Epilogue: Amazing Grace
Chapter 13 of 13
potterbratThis is a story inspired by the Tim McGraw song, "If You're Reading This." This is NOT a songfic. What happens when Hermione's dreams don't exactly turn out the way she had planned? Will she be able to deal with the hand that life dealt her?
A/N: Well, after finishing this Epilogue, I lost every bit of it with a computer crash, so I had to re-write it. It's a lot shorter than the original, but my muse changed course. Here is the finished product. I hope you enjoy it. I only own Grace and the other people that you don't recognize from the Harry Potter phenomenon. Thank you, RobisonRocket!! You're the bestest!!!
Epilogue
Amazing Grace
Grace sat on the bench, facing her parents, with the light breeze blowing her graying hair into her eyes. It was an unusually warm day for late October, and the freshly fallen leaves scattered the ground around her. She smiled as she brushed a strand of hair out of her eyes.
Sighing contentedly, she began to speak. “Hello. How are my favorite people today? I know it’s been a while since I’ve sat down with you and shared the latest gossip, so here I am.”
“You would be so proud of little Ava, Mum. She was sorted into Gryffindor yesterday. Oh, stop groaning, Dad. You were ever so happy when Cissa was sorted into Slytherin. I still don’t know how that happened. I’ve always thought you’d had a hand in it, somehow. She turned out to be a wonderful asset to that house, though, I dare say. She has just been appointed as the Head of Slytherin House. Not bad for a woman who happens to have Muggle blood, eh?”
“I’m not sure if Brian has been by to see you or not, but he has some news. I shouldn’t tell you, because it’s his story to tell, but I’ll tell you anyway. Adrianna is getting married. Can you believe it? It’s about time I’d say. My niece is the only one of your grandchildren that hasn’t gotten hitched, yet. She’s marrying that bloke she works with – an Irish Muggle from Dublin.”
“The kids are all doing alright, of course. Ronald is Head Boy, now. I’m so proud of my grandson, I can’t stop smiling. Constance is a Prefect, and she just started her sixth year. All of my grandchildren are finally at school, so I get to see them every day now. Oh, did I forget to tell you? I am the newly appointed Potions mistress. You should have seen Uncle Harry’s face when I told him that I turned in my resignation at the Auror Department last winter. Aunt Ginny said that he could finally die in peace, knowing that he didn’t have to worry about me any longer and that his godfather duties had finally been sorted out. Bless him. Being an Auror was nothing compared to teaching Healer Longbottom’s great-grandson. He’s a nightmare.”
“But, alas, Uncle Harry did finally pass on. He died peacefully in his sleep the day after his ninety-ninth birthday. Remember how he used to joke that he would never live to be one hundred? He was right, wasn’t he? Aunt Gin is getting on alright, though. She has nine great-grandchildren to keep her busy. There is finally a boy in the Potter family, by the way. He’s Jasmine’s grandson, and they named him James. I can hear you groaning again, Dad. Stop that. Poor Uncle Harry had always wanted a boy to name after his own father, and he finally got one just a few months before he died.”
“Devon is going into his fifth year as the headmaster, and he’s doing a lovely job. Luna passed on last year, but she went in style. She said that she had much to do on the other side of the veil, and she couldn’t wait to get there. Draco had a difficult time of it. He’d said that living without her wasn’t any fun, and he, too, passed on just three months later. Devon misses them, but he’s happy knowing they’re together.”
Grace allowed a silent tear to slide down her cheek and wiped it away quickly when she heard footsteps behind her.
“Mum, is everything alright?” Her youngest daughter, Cissa, approached her.
Grace motioned for her to sit with her on the bench.
Cissa sat with her and repeated her question, taking her mother’s hand.
“I’m alright,” Grace finally answered. “I’m just catching them up on some of the latest news. I didn’t mean to worry you, darling.”
“I wasn’t worried,” Cissa said. “Dad just wanted to make sure that you got back in time for the Halloween Feast. He was going to come himself, but I told him that I’d get you and make sure you made it back alright. He doesn’t like for you to Apparate by yourself. I tried to tell him that you were more than capable, but you know how he can be.”
“Yes,” Grace chuckled. “Your father has always been a little suffocating.”
“His heart’s in the right place, though. He just worries, you know,” her daughter chided.
“I know, darling, I know. I’m just going to sit here for a few more minutes, if you don’t mind. They might have something to tell me, and it may take them a little while to form the words,” Grace said gently.
“Do you mind if I stay here with you?” Cissa asked.
“Of course not, darling,” Grace said.
They relaxed on the bench and let the silence stretch between them. The day was coming to a close, and it was getting darker in the open field where they sat. The only sound that could be heard was the sporadic breeze rustling the trees. Neither of them had any inclination to leave, even with the anticipation of the Halloween Feast scheduled for that evening.
The minutes ticked by when suddenly, they both sat upright when the wind picked up, blowing the leaves furiously over the ground. Grace met her daughter’s eyes and laughed out loud when a raindrop landed on Cissa’s nose.
“Was it supposed to rain?” Cissa asked, wiping the raindrop away with the tip of her finger.
“No, I don’t think so,” Grace said, grinning. “Are you ready to go now? We have a feast waiting for us.”
Cissa smiled at her mother. “Yes, I’m ready.”
They stood and Grace said her farewells to her parents. They walked in silence until they reached the end of the gravel road leading to Hogsmeade. Cissa knew her mother liked this walk and never complained that she wouldn’t just Apparate to the gates of the castle.
Cissa finally broke the silence. “So, do you think they’re happy?”
Grace smiled. “Of course they are, Cissa, didn’t you hear them? My father was the wind that moved the leaves. Dad, of course, was the rain. My mother was the whisper of the raindrops as they landed on the leaves and your nose. I wonder what they’ll say next time.”
Cissa hugged her mother close to her. “Will you let me come with you next time, so I can hear them again?”
“Of course you can,” Grace said.
“I’m glad they’re together,” Cissa said pensively.
“Why wouldn’t they be? It’s what my dad wanted after my mother passed away. My father told me once that there were no more debts to be paid, but I think, in his own funny way, my dad wanted to be one up on my father. He was such a sneaky Slytherin,” Grace said as the rain started to pick up.
Per tradition, they both turned to look at back at the row of headstones standing together at the edge of the open field.
Hermione had been laid to rest between the two men who loved her the most.
If you’re reading this
There’s gonna come a day
When you move on and find someone else
And that’s okay
Just remember this
I’m in a better place
Where soldiers live in peace
And angels sing Amazing Grace
So lay me down
In that open field out on the edge of town
And know my soul
Is where my momma always prayed that it would go
And if you’re reading this
I’m already home
A/N: Once again, I want to thank all of you who stuck with me and Grace.
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i knew u were an exceptional writer. gj!
good cliffie! u missed correcting one (subtly)
A friend of mine on Tumblr recommenned your story. I have spend this evening reading you wonderful work. You had me laughing and in tears. Thank you so much for the wonderful story.
You never know what you'll get when you ask for a random story. It might be something a bit on the mediocre side, or an unfinished story, or something that is completely unforgettable. This one, my dear potterbrat, is a keeper! I really mean that, too. I've added it to the other fanfics I have copied over the years. Consider yourself in the august company of such writers as ladyofthemasque, Bambu, Sunny33, Chivalric, and Southern_Witch_69, just to name a few. Well Done! ^_^
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To receive such kind words from an author that I respect is a huge boost to my ego. But to be included in the same sentence as the best of the best is both an honor and very humbling. Thank you so much.
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To receive such kind words from an author that I respect is a huge boost to my ego. But to be included in the same sentence as the best of the best is both an honor and very humbling. Thank you so much.
This story makes me cry every time I read it.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That gives me the impression that you've read it more than once. If that is the case, then I can't tell you how much that means to me. This was only my second novel-length, so it was pretty raw. Thank you for the review.~*potterbrat*~
Response from rons_love (Reviewer)
Yes, I have read the story more than once. I usually go back over my favorites when I get bored with reading one shots. :)
That was a sweet and wonderful story. Thank you so much, your story really touched my heart. And yes I cried several times during the story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
That was beautifully done. I like the way everything moved along and we were able to see such a long expanse of time without getting lost in it. Thanks for a great story!
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Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I just loved this story. It was beautiful and emotional. it had me crying in places and laughing as well. being 8 months pregnant and reading about this beautiful girl made me proud that i am having a girl!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Oh, thank you!! Congratulations!! I have two girls (Paige-9, Jayde-13) and they are an absolute blessing. EXPENSIVE, but a blessing all the same!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Oh, thank you!! Congratulations!! I have two girls (Paige-9, Jayde-13) and they are an absolute blessing. EXPENSIVE, but a blessing all the same!!
gosh darn it! you've got me crying again!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I don't mean, too!! Just keep reading. You'll stop crying, eventually. Thanks for the review!!
wow...this story has me snivling all over my keyboard. yes, it is fluffiness personified but i am so enjoying it. i look forward to the last bits. love the scene with her and ron! thanks so much!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You're a sweetheart! Thank you. I hope to have more up next week, but I'm not really sure. I have a very busy weekend, coming up so I don't know if I'll be able to get any writing in.
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That was amazingly sweet. I really love this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad that you do.
I just love how Grace got to visit with her father. That is just so beautiful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, love. I really wanted to give them a moment. Not so much for Grace, but for Ron. He deserved a moment, bless him.
You have me crying. AGAIN! Another wonderful chapter. I loved how Grace got to talk to Ron, and he was wonderful. People give Ron a lot of flack in fanfics, which I tend to get sick to death of. I'm happy that in this fic you haven't gone that tired route.
I also really liked Neville standing up to Severus. A great fanfic moment.
I look forward to more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that I'm not the only person out there that still likes Ron. I think he's great for a laugh, which can make his hard to write sometimes. I hope to get some more out to you guys really soon. I know what I want to write, it's just the writing that gets me stuck. I will have a block for about two weeks, then suddenly, I can't stop writing. Utter MADNESS!
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I am honnored that you thought my comment was worth weaving into your story, of course I don't mind G/F. I am so sorry to hear about your dog, I have a theropy dog so I really have an understanding of how close your relationship with a pet can be. I do hope you are feeling better.
I really enjoyed this chapter and was tickeled to death to see your A/N. *blushes*
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Well, thank you for your kind words about my "baby-bull." I appreciate that!
I was in the middle of writing the story, and for some reason the whole "poetic justice" thing kept popping into my head. I thought Snape might say something like that if the situation called for it, and BAM! there it was: the perfect situation. It was exactly what his little talk with Neville needed. I'm glad that you're pleased!
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"Please, Weasley, I’m on my knees, begging you not to take her away from me"
"I can’t compete with you, Ronald. I’m here at your mercy, my friend. Please, don’t take her away from me. I beg you"
Sheer brilliance, these lines were my undoing, I blubbed like a baby, darn it!
I bow down to your brilliance and would award you 5 million stars if I could.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I am grinning like kneazle here. I don't mean to be so pleased by your tears, but that's just the nicest compliment I could get as a writer. I'm also glad that you were particularly moved by those lines. I think Snape is the most fascinating and complicated character in the entire HP series. I believe that if he were in a similar situation in canon, he would battle with blaming himself and finding someone else to blame. That's why he called Ron a "bastard" and eventually referred to him as "my friend." Thank you for the stars and for the review!
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Fantastic! I loved this chapter, even if I had to find a tissue to remove that hair that had gotten into my eye....
Update again soon!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Don't you hate that!! I had the same problem while I was writing some of this. Hmmm... maybe next time I'll issue a mascara alert. You know, for when our hair gets in our eyes. Hee hee!! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for sticking with me.
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I really liked the talk between Neville and Severus. Neville's really grown into his own - it's good to see he can't be intimidated that easily any more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I know. Bless his heart. This was my way of giving Neville and Severus an ending. I feel like he never had the chance to prove himself in canon. I'm glad you were able to see him the way I think he should be seen.
cheers!
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This is such a great story. I am not ashamed to admit that I either cried or teared up several times while reading it. I look forward to more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Please don't be ashamed. It just means that you grasped what the story is, and you've reacted in the exact way you were supposed to react. I hope to have more either this week or next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Please don't be ashamed. It just means that you grasped what the story is, and you've reacted in the exact way you were supposed to react. I hope to have more either this week or next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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There is a certain amount of poetic justice in Neville being a surgeon. Hmm, yes, Severus frightened him as a student now he frightens Severus as a Dr.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Hmmm.... yes, I thought so as well. I love it when things turn out this way, don't you? I think we will see yet another side of Severus Snape!!!
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Hmmm.... yes, I thought so as well. I love it when things turn out this way, don't you? I think we will see yet another side of Severus Snape!!!
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Very touching. It is rare to read a fic that shows Ron in such a mature light.Livvy
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That is exactly why I wrote Ron this way. He deserves a little redemption for all the other fanfics that beat the hell out of him. I love his character, even though I don't think he and Hermione belong together. Thanks so much for the review.~potterbrat~
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That is exactly why I wrote Ron this way. He deserves a little redemption for all the other fanfics that beat the hell out of him. I love his character, even though I don't think he and Hermione belong together. Thanks so much for the review.~potterbrat~
Loved the update:-) I must say that if Devon have the love and courage to ask Grace to marry him after being served death-treaths from Severus with the added promise of pain from her other relatives, he sure deserves her love (and hand in marriage).Update again soon!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much. There are times when I've thought that my Snape is a little too sappy for his own good. I've always loved his subtle way of terrifying people, so I had to give him a chance to be himself. I am in the process of writing the next, so stay tune!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much. There are times when I've thought that my Snape is a little too sappy for his own good. I've always loved his subtle way of terrifying people, so I had to give him a chance to be himself. I am in the process of writing the next, so stay tune!
Hahahaha awwww! Awesome chapterrr! Cant wait for moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooRE! =D
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, darling! I am already working on the next chapter, so hopefully, you won't have to wait long. I'm hoping to have it out before the new year.
Snape was crying, I'm crying. It's all good. Lovely, absolutely lovely.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
is it wrong that your tears make me smile? Thank you so much for the review. Merry Christmas.
Hey g/f what a little gem of a story! Love the way you wrote Severus, and I 100% agree about your comment on parental love. Long live AU fanfiction!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
thank you so much , love. Have a Merry Christmas!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
How rude of me! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!