Parody or not this is lovely. What can I say other than I am a sucker for fluffy romance!
Missy/LovesRickman

I have been reading your stories for a number of years now. Always enjoy your writing.
I, too, enjoy mlc stories, try to read them all, good or bad. Have always hoped that tpp would put a category in place for them, but, have never seen one.

I have been reading your stories for a number of years now. Always enjoy your writing.
I, too, enjoy mlc stories, try to read them all, good or bad. Have always hoped that tpp would put a category in place for them, but, have never seen one.

Thanks for the fun read!

This chapter was great! You are extremely talented!

This was awesome!

This was awesome!

This chapter was great! You are extremely talented!

Love the story! Well done!Beth

***It’s the MLC for SS/HG***Weehee!***Being a Legilimens sure would be a handy thing.  Golly, wouldn't it?Aw, you missed the opportunity to describe, in nauseating detail, every single article of clothing she bought at Madam Malkin's, and somewhere in there should be something totally impossible to imagine (or hideous in the reader's mind, while quite obviously stunning in the writer's).I think you got most of the main points--maybe you could've added some more lemony bits, including the fact that most writers seem to believe that everything has to literally end up in bed (even the ones who start on potions tables and up against doors).  There are also a few of the physical details about these scenes that sometimes just crack me up.I am sorry to hear that you once meant some of this seriously, but delighted that you eventually saw the silliness of your ways.  And, as I wrote in the previous review, this is still a good deal better than a lot of the stuff we're meant to take seriously...and it's certainly better written than some of the drek out there.Though there is also some amazingly good work to be had, all thanks to great sites like PP!

This is actually BETTER than a lot of fics I've read! *shudders*I especially like Severus repeating the bit about "You are the cleverest witch of the age, and you helped to bring down the Dark Lord," like some silly mantra.So sad that there are those out there who won't get that this is more sarcastic than Snape on his best day!

fabu!!  But then, most of you stuff is-  cheers!

Ahh Love, who cares if its OOC- sorry Southern but I thinks its magical!

Ah, fluff abounds!  That's a good thing, I'm in a fluffy mood (read as: cotton wool between my ears)!  I actually really enjoyed this, though I'm a little embarrassed to admit it - brought me back to those lovely times at the beginning of the good ship SS HG :D

*digs self out from under all the fluffy marshmallows, baby chicks, and cotton candy* LOL. Very cute, although horriblly fluffy and OOC. Glad you posted this as humor, rather than serious. If I hadn't read some of your other stories, I would be a bit worried....

I have to say, the thing that made me laugh the hardest was "It's the MLC for SS/HG! Weehee!" strewn throughout the story as your divider.

I have a confession to make: I love love love MLC fics. To an unhealthy degree. The first HGSS fic I ever read (which converted me wholeheartedly to this pairing) was You Can't Have One Without the Other by RachelW, which is a fabulous story. Ever since then, I've been a bit addicted to MLC fics (even with different ships!), and am always disappointed when I read a really bad fic.

So because of my MLC fic love and loyalty, it took me three tries before I could read this story all the way through. Not because it's a bad story, but because I was being all defensive of my beloved MLC. But I'm very glad that I bit the bullet and read it, because it is a lovely, funny story and it does a wonderful parody of the awfulness of the bad MLC fics. My only criticism is that it's written much too well - but I think it would be hard for you to write badly!

Okay, I'm a bit of a nut, but when I read the following:

"Have you someone to help with your facial and hair?” 

I read facial hair instead of facial and hair and almost choked because I was laughing so hard. Oh Minerva, you bitch!

Ahem. But yes. Good, funny story. You've captured the passage from omgwecantstandeachother to omgwelurveeachotherandareofftomakelotsofbabies just right.

Although, it's a little too well written. ;)

Fun Story.

I do have a soft spot for MLC stories as well... I wouldn't have passed the challenge to other of the ships I read if it wasn't the case. ;)

And I must admit I like this story, even if the silk green boxers made me snigger... I also must admit that it made me fondly remember some of the fics that I liked *cringes at remembering said fics* 4 years ago when I enter the fandom.

Well I thought the rings from her dead parents were a nice touch, not. Can you say creepy?Most of this had me shaking my head whilst trying to surpress a laugh.Well done my dear, although I think you should have, and could have, got the mandatory sex scene in the shower in there somehow. Oh, and I loved the way that Hermione was oh so good on her first time and their performance, especially Severus'. I have to award full marks for. I mean he just came but then in 5 secs flat he was up and ready again. Must be all that Pure Blood in him hey.Thanks for the laughs, Sonia :)

LOL, this is a riot. Except for the fact that you spelt jail wrong, as it should be gaol, I love it so far.Love Sonia :)

I LOVE THIS STORY!

Excellent--I've always liked a bit of cheese!

Now that canon has become important to you, will you be writing RW/HG stories? I personally prefer snarky SS/HG to lovey-dovey SS/HG, so I loved the cliches in this story.

OMG Southern, I laughed so hard I almost had an asthma attack.  I used to like the MLC fics too , now I read them for a giggle.  This is so going on my fav list.