Chapter 8
Chapter 9 of 13
potterbratThis is a story inspired by the Tim McGraw song, "If You're Reading This." This is NOT a songfic. What happens when Hermione's dreams don't exactly turn out the way she had planned? Will she be able to deal with the hand that life dealt her?
A/N: I know it's been a few weeks, but I have been under the weather. I've had what the experts call "faux flu." Anyway, I know this is going to come as a huge shock to you all, but I'm not making any money off of this story. Neither is my wonderful beta, RobisonRocket -- even though she should.
Chapter 8
THREE YEARS LATER
Severus was sitting at his desk in the Headmaster's office, reading over the Divination syllabus that Professor Trelawney had dropped off earlier in the evening. Though he still wondered what the purpose of having a Divination class was, he knew that he needed to give her syllabus the same attention as he did all the others. He eyed her notes incredulously.
"Reading tea leaves, crystal gazing, palmistry... mind reading? Where in Merlin's name does she come up with this rubbish?" Severus said aloud.
He heard a soft chuckle behind him. Severus rolled his eyes and spun around in this chair. "Is there something you find humorous, Albus?"
"Don't mind me, dear boy. I am merely enjoying myself as I listen to your yearly rant over Sybill's lesson plan." Dumbledore smiled. "Does she still keep her fire blazing all term?"
Severus noted that even in a portrait, his old friend still had a sparkle in his blue eyes. "I wouldn't know; I don't frequent the Divination classroom. I find it to be a ridiculous subject and am curious to know why we still waste our students' time with it."
"Now, Severus, are you telling me that you actually care about your students' time?"
"Don't start with me, old man. I'm not in the mood. I have to get through three more of these tonight, and I would like to get finished so that I can make it back to my quarters in time for dinner." Severus turned back to his desk. Giving a petulant sigh, he pushed Professor Trelawney's lesson plan aside and picked up the one from Professor Sinistra.
"Do you have big plans for dinner?"
Severus pinched the bridge of his nose impatiently and turned back to face his former Headmaster. "Albus, is there a reason that you'd like to hold a conversation with me when I have already informed you that I need to get these looked at? To answer your question, my daughter will be joining us for dinner this evening."
"Do yourself a favor, Severus, and take the remainder of those to Hermione. That lovely wife of yours is more than capable of helping you. Now, tell me, how is Grace? I assume she is a full-fledged Auror now."
Knowing that Dumbledore would not relent in his questioning, he reluctantly stacked the remaining syllabi and returned his attention to the portrait behind him.
"Yes, she has been an Auror for over a year now," Severus said, not bothering to hide his obvious pride in the girl.
Albus gave him a knowing smile. "Yes, she's quite a young woman, isn't she? Tell me, is she still besotted with the young Malfoy heir?"
"You know, for a dead man, you certainly are inquisitive. I believe the boy is still around, yes. I try not to delve into Grace's personal life," Severus added.
"Of course, you don't," Dumbledore said pointedly. "He's a bright young man, Severus. I'd think you should be quite pleased that she would still be involved with a boy that you've known all of his life. Wouldn't that be more agreeable than someone that she's just met?"
"You speak as if they are going to get... married," Severus said with disdain.
"I only speak of what I know. I can't predict that they will marry, but she will marry someone some day, and she will eventually become a mother."
"That's quite enough! I'll not discuss this with you any longer. Talk of marriage is completely off the mark; she's too young. She has just started her career, for Merlin's sake. Now, if you want to discuss the fact that I still don't have a decent History of Magic teacher, I'll gladly give you an audience," Snape chided.
"Yes, I've heard that Professor Binns has finally come to the realization of his demise," Dumbledore said thoughtfully.
"Unfortunately," Snape pointed out, "there are far too many witches and wizards who have yet to come to that realization. Some, curiously enough, are so perpetually ignorant of their own mortality, that they still... meddle."
Albus chuckled softly. "Your gift of subtly is beginning to unravel, old friend. Let's see, I believe you will find the perfect replacement for Professor Binns right under your nose."
Snape made a noncommittal noise deep in his throat.
"So, tell me, Severus, has young Devon completed his studies at that wizarding university in London?" Albus asked conversationally.
"I believe he has. I'm not certain, as I do not keep up with the boy," Severus replied.
"What was his course of study again? Ah, yes, I remember Grace telling you that it was History. She was not surprised, if I recall, because he had received an Outstanding in his N.E.W.T. for History of Magic."
Snape grunted. "And you say that my gift of subtlety is beginning to unravel. I know what you are hinting at, Albus, and I don't think the boy is capable. He is barely out of his teens."
Albus' grin caused a frown to crease Severus' face.
"I found myself in your situation many years ago when I was still the Headmaster of this school. I recall needing a Potions professor, and I rectified the situation by hiring a young man who had just graduated. He was not even as old as Mr. Malfoy at the time."
"No, Albus. I'm not hiring the brat as a professor."
Albus' retort was interrupted by a knock on the door. The only people who had the password were his wife and children, so Severus didn't hesitate in asking the visitor to enter.
When Devon Malfoy stepped in, Severus glanced up at the portrait of Dumbledore, who was suddenly snoring against his frame. Severus rolled his eyes and faced Devon.
"Well, I guess I don't have to ask how you got in here. What do you want?"
Understanding that to be the best invitation he was going to get, Devon stepped fully into Snape's office. Severus did not offer for the young man to have a seat.
Severus took in the boy's appearance and noted with hidden amusement that he was nervous about something. This ought to be interesting, thought Severus.
Devon paced back and forth several times until he finally seemed to gather his courage. "Sir, I need to talk to you... to ask you... Ugh, why is this so hard?"
"Here's an idea," Severus interrupted. "Just. Spit. It. Out. You're wasting my time."
Devon took a deep breath and said, "IwanttomarryGracie."
"Do you think you could possibly speak English? I haven't yet learned the language of Troll."
Devon pulled himself up with all the courage he had, and his prepared speech was completely forgotten.
"Sir, I intend to ask Gracie to marry me, and I would like your b-blessing, please."
Severus stared at him as if he'd grown an extra head. The silence stretched between them for, in Devon's opinion, several hours. Devon could feel his heart beating in his ears, waiting for Snape to say something.
Finally, Severus stood and walked around his desk, so that he was only mere inches from the insolent boy who dared to walk into his office and make such a ridiculous request. Severus crossed his arms and stared into Devon's eyes. Devon was less than an inch shorter than he was, but it didn't matter. His intimidation tactics were legendary, and he was damn well going to use them now.
Devon was ready for this, however, and was determined to maintain eye contact with Snape. He also knew that he was risking his mind being invaded with Legilimency, but he didn't care: he had nothing to hide. He was ready for the intrusion, but nothing happened.
Snape's expression, as well as his voice was impassive. "My daughter," he began, "has a career to think about and I doubt she's prepared to marry at such a young age. Why do you want to get married, Malfoy?" Then, with his voice dripping with sarcasm, Snape added, "Oh, I know, is it because she makes you happy? How... sweet."
Devon regarded him for a moment and then shook his head, knowing Snape was trying to get under his skin. "Of course, she makes me happy. But, that's not the only reason. Professor, Grace and I have been attached to one another from the time we were children. When I was in my fifth year here, my mother asked me where I saw myself in ten years. I told her that I didn't care where I was as long as Grace was with me. She told me that I was wise and that I held my future in my hands. Most people laugh at my mum because she's different, but those words stayed with me because I knew she was right.
"But, there are many reasons why I want to marry Grace. I love her more than I could ever imagine loving anyone. She's beautiful, yes, I won't deny that, but, there's so much more to her than that. She's so smart and such a strong-willed person. There's nothing in this world more beautiful than to see Gracie happy, and I want to be the one to make her happy. Besides all of that, how many people get to marry their best friend?"
Severus turned and took the seat behind his desk. He gestured toward the chair in front of his desk and indicated Devon to take a seat.
After Devon timidly sat down, he waited for the older man to say something. Severus leaned forward. "Fine, you may ask her. She's an intelligent young woman, so I can't promise that she'll accept, but there you are. That's a risk you'll have to take."
Devon blinked. It wasn't exactly the reaction he wanted and was nowhere close to the reaction he expected. He certainly didn't want to think about Grace turning him down.
"If you are finished, please close the door on your way out," Severus said, looking at his papers.
"That's it?" Devon asked.
"What else did you have in mind, Mr. Malfoy? You have asked for my daughter's hand, and I gave it to you. I don't see how there is anything left to discuss with one another."
"I'm just surprised, that's all. I expected you to throw me out of here and tell me that I wasn't good enough for her. I also expected a few threats to my life," Devon said, feeling a bit anxious.
"Well, I thought you already knew that you weren't good enough for her, but with all that aside, I've already told you that my daughter is an Auror, Mr. Malfoy, which means she can handle herself quite well. Her own godfather, who also happens to be her uncle, is the head of the Auror division. Speaking of uncles, have you met them all? Let's see, there's Bill, who is a curse breaker for the bank; Merlin's beard, I bet he knows some nasty curses. There's Charlie, of course, a dragon tamer. There's Percy well, there's Percy. But, it's the twins that scare the hell out of me. They are devilish pranksters, but I would never want to get on their bad side. They are fiercely protective of their niece, whom they have taught everything they know."
Snape leaned forward and lowered his voice. "Do you know why I'm telling you all of this? Do you know why I am reminding you of all the wizards who would go to great lengths for Grace's well-being?"
Devon swallowed. "Because you want me to be aware of the danger I'm in if I hurt her."
Snape smiled his cruelest smile. "Not... quite. You see, if any harm comes to my daughter, either by your hand or your heart, the aforementioned gentlemen will only get what is left of you after I'm finished. That is, of course, if there is anything left. You are dismissed."
Devon stifled a tremor as he stood to leave.
"I am curious about something," Severus said.
Devon turned toward him apprehensively.
"Why did you come here? My daughter is a grown woman who does not need permission to get married."
Devon was stunned by this question and thought for a moment that he might have gotten himself trapped into something. He figured the best way to answer would be to just tell him the truth. He cleared his throat. "With all due respect, sir, you are her father. My mother told me that it was customary for some families to ask the father for his daughter's hand."
He gave a small shrug and continued, "My mum reminded me that your wife is Muggle born and that I need to show the proper respect for both sides of Gracie's ancestry. I would have asked you anyway, though."
Severus eyed him suspiciously. "And why is that?"
Devon shrugged again. "It's what my dad did before he married my mum. And my dad told me that you asked Mr. Granger before you married Gracie's mum."
"Indeed, I did," Snape said thoughtfully. "When did you plan to propose to Grace?"
Devon grinned sheepishly. "When we were little kids, we used to climb onto the roof at The Burrow every full moon while the adults were having drinks. We'd be really quiet so we could hear all the creatures that only came out at night. We imagined all the creatures that my mother always talked about, and we'd make up stories about them. When I asked my mother how I should propose, she just told me to take Gracie to the place that belongs only to us, whether it was a crowded café or a spot in the woods. I know it's a little childish, but the rooftop of The Burrow belongs only to us it's our spot."
Devon looked at the ground as he finished, feeling a bit foolish and not really sure why.
Severus cleared his throat. "There are some people who confuse extraordinary with different."
Devon looked up sharply at Severus.
"Those of us who know the difference," Severus continued, "are rewarded with Luna Malfoy's own brand of magic, which is her intellect. Quite a mystery, your mother."
Devon gave Severus a smile in gratitude.
"I owe her, Mr. Malfoy, for doing something that I myself could not do."
With his voice shaking a bit, Devon asked, "What was that, sir?"
Severus grimaced. He'd over-stepped an invisible line that he'd created for himself. He did not want to have a heart-to-heart with this boy who had the audacity to take his daughter away from him. And he certainly didn't want to do it within earshot of Albus Dumbledore's portrait. Damn! I'm going soft, he thought to himself. Severus sighed dramatically and gestured once again for Devon to take the seat in front of his desk. After Devon sat, Severus folded his hands in front of him and began.
"I saved your father's life, but I could not save him from himself. Luna saved his sanity and gave him a reason to live. My godson was only a shell of a man when the war ended. He had witnessed too many deaths, and too many lives that were destroyed. He had barely escaped the fate of becoming a Death Eater himself when I brought him before the Order."
"Before Draco courted your mother, he was often found in deep conversations with her. He confided to me that he was fascinated by her logic. She was as much a mystery to him as she was to those who knew her best. When he told me that he had fallen in love with her, I was not surprised. That is why I owe her: she brought him back from a place within himself that only she could penetrate."
Neither man said anything for a several moments, both lost in their own thoughts. Devon's thoughts were of his parents, who sometimes acted like they were still teenagers. He smiled when he thought of how his dad looked at his mum and the way he always listened to her with his full attention. It didn't matter if she was telling him about her shopping day with Ginny Potter or if she was telling him about the latest creature that had been discovered. His dad happened to love her radish earrings and necklace made of butterbeer corks. That was the Draco and Luna Malfoy that he knew. Devon looked up at Snape. He knew that Snape knew a different Draco and Luna Malfoy well, at least a different Draco. He suppressed a shudder. He didn't want to think about that Draco.
Severus cleared his throat and gave Devon a furtive look. He was fighting with his conscience again, knowing what he needed to do, but feeling as if it would cost him more than he was willing to pay. With a defeated sigh, he said, "There is something that you wanted from me that I haven't given you yet. You... You have my blessing, Mr. Malfoy, along with my daughter's hand."
Devon almost choked, but regained his composure with a grin. "Thank you, sir. That means a great deal to me."
Devon stood from his seat and stuck his hand out. Severus eyed his hand for a moment before he shook it.
"Well, I guess I had better go, Professor. I have a job interview early in the morning, and I want to get a good night's sleep. Mum will kill me if I have bags under my eyes. Thank you for your time, sir, and the talk."
Snape nodded to him, and upon hearing a small cough from the portrait behind him, he inwardly cringed. "Mr. Malfoy, have you ever considered teaching?"
A/N: Please stay tuned for the next chapter. It's the last one before the epilogue and I plan for it to be quite emotional. You know me -- I... Must... Have... Drama!!!! Cheers! ~potterbrat~
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137 Reviews | 6.49/10 Average
i knew u were an exceptional writer. gj!
good cliffie! u missed correcting one (subtly)
A friend of mine on Tumblr recommenned your story. I have spend this evening reading you wonderful work. You had me laughing and in tears. Thank you so much for the wonderful story.
You never know what you'll get when you ask for a random story. It might be something a bit on the mediocre side, or an unfinished story, or something that is completely unforgettable. This one, my dear potterbrat, is a keeper! I really mean that, too. I've added it to the other fanfics I have copied over the years. Consider yourself in the august company of such writers as ladyofthemasque, Bambu, Sunny33, Chivalric, and Southern_Witch_69, just to name a few. Well Done! ^_^
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
To receive such kind words from an author that I respect is a huge boost to my ego. But to be included in the same sentence as the best of the best is both an honor and very humbling. Thank you so much.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
To receive such kind words from an author that I respect is a huge boost to my ego. But to be included in the same sentence as the best of the best is both an honor and very humbling. Thank you so much.
This story makes me cry every time I read it.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That gives me the impression that you've read it more than once. If that is the case, then I can't tell you how much that means to me. This was only my second novel-length, so it was pretty raw. Thank you for the review.~*potterbrat*~
Response from rons_love (Reviewer)
Yes, I have read the story more than once. I usually go back over my favorites when I get bored with reading one shots. :)
That was a sweet and wonderful story. Thank you so much, your story really touched my heart. And yes I cried several times during the story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
That was beautifully done. I like the way everything moved along and we were able to see such a long expanse of time without getting lost in it. Thanks for a great story!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I just loved this story. It was beautiful and emotional. it had me crying in places and laughing as well. being 8 months pregnant and reading about this beautiful girl made me proud that i am having a girl!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Oh, thank you!! Congratulations!! I have two girls (Paige-9, Jayde-13) and they are an absolute blessing. EXPENSIVE, but a blessing all the same!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Oh, thank you!! Congratulations!! I have two girls (Paige-9, Jayde-13) and they are an absolute blessing. EXPENSIVE, but a blessing all the same!!
gosh darn it! you've got me crying again!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I don't mean, too!! Just keep reading. You'll stop crying, eventually. Thanks for the review!!
wow...this story has me snivling all over my keyboard. yes, it is fluffiness personified but i am so enjoying it. i look forward to the last bits. love the scene with her and ron! thanks so much!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You're a sweetheart! Thank you. I hope to have more up next week, but I'm not really sure. I have a very busy weekend, coming up so I don't know if I'll be able to get any writing in.
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That was amazingly sweet. I really love this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad that you do.
I just love how Grace got to visit with her father. That is just so beautiful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, love. I really wanted to give them a moment. Not so much for Grace, but for Ron. He deserved a moment, bless him.
You have me crying. AGAIN! Another wonderful chapter. I loved how Grace got to talk to Ron, and he was wonderful. People give Ron a lot of flack in fanfics, which I tend to get sick to death of. I'm happy that in this fic you haven't gone that tired route.
I also really liked Neville standing up to Severus. A great fanfic moment.
I look forward to more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that I'm not the only person out there that still likes Ron. I think he's great for a laugh, which can make his hard to write sometimes. I hope to get some more out to you guys really soon. I know what I want to write, it's just the writing that gets me stuck. I will have a block for about two weeks, then suddenly, I can't stop writing. Utter MADNESS!
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I am honnored that you thought my comment was worth weaving into your story, of course I don't mind G/F. I am so sorry to hear about your dog, I have a theropy dog so I really have an understanding of how close your relationship with a pet can be. I do hope you are feeling better.
I really enjoyed this chapter and was tickeled to death to see your A/N. *blushes*
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Well, thank you for your kind words about my "baby-bull." I appreciate that!
I was in the middle of writing the story, and for some reason the whole "poetic justice" thing kept popping into my head. I thought Snape might say something like that if the situation called for it, and BAM! there it was: the perfect situation. It was exactly what his little talk with Neville needed. I'm glad that you're pleased!
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"Please, Weasley, I’m on my knees, begging you not to take her away from me"
"I can’t compete with you, Ronald. I’m here at your mercy, my friend. Please, don’t take her away from me. I beg you"
Sheer brilliance, these lines were my undoing, I blubbed like a baby, darn it!
I bow down to your brilliance and would award you 5 million stars if I could.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I am grinning like kneazle here. I don't mean to be so pleased by your tears, but that's just the nicest compliment I could get as a writer. I'm also glad that you were particularly moved by those lines. I think Snape is the most fascinating and complicated character in the entire HP series. I believe that if he were in a similar situation in canon, he would battle with blaming himself and finding someone else to blame. That's why he called Ron a "bastard" and eventually referred to him as "my friend." Thank you for the stars and for the review!
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Fantastic! I loved this chapter, even if I had to find a tissue to remove that hair that had gotten into my eye....
Update again soon!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Don't you hate that!! I had the same problem while I was writing some of this. Hmmm... maybe next time I'll issue a mascara alert. You know, for when our hair gets in our eyes. Hee hee!! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for sticking with me.
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I really liked the talk between Neville and Severus. Neville's really grown into his own - it's good to see he can't be intimidated that easily any more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I know. Bless his heart. This was my way of giving Neville and Severus an ending. I feel like he never had the chance to prove himself in canon. I'm glad you were able to see him the way I think he should be seen.
cheers!
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This is such a great story. I am not ashamed to admit that I either cried or teared up several times while reading it. I look forward to more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Please don't be ashamed. It just means that you grasped what the story is, and you've reacted in the exact way you were supposed to react. I hope to have more either this week or next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Please don't be ashamed. It just means that you grasped what the story is, and you've reacted in the exact way you were supposed to react. I hope to have more either this week or next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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There is a certain amount of poetic justice in Neville being a surgeon. Hmm, yes, Severus frightened him as a student now he frightens Severus as a Dr.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Hmmm.... yes, I thought so as well. I love it when things turn out this way, don't you? I think we will see yet another side of Severus Snape!!!
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Hmmm.... yes, I thought so as well. I love it when things turn out this way, don't you? I think we will see yet another side of Severus Snape!!!
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Very touching. It is rare to read a fic that shows Ron in such a mature light.Livvy
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That is exactly why I wrote Ron this way. He deserves a little redemption for all the other fanfics that beat the hell out of him. I love his character, even though I don't think he and Hermione belong together. Thanks so much for the review.~potterbrat~
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That is exactly why I wrote Ron this way. He deserves a little redemption for all the other fanfics that beat the hell out of him. I love his character, even though I don't think he and Hermione belong together. Thanks so much for the review.~potterbrat~
Loved the update:-) I must say that if Devon have the love and courage to ask Grace to marry him after being served death-treaths from Severus with the added promise of pain from her other relatives, he sure deserves her love (and hand in marriage).Update again soon!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much. There are times when I've thought that my Snape is a little too sappy for his own good. I've always loved his subtle way of terrifying people, so I had to give him a chance to be himself. I am in the process of writing the next, so stay tune!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much. There are times when I've thought that my Snape is a little too sappy for his own good. I've always loved his subtle way of terrifying people, so I had to give him a chance to be himself. I am in the process of writing the next, so stay tune!
Hahahaha awwww! Awesome chapterrr! Cant wait for moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooRE! =D
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, darling! I am already working on the next chapter, so hopefully, you won't have to wait long. I'm hoping to have it out before the new year.
Snape was crying, I'm crying. It's all good. Lovely, absolutely lovely.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
is it wrong that your tears make me smile? Thank you so much for the review. Merry Christmas.
Hey g/f what a little gem of a story! Love the way you wrote Severus, and I 100% agree about your comment on parental love. Long live AU fanfiction!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
thank you so much , love. Have a Merry Christmas!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
How rude of me! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!