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Potions Under Duress Southern Magic
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Southern Magic

1: Prologue - Leaving

2: One

3: Two

4: Three

5: Four

6: Five

7: Chapter 6

8: Seven

9: Eight

10: Nine

11: Ten

12: Eleven

13: Twelve

14: Thirteen

15: Fourteen

16: Fifteen

17: Sixteen

18: Seventeen

19: Eighteen

20: Nineteen

21: Twenty

22: Epilogue

Southern Magic

lapita

220 Reviews   |   220 Ratings, 0 Likes, 128 Favorites )

Drama Action/Adventure Slash Potions Under Duress 93,972 Words 22 Chapters Complete
Harry Potter Hermione Granger Minerva McGonagall Severus Snape

Seven years after the death of Dumbledore, Hermione finally returns to Hogwarts. What will she find?

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Chapters (22)

Chapter 1: Prologue - Leaving

Chapter 2: One

Chapter 3: Two

Chapter 4: Three

Chapter 5: Four

Chapter 6: Five

Chapter 7: Chapter 6

Chapter 8: Seven

Chapter 9: Eight

Chapter 10: Nine

Chapter 11: Ten

Chapter 12: Eleven

Chapter 13: Twelve

Chapter 14: Thirteen

Chapter 15: Fourteen

Chapter 16: Fifteen

Chapter 17: Sixteen

Chapter 18: Seventeen

Chapter 19: Eighteen

Chapter 20: Nineteen

Chapter 21: Twenty

Chapter 22: Epilogue


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Member Since 2007  |  1 Story  |  Favorited by 38  |  4 Reviews Written  |  267 Review Responses

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10/10

snarkycat

Your story is just amazing. Thank you for another great chapter.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

:)

0/10

orlando switch

I really liked this chapter. I agree with Gwenog you have a very unique writing style that perfectly fits this story; your writing is as naturally flowing as your precious water element.

What I specifically admire is your talent to write about these visions in a way that is both believable and understandable, written in such an eloquent style; but at thesame time very much to the point, every word is  exactly at the right place.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Wow - I don't know quite what to write (and that's saying something!) Thank you,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

-- I'm happy you are enjoying the story. I was definitely 'pushing the envelope' with this chapter and was quite unsure whether I had the skills to pull it off. *phew*

10/10

snitchette

Are you gonna tell us who is that person Hermione's meeting in her vision. I really am curious about that and it becomes to furiously frustrate me you know.I also like the way you describe Snape : like a calm man and not the angry one that I'd imagined from the books.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Now, now, my dear, do you go around asking old JK the mechanics of wand magic? lol Um.. I think I'm safe to say there isn't a single defining chapter or paragraph that explains 'him', but by the end of the story you should have a much clearer idea of 'him'. (I'd hate for you to be hanging out for a complete, definitive explanation when there wasn't one) 'He' is as central to Southern Magic as a wand is to Northern Magic.

10/10

sinbad

Incredible chapter, well worth the wait.  I can't wait till I see what happens next!

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

:)

0/10

Gwenog Jones

That chapter was unlike any other that I have ever read.  The Southern Magic aspect of this story lends its self towards an entirely unique writing style--such as that of this chapter.  Amazing!

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

- I'm pleased I managed to pull it off ( I wasn't entirely sure whether it would work or not.)

10/10

woodia

Aw. They're friends. Now I must go reread that vision so I can figure everything out! Great chapter.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

lol and such lovely friends too :)

0/10

nightshift

Now I'm curious about what's up with McGonagall. I like the way you've made the two areas so divided and managed to keep the mystery and distrust between them.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

- much appreciated.

0/10

Ellyn

I'm hooked on this story and am eager for the next chapter!My guess is the rune-embroidered clothing will either prevent people like Minerva from sensing Hermione's strange magic.  In fact, I'm wondering if Snape has the same runes sewn into his own handmade clothing to prevent people from sensing his own southern magic.  Or the runes may also serve as a tracking device for Snape to find Hermione later on (let's hope because I have a hunch she's about to be snatched from the cabin).

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Harry is nicer in this chapeter but not any smarter.  Yikes, he left her alone and wandless in the FF knowing that Voldemort is determined to find her.  And that pain he felt in his scar when he was first in the cabin can't be a good sign; I'm thinking Voldmort was having a look-see through Harry's scar to determine exactly where Hermione is being sheltered.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks for reviewing,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

. I am pleased you're enjoying the story so much. You had some very interesting thoughts on the chapter.

10/10

woodia

What in the world is up with McGonagall? It's so weird that she's the only one who reacts to Hermione.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

All will come clear in the next chapter :) Thanks for reviewing,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

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10/10

pickles

It seems something is amiss.

great chapter. 

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

:)

6/10

Miroku75

Great installment. Minerva M. was quite interesting. It was good to see Harry behaving himself. Snape continues to be . . . Snape. I'm so sorry that Hrmione attracted Voldie's attention, though - that is never good. Please update soon.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

. Hopefully the next chapter will be up soon :)

10/10

Maddie

My guess on this chapter is that Snape is looking better because he is using and spending more time in the Southern Magic environment. The opposite is true for McGonagall, the more exposure the worse she feels.  It seems to me that McGonagall is becoming resentful because of this. She also seemed quite puzzled that Harry is not affected. I agree with one of your other reviewers about his/her theory on Harry being raised to not use magic and he frequently does things the old fashioned way (muggle). It is disappointing that Harry still hates Snape, with as much as Snape has had to endure for the sake of the Light.  I hope to see more of Snape and his interactions with Hermione. He seems quite taken with her and has a lot of respect for her.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Oh you are good

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

, very good - are you sure you are not a detective in RL? Plenty of Snape and Hermione in the next chapter :)

10/10

sinbad

Great chapter.  Easy to read and understand, and lots of new information.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

. Much appreciated. :)

9/10

snitchette

I'm glad to see Harry coming back to his normal state of mind. But I wonder why he doesn't seem to be affected by Hermione's magic just like Professor McGonnagal seems to be. Plus Hermione hides some secrets I'd like to know about. Actually soon would be great. Don't take it the bad way, it's just that I really like your story and I can't wait for more.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

- another chapter should be coming along soon.

0/10

Gwenog Jones

Hmm, you've left me quite curious about McGonagall and the many mysteries that are Hermione.  Another good one!

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

:)

10/10

blue artemis

So Hermione's magic doesn't give Harry a headache?  I hope the Weasley's don't give him too hard a time, because he loves Hermione so much. 

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Erm no -- but the reasons will be given in the next chapter :)

10/10

orlando switch

I was wondering about the same thing till I realized Harry is brought up in a muggle home, just like Hermione and therefore used to do things manually without any magic. So maybe for people who are familiar with that concept, this Southern magic is not so draining, since they have a way to work around it that still feels natural to them. I think for someone like Minerva her kind of magic is the only way of acting -or even being-  that feels natural for her so it's likely she will get out of balance when she can't use that.

Anyway, a lovely chapter and I am glad Harry has changed his behavior towards Hermione. I would have liked more Snape in this chapter but I do understand you sometimes need to tell things about other characters as well:-) good works; as always, i hope you'll update soon.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks so much for writing your thoughts down -- it really helps me to know if I've struck the right balance of revealling what when. Much appreciated.

10/10

oscarxena

Why does the magic in the house affect Minerva so extremely and not a all to Harry? I hope she's up and about by the next chapter.As always, I love this story, this chapter, your writing etc. I'm not being flippant about this but I really have to start borrowing my daughter's Thesaurus so I can come up with proper compliments that aren't redundant. I am very sincere in my admiration of this story. Update soon, this is beautiful.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks so much,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

. That is such a lovely thing to write -- I am happy you are enjoying it.

10/10

karelia

This story has very fast become one of my favourites. Well written, with a plot that is incredibly original, well done!

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

I'm pleased you're liking the story, ladyinthecloak. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

10/10

oscarxena

This is wonderful. There are so many questions I have after each chapter that I can't even begin to ask. This is engrossing, well written and romantic. Thank you for writing this!

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

. I am glad you are enjoying it :)

10/10

woodia

Yay! We can't have our Hermione threatened by some festering curse. But now . . . "It's only a flesh wound." :D

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

lol - a festering curse is certainly not for our Hermione. Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

10/10

woodia

Fantastic imagery in this chapter. Very intriguing story, I must say.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks for reading and reviewing,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

:)

8/10

Gingerwitch

It is becoming a very interesting story indeed, I love the flow of it

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Thanks

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

:)

10/10

woodia

Heh. That's right, you silly magical folk. Learn to do something useful for once.

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

lol I agree, all this silly magic - pah-  get practical all you folks at Hogwarts, I say.

10/10

woodia

Ooo, I'm starting to hate the prejudice of these Northern wizards more and more. Silly biased . . . *grumble*I'm enjoying the story, by the way. :D

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

Glad you are enjoying the story,

Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)

- thanks for reading and reviewing - much appreciated.

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