Chapter Four
Chapter 4 of 12
Delayed PoetThe new Minister of Magic has a major issue on his hands: orphans from the Great War. He has enacted the Adoption Act and Severus isn't exempt. Follow Severus down his path into parenthood and those who (attempt to) help him along his way.
ReviewedChapter Four
The rest of the month of July as well as most of August passed in a blur. Severus slowly began to adjust to having Jessica living with him.
It was an early Monday morning, and Jessica was fast asleep. Severus sat in one of his black armchairs and watched the fire as it glowed purple. A letter spat out of it and onto his coffee table. He looked at the letter almost suspiciously, curious as to who would correspond this early in the morning. With an eyebrow raised, Severus reached for it and picked it up. He immediately noticed the Weasley family seal on the back and bit back a groan. He opened the envelope and pulled out a folded parchment.
Dear Severus,
Arthur and I are throwing an end of the summer bash this Saturday and would be delighted if you could come. We'd love to meet little Jessica, as well! If you're not too busy, which I'm sure you aren't, as you always have things prepared in advance, we would love to have you visit us.
I'm sure you'd dread coming, but Remus will also be here. I know you and he have come to some sort of agreeable friendship. Honestly, I won't take no for an answer, so please make this easier on everyone involved and come! Besides, Albus has been invited as well.
Thanking you in advance,
Molly and Arthur
Severus read through the letter once more and groaned.
"What's w-w-wrong, Professor?" Jessica asked through a yawn.
Severus turned to look at the young girl and noticed her ruffled blonde hair and tired green eyes with a slight smile. He beckoned her over to him, and she came. She stood next to his chair and pointed at the letter still in his hand.
"What's that?" she asked.
"This? Oh, this is just a letter from the Minister and his wife."
"Oh. Arthur and Molly? They are really nice."
"You've met them?" Severus raised an eyebrow.
"Yep! They are the ones who brought us here. And they know my Mummy and Daddy. Mummy and Daddy like them."
Meet Jessica, indeed! They met the girl before I did!
"They are throwing a party on Saturday and would like us to join them."
Jessica's eyes lit up. "Do you think Arthur would know where Maria is?"
"Possibly."
Jessica looked thoughtful for a moment. "Can we go, please, Professor?"
Severus sighed. "I shall think about it."
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That night found Severus sitting in an armchair in front of the fire, sipping a drink. There was a small, black, leather-bound book and a quill and ink on the table next to him. His eyes stared unblinkingly into the blazing red and orange flames. There was not a single sound throughout his rooms, and he suddenly wished that Jessica was up and bugging him with questions.
Idly, Severus set his drink down and picked up the book. He muttered a spell, and the bindings loosened. He opened the cover and flipped through the pages, finding the first blank one. He picked up his quill, dipped it in the ink, and began to write.
Jessica has been living with me for about a month now, and I'm surprised to say that I actually enjoy her presence. It seems she hadn't heard anything about me and had no preconceptions about who I am. Her innocence is refreshing.
I was not-so-unbelievably pestered today, by a long list of people, to take Jessica to the Weasleys' party this Saturday. I find it rather amusing that they think I might not go. Ah, but watching them trying to convince me is so amusing, so I shall continue to pretend to be undecided until I can stand their pleas no longer. I wonder, is that sadistic?
I told Minerva that Granger and Weasley broke things off, and she couldn't believe it. She sent a note to Molly, requesting the truth, and Molly replied in earnest, saying that my information was, in fact, true. Minerva did me the favor of telling the rest of the staff, and they all paid up. Now, what to do with the money? I wonder if Jessica likes to fly? I could buy her a broom.
My students weren't right about everything they thought about me. Life dealt me a nasty hand, and I dealt with it the way I knew how...survival. I may have made some not-so-wise decisions, but I have paid my debt to society. Is it not my turn for happiness? In all honesty, I was dreading having a child to come live with me, but Jessica isn't like my students. She asks a lot of questions, but they don't irritate me. Maybe I'm just going soft?
One thing about her that really irks me, though, is the fact that she still refers to her parents as though they're still living. It worries me, and I fear she hasn't accepted their deaths. I don't know what to do to help her through that, and I'm not about to ask Albus or Minerva!
Well, the hour is late, and I have potions ingredients to buy tomorrow.
Severus closed the book and set it and the quill down, resting his head against the back of the chair.
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The next few days flew by quickly, and Saturday morning found Severus sleeping soundly in his bed. His mind suddenly filled with a field of grass with a large black trampoline directly in front of him.
"Come on, Professor!" Jessica appeared in front of him. "Let's jump!"
Severus eyed the trampoline warily. "No, I don't think so, Jessica."
"Oh, come on! Please!" She pulled him to the trampoline with surprising strength for a seven-year-old.
Severus rolled his eyes. "Fine, just let me take my shoes off first."
Jessica giggled as Severus looked down and noticed he wasn't wearing any shoes. Jessica climbed onto the trampoline and motioned for Severus to follow suit. He struggled to climb up as Jessica began jumping. As he tried to stand, he toppled over from a particularly big bounce Jessica had just done. She giggled again and stopped jumping so he could stand up. He stood, then crossed his arms across his chest.
Jessica started rocking on the balls of her feet. "Well?"
"Well, what?"
Jessica rolled her eyes. "Aren't you going to jump?"
Suddenly, Jessica started jumping with vigor.
"PROFESSOR?!"
Severus jumped out of bed, his eyes wide. Jessica was on his bed, laughing hard and clutching her stomach. His blankets and sheets were all over the place.
Severus forced a cold calm into his voice. "What do you think you are doing?"
Jessica stopped laughing and got off the bed. "I'm sorry, Professor. It's just that it's already ten o'clock, and you weren't up yet." The smile fell from her face as she realized that Severus was not happy with her actions.
"So you decided to come into my room and jump on my bed until I woke up?"
Jessica's eyes were downcast, and she was biting her lip. "I'm really sorry, Professor."
Severus sighed. "Go finish getting ready. I'll be out shortly."
Jessica practically ran past him to get out of the room. Severus closed his door, then got into the shower. He got ready, then went into his sitting room to find Jessica sitting on her legs behind the coffee table with a bit of parchment and crayons in front of her. Severus stood silently in the doorway for a few moments, watching her, already having forgiven her for the way she woke him up.
"What are you doing?" His soft voice surprised him.
Jessica jumped slightly, then turned to look at him. He noticed her tear-stained face immediately. She got up quickly with paper in hand and ran to him, enveloping him in a large hug.
"I'm so sorry! I'll never do it again! I promise! Please don't send me back to the orphanage!"
Severus removed her arms from their tight grip around his waist, then knelt down in front of her. She wouldn't look at him.
"Jessica, look at me."
Slowly her eyes turned to his, fresh tears falling down her face. He held her chin in his hand and looked firmly into her eyes.
"I am not going to send you back; I promise. What were you doing?"
A small, hesitant smile graced her face. "Y-you won't?" She sniffled and wiped away her tears
"No, I won't."
"Oh, thank you! Thank you!"
Her arms were around him in a tight hug once again. This time, Severus hugged her back. After a minute she finally let go and handed him the paper. He looked at the picture drawn on it of him, tall with black robes and long, black hair, and her, short with yellow hair and blue robes.
"Why don't you go wash your face, then we'll go?"
Jessica left the room as Severus went to the couch and sat down, staring at the picture. They were both smiling, and Jessica was holding his hand. Their names were written above their respective portraits.
"I'm ready." He hadn't even noticed Jessica come back into the room.
Severus nodded, then stood and went to the fire. He picked up a jar and opened it. He held it out to Jessica.
"Take a pinch, throw it into the fire, and say clearly, 'The Burrow', all right?"
Jessica nodded, then did as he said. Severus followed soon after.
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A/N: I do realize that things are moving quite slow right now, but please bear with me! Hermione will come into the picture next chapter, then the plot will slowly begin to take form, I promise! Also, a big thanks to everyone who has reviewed this story so far! I greatly appreciate everyone's comments!
Chapter polished up on January 29, 2010.
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108 Reviews | 7.84/10 Average
Excellant!!! Loved it... and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see what Molly does next.... how Severus reacts... if Jessica tells him what happened...please please update again soon!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you so much! You're reviews always make me smile!I really want to update soon, but the muse has been very vague about what happens next with Severus and Jessica — she wants to focus on Hermione and Mark. However, I will definitely try to update soon! Thanks, as always, for reviewing!
Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)
That's just as interesting... *nudges muse to get things going*
Wow. Blaise has just blown any chance he might ever have had of being trusted with her! Very intense chapter! *offers your muse chocolate for more*
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Blaise is a little crazed, I know. We'll have to see how Severus reacts, hmm. Thanks so much for the review and the chocolate!
I think that Severus is right! Jessie will be sorted into Slytherin. She is already putting those Slytherin tendencies into practice. Can't wait for the next update.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
thats pretty unrealistic for a 7 year old.. Most seven year olds cannot read that well, and definately would not think about "owling their progress" to a person. You need to remember that most kids only start to learn to read at age 6. I think a little revision might be in order. I do like the story though.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you for the concrit, I really do appreciate it! However, Jessica didn't actually come up with the idea all on her own. Molly's been whispering in her ear and there's a very good reason that she's playing matchmaker. And there are many children who learn to read earlier than age 6. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I do hope you continue to read!
I read this story while walking on my treadmill. It is absolutely brilliant! I need more!
Great chapter... glad RL finally let up enough for you to be able to update!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh thanks! RL if still crazy, but it's settling down. I can't wait to get the next chapter to you all! It's finished, just needs to be sent to my beta. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I am so happy to see an update to this wonderful story, I hope you will let us see chapter ten real soon:-) I cross my fingers for the hearing, and hope that you will not let anyone remove Jessica from Severus, it will break both their harts. I would love to see a glimpse of Hermiones boy too, so far we have only had him mentioned by name, it would be nice to know a little bit more about him. Keep writing and update soon!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh I hope you can see chapter ten soon too! It's already finished, I just need to find a way to get it to my beta. It really would destroy them, if I separated them, wouldn't it? That would be really mean of me. I don't know if Mark will appear in this story at all, but his part in this storyline will become apparent before too long. I'll keep writing and I hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
Wow. I love this story line. There aren't many fics of Severus and a child. You're doing a great job, keep it up.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, thanks so much! I really have struggled with this story, trying to make it realistic enough. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I'm so glad to see this! This is a very sweet chapter. Poor Jessie, having to be so afraid she'll lose her new family. I look forward to the next chapter when it's ready!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
I'm so glad it's finally up! Jessie's a terrific little girl, I think she'll find a way to work out any situation. If I can ever get the next chapter (which is finished) off my laptop and onto a computer with internet, I will be a happy person! Thanks for the review!
Sweet chapter and i hope that Severus does keep Jessie in his custody. Go, Sev, go! And for the love of Merlin, learn how to braid the girl's hair! heehee!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I would have to be very cruel to take her away, wouldn't I? Hmmm. Well, Severus really hasn't decided if he's going to let Hermione teach him to braid hair... I'm trying to prod him, but he's a very stubborn man. Thanks so much for the reivew! Hope to see you next chapter!
Oh, I really want Jessie to stay with Severus. Thanks for the chapter.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
It would be terribly mean of me to separate them, wouldn't it? Thanks for the review!
So glad you're back. I just thought you let this go. Very lovely chapter. I love Daddy Severus : he is so sweet.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh, I will never let this go. This has been a three year project and has seen me through all the major changes in my life, lol. It's my baby! Thanks so much for the review, I love Daddy Severus, too! See you next chapter, I hope!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Don't worry : the one who will succeed to help me reading isn't born yet.
This story is so sweet! I can't wait to read more of it!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Aww thanks! I can't wait to write more of it! lol... Thanks so much for the review! Hope to see you next chapter!
I love the story! Great plot with a good writing style too.Living relatives . . . what the?I think a chapter from Jessica's POV would have to be extremely well written to be pulled off. I've read some other fics from the point of view of a child, and they were sometimes downright annoying. I would suggest establishing Jessica's character more fully before doing a chapter in her POV. Or maybe that would be the best way to establish her character. Who knows?Looking forward to your next update!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks so much for the review! I definitely value my reader's input and I'll take into account keeping any chapter written in Jessica's POV not annoying. lol... Thanks again!
Interesting how the girls take defense for Severus, not that he needed it but it still please someone when his abilities are recognized. Now I have to wait, not too long I hope, for the next chapter to read.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Hermione and Blaise had obviously argued about him confronting Snape before and she has her reasons for choosing to believe in him. Luna, she's so interesting, isn't she? But anyway, the next chapter should be up within the week. Thanks so much for reviewing!
“Oh? May I ask what is, then?”“You may ask, but I don’t have to answer.”That is so SeverusStill looking for his newly adopted daughter out of the corner of his eye [...] He walked to the sniffling girl and picked her up easily. [...] wiping her tears softly with his thumbAnd all that is so sweeeeet. You know it was hard to imagine Severus beeing kind to someone but actually it's getting easier each word you write that I read. Thank you.PS : this deserves 7 stars at least to my opinion ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, you're too sweet! When I set out to write this, Severus was not meant to settle into the role of caring father so easily, but the muse was determined to see him so —and who am I to deny the muse? Thanks so much for the review!
Severus is enjoying her company, isn't he. That's so nice and so unexepected regarding his feelings when he learnt he had to adopt a child. Now he has to make a new encounter with Hermione and get to know and love her and everything will be perfect. *grin* *big sigh of satisfaction*. Well I stop here my stupidities and I go read the two next chapters. Thanks for all your writings.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Yes, he certainly -though undoubtedly unexpectedly- is... He's not quite over the bridge into fatherhood yet, though. He has much to learn! Thanks for the review!
Fab chapter!
I feel a smidgen sorry for Blaise... but not really *grin*
I look forward to your next chapter!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I think everyone might feel sorry for Blaise by the time the reason for his anger toward Snape is revealed.... I look forward to the next chapter too *looks expectantly at her wonderful beta* Thanks for the review!
I can't wait to find out if Severus decorated, or if he had help. I'd love to think that it was Severus' hidden sweet side.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus did not change his quarters at all, except to add a bedroom and bathroom for Jessica. I don't believe I actually explain the decor of her rooms, but I'll keep it in mind for future reference... Thanks so much for the review!
<i>The unusual pair soon reached the hidden entrance to Severus’ chambers (the whereabouts of which shall remain unnamed). Severus muttered the incantation (the words to which cannot be revealed) to expose the entrance door.</i>I love this!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, I was half tempted to pull the cute bits out of that sentence, but I enjoy them being there. It's just the right amount of silly that this fic needs! Thanks so much for the review!
It's cute. I'm surprised to see Severus' behavior towards the kid : he really acts like a father and considering his experience (or lack of it) it's good news for the next. I suppose we'll meet Hermione again in the next chapter, and her child of course ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus is trying very hard to be a good boy, lol.... I've taken the route that he's gotten so tired of being alone, that he's not going to screw up his first chance at someone actually enjoying his company. Hermione will come into the picture in Chapter Five. Thanks so much for the review!
I reviewed this yesterday, but it apparently got deleted when the server crashed. So far I like this story line: it's a novel idea and that's refreshing. I know you can't tell me if i'm right, but I think Hermione will end up adopting the little sister of the child Severus chose.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Alas, no, I cannot tell you if you're right, nor would I be able to even if I could... *twinkle* lol, thanks so much for the review!
I very much look forward to the next chapter!
I'm kind of guessing that Hermione is going to get the younger of the two syblings... and they're gonna get together... on Hermione's insistance or something.
Even if I'm wrong I look forward to reading the outcome!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol thanks for the speculation and the review! I love hearing what people think of this little fic!
OOOO good start!!! You got me hooked!! Can't wait to read more.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I can't wait to write more! *grin* Thanks so much for the review!