Chapter Ten
Chapter 10 of 12
Delayed PoetThe new Minister of Magic has a major issue on his hands: orphans from the Great War. He has enacted the Adoption Act and Severus isn't exempt. Follow Severus down his path into parenthood and those who (attempt to) help him along his way.
ReviewedChapter Ten
By the time Severus reached the Ministry, he was furious...not only at the fact that he had to deal with this ridiculous hearing, but at himself. His instinct had been to give in and let Jessica go with him to the hearing, and it was so difficult for him to stick to his word. He wouldn't allow himself to be the type of parent that would change his mind just because his children didn't like the rules set before them. Jessica deserved better than that, not to mention the fact that it was completely against his personality to give in. He was stubborn, and he wasn't so arrogant as to deny it.
He checked in with the security wizard at the front desk, then made his way to the elevator that would take him to the courtrooms. The stone walls surrounding him after he left the elevator looked as though they had been there for thousands of years. Reaching the courtroom where the hearing was to be held, Severus opened the door and entered. There were two aging wizards, a young wizard he didn't recognize, and Minister Weasley. Blaise Zabini hadn't arrived, but Arthur walked over to him and held out his hand.
"I'm terribly sorry about this, Severus. I'm doing all I can on my end. He contested Molly's and my adoption of Maria as well. Did you know?
Severus shook the Minister's hand.. "I did not, though it makes sense. Will Molly be here?"
"Oh, no, no. Maria, bless her, has a bit of a cold. Molly's coddling her as she does."
The woman can't live without coddling, Severus thought, though he resisted the urge to say as much. Severus felt a sense of security knowing that the Minister's adoption was being contested as well. Surely Blaise would not be able to get away with this going against the Minister.
"Will we be standing this hearing together, then?" Severus asked.
"Yes, we will. And, ah, I notice you didn't bring Jessica along." Arthur raised an eyebrow in curiosity.
"I hardly think a Ministry courtroom is the place for a little girl," Severus bit back defensively.
Raising a hand in surrender, Arthur said, "I absolutely agree."
"It's not as though the notice said to bring her along anyhow."
Hearing the door open, Severus turned to see Blaise Zabini walk in. Though he did not throw angry words around in attack, Blaise didn't even look at the two men already present. He walked straight to the desk provided for any paperwork he had brought along. Following suit, Severus and Arthur made their way to the other desk. After a couple minutes, one of the wizards noticed that all parties were present and clapped his hands together once.
"Shall we begin?" His voice rang out clearly and firmly in a way that defied his apparent age. "We are here today on the 18th day of September in the year 2000 to rule on the matter of Zabini, Blaise versus Snape, Severus and Weasley, Arthur. Mr. Zabini, you have sent a letter of contest on the adoptions of Augustus, Jessica and Augustus, Maria. Is that correct?"
"Yes, sir." Blaise spoke in clear, clipped tones, never looking away from the wizards sitting elevated from them.
"Professor Snape, Minister Weasley, do you have your copies of the final adoption forms?" The second wizard addressed them. Severus and Arthur both located their respective adoption papers and handed them to the younger wizard who then took them to the wizards who were to determine the fate of the two young sisters. He looked at the papers, handed them to the other, and then addressed the men before him.
"They seem to be in order. Mr. Zabini, you letter of contest stated that these adoptions are illegal and therefore void because the children in question still have living relatives. Please present your case now."
Blaise removed an old-looking parchment from his folder and handed it to the young wizard. "This is a copy of my family tree. On it you will see the name Jason Zabini highlighted as well as his wife, Sarah Zabini, nee Murphy. Jason Zabini was my cousin; therefore his children, Jessica and Maria, are my relations and belong in my care."
The first wizard cleared his throat. "Mr. Zabini, we are here in question of the Augustus family," he pointed out.
"When You-Know-Who was gaining power the second time around, Jason had already married Sarah, a Muggle, and had already had Jessica. Out of fear for his wife and child, Jason changed their surname and went into hiding."
"Have you any proof that Jason Augustus is the same as Jason Zabini?"
Severus noticed Blaise's clenched jaw as a sign of his frustration. Relief was slowly spreading through Severus, as it seemed that the representatives from the Wizengamot were inclined to side with him and Arthur already.
"With all do respect," Blaise said through clenched teeth, "when people went into hiding from You-Know-Who, they made sure they left no proof behind."
"That is understandable, but regrettable. Do you have any other evidence to present, Mr. Zabini?"
"I would think that my family tree is proof enough," he spat out.
"I'm afraid, Mr. Zabini, that it is not. Even if you and the children were second cousins, that would not be enough to remove them from the homes they have been adopted into. However, as there is no proof of relation between you and the Misses Augustus, we will have to rule in favor of Professor Snape and Minister Weasley." He looked to the other for confirmation. He nodded. "This case is dismissed, and the adoptions of Jessica and Maria Augustus will remain as they are. Good day."
The wizards signed on their ruling, handing the document to the younger wizard to be placed in records, and then they left. Raising an eyebrow, Severus wondered at how one could win a case without speaking a word of defense. Marveling at his luck, Severus had an undeniable urge to hurry home and tell Jessica the good news. Stifling the urge, he turned to Arthur as Blaise stormed out of the courtroom.
"That went well," he said with a smirk.
"Definitely." Arthur clapped him on the shoulder, and Severus fought not to cringe at the touch. "Sorry to cut this short, but I've got piles of paperwork to sort through up in my office. It was good seeing you again. Do try to bring Jessie by sometime...you know how Molly gets."
Nodding, the men walked out of the courtroom together. Severus was feeling happy in a way he hadn't felt since his childhood friendship with a young redhead. Arthur left Severus, feeling relieved that his wife's meddling would not be interfered with by this inconvenience.
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Severus walked down the dungeon corridors wondering how Jessica would react when she heard that she was going to be able to stay with him. He knew that she wanted to, but there was a nagging voice in the back of his head telling him that she would grow to resent him, that she would be better off without him. Pushing the thought out of his head, he almost didn't notice Hermione Granger heading his way.
"What brings you to the dungeons, Miss Granger?" he asked as she smiled up at him.
"Professor." She nodded her head in greeting. "I was simply walking Jessie back to your rooms. I hope that's all right?"
She bit her lower lip, and his eyes flickered at the movement. "She was to return after I left. What detained her?" He couldn't keep the worry and slight irritation that she had not followed his directions out of his voice.
"Oh! I'm sorry, Professor. It was me. I was walking into the Entrance Hall just as you were leaving and happened upon Jessie. We were talking when she asked if we could go to the kitchens for a treat. Afterward, I brought her straight back home," she assured him. He did not look very assured, so she went on. "I offered to take her to the Ministry..."
His eyes flashed. "You had..."
"No right, I know. She told me no. She said that she wasn't to go, and that she'd promised not to. Professor, she refused to break her promise to you."
Though he was still angry at Miss Granger's intrusion, Severus couldn't help the burst of pride in Jessica. "If that's all..." Severus began walking past her.
"Wait!" She made to reach out to him, but pulled her hand back before it found him. "I...I was wondering how it went."
Frowning, Severus looked into her eyes. "It went well." After a moment, he added, "Thank you for asking."
Severus frowned even more as the smile spread across her lips. "Oh, that's wonderful! Jessie will be delighted to hear it!"
Raising his eyebrows, Severus nodded in agreement. "Oh, right, I'll see you later, then," she said as a light blush graced her cheeks.
Leaving her, Severus continued down the corridor until he reached the entrance to his rooms. Muttering the password, he went inside to find Jessie sitting at the coffee table, writing on a small piece of parchment. She looked up as he pulled his traveling cloak off and put it onto the rack inside the door. Her eyes lit up in a combination of excitement and fear. Quickly folding the parchment she had been writing on, Jessie jumped up, stuffing it into her pocket.
"What happened?" she asked quickly, seeming to resist the urge to rush to him.
Giving her a rare smile, Severus told her, "We won. You get to stay with me."
Jessica let a squeak of joy out as she ran to him and jumped up into his arms. "Yes! Oh yes, thank you!" Her arms wrapped tightly around his neck, and his arms instinctively held her tight. Her lips pressed against his cheek, and he noticed that they felt wet, as though she was crying. Closing his eyes, Severus let all the doubts and worries flood out of him. Slowly, he lowered Jessie to the ground, though she didn't let go of him, her face still pressed against his stomach. Sliding a hand over her hair, Severus noticed that it was braided again.
Frowning slightly, he asked, "Did Miss Granger braid your hair again?"
Jessie pulled back from him, confused. "Um, yes. That's all right, isn't it?"
Shaking his head, Severus said, "Yes, it's all right."
"Hermione could teach you, you know. She's really good at it. Please," she added.
"As I told Hermi...Miss Granger, I will think about it." Did he really want to spend time with Miss Granger? He didn't really have an answer to that, but a small part of him decided that if it meant making Jessie happy, then he would definitely consider spending any necessary time with her.
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Jessica was thrilled with the way things were turning out in her life. Everything had been so confusing, and she hadn't been sure how she'd get through not having her parents with her anymore, then being separated from Maria. Then Severus had adopted her; she understood what that meant. Severus was her dad now...or, at least, he would be once he realized that he already was. She loved being around Hermione, and she was sure that Severus would too. All she had to do was make the two of them realize that they were perfect for each other. Molly was going to be so excited when she read the letter Jessica was writing her.
Pulling the letter out of her pocket, Jessica read it over.
Dear Molly,
I miss you so much! Tell Maria that I love her and I miss her. I'm gunna ask Severus if I can visit soon. I don't wanna wait to visit her until Christmas. I really like Hermione a lot. She's so fun! Today, we went to the kitchens together and had ice cream sundaes.
She sat down, picked up a quill, and hurried to finish writing the letter.
Severus won the hearing! I get to stay with him! I was really scared I wouldn't be able to stay with him. Hermione is gunna teach him how to braid my hair. He hasn't said he will yet, but I can tell he's going to. I don't know how much Severus is working on the potion for Mark, but I think he is working on it. I really am working on getting them to talk more. I have to go now, though.
Love,
Jessie
Jessica sat inside her bedroom door that night, waiting for Severus to go to his room. She knew that once he went into his room, he would be asleep within minutes. She had to get up to the owlry to send the letter to Molly. She knew Severus would be really upset if he knew that she was planning to go up there by herself, but she didn't want him to know about this particular letter. It would not be good for her plan for him to find out that she and Molly were working together to get him to find friendship and love in the hopes that it would bring him to adopting Maria. He was a stubborn man, but she was determined to be twice as stubborn.
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A/N: Reviews keep a lonely writer warm at night *wink*
Chapter polished up on January 29, 2010. (Though, again, there wasn't much to polish!)
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108 Reviews | 7.84/10 Average
Excellant!!! Loved it... and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see what Molly does next.... how Severus reacts... if Jessica tells him what happened...please please update again soon!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you so much! You're reviews always make me smile!I really want to update soon, but the muse has been very vague about what happens next with Severus and Jessica — she wants to focus on Hermione and Mark. However, I will definitely try to update soon! Thanks, as always, for reviewing!
Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)
That's just as interesting... *nudges muse to get things going*
Wow. Blaise has just blown any chance he might ever have had of being trusted with her! Very intense chapter! *offers your muse chocolate for more*
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Blaise is a little crazed, I know. We'll have to see how Severus reacts, hmm. Thanks so much for the review and the chocolate!
I think that Severus is right! Jessie will be sorted into Slytherin. She is already putting those Slytherin tendencies into practice. Can't wait for the next update.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
thats pretty unrealistic for a 7 year old.. Most seven year olds cannot read that well, and definately would not think about "owling their progress" to a person. You need to remember that most kids only start to learn to read at age 6. I think a little revision might be in order. I do like the story though.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you for the concrit, I really do appreciate it! However, Jessica didn't actually come up with the idea all on her own. Molly's been whispering in her ear and there's a very good reason that she's playing matchmaker. And there are many children who learn to read earlier than age 6. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I do hope you continue to read!
I read this story while walking on my treadmill. It is absolutely brilliant! I need more!
Great chapter... glad RL finally let up enough for you to be able to update!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh thanks! RL if still crazy, but it's settling down. I can't wait to get the next chapter to you all! It's finished, just needs to be sent to my beta. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I am so happy to see an update to this wonderful story, I hope you will let us see chapter ten real soon:-) I cross my fingers for the hearing, and hope that you will not let anyone remove Jessica from Severus, it will break both their harts. I would love to see a glimpse of Hermiones boy too, so far we have only had him mentioned by name, it would be nice to know a little bit more about him. Keep writing and update soon!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh I hope you can see chapter ten soon too! It's already finished, I just need to find a way to get it to my beta. It really would destroy them, if I separated them, wouldn't it? That would be really mean of me. I don't know if Mark will appear in this story at all, but his part in this storyline will become apparent before too long. I'll keep writing and I hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
Wow. I love this story line. There aren't many fics of Severus and a child. You're doing a great job, keep it up.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, thanks so much! I really have struggled with this story, trying to make it realistic enough. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I'm so glad to see this! This is a very sweet chapter. Poor Jessie, having to be so afraid she'll lose her new family. I look forward to the next chapter when it's ready!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
I'm so glad it's finally up! Jessie's a terrific little girl, I think she'll find a way to work out any situation. If I can ever get the next chapter (which is finished) off my laptop and onto a computer with internet, I will be a happy person! Thanks for the review!
Sweet chapter and i hope that Severus does keep Jessie in his custody. Go, Sev, go! And for the love of Merlin, learn how to braid the girl's hair! heehee!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I would have to be very cruel to take her away, wouldn't I? Hmmm. Well, Severus really hasn't decided if he's going to let Hermione teach him to braid hair... I'm trying to prod him, but he's a very stubborn man. Thanks so much for the reivew! Hope to see you next chapter!
Oh, I really want Jessie to stay with Severus. Thanks for the chapter.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
It would be terribly mean of me to separate them, wouldn't it? Thanks for the review!
So glad you're back. I just thought you let this go. Very lovely chapter. I love Daddy Severus : he is so sweet.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh, I will never let this go. This has been a three year project and has seen me through all the major changes in my life, lol. It's my baby! Thanks so much for the review, I love Daddy Severus, too! See you next chapter, I hope!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Don't worry : the one who will succeed to help me reading isn't born yet.
This story is so sweet! I can't wait to read more of it!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Aww thanks! I can't wait to write more of it! lol... Thanks so much for the review! Hope to see you next chapter!
I love the story! Great plot with a good writing style too.Living relatives . . . what the?I think a chapter from Jessica's POV would have to be extremely well written to be pulled off. I've read some other fics from the point of view of a child, and they were sometimes downright annoying. I would suggest establishing Jessica's character more fully before doing a chapter in her POV. Or maybe that would be the best way to establish her character. Who knows?Looking forward to your next update!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks so much for the review! I definitely value my reader's input and I'll take into account keeping any chapter written in Jessica's POV not annoying. lol... Thanks again!
Interesting how the girls take defense for Severus, not that he needed it but it still please someone when his abilities are recognized. Now I have to wait, not too long I hope, for the next chapter to read.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Hermione and Blaise had obviously argued about him confronting Snape before and she has her reasons for choosing to believe in him. Luna, she's so interesting, isn't she? But anyway, the next chapter should be up within the week. Thanks so much for reviewing!
“Oh? May I ask what is, then?”“You may ask, but I don’t have to answer.”That is so SeverusStill looking for his newly adopted daughter out of the corner of his eye [...] He walked to the sniffling girl and picked her up easily. [...] wiping her tears softly with his thumbAnd all that is so sweeeeet. You know it was hard to imagine Severus beeing kind to someone but actually it's getting easier each word you write that I read. Thank you.PS : this deserves 7 stars at least to my opinion ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, you're too sweet! When I set out to write this, Severus was not meant to settle into the role of caring father so easily, but the muse was determined to see him so —and who am I to deny the muse? Thanks so much for the review!
Severus is enjoying her company, isn't he. That's so nice and so unexepected regarding his feelings when he learnt he had to adopt a child. Now he has to make a new encounter with Hermione and get to know and love her and everything will be perfect. *grin* *big sigh of satisfaction*. Well I stop here my stupidities and I go read the two next chapters. Thanks for all your writings.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Yes, he certainly -though undoubtedly unexpectedly- is... He's not quite over the bridge into fatherhood yet, though. He has much to learn! Thanks for the review!
Fab chapter!
I feel a smidgen sorry for Blaise... but not really *grin*
I look forward to your next chapter!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I think everyone might feel sorry for Blaise by the time the reason for his anger toward Snape is revealed.... I look forward to the next chapter too *looks expectantly at her wonderful beta* Thanks for the review!
I can't wait to find out if Severus decorated, or if he had help. I'd love to think that it was Severus' hidden sweet side.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus did not change his quarters at all, except to add a bedroom and bathroom for Jessica. I don't believe I actually explain the decor of her rooms, but I'll keep it in mind for future reference... Thanks so much for the review!
<i>The unusual pair soon reached the hidden entrance to Severus’ chambers (the whereabouts of which shall remain unnamed). Severus muttered the incantation (the words to which cannot be revealed) to expose the entrance door.</i>I love this!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, I was half tempted to pull the cute bits out of that sentence, but I enjoy them being there. It's just the right amount of silly that this fic needs! Thanks so much for the review!
It's cute. I'm surprised to see Severus' behavior towards the kid : he really acts like a father and considering his experience (or lack of it) it's good news for the next. I suppose we'll meet Hermione again in the next chapter, and her child of course ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus is trying very hard to be a good boy, lol.... I've taken the route that he's gotten so tired of being alone, that he's not going to screw up his first chance at someone actually enjoying his company. Hermione will come into the picture in Chapter Five. Thanks so much for the review!
I reviewed this yesterday, but it apparently got deleted when the server crashed. So far I like this story line: it's a novel idea and that's refreshing. I know you can't tell me if i'm right, but I think Hermione will end up adopting the little sister of the child Severus chose.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Alas, no, I cannot tell you if you're right, nor would I be able to even if I could... *twinkle* lol, thanks so much for the review!
I very much look forward to the next chapter!
I'm kind of guessing that Hermione is going to get the younger of the two syblings... and they're gonna get together... on Hermione's insistance or something.
Even if I'm wrong I look forward to reading the outcome!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol thanks for the speculation and the review! I love hearing what people think of this little fic!
OOOO good start!!! You got me hooked!! Can't wait to read more.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I can't wait to write more! *grin* Thanks so much for the review!