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Chapter 9 of 22
Fawkes_07* * * Chapter 9: October 20, 1997 * * *
"Mr. Malfoy. A word."
Draco's insides felt an acute burst of gravity. He was certain the Potions Master had somehow seen the viewport spell, just like that damn cat. What else could Snape want with him after class? But ever a Malfoy and a Slytherin, he put on his coolest face and strolled to the front of the classroom without a trace of concern. Denial always begins before the accusations, after all. Draco raised his brows in polite interest and waited.
Snape peered over his shoulder as the last students filed out, then closed the door with a wordless flick of his wand. "I'm disappointed, Draco," he said, folding his arms across his chest.
I am so fucking busted. "What? Why's that?"
With a wave of his hand, Snape indicated that he should sit, while he settled stiffly onto the top of the nearest desk. "You have been given a singular honor at Hogwarts: the title of Head Boy. A position of leadership and influence. An exceptional achievement, given the political climate toward Slytherins at this time."
Draco's mouth was bone dry, but he refused to be caught gulping just yet. He nodded with as much incomprehension as he could fake, waiting for the axe to fall.
Snape glowered in silence a few seconds, then continued. "I would expect you to appreciate the opportunities this position creates." He paused again, as if expecting a response, but Draco refused to be baited. Father had taught him never to confess, only to admit, and then only if necessary.
"You are aware that the Headmaster has decreed that this shall be a year of gaiety and rejoicing?"
Okay, wasn't expecting THAT. "I remember the first day's speech, yes, sir."
"That he insists on reviving every single festive event ever celebrated in the history of Hogwarts, including a Halloween Ball, Yule Ball, Valentine Ball, bonfires at every astronomical event (even a mere partial lunar eclipse), and a Trout Fishing Tournament?" Snape looked like a bug had just flown up his nose.
"Already ordered a rod and reel, sir." Where the hell is this going?
"How splendid," Snape droned. "And what other initiatives have you taken to support the headmaster's policy?" When the best response Draco could manage was a fallen jaw, Snape rolled his eyes and hissed in a way he normally reserved for Hufflepuffs. "Use your head, boy!" he snapped, apparently unaware of his little play on words. "You've been granted your own common room, filled with the sorts of furnishings conducive to socializing. This is a large castle, Draco. I'm quite sure you weren't given that particular suite because there was no place else to put you!"
The light came on over Draco's blond head long before the rant had ended, but he couldn't stop gaping. Snape was ordering him to throw more parties. It's just not possible. His mind refused to wrap around the concept.
"Oh, shut your trap, Draco," Snape growled. "Even I can sense the prevailing winds. Dumbledore took quite a risk, bestowing the title of Head Boy on the son of a traitor. He is offering you a rare opportunity to redeem your standing, perhaps even that of your family, in wizard society. And you appear to be squandering it!"
This was at least a little more like the scheming Snape he'd known all his life, and Draco finally snapped his mouth shut, his teeth clicking audibly. "I... hadn't really thought of it," he mumbled. "It's not like the other Head Boys ever threw parties."
"It's true that Professor Umbridge discouraged them when you were a prefect, and last year was a bit of a wash, what with the great Battle of Good v. Evil surrounding the castle," Snape admitted grudgingly. "But that is no more, Draco. You are expected to support the Headmaster's policies, and right now that policy is to celebrate our redemption."
"Hmph. I don't see Granger celebrating."
Snape sat up straighter. "Miss Granger is... struggling, Draco. I remind you that she, too, is a student at this school, and as such is also your responsibility. Were you in need, I would expect her to support you."
It was politically incorrect to scoff at anything remotely Potteresque, but Draco trusted Snape. "I hope I never reach a point where I need help from her."
Snape leapt to his feet and grabbed the front of Draco's robes so viciously that the younger man reached for his wand reflexively and nearly fell off the back of the bench in a futile effort to retreat. "You listen to me, Draco Peverell Malfoy," Snape purred in his softest, most dangerous tone. "Such words will never cross your lips again. You are already indebted to Miss Granger and the others. Were it not for her, your father would be dead, your mother dead or enslaved, and you... I don't care to imagine the kind of fate the Dark Lord might have planned for you.
"Your father disappointed him, Draco. Severely. He would have considered you and your mother a pathetic reparation for that insult. I'm quite sure he would have assigned you an impossible task and then tortured you to death when you failed it. Instead here you are, living in the most luxurious suite in the castle." He finally released Draco's lapels with a small shove. "You should kneel before her every morning and swear your undying gratitude."
"Is that what you do?"
It was a testament to Draco's love for his "Uncle Severus" that he felt safe enough to mouth off under the circumstances. Snape responded in the same spirit, for he made no attempt to strangle, hex, or castrate Draco. Instead he fell silent, staring at his adversary with an utterly blank expression. Draco began to breathe hard; he'd never felt so afraid outside of Voldemort's presence.
"As of this moment, you will cease to voice your Pureblood prejudices," Snape finally began in a crisp, cold voice. "They are not only in the minority, they are an unpopular minority. You will, within two weeks, host a social event for the prefects in your suite. Following that, the Quidditch teams, the Herbology Club, then groups of students from each House, starting with the fourth-years. These are to be dignified affairs, and you will set a sterling example of proper conduct."
Snape set a hand upon Draco's shoulder, a grotesque mockery of an affectionate gesture. "You will invite Miss Granger to help you organize each of these events, even though she will refuse. You will politely ask her to assist you in setting up--tell her you'll assign it to a house-elf otherwise; that will sway her. Finally, you will stand by her as her escort during the party, ensuring that she doesn't slip off to her room, or the library. I trust I do not have to instruct you about introductions or refilling her goblet."
Draco averted his gaze. "I know how to act the gentleman's part, Uncle Severus."
"See that you do it!" the professor snapped, but he closed his eyes momentarily and continued in a kinder tone. "Miss Granger should not be brooding in her chambers. Rising to meet her need is precisely what is expected of the Head Boy. I'm quite certain that the headmaster will appreciate your efforts."
Snape released him, and Draco understood he was being dismissed. "Yes, sir," he said, though his voice was much scratchier than he would have liked.
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170 Reviews | 7.69/10 Average
looking to see what next... chapie 21: suprise that severus has a wife, & he gave great advice to draco!!!
love it.. lovely moment between dh..
alway knew draco could be nice to hermine, if he wanted to..
maybe draco will help hermione over her sadness of being lonely.. love severus's idea of draco and hermione working together..
so draco learn interesting fact concerning hermione, while spying on her and severus's discussion! love the plot, so far...
Omg! I started this not realising it was incomplete, and that it had been five or so years since it was updated. Are there any concrete plans to finish it? I really hope so, it's a great story so far. Feels like it's going to be much longer than this. Please finish! :)
oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest. I have them all written in my head. I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out. Someday...
Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I haven't abandoned any of these poor fics, honest. I have them all written in my head. I just can't for the life of me find time to type them out. Someday...
Response from TycheSong (Reviewer)
Good! I am relieved to hear that. :-)
oh! I really hope you havenmt decided to completely abandon this fic forever, I've only just discovered it and I want more! Please reconsider and pick it up again! --Tyche
I just noticed that this story got updated over on MNFF, which prompted me to reread....I really, really hope that you finish this story and the "is it worth it to finish" from a couple of chapters back is not how you feel. I want to know what happens! Or rather, how you draw the story to its conclusion. The situations you devise are unusual and intriguing, and I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
I plan to, really. I'm just always short on time. MNFF doesn't even have the latest chapter up, I don't update as regularly over there.
Ahh... this story was so satisfying. I loved how in character both Hermione and Draco are. Their 'feelings' naturally evolve without making them ooc. I see you haven't updated this in a while, I hope eventually you'll come back to it. Even so, since they finally got together and it seems happy times are ahead, you could also mark this as complete.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Heh, well, I could, except I do have some more ideas that I wanted to write about when I started this tale... well, we'll see.
Just read through this story for the first time! Its brilliant, I would love to read more!!!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes. Sigh.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thx, yeah, I wish I could write more, but I just broke 6 ribs and can't sit up for more than a few minutes. Sigh.
Draco is so sexy/pathetic/vulnerable/lovable/hatable in this chapter. I love how complicated and and mysterious and subtle their relationship is so far... it's somehow a lot more believeable than if everything were all spelled out. I love it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
That's what I was shooting for--cool! Glad you're enjoying.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
That's what I was shooting for--cool! Glad you're enjoying.
I was seriously busting a gut laughing while reading this chapter. I LOVE the way this story begins--I've been looking for some good snark for weeks. This is the first D/H fic I've read, and I think I may be hooked. Hawt. I really love your version of Draco. He feels just right.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Cool! Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me. :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Cool! Always glad to know there's other people who have the same twisted sense of humor as me. :)
I started reading this on Pureblood and was so thrilled to see it here, too! Fantastic story and I agree with the other reviewers - the amount of build-up has been perfect.Looking forward to the next installment. :)
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! I'm pretty happy with it so far--it turned out pretty good.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this fic. It is very well-written, and, unlike many for this pairing, believable. Thanks for writing it, and I hope you choose to continue.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! I will--but I'm behind on all my fics at the mo.
Haha.. I can totally picture Draco checking himself in the suits of armor. And the description of "pink, bubbling champagne" was perfect!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
*grin* Thanks! I've felt like pink bubbles inside before, myself.
Oh, this was SO lovely!
I can't explain why, but this slow, kissing-only, nonsexual event feels deliciously perfect. If I were reading Severus/Hermione I'd probably be frustrated but in this story with Draco and Hermione it feels splendidly right.
Can't wait for more!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
yay! I like to think they're both young enough that they wouldn't leap into it pell-mell--they'd want to try one another on first.
Response from mia madwyn (Reviewer)
Also, maybe a response to how fragile she is (or has been)? How unexpectedly sweet of him.
Oh, I do hope that you will be continuing on with this. I couldn't stop reading--it was spellbinding in every way. If you need encouragement, consider this to be some, okay? If you choose not to go on, thank you for sharing what you have. It's well written and thought out and I did really enjoy it. :D
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Thanks! Glad you like it--I do plan to continue but I have a lot of "open" fics at the moment...
Glad to know you're back on this; thanks for the short but sweet chapter!
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
You bet!
That was quite sweet.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
:) I thought so.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
:) I thought so.
Please keep writing this story. A couple of chapters back you thought it wasn't being recieved well. I wasn't reading it because it was listed under the hogwarts cat. and I haven't taken to many of those stories. But I started to read yours and kept saying yeah with each marker for the next chapter until this one.
Don't get discouraged about not getting reviews, I am a avid reader but terrible about writing a review and I am going to try and become better at giving encouragement to my favorite authors. I am looking forward to your next chap. Your timing for the relationship to take a turn was perfect. I didn't feel like---geez, get there already. I know there is suppose to be a build up but some authors build up for so long that I actually start disliking the characters and then I lose interest in the story altogether.
So I bow to your nimble fingers and quick mind. But most of all, have fun writing or its not worth it.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
LOL, thanks. It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble. Maybe I should have put it in a different category? Malfoy Manor, maybe? Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too. But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
LOL, thanks. It is nice to get reviews, we authors are such hogs for trouble. Maybe I should have put it in a different category? Malfoy Manor, maybe? Heck, I never know what to put them in.I know exactly what you mean about the WAAAY too long buildup--I get annoyed with that a lot too. But some people love it--it's all accounting for taste, I guess.
I really like this story, i love the draco/Hermione pairing (there aren't enough of them in my opinion)Draco's POV was irresistible, i liked how he reacted to having a "secret". but I wonder what will happen when the other students discover their relationship. and i'm sure Harry and ron will have something to say, even if they are no longer so close to hermioneupdate soon please
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day. I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest. Hee hee. But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Yeah, it was fun to think about how they might react the next day. I debated a lot of ways it could go and decided this was the sweetest. Hee hee. But yeah, you know a LOT of people are going to weigh in on this one...
I gave up reading fanfic for Lent, but when I saw you'd updated the temptation was too great to resist. This was a great chapter, I love the change in Draco, how his self-centered concern for his own pleasure has begun to shift in ways he's not really even recognizing yet.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Exactly. He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it. Heh.
Response from Fawkes_07 (Author of Looking and Seeing)
Exactly. He's really in over his head and he doesn't even know it. Heh.