Chapter Six
Chapter 6 of 12
Delayed PoetThe new Minister of Magic has a major issue on his hands: orphans from the Great War. He has enacted the Adoption Act and Severus isn't exempt. Follow Severus down his path into parenthood and those who (attempt to) help him along his way.
ReviewedChapter Six
As Severus approached the group, he noticed the amazed stares they were giving him. He glared, not liking the attention his relationship with Jessica was getting him. An oblivious Jessica struggled out of his arms and went looking for Maria again. Still glaring, Severus sat back down in his seat.
Suddenly, Ginny started giggling. Eventually she was laughing so hard, she was clutching the sides of her protruding belly.
Severus glared more profusely. "What, pray tell, is so amusing?" he asked, his voice holding a deadly tone.
"She c-calls y-you Prof-fessor!" Ginny managed to get out between her laughs.
Though embarrassed, Severus showed no outward sign he cared.
"Your point?" Severus asked coldly.
Ginny tried to sober up, though it took a moment for it to happen.
"It really shouldn't surprise me," she said after a moment. "You know, Severus, at first the thought of you being a parent made me nervous, but after seeing you with Jessica..." Ginny paused and smiled at him. "It just surprises me that you and she get on so well, yet she still only calls you Professor."
Severus didn't know what to say to that, so he kept quiet, his face blank.
"We can never truly replace the children's families, but we can try," Arthur said in a quiet voice, breaking the silence.
"Too right, Minister Weasley!" a cheerful voice said, and Severus jumped ever-so-slightly.
Severus had not noticed the twinkling Headmaster arrive with Minerva. It was a wonder he had made it all those years as a spy when he couldn't even sense when someone was approaching. Arthur stood up, a wide smile on his face. They shook hands.
"I was wondering when you would get here," Arthur noted as they sat down.
Albus smiled. "We were held back by several trivial issues," he explained with a wave of his hand.
Severus raised an eyebrow, but did not say anything.
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As the night continued on, Severus found the company to be tolerable. While he would not willingly put himself through the torture of socializing with said tolerable company, he found that he did not mind it as much as he had expected he would.
Dinner had been a loud affair, and Severus made sure to stay out of the limelight, preferring to sit back and observe those around him. It was a skill he valued above most others and had been an important part of his previous role as Dumbledore's spy. It did not take him long to recognize those who were tense and those who were relaxed...those who wanted attention and those who, like him, preferred to stay in the background. He immediately mentally filed them into each category, for lack of anything better to do.
After dinner, Severus felt obligated to stay, but managed to slip away as soon as he could. He promised Jessica that she would be able to see Maria when the older sister seemed very melancholic at the thought of leaving. He felt justified in telling her as much, knowing that he intended to allow her to do so anyway. He deftly ignored the irritable pang he felt in his chest at the girls' teary good bye and glared at the look he knew the Headmaster was giving him.
If there were one thing the Headmaster could not be if he wanted to, it was subtle. And the not-so-subtle hints that he should have taken Maria in as well were really beginning to grate on his nerves. While Jessica wasn't a complete terror, Severus had a nasty feeling that Maria would be a nightmare and detrimental to his health and the state of his rooms.
No, it was bad enough he'd had to take one child in; he would not succumb to taking in the girl's sister as well.
Now if that bloody pang would leave him be...
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Severus considered himself to be a reasonable man. While he knew he was short-tempered and impatient by nature, he liked to think he'd developed a certain amount of control over the years...which was why he was currently very frustrated with the direction things were going in the situation he now found himself unable to avoid.
It was three days before the start of term, and Miss Granger had come to prepare for her impending occupation, if it could be called that. He was not sure baby-sitting was an acceptable job for someone who was renowned for being an over-achieving know-it-all. Unfortunately for him, it seemed, two other former students of his returned for a visit with Miss Granger.
Severus resisted the urge to pinch the bridge of his nose in irritation at the conversation he certainly did not care to hear, as he would prefer to be in the near-solitude of his private rooms. Unfortunately for him, when he heard his name being spoken amongst his three former students, he had to fight for control over his actions. It would have been much easier had the context in which they were talking of him been different.
After taking a moment to compose himself and plaster his usual sneer upon his face, he turned to the small group of former students. The glare he sent them rivaled those he usually reserved for Mr. Longbottom. He stalked toward them, his air exuding power and authority.
"Is there a problem?" his silky voice asked, laced with venom.
Miss Granger paled slightly while the young man just glared back at him, and the other young woman looked up at him with an eerily thoughtful look on her face.
"Yes, Professor, there most cert..."
Whatever his former student had been about to utter was cut off from a barely concealed elbow to the ribs. He raised an eyebrow at Miss Granger, then turned back to the young man. If Blaise Zabini had something to say to him, then far be it for him to stop the former Slytherin.
He noticed the look of warning Miss Granger sent Mr. Zabini, but also knew that if a Slytherin had set their mind to do or say something, no Gryffindor could stop him or her. Unless, of course, they were Tom Riddle and looking to take over the world. Never mind the technicalities, though.
"Yes, Mr. Zabini?"
The young man sneered at Severus. "You," he began, a finger pointing toward Severus' chest. "You took in a child. An innocent. The things you have done, seen. How could you even think you are fit to care for a child? You will only taint the poor girl."
Miss Granger looked aghast, and the other young woman frowned slightly.
"Blaise! You promised you wouldn't do this!"
Severus kept his face skillfully blank.
"I can't stand back and allow this to happen, Hermione! You know that! It's bad enough the poor child lost her parents and is separated from her sister! Why should she have to be stuck with Professor Snape? Can you tell me that, Hermione?"
Mr. Zabini's eyes were blazing, and the normally quiet Slytherin seemed ready to explode.
"You promised, Blaise." Miss Granger's voice was soft in the aftermath of Mr. Zabini's outburst.
A slightly eerie voice broke in, saying, "I happen to think the Professor would be excellent with little Jessica. I knew her parents, and they kept her well disciplined. I'm sure Professor Snape will have no problem keeping her disciplined, and I have faith that she will show him how to care. I think they are good for each other."
Severus raised an eyebrow at the very unexpected defense to his ability to care for Jessica. He always knew that Ravenclaws were renowned for their intelligence, but he had never put much merit to this one's ability. Not only did she always seem a bit out there, but whenever she spoke, she sounded as though the words were coming from another world entirely. In any event, he was mildly grateful for her confidence in him, not that he needed people's confidence, but it was nice to know someone thought him capable.
"Why, thank you, Luna," Hermione said in a level voice, her eyes never leaving Mr. Zabini's. "I definitely agree with you. While I do worry about his patience with such a young girl and for her when she matures, I think he's more than able to care for the darling girl."
The other eyebrow rose up to join the first as he observed the group that seemed to have forgotten his presence, but far be it for him to correct that.
"Fine," Mr. Zabini said stiffly, "but when that poor girl comes running to you, crying about how absolutely cruel Snape is, remember that I told you he is unfit!"
And with that, the younger Slytherin stormed away, leaving Hermione fuming behind him, Luna seemingly holding back a chuckle, and Severus with his eyebrows nearing his hairline.
"Thank you," Severus started silkily, "for that wonderful display. If we are finished here, I have some business to attend to. Miss Lovegood, Miss Granger."
Without waiting for a response, Severus stormed off, trademark robes billowing behind him. When he entered his rooms, he found Jessica curled up in a large chair, an open book fallen haphazardly on the ground. He couldn't help but stare at the small form of the innocent child. She was a remarkable young girl, he had to admit, and he found himself wondering if Blaise was right and that, somehow, by taking care of her, he might taint her. Merlin forbid.
* * *
The start of term found Severus watching through a window as the carriages, led by the thestrals he had been able to see most of his life, came up the hill leading to the gates of Hogwarts. There was already chattering in the Great Hall, as most of the staff plus the small children were already situated. They had set up a table in front of the staff table for the young children, making sure there was still room for the first-years to be sorted. He made sure Jessica was sitting so that they could easily see each other. He didn't want her causing any trouble after all. With a sigh, Severus took his usual place at the staff table and waited as the noise of the returning students grew.
Severus watched, amused, at the looks on the faces of the first-years and younger children as the first-years were sorted. Certainly those with older siblings who had already gone to Hogwarts would have told them awful stories of the absolutely impossible tasks one had to do to be sorted into the houses. And those that were Muggle-born, well, they had probably thought up all the horrible things, themselves. The imagination was a crazy thing when it didn't know what to expect.
Albus stood and gave his usual pre-feast nonsense speech. The feast was, as usual, spectacular. It seemed that every year, the house-elves wanted to do better than they had the year previous. He wasn't complaining, though. No, if there was one thing he definitely did not mind at Hogwarts, it was the excellent cuisine. After the food, Albus gave a slightly more serious speech, during which he explained what most of the students already knew: that there would be younger children present and that they were not to be harassed. Well, those weren't the exact words he used, but that was what he was saying. When Albus excused them to their dormitories, Severus stood, went to Jessica, and led her out of the Great Hall, thinking that this year was definitely going to be a different one.
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A/N: First, I want to give a great big hug, thanks, and cookies to my beta, Soul Bound, who has helped me so much in correcting my pitiful attempt at writing! Also, thanks to everyone who has reviewed! I love it! Please keep reviewing, it fuels the muse!
Chapter polished up on January 29, 2010.
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108 Reviews | 7.84/10 Average
Excellant!!! Loved it... and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see what Molly does next.... how Severus reacts... if Jessica tells him what happened...please please update again soon!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you so much! You're reviews always make me smile!I really want to update soon, but the muse has been very vague about what happens next with Severus and Jessica — she wants to focus on Hermione and Mark. However, I will definitely try to update soon! Thanks, as always, for reviewing!
Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)
That's just as interesting... *nudges muse to get things going*
Wow. Blaise has just blown any chance he might ever have had of being trusted with her! Very intense chapter! *offers your muse chocolate for more*
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Blaise is a little crazed, I know. We'll have to see how Severus reacts, hmm. Thanks so much for the review and the chocolate!
I think that Severus is right! Jessie will be sorted into Slytherin. She is already putting those Slytherin tendencies into practice. Can't wait for the next update.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
thats pretty unrealistic for a 7 year old.. Most seven year olds cannot read that well, and definately would not think about "owling their progress" to a person. You need to remember that most kids only start to learn to read at age 6. I think a little revision might be in order. I do like the story though.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you for the concrit, I really do appreciate it! However, Jessica didn't actually come up with the idea all on her own. Molly's been whispering in her ear and there's a very good reason that she's playing matchmaker. And there are many children who learn to read earlier than age 6. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I do hope you continue to read!
I read this story while walking on my treadmill. It is absolutely brilliant! I need more!
Great chapter... glad RL finally let up enough for you to be able to update!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh thanks! RL if still crazy, but it's settling down. I can't wait to get the next chapter to you all! It's finished, just needs to be sent to my beta. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I am so happy to see an update to this wonderful story, I hope you will let us see chapter ten real soon:-) I cross my fingers for the hearing, and hope that you will not let anyone remove Jessica from Severus, it will break both their harts. I would love to see a glimpse of Hermiones boy too, so far we have only had him mentioned by name, it would be nice to know a little bit more about him. Keep writing and update soon!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh I hope you can see chapter ten soon too! It's already finished, I just need to find a way to get it to my beta. It really would destroy them, if I separated them, wouldn't it? That would be really mean of me. I don't know if Mark will appear in this story at all, but his part in this storyline will become apparent before too long. I'll keep writing and I hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
Wow. I love this story line. There aren't many fics of Severus and a child. You're doing a great job, keep it up.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, thanks so much! I really have struggled with this story, trying to make it realistic enough. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I'm so glad to see this! This is a very sweet chapter. Poor Jessie, having to be so afraid she'll lose her new family. I look forward to the next chapter when it's ready!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
I'm so glad it's finally up! Jessie's a terrific little girl, I think she'll find a way to work out any situation. If I can ever get the next chapter (which is finished) off my laptop and onto a computer with internet, I will be a happy person! Thanks for the review!
Sweet chapter and i hope that Severus does keep Jessie in his custody. Go, Sev, go! And for the love of Merlin, learn how to braid the girl's hair! heehee!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I would have to be very cruel to take her away, wouldn't I? Hmmm. Well, Severus really hasn't decided if he's going to let Hermione teach him to braid hair... I'm trying to prod him, but he's a very stubborn man. Thanks so much for the reivew! Hope to see you next chapter!
Oh, I really want Jessie to stay with Severus. Thanks for the chapter.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
It would be terribly mean of me to separate them, wouldn't it? Thanks for the review!
So glad you're back. I just thought you let this go. Very lovely chapter. I love Daddy Severus : he is so sweet.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh, I will never let this go. This has been a three year project and has seen me through all the major changes in my life, lol. It's my baby! Thanks so much for the review, I love Daddy Severus, too! See you next chapter, I hope!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Don't worry : the one who will succeed to help me reading isn't born yet.
This story is so sweet! I can't wait to read more of it!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Aww thanks! I can't wait to write more of it! lol... Thanks so much for the review! Hope to see you next chapter!
I love the story! Great plot with a good writing style too.Living relatives . . . what the?I think a chapter from Jessica's POV would have to be extremely well written to be pulled off. I've read some other fics from the point of view of a child, and they were sometimes downright annoying. I would suggest establishing Jessica's character more fully before doing a chapter in her POV. Or maybe that would be the best way to establish her character. Who knows?Looking forward to your next update!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks so much for the review! I definitely value my reader's input and I'll take into account keeping any chapter written in Jessica's POV not annoying. lol... Thanks again!
Interesting how the girls take defense for Severus, not that he needed it but it still please someone when his abilities are recognized. Now I have to wait, not too long I hope, for the next chapter to read.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Hermione and Blaise had obviously argued about him confronting Snape before and she has her reasons for choosing to believe in him. Luna, she's so interesting, isn't she? But anyway, the next chapter should be up within the week. Thanks so much for reviewing!
“Oh? May I ask what is, then?”“You may ask, but I don’t have to answer.”That is so SeverusStill looking for his newly adopted daughter out of the corner of his eye [...] He walked to the sniffling girl and picked her up easily. [...] wiping her tears softly with his thumbAnd all that is so sweeeeet. You know it was hard to imagine Severus beeing kind to someone but actually it's getting easier each word you write that I read. Thank you.PS : this deserves 7 stars at least to my opinion ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, you're too sweet! When I set out to write this, Severus was not meant to settle into the role of caring father so easily, but the muse was determined to see him so —and who am I to deny the muse? Thanks so much for the review!
Severus is enjoying her company, isn't he. That's so nice and so unexepected regarding his feelings when he learnt he had to adopt a child. Now he has to make a new encounter with Hermione and get to know and love her and everything will be perfect. *grin* *big sigh of satisfaction*. Well I stop here my stupidities and I go read the two next chapters. Thanks for all your writings.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Yes, he certainly -though undoubtedly unexpectedly- is... He's not quite over the bridge into fatherhood yet, though. He has much to learn! Thanks for the review!
Fab chapter!
I feel a smidgen sorry for Blaise... but not really *grin*
I look forward to your next chapter!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I think everyone might feel sorry for Blaise by the time the reason for his anger toward Snape is revealed.... I look forward to the next chapter too *looks expectantly at her wonderful beta* Thanks for the review!
I can't wait to find out if Severus decorated, or if he had help. I'd love to think that it was Severus' hidden sweet side.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus did not change his quarters at all, except to add a bedroom and bathroom for Jessica. I don't believe I actually explain the decor of her rooms, but I'll keep it in mind for future reference... Thanks so much for the review!
<i>The unusual pair soon reached the hidden entrance to Severus’ chambers (the whereabouts of which shall remain unnamed). Severus muttered the incantation (the words to which cannot be revealed) to expose the entrance door.</i>I love this!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, I was half tempted to pull the cute bits out of that sentence, but I enjoy them being there. It's just the right amount of silly that this fic needs! Thanks so much for the review!
It's cute. I'm surprised to see Severus' behavior towards the kid : he really acts like a father and considering his experience (or lack of it) it's good news for the next. I suppose we'll meet Hermione again in the next chapter, and her child of course ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus is trying very hard to be a good boy, lol.... I've taken the route that he's gotten so tired of being alone, that he's not going to screw up his first chance at someone actually enjoying his company. Hermione will come into the picture in Chapter Five. Thanks so much for the review!
I reviewed this yesterday, but it apparently got deleted when the server crashed. So far I like this story line: it's a novel idea and that's refreshing. I know you can't tell me if i'm right, but I think Hermione will end up adopting the little sister of the child Severus chose.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Alas, no, I cannot tell you if you're right, nor would I be able to even if I could... *twinkle* lol, thanks so much for the review!
I very much look forward to the next chapter!
I'm kind of guessing that Hermione is going to get the younger of the two syblings... and they're gonna get together... on Hermione's insistance or something.
Even if I'm wrong I look forward to reading the outcome!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol thanks for the speculation and the review! I love hearing what people think of this little fic!
OOOO good start!!! You got me hooked!! Can't wait to read more.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I can't wait to write more! *grin* Thanks so much for the review!