Simply adorable parody or not. LOL I too have a soft spot for the marriage law fics. Pity so many of them were abandoned!

Loved this story!  Definitely have a soft spot for the Marriage Law stories.

“Wand at the ready, Davies. You won’t get away *for these insults.”[Would sound better if you changed 'for' to 'with.']

Cheesed up? Does that make them CheeseWhiz-ards? 

LOL! I give in, you certainly had enough clichés left!

Good grief girl, you're being a worse cynic than our beloved Potions Master!! Most MLC stories were/are just plain fun.

One of the things that I could never figure out about the original concept was if the numbers of magical persons were dwindling due to the inbreeding etc ... it never made any sense to me that if the poor muggleborns didn't comply with the ML then they would have their wands broken and be banished from the magical world, or thrown into Azkaban. This action would thereby reduce the number of magical folk available even more and the Ministry would not be able to accomplish their goals.

Of course the whole ML idea was ludicrous to begin with, but I'm still a total sucker for one ... even yours!

I wept! I cried! I sporfeld and broccoli grew!Your story has such amazing powers!

Glad to see a happy end in this although I didn't doubt it. I also would add that I should hex you for suggesting me to read "panther and lioness". Is was so great that I spent most of last night reading it. I don't need to say I had some difficulties concentrating at work today. Anyway if you had other suggestion I'll be glad to hear about it but only before the week-end, for my sleep's sake.

LOL, I liked it. I am addicted to the MLC and like them all, lotsa cheese or not. Keep them on!

OH Sunshine I laughed and laughed! I really enjoyed your poking fun! Maybe I should do a pureblood!snape quiz...

I cant get the grin off my face! All hail Lord Snape!!

Incredible! Who'd have thought such a strong marriage would result from such a terrible law? Er ... oh yeah ... I guess a lot of people have. Your affection for the (in)famous MLC does shine through the laughs. And it made me go back and read "Like Sands Through The Hourglass" for even more SS/HG wackiness, so thanks twice.

Now I know what someone else meant about your making them rethink their own wriitng.  It made me realize just how many of the cliches I have in my own pieces.  Meep!

 But it was a fun read.  Your cliches didn't stick with just MLC-related ones; I like the boys going down to see Hagrid's "cute" pet.  Oh, and Severus' jealousy is a force to be reckoned with.  Thanks for helping all of us to remember not to take ourselves too seriously.

Totally brilliant as usual. Your Snape was spot on. I love the MLC stories because there are so many different types of relationships created using our two favorite people.I honestly love your Snape. He is written totally in character. So many I have read make him soft and clingy...that is not Snape.As for your lemons...well you are one of the best :>) and have once again come though with a very touching scene. The only thing I thought was a bit strange was when the students of Snape's house rallied around her. I think it was brilliant, honestly. I sit and await more glorious stories from you :>)Linda

:sobs: O ALL THE CLICHES I HAVE SO PASSIVELY AND GREEDILY SWALLOWED like the seed of a certain Potions Master!

I am soooo ashamed. Thank you, SW, for helping me see the light.

ZOMG! That is, like, the kewlest MLC out there!!! And the hawt sex00rs were just, oh wow *fans self*.

Srsly, you are totally made of win. :-)

I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed the way you wrote the character of Gregory Goyle.  His presence is not essential to the plot, nor is any of his dialogue important to progressing the story, and yet, there he is.  It is like the character Benicio Del Torro plays in "The Usual Suspects."  Del Torro chose to mumble his character's lines throughout the movie because none of them were related to plot progression.  (Now that character is remembered for being unintelligible).I think your characterization of Goyle adds another level to your parody since so many authors strive to find some way for each and every one of their characters to contribute to the story (and yet it seems that not all succeed ... mmm).  Sometimes the characters end up as "set decoration" adding ambiance to the common room or classroom.  I think with Goyle you have succeeded with a character who does not add to the plot or the setting.  Well done.Actually it could make for quite a funny story if one of the predominate characters were written like this.  It would be interesting to see how the characters who are trying to move the story deal with one that not only isn't trying but doesn't realize there is a story to move.Anyway, I enjoyed your parody.  I am thankful you stayed out of melodrama-land.  Perhaps that's why some people didn't catch the parody.  I think you did a good job; succeeding in the goal you set for yourself, up to and including burying a hatchet in the story (with your A/Ns) to keep it from raising its ugly head again.

Wow, far cry from the quality I'm accustomed to seeing written under the SW69 name. It reads like a visit to cliche land. Glad to see your writing has improved (vastly) and that you're not ashamed to camp something up and post it for giggles.

Yeah, I had fun. This chapter seemed cheesier than the last one, so I shudder to think what you would have done with a third ;). Thanks for the good laugh after a stressful day at work!

Three rounds of love-making in a row? ...snicker...lucky girl, wizards must not need time to recoup.eyes raking over his thick, hairy chest...Ah yeah, canon all the way!Dear God, someone save us from Floormat!Hermione, Schizo!Snape, irrational jealousy, and angry!sex. All right, I do know someone that was relaying a story about being interrupted by her boyfriend's daughter while they were having sex during an argument. I have to say, if I'm mad, my WHOLE body is mad...lolWow, these two covered a lot of ground in just a few days.And they lived happily ever after—with triplets who each had a hard to spell nameHardest thing in the world, what to name their kid, and where to sort it...lol... great story, I enjoy it immensely.

This was so wondrously terrible I couldn't even read it. :P You were completely successful at what you set out to do.

I've always loved the MLC stories. This one made me smile. Thank you!

hehe - well, I STILL love all this stuff... LOLAnd as you know, I could use a few smiles this week.((hugglies)))))

Oooh, came home and got chapter two! You've actually made my day a bit brighter! I love that she just snuck under his skin.

Copied this to read at work and was giggling so loud I had to close the  door. Good story. Thanks for posting...

I was going to count how many of the cliches you'd used  in here (one could make a list of quiz for game out of it, if one is not terribly lazy like me) but gave up because I was busy laughing.

Down to the last sentence, it was funny and very enjoyable.