Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges All in the Family

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All in the Family

118 Reviews | 5.68/10 (118 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )

Humor Romance General Potter Place Winter 2007 Prompt Challenges 10,176 Words 5 Chapters Complete

Mr. Granger Mrs. Granger Original Character Severus Snape Harry Potter Hermione Granger Poppy Pomfrey

When Hermione leaves her boyfriend rather suddenly, Harry invites her to stay at his place, much to the irritation of his other flatmate - Severus Snape.

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: 1

Chapter 3: 2

Chapter 4: 3

Chapter 5: Epilogue

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averygoodun

Member Since 2005 | 19 Stories | Favorited by 315 | 122 Reviews Written | 1,064 Review Responses

Right. I would like to state, for the record, that I WILL finish "She Married Her Choice". I will. Assuming I am in control of my own destiny and accomplishments, that is. ;-)

Unfortunately, real life (mainly an attention craving three-year-old) and inspiration have been keeping me from creative endeavors for a while now. I do foresee a time when that shall pass, but until then, I ask for your patience.

Thank you!

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10/10

sbrande

Oh how wonderful. Loved every minute of this wonderful tale. Thank you! Sonia :)

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

I'm so glad! Thank you!

8/10

imhilien

A nice and amusing story, thank you. :D

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks!

9/10

kimjo2

lovely fun. thanks so much

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thank you!

10/10

Sampdoria

Loved your story, very well written. Thank you for the entertainment!!!!

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks!

0/10

lipa

It was a pleasant read. Some things were better than other, but the Grangers were perfect.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks. Not my best, but it was fun anyway. Cheers!

10/10

blue artemis

I loved that. I really like the end, by the way.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks!

0/10

Moyra

That was great fun! Loved how you let behave the charas here. But I wouldn't have minded at least one kiss - soppy me, that's it.

Thanks for this hilarious entertainment.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

*sigh* Yes, a kiss would have been good, wouldn't it? Thing is, I just couldn't find the right place...

Thanks!

0/10

Myst

What a fun last chapter!

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks!

10/10

mmesnape

Fluffy but very enjoyable to read... that's what I have to say. Cheers!

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thank you!

10/10

Charmaine

Good story, but there could be more to it. Like how Harry & Snape ended up with more detail. More on Harry's feelings about Hermoine. Details on Harry's visit to Roger and so on. It is very good, I just like LONNNNNG fics.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks, and of course there could be, but I really wanted this to be a short story. I've already got a LONNNNG fic in progress, I don't want to add another epic WIP to my list. Besides, if I went into detail, probably a good amount of the humor would have been lost, drowning in angst. Can't have that, now can we?

Cheers!

10/10

rachaelmona

I loved it!

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

I am glad! Thanks!

9/10

Bentwaters

Awwww just lovely. A fantastic ending to a great story. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you so much for sharing with us all.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

0/10

timestep

Fluff is very, very good.<i>now go away</> LOL

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Heehee! I'm glad you liked that!

Cheers!

10/10

sregner

Loved the ending and Mrs.G....you go girl!

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thanks! LOL.

10/10

Stormi

Thanks for a great story.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

You're welcome, and thanks!

10/10

lupinschewtoy

This wasn't pure fluff. If you had bypassed the Snape monologue then it would have been fluff. The sardonic, biting with that is Severus was wonderful. I loved the pacing. I would have loved even more Harry interaction, just because he isn't a twit in this story. This story was both funny and sweet. I thouroughly enjoyed it.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Well, as far as SS/HG stories go, this was pretty fluffy... Or maybe it's just compared to my other stories that it's fluffy. But whatever the case, thank you for the interest and praise. I appreciate both!

10/10

ayerf

Pity Mr. Granger was restrained! At least Dodgy Roger now knows that he's been replaced by Scary Severus; if this wasn't the epilogue, I highly doubt that there'd be any more trouble from him. However, this isn't listed as complete yet- can I still hope for more?

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Ah, yes, but imagine how upset Hermione would have been had Mr. Granger actually got a shot in? She doesn't like other people doing things for her that she can do herself, it seems. ;-)

Thanks for pointing out my oversight. Yes, this was the last chapter, and it is complete. Sorry to dash your hopes.

Thank you!!!

9/10

azulkan2

Enjoyed this story a lot.

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Oh, I'm glad! Thank you!

10/10

karelia

Aw! That was simply lovely!

Response from averygoodun (Author of All in the Family)

Thank you!