All in the Family
averygoodun118 Reviews | 5.68/10 (118 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )
When Hermione leaves her boyfriend rather suddenly, Harry invites her to stay at his place, much to the irritation of his other flatmate - Severus Snape.
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Right. I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice". I will. Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)
Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now. I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.
Thank you!
Reviews for All in the Family
Good, Good, Good I think Harry should do a little matchmaking....
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Dangerous proposition having Harry matchmake. Especially when he's anything but a detached observer. ;-)
I like how you manage the fulfilments of the prompt. Particularly, I enjoy gaining insight into the characters' heads from different perspectives.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! That's one of the areas I was really worried about, so I'm glad you think it worked out okay. Cheers!
Another chapter! Sooo good! I love the personality of Harry; it shows so much likeness with his father. Nice idea, great interactions, and fast updates! What more can girl asks for? ...maybe some Snape shirtless? Now, that's an idea! Yummy!
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! Sorry, no shirtless Snape, but I'm sure I can work some of that into something else. ;-)
Now that was an intense chapter! Poor Severus. Love is never easy...though it would make life easier if it were...but it would also make stories rather boring. Great job one this chapter, I love your characterization!
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
No, love never is easy... :-) Thank you!
ooooooohhhhh Slytherine thinking from Hermione, so that's how she catches Snape's eye. Nicely done, Snape isn't the only one whos interest is aroused.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Yah. She gets it, that's for sure. Thanks!
This is really funny, actually. I love the spin on the Severitus thrown in with everything else.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! I think the Severitus angle is one of the things that attracted me to the prompt in the first place. Especially being a SS/HG shipper. :-D
This story is absolutely brilliant. I love the Snape inner monologue. That adds so much.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thank you!
A delight to read! Very much in character for all of them.I look forward to seeing what those 'consequences' will be...
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks!
Can't you guess? ;-)
Good for Hermione! I'm glad that you've portrayed her as being a strong character. I'd hate it if she were truly heart-broken over some loser...especially one named Roger. Anyways, great chapter.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Oh, her heart is probably bruised a bit, as she was fond of the bloke, but no... she's not a meek little girl. Never has been.
THanks! More soon.
“Oh, Harry!” the hair wailed, BEAUTIFUL! I bow, unworthy, to the perfect representation of Snapeness.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Heeheeheehee! I'm glad you liked that! Thank you, dear Fawkes. I'm glad you like it so far.
LOL! This story and plot has so much potential, and really manage to make full use of it!
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! I rushed through an awful lot, but I hope you enjoy it fully anyway!
I realize that Harry basically looks like his mom, but imagining him with Snape's nose is quite funny. I love how Snape realizes that Harry's personality is very similar to his own. Harry can snark and make witty remarks, when he isn't being oblivious. lol. Great start, can't wait for more.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Yes, it is, isn't it? But he got Snape's cheekbones instead. ;-)
Amazing what a difference blood can make in analyzing character traits, eh? Thanks! Morde very soon!
I'm well and truly hooked. It's "them" to a tee. Can't wait to enjoy this breakneck ride with you!!! ^.^
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thank you! More very, very soon.
I love the way those two handle the revelation. It's very much in character!
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! I'm glad you think so!
I love your opening. I don't know if you meant it to be funny, but it made me laugh. I didn't think anyone would take up this particular prompt as I thought it was too convoluted when I submitted it. I love what you have done so far and am looking forward to the remaining four chapters. Thanks, JoAnne
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks, and yes, I meant for it to be funny. I hoped it would be, anyway. ;-)
So you're to blame thank for this wonderful bunny? Well, thank you for giving me something fun to work with.
Cheers!
An interesting start, Snape as Harry's father, bet that rubbed them raw.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks. Um, yeah, you could say that. :-D
OOOH, must keep an eye for this one in the recently added list! Can't wait for me. Thanks for the great readmarti
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! I'll try to get all the rest up by the 23rd.
Oh my... the bunny plots are jumping up and down with juicy ideas... aren't they? Well, hope they come up with somenthing good because 
I'm stuck to your story. Really fascinating!
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Cheers! I hope to have the story completely posted in the next few days.
Very good start! Also, a plausible explanation of how Harry came to be. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens when Hermione is thrown into the mix.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thank you! As plausible as any "Snape is Harry's dad" scenario, anyway. :D More soon.
Hmm... did Harry look like James because of some sort of spell? or was it just people making themselves think he looked like James?
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Yes. Dumbledore knew, and, well, babies do tend to look like their fathers upon birth, so... It would have been tactically unsound to make it known that Snape was Harry's dad back then for oh so many reasons. :D
Nice beginning, hope to see more soon. Just one question though... how could Harry look like James for so long and then, quite suddenly, not?
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks. Dumbledore cast a spell on him to make him look like James. When Dumbledore died, the spell ended. Harry isn't exactly a look-in-the-mirror type guy, so... Besides, it's not like he got Snape's nose, so it wouldn't be a complete shocker. :D
Very interesting start. Looking forward to more.
Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)
Thanks! More very soon.
Well, I laughed, I cried, I loved it... okay, I didn't cry, but you get the point, right?
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