Chapter 9
Chapter 10 of 13
potterbratThis is a story inspired by the Tim McGraw song, "If You're Reading This." This is NOT a songfic. What happens when Hermione's dreams don't exactly turn out the way she had planned? Will she be able to deal with the hand that life dealt her?
A/N: This chapter took me a while, because it's a bit longer that normal. I had so much more, but I'm going to have to carry it over for another chapter. I really hope you all enjoy it. Thanks so much to RobisonRocket for waving her magic wand and fixing my errors. Grace and the original characters are mine. All others belong to JKR.
Chapter 9
Severus groaned tiredly. It was only two weeks into the new term, and he felt as if he desperately needed a vacation. He was currently in his office, nursing a shot of Firewhiskey and reading his latest issue of Alchemy Today. This was a rare treat for him because he rarely had spare time.
He heard a small cough coming from the doorway of his office. He was not startled; Severus Snape could not be startled. He knew who it was and had known she was there from the moment of her arrival. Still, he continued to read, paying no mind to his visitor.
"Are you just going to ignore me?"
Severus smirked and dropped his magazine. "Has it not occurred to you that I am currently in the middle of something?"
Hermione took off her heels, sauntered over to him and took his magazine out of his hands. She sat on his desk, placing her bare feet on his thighs, and frowned at him. "I'm bored, Severus."
"And, because of this, you believe it necessary to harass me? Don't you have papers to grade or house-elves to free?" Severus asked.
"I've already graded everything, and the house-elf comment was cruel and completely unnecessary. It's Friday night, and now that Brian and Gracie are out of school, we don't have responsibilities to keep us here. Let's go dancing."
Severus ran his hands up her calves and continued up her thighs. "That sounds agreeable. It has been quite some time since I've paraded my little trophy wife around town. Go put on your blue dancing dress that you bought over the summer, and I'll be down in a few minutes."
"Why not come with me now?" Hermione asked with a pout.
Severus scooted closer to her and pulled her into his lap so that she was straddling him. He kissed her softly. He pulled back and moved a stray hair behind her ear.
Hermione wrapped her arms tightly around his neck and leaned in for another kiss. He obliged her willingly with a more forceful and deeper kiss than the previous one.
Moments later, needing oxygen, they pulled away. Their eyes locked in a loving caress. Hermione was the first to speak.
"What were we talking about?" she asked breathlessly.
"I've no idea," Snape said in a whisper and kissed her again.
Severus started placing light kisses down her neck and was beginning to undo the top button of her blouse when Hermione squeaked and pulled fully away from him, redoing the button with trembling fingers. She then removed herself from his lap and stepped away from him, straightening her skirt.
"What's the matter?" Snape asked frowning.
Hermione didn't answer, but Snape followed her gaze to find the source of her sudden shyness.
"Albus, do you have nothing better to do than to spy on us? Don't you have a portrait hanging in Potter's house that you can visit?" Severus asked crossly.
Albus smiled weakly. "Whatever do you mean? I just woke up and planned to engage Dilys in a game of chess. You may carry on."
There was a groan coming from another portrait, and Phineas Nigellus spoke with obvious disapproval. "I would think that, as a Slytherin Headmaster, you would have a bit more respect for your position, sir. But, here you are, cavorting around like some randy teenager."
Dilys Derwent giggled girlishly in her portrait and looked pointedly at Phineas. "Oh, I don't know, Phin. I've been hanging here for quite some time, and I recall another Headmaster who didn't mind cavorting with a certain Astronomy professor at one time. And, if I'm not mistaken, that Headmaster was also a Slytherin. Surely, you haven't forgotten about that."
Phineas scoffed and disappeared no doubt visiting his portrait at Grimmauld Place, leaving Dilys to break into more giggles.
"Enough!" Severus bellowed. "I am the current Headmaster of this school, and if I want to spend time with my wife in my own office, I shouldn't have to entertain an audience."
Dilys cleared her throat. "Albus, you said something about chess?"
Severus turned back toward Hermione, who was still very red, and smiled. "Now, where were we, wife?"
"I was on my way to our rooms to find my blue dancing dress. I'll only need about half an hour to get ready. I'll see you then," Hermione said with her voice unnaturally high. She slipped back into her shoes, fumbled for the door handle and left quickly.
Severus sighed heavily and returned to his magazine. As he flipped through the pages to relocate the article he had already begun, he spoke aloud to the room at large. "You should all be counting your blessings that your portraits are inflammable. However, I don't believe there has been a charm implemented to save you from being transfigured into Muggle paintings. I would keep that in mind if I were you."
He was pleased to hear a few mutters and a couple gasps of offense.
Twenty minutes later, he heard a noise outside his office door. He peered at the closed door, smirking. He had hoped his wife would return to continue their rendezvous. But, when the door opened, it wasn't Hermione.
Harry Potter stood tall and confident, but there was something in his eyes that Severus recognized as fear. For all the years he'd tried and failed to put that look into the eyes of the son of his childhood nemesis, Severus knew right away there was something wrong.
He jumped from his chair like a madman, striding toward Harry as if he'd had fire in his heels.
Once he'd reached the younger man, he grabbed him by the shirt collar and pushed him against the wall, his wand drawn and at Harry's throat. With his voice quiet and malevolent, he asked, "Where is she?"
"St. Mungo's," Harry said, trying desperately not to sound as terrified as he felt.
"Is she...," Severus' voice trailed off.
"She's alive," Harry said, correctly guessing the question.
Severus was only centimeters from Harry's face as he ground him harder into the wall. "You had better pray to whatever deity you believe in that she stays that way."
"Just go, Professor. Hermione's already on her way. She sent me to fetch you," Harry said. His face was turning red from lack of breath.
Severus didn't respond as he let go of Harry unceremoniously. Harry barely had a moment to regain his balance as he coughed and rubbed his neck.
Severus mumbled an incantation, and Harry knew it was to remove the Apparation wards on the castle. A moment later, he was gone. Harry drew his wand to Disapparate, but the wards had already been reset. Harry couldn't help but roll his eyes.
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Severus stormed through the entrance to St. Mungo's and angrily approached the counter in the reception area. There was a small witch speaking softly to the receptionist, who was trying to help her with paper work. Severus crossed his arms and tapped his foot impatiently.
Both women ignored him and continued with their discussion.
Having had enough, Severus finally interrupted them. "I am looking for a patient," he said, trying to keep his agitation in check.
The receptionist gave him a simpering smile, which reminded Severus painfully of the toad-like smile of Dolores Umbridge. She even spoke in a soft, girlish voice. "If you could please wait behind the white line, sir, I will be with you in a moment."
Severus looked around and saw a white line painted on the floor and a sign pointing to it that read: PLEASE WAIT BEHIND THIS LINE.
Furiously, Severus moved to stand behind the line. He stood there for a few seconds until his agitation had reached its limit. He regarded the two witches angrily as he heard them both giggle with one another.
Severus stepped over the line and approached the counter again.
"Sir," the receptionist said politely, "I beg your pardon, but you must stand "
She didn't have a chance to finish her sentence, as Severus' patience had finally been pushed to the boiling point.
"I don't give a damn about your bloody line," he said with his voice barely above a whisper. "I need to find my daughter. Her name is Grace Weasley Snape, and she is an Auror who was brought here this evening. Tell me where she is... please," he added in mock courtesy.
The receptionist flinched as if she'd been slapped hard. Never the less, she wordlessly nodded her head and looked down at her list.
"She's on... on the Fourth Floor: Spell Damage. You will f-find the nurse's station on your r-right as soon as you exit the elevator."
Severus nodded his head and fled toward the elevator. Once he had arrived on the Fourth Floor, he spotted red hair disappearing around the corner and followed.
The corridor dead-ended into a waiting area, which was full of Weasleys. He knew better than to feel slighted for not being the first person on the scene. The Weasleys had a way of getting the word out quickly when one of their own was in danger.
Arthur Weasley met him in the entry-way of the waiting area with a handshake and a sad smile.
"Severus, we all just got here. Hermione is in with Gracie right now. She told me to send you in as soon as you got here. They will only allow two of us at a time, and we knew you would be here soon, so we waited."
"I appreciate that, Arthur," Severus replied.
He had just turned to go into the room when the elevator stopped, and Harry, Ginny, Devon, and Brian stepped out. Ginny went directly to her mother while Devon and Brian walked tentatively toward Severus. Harry hung back for a moment.
"Dad," Brian said. "I just got back from the Ministry. I need to fill..."
Severus held up his hand to interrupt his son. "Potter, you are not welcome here."
"But, Dad," Brian argued.
"If it weren't for Mr. Potter and his fanciful ideas of being an Auror, your sister would not be lying in there right now," Severus said coldly.
"Dad, you don't know what happened," Brian tried to explain.
"I don't need to know the details, Brian. All I know is that my daughter is lying in a hospital bed, and it's his fault."
Before he could say another word, he nodded at Devon and turned to enter the room.
Brian turned back to Harry. "You didn't tell him?"
"I didn't really have a chance," Harry muttered sadly. "Look, it's alright. I'll just go up to the tea room. If there are any changes, please, come and tell me." With a last withering glance at Ginny, Harry left.
"My dad can be such a git sometimes," Brian said to Devon.
"He's just worried, that's all, we all are. Look, Brian, I need to go and Floo call my mum and dad." Devon gave his future brother-in-law's shoulder a pat and left.
Brian gave him a half-smile, knowing the man just needed something to keep himself busy.
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Severus quietly entered the room and took in the sight before him. His wife was sitting in the chair next to the bed that was being occupied by his very pale-faced and unconscious daughter. Hermione sat close with her head lying on the side of Grace's bed. Severus could see that Hermione was holding her hand and stroking her knuckles. On her ring finger, there was a diamond engagement ring that sparkled in the dim light of the hospital room.
Hermione lifted her head and gave Severus a watery smile. His heart fluttered upon seeing her stricken face.
"Come and sit down, Severus," she said quietly.
He noted that her voice cracked with sadness. He picked up the folding chair that was sitting at the end of the bed and placed it next to her. Before he sat down, he placed a kiss on Grace's damp forehead.
"I'm so glad Harry got you here so quickly. I'm also so sorry that I didn't wait for you. I just had to hurry. Oh, Severus, I don't know what to do. This is my baby. I hate not knowing if she's going to be alright. I've been talking to her, but I don't even know if she can hear me or not." Hermione let out a choked sob.
"Shh, I know, darling, I know. So, tell me, what did her Healer say? What was she hit with?" Severus asked.
"I haven't seen her Healer yet. Harry brought her here straight away, but he wanted to get to us as quickly as possible, so he didn't wait around to ask questions. He said that he just gave the emergency staff her name, a brief explanation and left," Hermione said.
"Figures," snarled Snape. "All Potter seems to be good at is causing trouble."
"Severus, that's not fair. I talked to Brian for a few moments while Gracie was being transferred to this room. You haven't the whole story."
Before Hermione could say another word, the door opened, and a nurse appeared.
"Well, I see our patient is resting. I just need to get a quick check of her vitals, and then the Healer in charge will be in here in a few moments. He has given strict instructions that this is a very special patient, and he wants to tend to her himself."
Severus and Hermione shared a confused glance at one another.
The nurse went about her business, checking Grace's pulse and her temperature and making notes on her clipboard. She finished writing and turned to face Severus and Hermione.
"Well, I'll just leave you two now." The old nurse smiled benevolently and left the room.
"She seems cheerful," Hermione said absently.
The door opened again, and a tall gentleman in a white coat hurried into the room with his head down, reading the clipboard that the nurse had just made notes on.
Without seeming to notice Severus and Hermione, he walked straight to Gracie and held her wrist.
"Excuse me," Severus said gently. "Are you the Healer in charge?"
The man stood and turned toward Severus and stuck out his hand. Severus felt his entire being slip into some sort of alternate universe.
"You? You can't be a Healer," Severus said, dumbstruck.
Hermione jumped up and threw her arms around the man's neck. "Neville! I can't believe it's really you. I had no idea you were a Healer. Last I heard you had gone into the Muggle medical field."
Neville Longbottom gave her a gracious smile. "I did, Hermione. I am a Muggle surgeon. I still have an office in Muggle London, but St. Mungo's thought it would be a good idea to have someone on here that was trained as a Doctor as well as a Healer. They needed someone to head the staff for the Spell Damage patients, and they hired me."
Severus sniffed indignantly. "I thought you played with... plants."
Neville smiled at his former terrifying professor. "I still enjoy teetering in my garden, Professor. I mostly grow plants to be used in potions for healing purposes."
Severus regarded him with a bit of contempt for a moment before changing the subject. "What can you tell me about my daughter?" he asked, feeling sure that the dolt he used to teach couldn't tell him anything.
Neville sighed, slightly stricken over Snape's obvious lack of confidence. "I can tell you that she has lost a lot of blood, which has been replenished. I believe Harry and your son can give you the details of what happened, but she was hit with a Severing Charm."
Hermione gasped, and her hand flew to her mouth. "Neville, you can't be serious. Is she going to be alright?"
Neville looked at the groundand then met the blackness of Severus' eyes. He felt something pass between them, if only for a moment, then he looked back at Hermione. "To be honest with you, Hermione, that really depends on how you want her to be healed."
"What do you mean?" Hermione asked fearfully.
Neville sighed. "I told you they hired me because they wanted someone who was qualified in Muggle and Magical healing. The fact of the matter is they hired me because I am a surgeon."
Severus balled up his fists. "What are you getting at, Longbottom?"
"You are both familiar with the Muggle world, Professor Snape. The x-rays show that Grace has some internal damage: damage, Professor, which can only be repaired with surgery."
"You are not serious!" Severus snapped. "Grace is not the first patient to ever cross the threshold of St. Mungo's with internal damage. Are you telling me that she's the first to ever need to be cut open?"
"Absolutely not, Professor; unfortunately, most patients who cross the threshold of St. Mungo's with internal damage never cross it again. Sadly, that means that in some cases, the process of magical healing is not effective enough to save their lives. I'm afraid that in Grace's case, she would need immediate attention. I can assure you, sir, I am a fully qualified surgeon. Thank Merlin she wasn't alone when she was hit. Otherwise, she would have gotten the full blow of the curse, and we wouldn't be having this conversation."
Severus set his eyes coolly on Neville, but didn't comment on his last statement.
Neville raised his chin in a moment of childish defiance. His voice softened a bit as he said, "I will give you two a few moments to discuss what you want to do. Grace is in stasis for the time being, so she's not in immediate danger. If you decide that you don't want me to do the surgery, I need to know as quickly as possible so we can start on other means of trying to save her. If you need me or if you have any questions, please inform someone in the nurse's station, and I will be readily available."
"Thank you, Neville," Hermione said.
Neville nodded at the both of them and left the room.
Severus looked at a spot on the ceiling. "This is some kind of punishment. My daughter's life is in the hands of Neville Longbottom."
A/N: I love reviews! They are almost as seductive as Sev's voice.
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137 Reviews | 6.49/10 Average
i knew u were an exceptional writer. gj!
good cliffie! u missed correcting one (subtly)
A friend of mine on Tumblr recommenned your story. I have spend this evening reading you wonderful work. You had me laughing and in tears. Thank you so much for the wonderful story.
You never know what you'll get when you ask for a random story. It might be something a bit on the mediocre side, or an unfinished story, or something that is completely unforgettable. This one, my dear potterbrat, is a keeper! I really mean that, too. I've added it to the other fanfics I have copied over the years. Consider yourself in the august company of such writers as ladyofthemasque, Bambu, Sunny33, Chivalric, and Southern_Witch_69, just to name a few. Well Done! ^_^
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
To receive such kind words from an author that I respect is a huge boost to my ego. But to be included in the same sentence as the best of the best is both an honor and very humbling. Thank you so much.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
To receive such kind words from an author that I respect is a huge boost to my ego. But to be included in the same sentence as the best of the best is both an honor and very humbling. Thank you so much.
This story makes me cry every time I read it.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That gives me the impression that you've read it more than once. If that is the case, then I can't tell you how much that means to me. This was only my second novel-length, so it was pretty raw. Thank you for the review.~*potterbrat*~
Response from rons_love (Reviewer)
Yes, I have read the story more than once. I usually go back over my favorites when I get bored with reading one shots. :)
That was a sweet and wonderful story. Thank you so much, your story really touched my heart. And yes I cried several times during the story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You are very sweet. Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
That was beautifully done. I like the way everything moved along and we were able to see such a long expanse of time without getting lost in it. Thanks for a great story!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I just loved this story. It was beautiful and emotional. it had me crying in places and laughing as well. being 8 months pregnant and reading about this beautiful girl made me proud that i am having a girl!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Oh, thank you!! Congratulations!! I have two girls (Paige-9, Jayde-13) and they are an absolute blessing. EXPENSIVE, but a blessing all the same!!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Oh, thank you!! Congratulations!! I have two girls (Paige-9, Jayde-13) and they are an absolute blessing. EXPENSIVE, but a blessing all the same!!
gosh darn it! you've got me crying again!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I don't mean, too!! Just keep reading. You'll stop crying, eventually. Thanks for the review!!
wow...this story has me snivling all over my keyboard. yes, it is fluffiness personified but i am so enjoying it. i look forward to the last bits. love the scene with her and ron! thanks so much!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
You're a sweetheart! Thank you. I hope to have more up next week, but I'm not really sure. I have a very busy weekend, coming up so I don't know if I'll be able to get any writing in.
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That was amazingly sweet. I really love this story.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, sweetie! I'm glad that you do.
I just love how Grace got to visit with her father. That is just so beautiful.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, love. I really wanted to give them a moment. Not so much for Grace, but for Ron. He deserved a moment, bless him.
You have me crying. AGAIN! Another wonderful chapter. I loved how Grace got to talk to Ron, and he was wonderful. People give Ron a lot of flack in fanfics, which I tend to get sick to death of. I'm happy that in this fic you haven't gone that tired route.
I also really liked Neville standing up to Severus. A great fanfic moment.
I look forward to more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much! I'm so glad that I'm not the only person out there that still likes Ron. I think he's great for a laugh, which can make his hard to write sometimes. I hope to get some more out to you guys really soon. I know what I want to write, it's just the writing that gets me stuck. I will have a block for about two weeks, then suddenly, I can't stop writing. Utter MADNESS!
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I am honnored that you thought my comment was worth weaving into your story, of course I don't mind G/F. I am so sorry to hear about your dog, I have a theropy dog so I really have an understanding of how close your relationship with a pet can be. I do hope you are feeling better.
I really enjoyed this chapter and was tickeled to death to see your A/N. *blushes*
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Well, thank you for your kind words about my "baby-bull." I appreciate that!
I was in the middle of writing the story, and for some reason the whole "poetic justice" thing kept popping into my head. I thought Snape might say something like that if the situation called for it, and BAM! there it was: the perfect situation. It was exactly what his little talk with Neville needed. I'm glad that you're pleased!
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"Please, Weasley, I’m on my knees, begging you not to take her away from me"
"I can’t compete with you, Ronald. I’m here at your mercy, my friend. Please, don’t take her away from me. I beg you"
Sheer brilliance, these lines were my undoing, I blubbed like a baby, darn it!
I bow down to your brilliance and would award you 5 million stars if I could.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I am grinning like kneazle here. I don't mean to be so pleased by your tears, but that's just the nicest compliment I could get as a writer. I'm also glad that you were particularly moved by those lines. I think Snape is the most fascinating and complicated character in the entire HP series. I believe that if he were in a similar situation in canon, he would battle with blaming himself and finding someone else to blame. That's why he called Ron a "bastard" and eventually referred to him as "my friend." Thank you for the stars and for the review!
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Fantastic! I loved this chapter, even if I had to find a tissue to remove that hair that had gotten into my eye....
Update again soon!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Don't you hate that!! I had the same problem while I was writing some of this. Hmmm... maybe next time I'll issue a mascara alert. You know, for when our hair gets in our eyes. Hee hee!! I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for sticking with me.
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I really liked the talk between Neville and Severus. Neville's really grown into his own - it's good to see he can't be intimidated that easily any more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
I know. Bless his heart. This was my way of giving Neville and Severus an ending. I feel like he never had the chance to prove himself in canon. I'm glad you were able to see him the way I think he should be seen.
cheers!
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This is such a great story. I am not ashamed to admit that I either cried or teared up several times while reading it. I look forward to more.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Please don't be ashamed. It just means that you grasped what the story is, and you've reacted in the exact way you were supposed to react. I hope to have more either this week or next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Please don't be ashamed. It just means that you grasped what the story is, and you've reacted in the exact way you were supposed to react. I hope to have more either this week or next. Thanks so much for reviewing!
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There is a certain amount of poetic justice in Neville being a surgeon. Hmm, yes, Severus frightened him as a student now he frightens Severus as a Dr.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Hmmm.... yes, I thought so as well. I love it when things turn out this way, don't you? I think we will see yet another side of Severus Snape!!!
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Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Hmmm.... yes, I thought so as well. I love it when things turn out this way, don't you? I think we will see yet another side of Severus Snape!!!
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Very touching. It is rare to read a fic that shows Ron in such a mature light.Livvy
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That is exactly why I wrote Ron this way. He deserves a little redemption for all the other fanfics that beat the hell out of him. I love his character, even though I don't think he and Hermione belong together. Thanks so much for the review.~potterbrat~
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
That is exactly why I wrote Ron this way. He deserves a little redemption for all the other fanfics that beat the hell out of him. I love his character, even though I don't think he and Hermione belong together. Thanks so much for the review.~potterbrat~
Loved the update:-) I must say that if Devon have the love and courage to ask Grace to marry him after being served death-treaths from Severus with the added promise of pain from her other relatives, he sure deserves her love (and hand in marriage).Update again soon!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much. There are times when I've thought that my Snape is a little too sappy for his own good. I've always loved his subtle way of terrifying people, so I had to give him a chance to be himself. I am in the process of writing the next, so stay tune!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you so much. There are times when I've thought that my Snape is a little too sappy for his own good. I've always loved his subtle way of terrifying people, so I had to give him a chance to be himself. I am in the process of writing the next, so stay tune!
Hahahaha awwww! Awesome chapterrr! Cant wait for moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooRE! =D
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
Thank you, darling! I am already working on the next chapter, so hopefully, you won't have to wait long. I'm hoping to have it out before the new year.
Snape was crying, I'm crying. It's all good. Lovely, absolutely lovely.
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
is it wrong that your tears make me smile? Thank you so much for the review. Merry Christmas.
Hey g/f what a little gem of a story! Love the way you wrote Severus, and I 100% agree about your comment on parental love. Long live AU fanfiction!
Response from potterbrat (Author of Saving Grace)
thank you so much , love. Have a Merry Christmas!
Response from sinbad (Reviewer)
How rude of me! Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!