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Proestigium Chapter 38: Letter 38: Victor Krum to Hermione Granger, 15th October 2000
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Proestigium

1: Letter 1: Severus Snape to Minerva McGonagall, 26th November 1997

2: Letter 2: Hermione Granger to Arsenius Jigger, 27th November 1997

3: Letter 3: William Heaney to Arsenius Jigger, 28th November 1997

4: Letter 4: J. Alfred Prufrock to Severus Snape, 29th November 1997

5: Letter 5: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 2nd December 1997

6: Letter 6: Minerva McGonagall to Severus Snape, 8th December 1997

7: Letter 7: Hermione Granger to her Mother, 11th December 1997

8: Letter 8: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 15th December 1997

9: Letter 9: Hermione Granger to Victor Krum, 20th December 1997

10: Letter 10: Hermione Granger to her Mother, 24th December 1997

11: Letter 11: Hermione Granger to Arsenius Jigger, 29th December 1997

12: Letter 12: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 2nd January 1998

13: Letter 13: Hermione Granger to her Mother, 4th January 1998

14: Letter 14: Dr Jane Porter to her daughter, Hermione Granger, 13th January 1998

15: Letter 15: Hermione Granger to Arsenius Jigger, 20th January 1998

16: Letter 16: Victor Krum to Hermione Granger, 4th February 1998

17: Letter 17: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 8th February 1998

18: Letter 18: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 15th February 1998

19: Letter 19: Dr Jane Porter to her daughter, Hermione Granger, 27th February 1998

20: Letter 20: Hermione Granger to Victor Krum, 6th Merch 1998

21: Letter 21: Hermione Granger to her Mother, 14th March 1998

22: Letter 22: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 20th March 1998

23: Letter 23: Hermione Granger to Arsenius Jigger, 27th March 1998

24: Letter 24: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 1st April 1998

25: Letter 25: Hermione Granger to Arsenius Jigger, 1998, 25th April 1998

26: Letter 26: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 5th May 1998

27: Letter 27: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 7th May 1998

28: Letter 28: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 15th May 1998

29: Letter 29: Victor Krum to Hermione Granger, 30th May 1998

30: Letter 30: J. Alfred Prufrock to Severus Snape, 1st June 1998

31: Letter 31: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 10th June 1998

32: Letter 32: Arsenius Jigger to Hermione Granger, 17th June 1998

33: Letter 33: Albus Dumbledore to Severus Snape, 8th June 2000

34: Letter 34: Hermione Granger to Victor Krum, 31st August 2000

35: Letter 35: J. Alfred Prufrock to Severus Snape, 15th September 2000

36: Letter 36: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 29th September 2000

37: Letter 37: J. Alfred Prufrock to Severus Snape, 3rd October 2000

38: Letter 38: Victor Krum to Hermione Granger, 15th October 2000

39: Letter 39: J. Alfred Prufrock to Severus Snape, 28th November 2000

40: Letter 40: Severus Snape to J. Alfred Prufrock, 8th December 2000

41: Letter 41: Severus Snape to Hermione Granger, 14th December 2000

42: Letter 42: Hermione Granger to Severus Snape, 12th January 2001

Letter 38: Victor Krum to Hermione Granger, 15th October 2000

Proestigium

Chapter 38 of 42

Lady Strange

Victor writes to Hermione and gives her his opinion of the "fracas". A journal article is attached.

Mystery/Suspense Drama Angst Romance Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 50,343 Words 42 Chapters Complete
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A/N: For simplicity's sake, titles of books, journals etc are underlined and emphasises are italicised. In reviving the old tradition of epistolary novels, I understand the plot may be a little slow, laborious and difficult to follow. Some might consider it AU and a little OOC.

In order not to weary the reader's patience, a number of letters from the series of correspondences have been suppressed; those only have been given which appeared necessary to a complete understanding of the events in this group. For the same reason, some letters from the actors in the events of this drama have also been suppressed.

One reviewer of letter 36 wanted to know if Victor was also deciphering the message. Having received many emails to that effect and doubtlessly enraging many for my refusal to reply, I urge you to read this letter and put your conjectures on that score to rest.

Proestigium or What the Seasons may Bring

Letter 38: Victor Krum to Hermione Granger, 15th October 2000

Victor Krum

284, Makarios Avenue

Cy-3720 Sophia,

Bulgaria

October 15, 2000

Hello Hermione,

I received your message on the Krum doll. Thank you for the new broom servicing kit, you always know what I need. Irina is unhappy that we beat the Russian team again, so I will have to take her out later tonight.

I do not know why the publication of Nomos has been delayed at your end. Never mind, I will send you a copy of Jigger's article like you asked. I am very surprised that he is Severus Snape. If you remember, I always said that I suspected something was not right about this Dr Jigger. I am confused. You write to him and he does not answer. But you comment on each other in publications? Very funny, no? I do not mean funny ha-ha, but the other kind of funny. You know he gets your letters because they do not get sent back to you. I do not understand. If Severus Snape does not want to reply to your letters, why does not he send them back to you? Is there really some form of communication between the two of you in the journals? I see nothing that tells me that there is.

I do not think that going to his home to look for him is a good idea. If he does not want to reply to your letters, he will not want to see you either.

I must fly, Irina is here. Send my best thoughts to the newest Aurors, Harry Potter and Ron Weasley. And don't worry, the secret of Jigger is safe with me.

Your friend,

Victor

P/S Here is the Jigger article in Nomos.

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Nomos, (English edition) Vol. 1111, No. 5.

A Critique of Hermione Granger's Review of Acton Levis's Machiavellian Potions.

By Arsenius Jigger

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So far, there has been little consideration on Machiavellian potions. Prior to Levis and Granger, Machiavelli's contribution to the art of potion making was not considered for over two centuries. Engelhard will say that Machiavelli's contribution to magic is purely philosophical and politically. Acton Levis adds to this by claiming (rightly), "Modernity is this obsession with change and we're experiencing it now with this period of radical change – in the economy, in our way of life, in the way we live, in the way we work." Keeping this in mind, one will fall on Granger's reasoning that Machiavelli is the father of modern potion brewing. Notes made by Machiavelli in his book, Discourses on Livy prove that his potions are not of a naturally insidious nature. On the contrary, their purposes are for the unification of the mind and the soul so as to strengthen a person's noble character. That much, at least, is intimated in the work. On the matter of whether it has been conclusively proven, I am able to safely conclude that no one has successfully cracked the elaborate code he uses in his writings. Furthermore, Machiavelli's works are couched as political treatises, which make his work more difficult to decipher and interpret. Levis, however, claims that Machiavelli's potions are evil because his Florentine Brew is designed to reunite the spirit with the body without raising the dead. Ordinarily, this view would have been perpetuated if Granger had not entered the debate with her notion that the Florentine Brew is supposed to moderate the impulses by amalgamating the bodily desire with the spiritual one. Vouching for this theory, is Machiavelli's own words, "A quickening will develop without touching those things which had died." Effectively, what this means is that the 'dead' refers to the faculties and bad habits which the subject has since weeded out of his character. While it is possible that a cadaver is alluded to, Granger conclusively proves that Machiavelli cannot be read literally in the Profundis Potion that she uses for her article. Hence, she is right in her surmise.

Elucidating this further by means of the Machiavellian problem, Granger attempts to lay down the fundamental premises for modern potion brewing. Nevertheless, she does not take into account the school of Realist Potion Brewing created by some alchemists claiming to follow the Florentine way. In her neglect, she does not realise that Machiavellian potions fell out of use because the end of Machiavellianism in potions is not just around the corner; it is not of this world at all. Which is, in the fact, the same as saying that the controversy created by Machiavellian potions will not lead to perfect results as there will be factors beyond one's control. In looking at Machiavellian potions objectively, rationally without sentiment and dispassionately, as Granger attempts to do, one can conclude that they have many uses, if we are able to uncover their true meaning. Leafing through Levis' book, I am inclined to agree with Granger that he is unacquainted with the twenty-seven different views of looking at Machiavelli's potions. Last but not least, Granger should be congratulated for looking at Machiavelli's style of writing rather than his potions per se. Correct interpretations of his potions are dependent on deciphering his style. Other methods of reading that one might employ can be gleaned from Hobbes, Laird and Strauss. Recognising the inherent difficulty of reading Machiavelli is half the task of the researcher. Researchers must also consult the secondary literature to get a feel of the conflicting views on this phenomenal figure's alchemical formulas.

Until such time when we are able to say for certain that Machiavelli intended for us to read his potions in a certain way, I encourage all scholars to take the Hobbesian view of keeping an open mind. Pinning down one reading alone will do the scholar no good. There is no doubt that Granger is on the right track in her assessment of Machiavelli's writing. Yielding to the superiority of her exoteric reading could be the best option for those who are only beginning to take up the study of Machiavellian potions. Of course, the reader must be aware that Granger is not infallible. Undoubtedly, you would have noticed that I have criticised some aspects of her reading. Restraining oneself from underestimating Machiavelli would be the best advice for Granger if she is to continue her education in Machiavellian potions. So, what is left to say? Other than the fact that Granger has encapsulated many of Machiavelli's points in her assessment, she should have also considered his own clarification of his writings. Unless she does so, she will not comprehend Machiavelli's qualifications on his explanations. Leaving you with that thought, I caution against dismissing Machiavellian potions potential for the wizarding world.

Footnotes

Proestigium is Latin for illusion. Ironically, the English word Prestige derives from it.

The letter structure and style of this letter may leave some fuming. Let me stress that Victor Krum's first language is not English. He does not write or speak English as well as native speakers.

If you extract the first letter of each of the review's sentences (notice that I stress sentences, not every capital alphabet), they read, "SPEAK NOT OF LOVE WHEN I WILL CORRUPT YOUR SOUL."

Readers have been asking me why HG and SS are communicating through journal articles rather than letters. The answer is simple – SS refuses to reply to HG's letters (apparent in letters 37 and 39), instead he chooses to reply to her in kind through journal articles. Why journal articles? She started the ball rolling with the article annexed to letter 35. I assume as should you that SS and HG read, subscribe and contribute to several alchemical/potion journals.

By now, you should have realised that "corresponding" through journal articles is extremely tedious because HG and SS have to comb through all the potions and alchemical journals, find the other party's articles, decipher the message (if any) in the article and write a response to the person and the alchemical community. But when dealing with a stubborn man like Severus, what else can one do?

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Javoher

Hello. I know it has been 10 years since you published this story, and you perhaps have left this fandom. But I want to tell you that I am re-reading this for the third or fourth time, and I enjoy it more each time. This time I read this chapter with my chemistry and academic brain instead if my fan fic brain. I had not fully appreciated how audacious Hermione is here until now! Thanks for a smart and funny story that gets better with time.

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

I don't have as much leisure time as I did ten years ago. The chemistry jargon in this story is made up, bear that in mind. As such, I hope your chemistry and academic brain will not explode from my playing fast and loose with chemistry in this story.

9/10

reets67

Thanks for a great story. Your scholarship leaves mine in the shade. While it could be that my recollection of chemistry, history, mythology is shaky - and you have just made it up, I deem that you have at least a passing aquaintence in the subjects  (yes?)and consequently write those passages exceedingly well. Therefore a rather inelegant 'WOW!' to you and a polite curtsey. Has Snape let his guard slip and written in his own voice intead of AJ?'...could be brewed in our present wolfsbane formula.'He He! Off to read more!Cheers.

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Thank you for the compliments. I do have some knowledge of chemistry and all that but most of the things are made up.Ah, the slip. You caught it, eh?

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Thank you for the compliments. I do have some knowledge of chemistry and all that but most of the things are made up.Ah, the slip. You caught it, eh?

0/10

timestep

I ended up reading this story when the "Random selector" popped it on my screen.I truely enjoyed it - and look forward to reading more of your stories.

This was quite creative (and Ron is still a little thick!)

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Thank you.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I have read quite alot of stories fanfiction and well just about anything I can get my hands on actually and your style of writing is truly amazing.  It shows how very smart you are.  It makes me wonder if you are a professor or something truly grander than the usual authors I have read.  It had been a pleasure to read your story, until next time.  Tamara aka

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

I was working on becoming a professor but politics and my lack of skill in that resulted in a quietus est. I write because I want to. Simple as that. I'm on LJ if you want to add me. But leave a message because I screen who adds me and why. Thank you for the review.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

The poem was indeed beautiful.  Why would he leave his schedule if he wants to meet her at 8?  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

That is for the readers to decide on their own. I like my readers to think. Although I have notes which spoonfeed readers to a certain degree, I only give at most 2 corners of the square. readers are expected to find the remaining 2 corners themselves and join the dots on their own.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I think it brilliant that not only do they send messages through these articles but make the articles work around their messages.  Yes, now to plan a wedding.  Now there is one long article.  lol  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

I can't stand weddings, so I never write them. The messages of course have a deeper meaning. What is that deeper meaning? Readers must think on their own.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

How forward of her.  He won't answer her letters but she thinks he will marry her.  That takes guts.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Hermione is nothing but gutsy. heh

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Promises, Promises.  I believe he already has.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Well.. read on to find out.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Well now, that pretty much says it all.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

indeed, it does.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh this is bloody brilliant.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

i think so too.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh clever. Very ingenius of you.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

i like to think so, but others have disagreed. thank you for reading.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh what will she have to say.  I don't think I would give it away to him and just play along until you can catch him at it.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

this is fic is already complete. just read on and find out.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Running away never solves anything.  Your problem will still be there no matter where you go.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

but then if i didnt make him do that, thre would be no plot.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I'm not sure anger is what she will feel, more like sadness, disappointment, maybe even longing.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

that is up to the reader's interpretation. i'm glad you're enjoying yourself.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Watch your step Prufrock, Snape doesn't take kindly to people questioning his ways.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

you know that and i know that, but some people just like to toe the line.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Wow got his knickers in a bunch, didn't he?  LOL  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

That's Severus for you. *smirks*

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

good ol' Krumski always the protector  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

he does his best. read on.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

The articles between the two remind me of love letters.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

that is open to interpretation. thank you for reading and thinking.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Ok now I can't wait to see where this goes.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

read on and you'll find out.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

OH come on she is your other half.  Take her on, it will be worth it.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

yes, well snapey does have problems with those kinds of facts rammed down his throat. but we know he'll turn in the end.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Don't soften now girlie.  You almost had him.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

lots more to go. this thing does last 40+ chapters.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Oh my it is like watching tennis.  Brilliant.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

Tennis? interesting. I just like the verbal repartee for its own sake.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

So there. lol  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

vindication for you and me, but the chracters are still willy-washy over the issue.

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

He is trying to get a rise out of her, so she will show a little spirit in this sad time.  I belief anyway.  Tamara

Response from Lady Strange (Author of Proestigium)

we'll see. read on...

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Yes over but what of Voldie's followers.  Were they killed or rounded up or on the run or a littel of all?  Just wondered.  Tamara

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