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Chapter 4 of 22
Fawkes_07* * * September 5, 1997 * * *
"Look who's here! The (Give) Head Boy!"
Draco laughed aloud and thrust his hips suggestively. "That's you, Zabini. Where are the ladies? They're supposed to be lined up for me when I arrive!" A missile of some sort thwapped the side of his head, and he spun round to catch the culprit. Pansy was sitting not twenty feet away with a sassy smile. "Throwing spitwads at the Head Boy, Parkinson?" he purred, crossing the room to take her wrists and pull them up over her head. "Punishable offense, that is."
She bared her teeth. "Gonna put me in detention?"
It was late at night, but there were still some third- and fourth-years milling about the Slytherin common room, and (sadly) it just wasn't appropriate to continue this discussion in front of them. "Damn straight. Detention, your room, twenty minutes from now." She dropped her gaze from his eyes to the middle of his robes and leered.
"Slut," he whispered for her benefit alone, then, laughing, joined Blaise in front of the roaring fire. It was always chilly down under the lake, even at the end of summer. "How goes it in the dungeons, mate?"
"Smells better, now you're gone," Zabini said, then his face took on a more serious mien. "Though it must stink where you are, eh?"
Draco smirked. "No, you know, it's really not so bad. We had a little talk early on, set some ground rules. I hardly ever see her, actually."
Zabini flicked his eyes away in a maneuver that Draco knew well after six years of being his roommate. It conveyed a certain mixture of mischief and guilt. He was up to something. Draco lowered his voice. "What?"
"Nothing, nothing," he said quietly. "Just a little project in the works. Believe me, if it turns out, you'll be the first to know."
This sounded most intriguing, but Blaise was a model Slytherin, and therefore would not reveal his hand too soon. Draco knew he'd get nothing more out of him for the time being and left it at that.
It was nice to settle back into the old groove, as it were, lounging before the fire and enjoying a pissing match with Blaise. He'd never admit it aloud, but living in the private suite was not as grand as he'd always imagined. There was a wonderful sense of security in the dungeons, knowing that the lake hovered protectively overhead and thick stone surrounded them on all sides. There was only one way in, one door to watch; a guy could relax with his back to the wall, certain that no one could ever come bursting through it.
The suite, however, was tucked on the third floor in the heart of the castle. They had a portrait hole, obviously, but it was double-sized like a classroom door, obviously some stupid architectural symbolism welcoming the plebians to come in for a dose of leadership if they needed it. Draco never quite felt settled in, knowing that there were people all around him, above, below. Merlin-only-knew who might be sneaking about in one of the empty classrooms just a veneer of brick (or even wood paneling!) away. It was sumptuous, certainly, and having a private bedroom and bath were very welcome "perqs;" he just wish he could enjoy them without feeling on his guard 24/7.
Neither he nor Granger used their common room, despite the lavish furnishings and the cheery hearth. It was designed for socializing, chairs and couches with little end tables scattered elegantly under a rotunda ceiling enchanted like the one in the Great Hall. There had been two heavy desks, one at each window, but Granger had moved hers into her bedroom within hours of arriving at Hogwarts, and he had done the same the next morning. No communal studying in this suite! Of course, this had made the common room even more open and comfortable, and the house elves had rearranged the furniture to fill the gaps. It was clearly meant for prefects and Quidditch captains and other elite students to gather and mingle with the Head Boy and Girl away from the madding crowd, yet it stood empty and forlorn. Draco felt an irrational impulse to order the house-elves to drape dust covers over the furniture every time he walked through it.
Granger kept herself scarce. Their rooms were well-soundproofed, and when her door was closed, he couldn't tell if she were hiding in there or if the suite was empty. That was undoubtedly meant to be a convenience, but had obviously been devised by a Hufflepuff. Slytherins would gladly accept the annoyances of loud music, snoring, etc. in exchange for constant awareness of the presence or absence of their suite-mate. The sense of a potential ambush nagged at him constantly.
The only times he ever heard her were when she used the bathroom, which was flanked by their bedrooms. The toilet was tucked in the back behind their closets and was well soundproofed (thankfully!), but the sinks and tub occupied a large room of white marble that rang like crystal when the taps were open. He heard her bathe every night, which irritated the hell out of him at first (since it was right after he'd returned from patrol and was rather looking forward to a nice soak himself), but he'd decided that protesting her bathing time would require him to talk to the stupid bint, and it wasn't worth the bother. Next month she'd be on late patrol and he'd have all the privacy he wanted.
But surprisingly enough, privacy wasn't all it was cracked up to be, and Draco found after less than a week that he longed for more contact. Crabbe and Goyle had shadowed him for so long that he felt odd in their absence, as though he'd left for class without putting on any socks. And they were never anything to talk to anyway; he had Knott and Zabini for that, and of course the ladies. Pansy was smart and funny enough to hold her own at taking the piss, but he had to be careful, for if he took certain topics too far, she'd get genuinely offended and there would be no action until he'd made up for it with gifts and insincere apologies. She was high maintenance, he had to admit, but she swallowed and that made up for a lot.
Talking of which... Draco gave Pansy the briefest waggle of eyebrows, and with a yawn and stretch, she slammed her Transfiguration book and announced that she was turning in. Draco continued his conversation with Blaise for another ten minutes, until his former roommate glanced at his watch and gave Draco a crooked grin. "Think she's had time to change into her nightdress," he said.
Draco nodded. "My thoughts exactly, Mr. Zabini. I believe I'll check in with the senior Prefect."
Zabini watched him stroll to Parkinson's room and knock; a warm red glow escaped the door when he slipped through it. She'd lit the lamp with the red shade, a very good sign. "Lucky bastard," he thought, and returned to his own room to continue working on his project.
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170 Reviews | 7.69/10 Average
looking to see what next... chapie 21: suprise that severus has a wife, & he gave great advice to draco!!!
love it.. lovely moment between dh..
alway knew draco could be nice to hermine, if he wanted to..
maybe draco will help hermione over her sadness of being lonely.. love severus's idea of draco and hermione working together..
so draco learn interesting fact concerning hermione, while spying on her and severus's discussion! love the plot, so far...
Omg! I started this not realising it was incomplete, and that it had been five or so years since it was updated. Are there any concrete plans to finish it? I really hope so, it's a great story so far. Feels like it's going to be much longer than this. Please finish! :)
oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest. I have them all written in my head. I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out. Someday...
Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest. I have them all written in my head. I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out. Someday...
Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)
oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche
I just noticed that this story got updated over on MNFF, which prompted me to reread....I really, really hope that you finish this story and the "is it worth it to finish" from a couple of chapters back is not how you feel. I want to know what happens! Or rather, how you draw the story to its conclusion. The situations you devise are unusual and intriguing, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I plan to, really. I'm just always short on time. MNFF doesn't even have the latest chapter up, I don't update as regularly over there.
Ahh... this story was so satisfying. I loved how in character both Hermione and Draco are. Their 'feelings' naturally evolve without making them ooc. I see you haven't updated this in a while, I hope eventually you'll come back to it. Even so, since they finally got together and it seems happy times are ahead, you could also mark this as complete.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Heh, well, I could, except I do have some more ideas that I wanted to write about when I started this tale... well, we'll see.
Just read through this story for the first time! Its brilliant, I would love to read more!!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes. Sigh.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes. Sigh.
Draco is so sexy/pathetic/vulnerable/lovable/hatable in this chapter. I love how complicated and and mysterious and subtle their relationship is so far... it's somehow a lot more believeable than if everything were all spelled out. I love it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
That's what I was shooting for--cool! Glad you're enjoying.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
That's what I was shooting for--cool! Glad you're enjoying.
I was seriously busting a gut laughing while reading this chapter. I LOVE the way this story begins--I've been looking for some good snark for weeks. This is the first D/H fic I've read, and I think I may be hooked. Hawt. I really love your version of Draco. He feels just right.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Cool! Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me. :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Cool! Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me. :)
I started reading this on Pureblood and was so thrilled to see it here, too! Fantastic story and I agree with the other reviewers - the amount of build-up has been perfect.Looking forward to the next installment. :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! I'm pretty happy with it so far--it turned out pretty good.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic. It is very well-written, and, unlike many for this pairing, believable. Thanks for writing it, and I hope you choose to continue.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! I will--but I'm behind on all my fics at the mo.
Haha.. I can totally picture Draco checking himself in the suits of armor. And the description of "pink, bubbling champagne" was perfect!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
*grin* Thanks! I've felt like pink bubbles inside before, myself.
Oh, this was SO lovely!
I can't explain why, but this slow, kissing-only, nonsexual event feels deliciously perfect. If I were reading Severus/Hermione I'd probably be frustrated but in this story with Draco and Hermione it feels splendidly right.
Can't wait for more!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
yay! I like to think they're both young enough that they wouldn't leap into it pell-mell--they'd want to try one another on first.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Also, maybe a response to how fragile she is (or has been)? How unexpectedly sweet of him.
Oh, I do hope that you will be continuing on with this. I couldn't stop reading--it was spellbinding in every way. If you need encouragement, consider this to be some, okay? If you choose not to go on, thank you for sharing what you have. It's well written and thought out and I did really enjoy it. :D
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! Glad you like it--I do plan to continue but I have a lot of "open" fics at the moment...
Glad to know you're back on this; thanks for the short but sweet chapter!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
You bet!
That was quite sweet.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
:) I thought so.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
:) I thought so.
Please keep writing this story. A couple of chapters back you thought it wasn't being recieved well. I wasn't reading it because it was listed under the hogwarts cat. and I haven't taken to many of those stories. But I started to read yours and kept saying yeah with each marker for the next chapter until this one.
Don't get discouraged about not getting reviews, I am a avid reader but terrible about writing a review and I am going to try and become better at giving encouragement to my favorite authors. I am looking forward to your next chap. Your timing for the relationship to take a turn was perfect. I didn't feel like---geez, get there already. I know there is suppose to be a build up but some authors build up for so long that I actually start disliking the characters and then I lose interest in the story altogether.
So I bow to your nimble fingers and quick mind. But most of all, have fun writing or its not worth it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
LOL, thanks. It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble. Maybe I should have put it in a different category? Malfoy Manor, maybe? Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too. But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
LOL, thanks. It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble. Maybe I should have put it in a different category? Malfoy Manor, maybe? Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too. But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.
I really like this story, i love the draco/Hermione pairing (there aren't enough of them in my opinion)Draco's POV was irresistible, i liked how he reacted to having a "secret". but I wonder what will happen when the other students discover their relationship. and i'm sure Harry and ron will have something to say, even if they are no longer so close to hermioneupdate soon please
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day. I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest. Hee hee. But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day. I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest. Hee hee. But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...
I gave up reading fanfic for Lent, but when I saw you'd updated the temptation was too great to resist. This was a great chapter, I love the change in Draco, how his self-centered concern for his own pleasure has begun to shift in ways he's not really even recognizing yet.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Exactly. He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it. Heh.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Exactly. He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it. Heh.