Eight
Chapter 9 of 22
lapitaSeven years after the death of Dumbledore, Hermione finally returns to Hogwarts. What will she find?
ReviewedMany thanks to my beta, Soul Bound.
Professor McGonagall arranged the mass of papers on her desk into neat piles, scowled at them and rearranged them again. She then sighed heavily, taking off her glasses, and rubbed her eyes wearily. When would Madam Pomfrey come? She had Flooed to the hospital wing as soon as she had been notified of the attack on Hermione and Severus, but a grim faced Madam Pomfrey interceded and blocked her from entering the ward proper to see them. The mediwitch informed her that Hermione had life threatening injuries...whereas Professor Snape had a minor surface wound to his upper arm...before quickly dashing back into the ward through the swinging doors.
It was Monday again tomorrow, and Professor McGonagall looked at the neat, organized piles of work waiting for her. Deciding she should make use of this time in the office, the older witch put her glasses back on, picked up the proposed teaching schedule for next month and started reading. Her eyes moved along the lines of words, but her mind refused to link them up with their meanings, so she slapped the schedule back down again angrily. It was completely futile. When would Shacklebolt arrive anyhow? Sometimes Professor McGonagall wished she had been born in a different time. She would have loved to be an Auror. The physicality of being out amongst everything really appealed to her...much better than being stuck behind a desk at any rate.
A green whoosh of flames lit up the fireplace. Professor McGonagall thankfully stood up and walked around her desk to greet Shacklebolt, who stood dusting the ash off his broad shoulders. At last some accurate information...the gossip around Hogwarts had been running red hot. Shacklebolt was the consummate, discreet professional who would report clearly and concisely. It was for these reasons that she had yanked him and Jones from Ron's investigations. This attack had to be handled carefully and judiciously. It had huge potential to spiral out of control.
'Good evening, Mr. Shacklebolt. Thank you for coming by; please have a seat.' Professor McGonagall indicated a chair at a communal worktable at the center of her large office. She clapped her hands, and two cups of tea appeared before them.
The tall man sat down wearily. 'I came as soon as I finished. Hestia is writing up the report now, and you'll have it on your desk tomorrow morning.'
'Good, thank you.' The professor sat in the chair opposite, placing the ink and parchment tidily in front of her. She looked down at the blank parchment and twirled her quill. 'So, what information do you have?'
After quickly taking a sip of tea, Kingsley spoke evenly and clearly. 'When Hestia and I arrived at Foxton Lane, we found and recovered nine bodies, all males. We identified five of them as known Death Eaters. They operated out of the western cell and had been under surveillance on many occasions. The other three are unknowns, so we are running wand checks right now to find out their identities. We need to know if they have any links to the western cell division.' The Auror hesitated, then added, 'There may be one other.'
Professor McGonagall looked up with raised eyebrows from her note taking, her quill poised mid air
'We had just finished the investigation when a Muggle police car drove up the lane quickly. We heard more noises of Muggles and cars, so Hestia and I went to investigate. All the commotion was coming from a nearby farmhouse, which is about ten minutes from Foxton Lane. The place was swarming with Muggles, and there was a body covered with a white sheet, but we couldn't detect any traces of magic within the immediate vicinity. The Muggles were highly agitated, so it was difficult for us to investigate further.'
Professor McGonagall stared into the middle distance and said thoughtfully, 'No, it's too much of a coincidence. I would like you to monitor all the Muggle newspapers from that area. We need to find out more information to see if the incidents are linked.'
Kingsley nodded, his gold earring glinting in the candlelight. He then frowned and rubbed his chin. ' You need to be aware also, Headmistress, that the causes of death were ... unusual. Five had been killed with a standard killing curse that traced back to the Professor Snape.' He paused, then, shaking his head, declared quietly, 'But four were killed by some curse or hex I have never encountered before.'
Professor McGonagall raised her eyebrows in surprise.
'They are so unlike anything I have seen. I couldn't even say if it was magic.'
Professor McGonagall tapped her polished fingernail in thought and asked, 'How did they die? Was it some sort of new Muggle method?'
'No, I wouldn't say that either. Two of them looked as if they had exploded from the inside out. At first I thought they had been hit by something a Muggle would use like a hand grenade, but on examining the remains that were left, it wasn't consistent with that possibility.' Kingsley added frankly, 'It was a gruesome sight.'
The professor was surprised at his comment. The man sitting in front of her was a veteran Auror whose very line of work exposed him to the uglier sides of wizarding life in all its gruesome glory.
'The third body's physical symptoms indicated the cause of death as suffocation, but again, we couldn't find any traces of known magic nor any physical evidence. And finally, the fourth body seemed to have suffered some sort of cardiac arrest.'
He looked at Professor McGonagall directly, the whites of his eyes standing out in the low light. 'Miss Granger seems to have some unique abilities.'
'Ah, yes, it does appear that way,' the professor replied mildly, but inwardly lurched at the shock of what Hermione was capable of.
Just then Harry came bursting through the door without knocking, his brow furrowed. Both the professor and Shacklebolt looked up, momentarily startled at the sudden noise.
'Oh, Shacklebolt, I hadn't realize you were here...good to see you.' Harry's expression changed in an instance. Smiling, the young wizard strode up to him and pumped his hand energetically.
'Nice to see you too, Harry. Well, professor, I'll take my leave now. The report will be on your desk tomorrow, but I'm available if you want to talk more.'
Professor McGonagall said a silent thanks to Kingsley and his discretion in front of Harry. She nodded her gratitude and walked the tall wizard to the fireplace where he disappeared in a whoosh of flames. The professor breathed in deeply before she turned to face Harry, who was pacing the length of her office, running an agitated hand through his hair.
'Have you heard any more news?' he questioned anxiously, collapsing dramatically into the chair in front of her desk.
The professor calmly collected her notes from the worktable and sat down behind her desk. 'Nothing yet. Madam Pomfrey will be up the moment she can to let me know Hermione's progress.'
'Isn't it time you actually do something, Professor?' Harry's eyes were flashing.
'What exactly do you mean by that, Mr. Potter?' she asked, her tone as cold as steel. How dare he question her.
Harry swallowed nervously. 'Well, about Snape? I mean, there is an another attack only days after Ron. Hermione's seriously injured, and he has nothing more than a scratch... It sounds highly suspicious to me.'
'You do mean Professor Snape, don't you?'
Harry flushed and nodded, but his eyes were still burning angrily.
'I quite assure you, Mr. Potter, that if I had any suspicions about Professor Snape, you would be the first to know. Right now the Order is stretched to capacity investigating two attacks in less than a week, so I suggest you keep any personal issues you may have with Professor Snape to yourself. I do not have the time or the inclination to listen to any more of them.'
The young wizard dropped his eyes and started picking at his fingernails despondently.
With a twang, Professor McGonagall felt sorry for the complex young man in front of her and offered in a much softer tone, 'As soon as I know anything more about Hermione, I will let you know immediately.'
Harry looked up; his eyes were shinning with unshed tears. 'I went over to the hospital wing, but they wouldn't even let me in to see her.'
'They are not letting anyone in, Mr. Potter. They did not let me in either. It is so they can concentrate on working on Hermione. She is in the best possible hands, and I have full confidence that they will be able to help her.'
'Yeah, I know, but what if she dies like Ron? It's something nobody wants to talk about, but I know Hermione was badly hurt. Everyone is talking about it. I feel so useless, so helpless. There seems to be nothing I can do. Everybody else is out actually doing things...making a difference...and all I do is sit here nice and safe behind the wards while my friends are getting attacked and killed because of me.'
Professor McGonagall weighed her words carefully. 'I know it must feel that way, Mr. Potter, but you do make a difference. I listened to you at Ron's service, and you truly moved me, and I know you touched everyone there in a significant way.' She saw Harry wanted to interrupt and held up her hand. ' I know you are going to say that they are only words...but you must believe me when I say words can mean everything when said at the right time. All we can do is leave Madam Pomfrey be so she can concentrate on healing Hermione. She is the only one who can do that. Like you, I am waiting on what she can do.' The older witch saw Harry's leg jiggling in suppressed agitation and tried to steer the conversation towards his studies. Harry took his apprenticeship very seriously, and she knew it gave him a sense of purpose and achievement that was vital to his well being. 'How is your reading coming along? Have you finished McKernal's works yet?'
Harry's leg stilled and his brow furrowed. 'Yes, but I'm still unsure about some of the physiological calculations he wrote about. I didn't find it very clear, and I need to write on it this week.'
The professor let out a quiet sigh of relief that he changed topic so readily. 'I agree. I think that was his one area of weakness. It's good that you picked that up. What you need to read now is Adam's work on Inanimate and Animate Conversions and Calculations; that's the area he excels in. I have a copy of it here if you want to borrow it now?'
'That would be wonderful, Professor. I need to get a better understanding of the underlying principles, and McKernal just confused me further.'
'I will just be a moment.' Professor McGonagall lifted a nearby lantern and went to the back of her office, which was lined with floor to ceiling bookcases all in shadow. She lifted the lantern so that it cast a wider circle of light and spotted the book on the top shelf. As the professor was moving the nearby step ladder, she heard the door opening and Harry's voice snarl, 'You traitor.'
And Severus' deep voice replying, 'And a pleasant good evening to you, Mr. Potter. I see you are being as useful and effective as ever, sitting and relaxing while others are out actually achieving things for the Order.'
Professor McGonagall groaned...trust Severus to go for the jugular...and swiftly hopped up the ladder, grabbing the book. She needed to intercede as fast as she could; she rather liked her office as it was...intact.
'I know all about you, Snape. Your days are numbered.'
'Goodness me, I am positively quaking with fear. The Great Harry Potter has spoken,' Severus drawled.
Professor McGonagall moved quickly to the front of her office in time to see Harry reach for his wand. 'That will do, Mr. Potter,' she barked out.
A red faced Harry looked over at her scowling, but lowered his wand. She fixed her eyes firmly on Harry's. 'Here is the Adam's book; I suggest you go and read it. I will be in my office all day tomorrow should you want to discuss it.' The Headmistress handed him the book and led him by the elbow to the door. 'As soon as I hear anything, Mr. Potter, I will inform you immediately.'
Harry nodded and left.
When the door closed, Professor McGonagall let out a sigh and turned to see Severus standing still and upright next to the fireplace. 'You do understand, don't you, Severus, that you do not make my job any easier.' All she got was an irritated grunt, which was all she had expected.
The witch grabbed fresh parchment, a bottle of ink and a quill from her desk and sat down again at the worktable. Severus moved soundlessly across the room and sat down opposite her. As always, she treated the man in front of her with a great deal of caution. His face looked more drawn than normal, but nothing in his movements indicated he was hurt.
'Madame Pomfrey informed me that your arm had been injured.'
Severus waved a hand dismissively at his upper left arm. 'Virtually healed now...a simple hex wound.'
Professor McGonagall dipped her quill into the ink. 'So tell me what...'
But she was interrupted by a flushed-cheeked Madam Pomfrey coming rapidly into the room. Did nobody know about knocking around here? Professor McGonagall thought irritably.
'Thank goodness you are here too, Professor Snape. I need to talk to you both about Hermione.'
Professor McGonagall's heart sank, and she quickly gestured for the mediwitch to sit with them. 'What is it? Is she all right?
The plump woman quickly glanced at the only other chair next to the black robed wizard, hesitated, then sat down next to Severus with a frown, edging her chair away from him. 'I'm having difficulties stabilizing her. It's all highly irregular. She's not responding to any of the healing treatments or potions. I've never encountered anything like it. Norah is monitoring her now.'
Professor McGonagall saw Severus frown, making his features even harsher, and he drummed his fingers on the table, his sharp eyes fixed on the table in front of him.
'Is she responding at all to any of the treatments? And if so, how?' he asked abruptly, his eyes still on the table.
'Yes, but not in the usual way. The simple wound healing charms have caused her wounds to fester, and the standard anti-infection potion isn't having any effect. I don't dare treat the curse wound eating into her back for fear of what might happen. She needs to be stronger before it can be treated,' replied Madam Pomfrey, avoiding looking at the wizard.
'What are her vital signs like?' Severus turned and looked sharply at the small woman.
The mediwitch shifted uneasily in her seat. 'Highly erratic...but she's fighting strongly. I would appreciate it, Professor Snape, if you could come and cast your opinion. I am at a loss to know what to do, but the back wound needs treating urgently.'
Severus nodded slowly, his gaze still fixed on her. Madam Pomfrey made to stand but stopped when Severus started speaking in a low voice, his eyes back gazing intently at the table in front of him. 'I think there is information about Miss Granger that given the circumstances is imperative that I must impart.'
Professor McGonagall was instantly curious. What could Severus, of all people, know about Hermione that she did not? Although, she had been surprised when he had volunteered readily to accompany Hermione, but she had not given much thought to it, so relieved she was at finding someone at such short notice. And last night...was it only last night?...she'd found them sitting together at the Burrow. Nobody ever sat next to Severus voluntarily. How interesting.
'But first you must understand that I will only tell you things that are pertinent to the immediate situation...do not question me further. As it is, I am informing you both of things that by rights Miss Granger may not agree with you knowing. So your utmost discretion is required.'
Professor McGonagall nodded and saw curiosity written all over the mediwitch's face as she too nodded in agreement. Severus adjusted his teaching robes on his shoulders and cleared his throat, which after knowing him for almost all his adult life, told her that he was nervous. How intriguing...it was not an emotion she often observed in the Potions master.
'As you are aware, Miss Granger has been living and studying in the south, but what you probably are not aware of are the vastly different and complex magics and traditions that permeate the area. Now, Miss Granger has practiced these magics at some of the deepest levels. How I interpret the current situation is that there is a conflict between Miss Granger and the type of magic used here. That is why the standard treatments are not working as they should.'
'Please explain some more, Severus. What do you mean there is a 'conflict'? I have never heard of that before.' Professor McGonagall looked at him piercingly.
The wizard flicked his eyes to hers. Even after years of being around the man, the Headmistress still found his cold gaze disconcerting, and it took all her will power not to look away.
'Miss Granger must be completely immersed in one of the many possible types of southern magic which is resistant or more likely in conflict with the type of magic used here.'
Professor McGonagall carefully weighed up the situation. Although the man sitting opposite her was grimly repellant, his redeeming features, which she often had to regularly keep reminding herself about, were his intellectual might and his ability to give the correct information at the right time. The fact that he chose to reveal what he knew about Hermione and risk raising interesting questions in both her and Madam Pomfrey's mind about him meant that he considered it consequential enough to take that risk.
'I've never heard of any of this before,' Madam Pomfrey said with a huff, 'and I've seen many different things in my time...different magic in conflict, indeed.'
'You had better believe it if you don't want another death on your capable little hands,' he snapped. The mediwitch flushed deeper.
Professor McGonagall quickly interceded. 'What do you suggest can be done for Hermione?'
'I have never had direct experience with this, but I do believe knowing the underlying reason will help us to formulate an appropriate approach.' Severus replied with only a hint of irritation.
'But how can it be possible? In all my years as a mediwitch, I've never seen, read or even heard of a 'conflict of magic' or whatever you want to call it. Why should we believe you?' challenged the plucky mediwitch.
Professor McGonagall suppressed a groan. It was all so predictable. Madam Pomfrey would do a bit of blustering and try perhaps to aim a few jabs at Severus, who may or may not explode, and then eventually accede to him. She only hoped it would not take too long or would not be too volatile.
Severus' lip curled in contempt. 'Tell me what choice you have? I know that the curse on her back is further weakening her as we speak. So please take your time at getting your tiny little mind around the idea that there may be traditions other than your oh-so-perfect one which might provide the answers. So please, Madam Pomfrey, there is absolutely no hurry. Or better yet, you tell me your ideas, as I am sure that was what you were rushing into this room to do, and you have got plenty of them.'
The mediwitch flushed and opened her mouth to reply, but Professor McGonagall quickly asked, 'What suggestions do you have, Severus?'
'Given we do not have access to the magic Hermione is accustomed to, we may have to borrow from some of the Muggle methods,' replied Severus in a controlled way,
Madam Pomfrey looked startled and blurted out, 'Oh, Merlin, their barbaric ways! I have no knowledge at all of their ghastly procedures.'
Severus rolled his eyes contemptuously at the woman. 'And why am I not surprised? Would not want to break out now, would we?' Then, as if pulling himself into check, he pointed out slowly and clearly as if talking to a very young child, 'Muggles do not use magic, which is good. We cannot use magic on Miss Granger.' He let out an irritated sigh and looked at the Professor. 'I have Muggle medical textbooks that I can check on, and the more conservative aspects of Potions, which don't use any magic, could be used as well.'
The mediwitch shrugged her shoulder in resignation. 'I do believe this is the only path we have left for Hermione, which is more than what I had when I came in. And I suppose I did ask for your opinion, Professor Snape. I have no alternatives but to give these new methods a try, but I do hold grave concerns about it all.'
That was not too bad, thought the Headmistress, and she had to respect the mediwitch's ability to put her patient's needs first, even above her own prejudices and pride. She saw a muscle twitch in Severus' clenched jaw and knew that the wizard was restraining himself as well. He too must want Madam Pomfrey to quickly accept the situation; otherwise he would not have contained his temper as he had.
'I'll come down and see her now.' He stood up fluidly, tall next to the small witch.
The witch and wizard nodded their distracted farewell to Professor McGonagall and exited the room rapidly.
The Professor slowly picked up her parchments and wandered over to her desk and started to file them. What an interesting evening...Severus actually revealing something about himself. In all her years of knowing and working with the wizard, he never once let slip his knowledge of the south nor had Albus even hinted at what Severus knew. Maybe the former Headmaster had not known either, which would be surprising to say the least. As far as the witch knew, Severus was as disdainful about the south as everyone else. Although, she reasoned, he was very quick to be disdainful and contemptuous of most things.
But he certainly had an in-depth knowledge to recognize Hermione's symptoms as he did, and he was correct about the complex traditions; it was something northern witches and wizards knew nothing about. In fact, most witches and wizards she knew had a generic view that it was a poor, dysfunctional area with loose morals. Mind, she had been exactly the same until Anthena fell in love and eloped there to the scandal of entire wizarding community. Professor McGonagall flung her quills and ink into the drawer of her desk. What a mess that was...but there was no way she was going to abandon her sister, despite the huge pressure and isolation she had to endure. Anyway, as it turned out, Anthena never once regretted her decision, and Tonga was a good man in every way to her. The professor lifted the lantern and casually extinguished the remaining candles with the flick of her wand. It was certainly was a fascinating evening, she thought and closed the office door with a click, warded it and made her way slowly up the corridor.
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220 Reviews | 6.94/10 Average
That was a very intriguing set up. I like the mix of the magics and how they countered each other. And that kiss in front of the whole room between Harry and Severus... perfect. Very well done.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Thank you :)
This story drew me in and kept me reading it all day! It is wonderful. I liked how you had the different types of magic feel each other unpleasantly, that was neat. I liked the description of the houses as elements. I just all around really loved reading this story. Thank you so much for sharing it.
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Thanks -- glad you enjoyed it :)
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Thanks -- glad you enjoyed it :)
I can definitely relate to the taste of stuff in the food putting me off. Plastic taste in water from bottles comes to mind immediately.
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Yes, it's certainly something that most people can relate to! Thanks :)
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Yes, it's certainly something that most people can relate to! Thanks :)
This story captured me and I read it from the first chapter through the Epilogue in one sitting -- taking only bathroom breaks. You are a remarkable and talented author. I look forward to reading more of your inspired works. Thank you for sharing.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Thanks for your kind words :) Glad you liked it.
I love what you've done with the ritual here. This is one of my favorite stories, and I'll be sad to reach the end of it.
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Thanks,
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, glad you like it :)
There are a lot of questions left unanswered - but perhaps that is for the best. I have inferred (erroneously, or not) that Hermione was sexuallly attacked in some manner or form prior to leaving the 'North'; which somehow culminated in the birth of her cherished boy.Your ambivalent view towards sexuality and its implications are startling to me - I can't seem to wrap my mind around the concept of a bisexual Snape and Harry, regardless of what fandom presents. All in all, it was a very lovely read. Unconventional and completely off the beaten path, but all the better for it.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Thanks for your thoughtful review -- much appreciated. Yes, that is very much one interpretation of Hermione's background. I put a number of dots in the story and I wanted to give the reader the freedom to join them up how they want. The most important point was that her son was everything to her -- all the rest is really background. And...Snape and Harry...well, that was a mini challenge to myself lol. Once again thanks for reviewing.
This is wonderful. This is a cogent world arising from difference in perception and responses to the fundamental sources of magical power and the consequent divergence in the way it is expressed, channeled and used through human agency. You have brought me effortlessly into this world, and enabled my immersion in it as easily as if I had been born into water and always known how to swim. This is a rare talent and one I love above all things. The alternate world you have created is deeply believeable, like the a tree whose branches I can travel along; thinking, speculating and delighted by the difference I can see due to the shift in perspective I can see by climbing. You have the gift of a true storyteller, and I am delighted with this other part of the wizarding world that you have crafted.The richness of the backstory adds so much to this work. The difference in language and the complexity and subtlety of forms of address speak of a cultural richness of the type that evolves in an old civilization. I can see the Hindu and perhaps some Balinese influence behind the customs and expressions of respect of the southern realm, but there also seems to me to be more than a hint of an old female-power-centric religion here, with strong threads of shamanism, sex magic, the powers of the four elements, and one of the pillars/makers/masters of all the realms melded into a seamless whole. I enjoyed the revelation of Severus's and Hermione's characters, and that he recognized and acknowledged the maturity of her power and skill and was able to support it while still remaining acerbic and ironic, and more than a touch prickly at times. Hermione so strong and sure in power, but with some, perhaps, difficulties caused by her forthrigthness. The gradual growth and deepening of their magical and personal connection was well handled and natural, and I was so pleased that I couldn't tell if they would end up as magical partners and friends or as magical partners and mates. I welcome the complexity of an older Harry's character and his gradual maturing as his magic was healed and completed. It's refreshing to see him portrayed as a charismatic young man on his way to balanced adulthood, neither saint nor terminal twerp. I was amused by and enjoyed the public liplock he put on Severus. The unregarded trumpet sounding change in all the wizarding world?Loved the image of Hermione in company with Severus, looking like mini-me with a witch's hat, and I chuckled imagining her bouncing around Hogwarts in full Victorian fig including a hoop skirt.I am so glad you didn't tell us everything. Why was Severus taken to the north at such a critical time in the development of his magic? Why was he drawn into Voldemort's orbit? What impelled him to leave it? How did Hermione escape the Death Eaters? Did they deem her so crippled by her rape and the deaths of her parents that she was simply tossed away? How did she reach the south? How was her soul healing undertaken? When did the split between southern and northern magic occur and how did they come to be so antithetical? Mind, it doesn't trouble me if these questions are never answered, I'm delighted that they are sparked!Thanks for the great ride!
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Goodness me, that must be the most comprehensive review I've ever received *blushes*. I am so happy that you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Goodness me, that must be the most comprehensive review I've ever received *blushes*. I am so happy that you enjoyed the story. Thank you for reading and reviewing :)
very poetic and quite intresting, and quite A WAY WITH WORDS .
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lol thanks
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lol thanks
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Fascinating story! Well done!
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Thanks :)
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Thanks :)
That is a marvellous story you have written for us! Very moving... It's very original and the magic feels mature (not this jump-and-run-magic of DH). I admired Harry's pov, when he goes the last time to Hogsmead, it's truly moving. And the other Harry parts... Normally I'm not into slash, but this time! Hot!Your Snape felt very canon, but could transform nicely after you explained some of his issues. Hermione was lovely too.Also the space and the plotting of the story was very smooth, it was not chopped at all (and I read it in two goes). But I'm still curious about the little boy - I truly love the tiny bits you wrote about him - is there a chance of a sequal?Thank you very much!
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Thanks
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
-- glad you liked it. Not sure about a sequal just yet; I always think you have to treat them with care. I am in the middle of writing something right now, although not HGSS story I'm afraid. (Snape features of course - he is my muse after all lol). To be honest, I hadn't realized how everyone was going to be so fascinated about the boy lol. Thanks for taking the time to write down your thoughts -- I appreciate it.
Such a well done, original story. I love how you blended canon and your own au in this. Thank you.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Thanks ric :)
Beautiful and hilarious and almost entirely satisfying. The 'almost' is the mysterious history of the boy that you left behind. The 'how' was confirmed, at least to my vision, but the 'by who' is a bit of a niggler. I can't see how what I imagine to have happened would be worked into the same story, though; it would divert the flow that you've already created very well. Oh well. Great job, I loved every minute of your creation. Hope to see more from you soon. Happy writing!
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Oooh, you too are good at subtle. I think I know what you mean and the 'by who'? Well, does it really matter? Hermione loves the boy, which is the main issue. That's why I started the story and ended the story with the same sentence :) Thanks for writing your thoughts down -- very intresting.
I enjoyed the story but am still puzzled by a few things... If this was your intention. good job :) Thank you very much for writing and I hope you will consider a sequel.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Glad you enjoyed the story,
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
. I tried to tie up all the loose ends although there were some things I left intentionally vague and open to interpretation. Do feel free to ask about anything that you are puzzeled by. It would be interesting for me as well :)
I have, after not being too sure of the first couple of chapters, thouroughly enjoyed this story (and that hesitation was only because I wasn't sure if it would head towards the kind of story I usually avoid )
I'd really like to see some more of this AU of yours - something with a bit more backstory on her boy, perhaps? He is still very much a mystery. Or a bit more about Snape's Southern past? (Embarrassing tales of his toddlerhood come to mind)
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Thanks
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-- I really enjoyed writing this story as well. To be honest, I'm not entirely sure what I'll write next -- got loads of ideas perculating away, though :)
I've enjoyed your story very much. Certainly puts Severus in a different light. Thanks for your work!
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Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
What an amazing story! I have really enjoyed reading it, and have checked for updates regularly. I really admire the way you have made the characters so believable, warts and all. The idea of southern magic is wonderful, and well thought out.I am sorry I haven't reviewed before now-I know that sometimes it is hard to keep going, not knowing if anyone is reading or enjoying it. I have started 2 fics and gave up when they got either flamed, or people not responding at all (which is even worse). Just know that I have been fascinated since the beginning, and am very pleased with the ending. I look foward to any other stories you write.Sincerely, Luca the V
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Thanks -- glad you enjoyed reading it :)
So original in concept and vividly executed.
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Thanks
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Really cool fic. It is very different from any that I have read but I really like it.
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Thanks
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-- glad you liked it :)
A very enjoyable story. I like the idea that 'southern magic' will be mentioned (maybe taught someday?) at Hogwarts.
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Thanks
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
-- I wanted to create a sense of future developments with that :)
I have really enjoyed this story but I admit to being a little confused. Is Hermione the child's mother? If so who is his father?Other than that kudos on a excellent story
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
With 'the boy' I did leave it intentionally vague -- and it can be open to a few interpretations. But for me, what was most important about him was that Hermione loved him very deeply and to a certain extent the boy was the one who held her firmly to this realm.
Response from Anijade (Reviewer)
Ah ok thank you for the explaination
Wow. That was intense. I'm very much looking forward to your next update.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Thanks
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
-- yeah, it was a bit. Next chapter should be soon :)
Very intriguing tale so far. I look forward to the next installment. Will we ever find out just what 'The South' is geographically?Thank you for writing
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
Thanks
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
. When I started writing this story, I had intended to be more geographically specific but as I continued to write, what became more important, in my mind, were the attitudes and prejudices people have towards others living in different areas and that it happens no matter where you live. It is something most of us understand and have possibly experienced. So I thought I would leave it vague and let the reader fill in the gaps with their own personal experience depending on where they are in the world. But I am also happy to say where I was thinking about when I wrote it if you want -- I don't mean it to be a secret -- and it doesn't alter the story any.
Saliva or other liquid bodily products? Somehow I don't think Harry is going to take kindly to that suggestion.
Response from lapita (Author of Southern Magic)
But that's the fun, don't you think? Thanks for reading and reviewing.