bastard would probably cheat." Potter winked, sending Granger into a fit of giggles. "No, no, it would be lady's choice," he continued, shifting his shoulders so that the blanket slid down and revealed a little of his chest. "It's only fair. And not to sway your decision, but I've become a very good lover," he added, the mischief rapidly evaporating from his voice.
If it could have been heard, Draco would have made a gagging sound, but Granger beat him to the punch anyway. "Yes, yes," she clucked, "I'm quite sure you're a legend in your own mind."
"Ouch!" Potter laughed, bouncing up from the pillow and throwing it at her in a downright brotherly way. "Well, maybe so," he admitted cheerfully after she hurled it back at him. "But I really do get my share of compliments. Perhaps you could give me some unbiased marks..."
Granger's sparkling eyes suddenly turned serious. "Oh, Harry. Would you really want me to become just another fuck?" Draco bared his teeth in what was almost a smile at the echo of his own words.
Potter sat bolt upright, his mien suddenly serious. The blanket fell into an abrupt heap in his lap, revealing a large silvery scar through the left side of his chest. Draco gasped despite himself; it was obviously a terrible injury, and Potter had never revealed it to the public. There had been a scandal when a photographer had slipped into his room at St. Mungo's: Potter put the fellow under the Imperius from his hospital bed and made him destroy the film on the spot. Then he demanded the fellow be Obliviated so he couldn't draw or describe what he'd seen. Never show your enemies how badly you're wounded.
"Hermione, no!" Potter's voice was painfully sincere. "You're my best friend." He placed his hand over the scar. "You saved my life! You saved everyone. Everyone in the world." Granger tossed her head, but Potter took hold of her shoulders and twisted his upper body to look her in the eye. "No matter what happens, Hermione, you'd never be like those girls, to me. Ever." He pulled in his lower lip and softened his grip, sliding his hands along her upper arms. "No matter what."
The girl slumped her head with a weak, skeptical grin, but she leaned forward and gathered him into an A-frame hug. Potter's face looked utterly at peace as he rested his head on her shoulder. Draco gazed at them, spellbound, then raised his hand impatiently to flick away a tear.
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170 Reviews | 7.69/10 Average
looking to see what next... chapie 21: suprise that severus has a wife, & he gave great advice to draco!!!
love it.. lovely moment between dh..
alway knew draco could be nice to hermine, if he wanted to..
maybe draco will help hermione over her sadness of being lonely.. love severus's idea of draco and hermione working together..
so draco learn interesting fact concerning hermione, while spying on her and severus's discussion! love the plot, so far...
Omg! I started this not realising it was incomplete, and that it had been five or so years since it was updated. Are there any concrete plans to finish it? I really hope so, it's a great story so far. Feels like it's going to be much longer than this. Please finish! :)
oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest. I have them all written in my head. I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out. Someday...
Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest. I have them all written in my head. I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out. Someday...
Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)
oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche
I just noticed that this story got updated over on MNFF, which prompted me to reread....I really, really hope that you finish this story and the "is it worth it to finish" from a couple of chapters back is not how you feel. I want to know what happens! Or rather, how you draw the story to its conclusion. The situations you devise are unusual and intriguing, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I plan to, really. I'm just always short on time. MNFF doesn't even have the latest chapter up, I don't update as regularly over there.
Ahh... this story was so satisfying. I loved how in character both Hermione and Draco are. Their 'feelings' naturally evolve without making them ooc. I see you haven't updated this in a while, I hope eventually you'll come back to it. Even so, since they finally got together and it seems happy times are ahead, you could also mark this as complete.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Heh, well, I could, except I do have some more ideas that I wanted to write about when I started this tale... well, we'll see.
Just read through this story for the first time! Its brilliant, I would love to read more!!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes. Sigh.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes. Sigh.
Draco is so sexy/pathetic/vulnerable/lovable/hatable in this chapter. I love how complicated and and mysterious and subtle their relationship is so far... it's somehow a lot more believeable than if everything were all spelled out. I love it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
That's what I was shooting for--cool! Glad you're enjoying.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
That's what I was shooting for--cool! Glad you're enjoying.
I was seriously busting a gut laughing while reading this chapter. I LOVE the way this story begins--I've been looking for some good snark for weeks. This is the first D/H fic I've read, and I think I may be hooked. Hawt. I really love your version of Draco. He feels just right.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Cool! Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me. :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Cool! Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me. :)
I started reading this on Pureblood and was so thrilled to see it here, too! Fantastic story and I agree with the other reviewers - the amount of build-up has been perfect.Looking forward to the next installment. :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! I'm pretty happy with it so far--it turned out pretty good.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic. It is very well-written, and, unlike many for this pairing, believable. Thanks for writing it, and I hope you choose to continue.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! I will--but I'm behind on all my fics at the mo.
Haha.. I can totally picture Draco checking himself in the suits of armor. And the description of "pink, bubbling champagne" was perfect!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
*grin* Thanks! I've felt like pink bubbles inside before, myself.
Oh, this was SO lovely!
I can't explain why, but this slow, kissing-only, nonsexual event feels deliciously perfect. If I were reading Severus/Hermione I'd probably be frustrated but in this story with Draco and Hermione it feels splendidly right.
Can't wait for more!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
yay! I like to think they're both young enough that they wouldn't leap into it pell-mell--they'd want to try one another on first.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Also, maybe a response to how fragile she is (or has been)? How unexpectedly sweet of him.
Oh, I do hope that you will be continuing on with this. I couldn't stop reading--it was spellbinding in every way. If you need encouragement, consider this to be some, okay? If you choose not to go on, thank you for sharing what you have. It's well written and thought out and I did really enjoy it. :D
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! Glad you like it--I do plan to continue but I have a lot of "open" fics at the moment...
Glad to know you're back on this; thanks for the short but sweet chapter!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
You bet!
That was quite sweet.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
:) I thought so.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
:) I thought so.
Please keep writing this story. A couple of chapters back you thought it wasn't being recieved well. I wasn't reading it because it was listed under the hogwarts cat. and I haven't taken to many of those stories. But I started to read yours and kept saying yeah with each marker for the next chapter until this one.
Don't get discouraged about not getting reviews, I am a avid reader but terrible about writing a review and I am going to try and become better at giving encouragement to my favorite authors. I am looking forward to your next chap. Your timing for the relationship to take a turn was perfect. I didn't feel like---geez, get there already. I know there is suppose to be a build up but some authors build up for so long that I actually start disliking the characters and then I lose interest in the story altogether.
So I bow to your nimble fingers and quick mind. But most of all, have fun writing or its not worth it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
LOL, thanks. It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble. Maybe I should have put it in a different category? Malfoy Manor, maybe? Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too. But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
LOL, thanks. It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble. Maybe I should have put it in a different category? Malfoy Manor, maybe? Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too. But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.
I really like this story, i love the draco/Hermione pairing (there aren't enough of them in my opinion)Draco's POV was irresistible, i liked how he reacted to having a "secret". but I wonder what will happen when the other students discover their relationship. and i'm sure Harry and ron will have something to say, even if they are no longer so close to hermioneupdate soon please
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day. I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest. Hee hee. But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day. I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest. Hee hee. But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...
I gave up reading fanfic for Lent, but when I saw you'd updated the temptation was too great to resist. This was a great chapter, I love the change in Draco, how his self-centered concern for his own pleasure has begun to shift in ways he's not really even recognizing yet.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Exactly. He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it. Heh.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Exactly. He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it. Heh.