Chapter Five
Chapter 5 of 12
Delayed PoetThe new Minister of Magic has a major issue on his hands: orphans from the Great War. He has enacted the Adoption Act and Severus isn't exempt. Follow Severus down his path into parenthood and those who (attempt to) help him along his way.
ReviewedChapter Five
Severus stepped out of the fire at the Burrow with flawless grace. Jessica was standing next to the fireplace, waiting patiently for him. Just then, a very delighted Molly Weasley bustled into the room, a wide smile on her chubby face.
"Oh! I'm so glad you've finally arrived!" She pulled Jessica into her arms in a motherly hug. "Someone's been asking about you."
Severus looked at Molly suspiciously as Jessica pulled away from her embrace and looked at her with bright eyes.
"Who?" she asked with excited curiosity.
"Oh, I think you'd much rather see who than be told." She then turned to Severus. "May I?"
In a moment of possessiveness, Severus took one of Jessica's small hands into his much larger one, then motioned for Molly to lead the way. Molly gave him a slightly calculating look, though her smile never faltered. She led them through the kitchen, where the once Golden Trio were sitting, the tension in the room palpable, to the back door and out into the back yard.
Molly walked them over to Arthur Weasley, his back to them. Severus caught a snip of the conversation Arthur was having with a seemingly invisible somebody.
"She'd want you to eat them," Arthur said, trying to reason.
"I want my Jessie!"
Jessica's hand slipped quickly from Severus' grasp, and just as the young toddler came into view, Jessica yelled her name.
"Maria!"
The toddler jumped off the chair she was sitting on and ran the few steps into Jessica's arms.
Severus immediately noticed the tears running down Jessica's cheeks.
"After you left, Arthur and I discussed it and decided to take Maria in." Severus had forgotten Molly was even there until her soft voice broke into his thoughts.
"That was kind of you, though I don't quite understand what, exactly, that has to do with me."
"I wouldn't worry on it too much, Severus. In due time you will understand."
With that, Molly walked away, leaving Severus to ponder her hidden meaning.
"Ah! Severus," Arthur said to him, drawing him away from Molly's cryptic comment. "How are you?"
"I am well enough, considering," Severus noted wryly.
"Ah, things not going so well with Jessica, then?"
"No, Jessica is not the problem."
"Oh? May I ask what is, then?"
"You may ask, but I don't have to answer."
Before Arthur could form a response, a weak-looking Remus joined them. Jessica and Maria had run off somewhere; Severus suspected the garden area and convinced himself not to worry. Still looking for his newly adopted daughter out of the corner of his eye, Severus idly sat with Remus and Arthur.
The two men in his company began talking, so Severus gave them his attention.
"Are there any new developments?"
Arthur looked forlornly at Remus. "I'm sorry that there aren't. I am trying, though."
Remus took a steadying breath. "I know you are. I just want to do my part!"
Severus had an idea of what they were talking.
"I'm sorry, Remus, and I'm sure I don't need to explain that they aren't eager to place a child in the care of someone that turns into a werewolf once a month, regardless of how kind, generous, and noble they may be otherwise."
"What of the Wolfsbane?" Severus asked.
Arthur sighed. "They aren't willing to consider because of what could happen should something go wrong."
Severus snorted. "Why am I not surprised? I'm still looking into it, Remus."
"That is encouraging," Remus said sincerely, though there was fire in his eyes.
"You know," Arthur began with a smile in Severus' direction after a few moments of silence, "Ginny has been studying medicinal potions in her spare time."
Severus snorted. "I wasn't aware she had any spare time, what with three children and one on the way."
"What?" Arthur looked confused. "She only has two children."
"No, I definitely consider her husband to still be a child." Severus smirked as Remus chuckled.
"Thank you for your assessment of my husband's maturity, Professor."
Severus turned slightly to see the young Mrs. Ginevra Potter standing there with a small, strawberry-haired girl on her hip.
"On that note, have you adopted a child yet, Professor? I believe the deadline is the first of September." Her lips were quirking in amusement, though there wasn't any accusation or condemnation in her question.
"Why, yes, I have," Severus responded in a seemingly challenging way.
"Charming," a dry voice cut into the conversation. "Who has had the ultimate misfortune of being in your permanent care?"
Severus smirked. Harry Potter had decided to join his wife and newly adopted daughter.
"Her name happens to be Jessica Augustus. She's quite respectful. Must be because of her wonderful upbringing. She had very loving parents." It was a cheap shot, he knew it, but he hadn't been able to resist. Harry Potter brought out the negative in him.
Harry's eyes flashed, and he had just opened his mouth to respond when his red-headed, hot tempered friend, followed closely by his bushy-haired one, ran up to the getting-larger-by-the-second group, interrupting him.
"Ron! Please! Please just hear me out before you jump to conclusions!"
Ron turned to Hermione as the rest of the group looked between the two. Hermione opened her mouth, but Ron beat her to it.
"He betrayed us, Hermione! He betrayed you!" Ron spat furiously.
"No, Ron! He did what he had to do to stay alive! He fought with us to the end! He killed his best friend to save your sister! I would think you could get over the fact that he joined them, considering he was on our side the whole bloody time!"
Severus was curious as to whom they were talking, but listened with the rest of the group.
"Maybe I just still love you." Ron's voice was pathetically soft and full of vulnerable sincerity.
Instead of tearing up, as Severus fully expected her to do, Hermione became furious, her eyes flashing dangerously.
"Don't you dare throw that in my face, Ronald! In case you forgot, you decided to end things! I'm moving on with my life...with Blaise!"
Ron looked ready to blow, Severus noticed amusedly, but before he could, the young Mrs. Potter deftly stepped in.
"Hermione, I have something inside I really need to show you," Ginny said and pulled Hermione away before she could even think to protest.
Ron watched them, fuming.
"Ron?" Harry ventured tentatively.
The ticking bomb exploded. "The nerve of her! We haven't even been separated for four months, and she's already with Blaise Zabini! A Slytherin! A Death Eater, no less!"
Severus felt the need to interrupt his misguided rant.
"Blaise Zabini was a spy for Professor Dumbledore. It would do you well to remember that."
Ron glared resentfully, then stormed off. Harry followed dutifully.
Arthur sighed, and Severus turned back to see him rub his forehead.
"You were telling me about your daughter's venture into medicinal potions?" Severus offered softly.
"Yes, yes. It turns out she was helping to find a cure for Hermione's newly adopted boy."
"What is the problem?" Remus asked curiously.
"Well, it seems he has severe allergies to the sun, not too different from those of a vampire."
"Does the Zonlicht Serum not help?" Severus asked, his attention focusing on the conversation now that the trio had disappeared.
"It does, but only for a very limited time. Mark, that's his name, can only be in the sunlight for a few minutes, even under the influence of the Serum."
"And is Mrs. Potter attempting to enhance it?"
"Something along those lines. When she found out she was pregnant, she stopped going to the lab, so I'm not sure where she is in her research."
"As a matter of fact," Ginny had returned, once again alone, "I may have finally had a breakthrough in my research. I have to run things by the team still, and there are many tests to be run, but the research looks very positive."
"Is there anyone else with that condition?" Remus asked, his eyes slightly cloudy.
Ginny frowned. "Not alive. This condition is extremely rare, and those who get it only have an expected lifespan of seven, maybe eight years."
"And how old is Miss Granger's charge?"
Ginny looked gloomy. "He's already six years old."
"Did Hermione know him beforehand?"
"Yes. Mark's a half-blood, and his mom was a good friend of her family."
"How does it look for him?" Severus asked, trying to get a full understanding of the situation.
"Well, compared to the files from previous cases, his is really bad, and it's amazing he's still alive." Ginny sat down and sighed. "I just wish there was more I could do!"
The group grew quiet, and Severus' mind was reeling. He was happy. His newly adopted daughter was more than bearable, and he now had a project...two things he could look forward to after a long, dreadful day of teaching. This feeling was foreign to him, but he decided not to worry about it. He wondered if he should feel guilty for being happy.
Severus looked up to see a young girl covered in mud running to him, crying.
"Professor!" Jessica cried. "Davey pushed me and was laughing about it!"
Severus stood, his wand already out. With a flick of it, the mud covering Jessica disappeared. He walked to the sniffling girl and picked her up easily. She clung to his neck and wrapped her short legs around him as best she could.
"Where is he?" Severus asked softly, wiping her tears softly with his thumb.
Jessica pointed toward the back garden, and Severus walked in that direction, balancing Jessica on his hip. He turned the corner to find a rather amusing scene.
A young boy, Severus guessed about ten years old, was glaring defiantly at an irate Percy Weasley.
"There are rules that you must follow, David Saunders!"
"You aren't my father, you traitor!"
Mr. Saunders proceeded to step on Percy's foot, causing Percy to howl in pain, and then he ran off. Jessica was giggling softly in his ear, her tears finally receding.
"Oh! Professor! I'm terribly sorry about him! We've tried so hard to get him to come to terms with everything that has happened and all the change!" Percy's wife, Penelope, cried out.
"Be sure this does not happen again, Mrs. Weasley."
Penelope nodded furiously. "Yes, sir."
Severus nodded slightly at her, then turned, with Jessica still hanging onto him, to head back to the group.
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A/N: Reviews, as always, are loved and appreciated!
Chapter polished up on January 29, 2010.
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108 Reviews | 7.84/10 Average
Excellant!!! Loved it... and I can't wait for the next chapter! I wanna see what Molly does next.... how Severus reacts... if Jessica tells him what happened...please please update again soon!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you so much! You're reviews always make me smile!I really want to update soon, but the muse has been very vague about what happens next with Severus and Jessica — she wants to focus on Hermione and Mark. However, I will definitely try to update soon! Thanks, as always, for reviewing!
Response from JTBJAB (Reviewer)
That's just as interesting... *nudges muse to get things going*
Wow. Blaise has just blown any chance he might ever have had of being trusted with her! Very intense chapter! *offers your muse chocolate for more*
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Blaise is a little crazed, I know. We'll have to see how Severus reacts, hmm. Thanks so much for the review and the chocolate!
I think that Severus is right! Jessie will be sorted into Slytherin. She is already putting those Slytherin tendencies into practice. Can't wait for the next update.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, definitely. She's a clever little girl, for sure! Thanks so much for the review! The next chapter should be up by the end of the week.
thats pretty unrealistic for a 7 year old.. Most seven year olds cannot read that well, and definately would not think about "owling their progress" to a person. You need to remember that most kids only start to learn to read at age 6. I think a little revision might be in order. I do like the story though.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thank you for the concrit, I really do appreciate it! However, Jessica didn't actually come up with the idea all on her own. Molly's been whispering in her ear and there's a very good reason that she's playing matchmaker. And there are many children who learn to read earlier than age 6. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I do hope you continue to read!
I read this story while walking on my treadmill. It is absolutely brilliant! I need more!
Great chapter... glad RL finally let up enough for you to be able to update!!!
I can't wait until the next chapter!!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh thanks! RL if still crazy, but it's settling down. I can't wait to get the next chapter to you all! It's finished, just needs to be sent to my beta. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I am so happy to see an update to this wonderful story, I hope you will let us see chapter ten real soon:-) I cross my fingers for the hearing, and hope that you will not let anyone remove Jessica from Severus, it will break both their harts. I would love to see a glimpse of Hermiones boy too, so far we have only had him mentioned by name, it would be nice to know a little bit more about him. Keep writing and update soon!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh I hope you can see chapter ten soon too! It's already finished, I just need to find a way to get it to my beta. It really would destroy them, if I separated them, wouldn't it? That would be really mean of me. I don't know if Mark will appear in this story at all, but his part in this storyline will become apparent before too long. I'll keep writing and I hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
Wow. I love this story line. There aren't many fics of Severus and a child. You're doing a great job, keep it up.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, thanks so much! I really have struggled with this story, trying to make it realistic enough. Hope to see you next chapter! Thanks so much for the review!
I'm so glad to see this! This is a very sweet chapter. Poor Jessie, having to be so afraid she'll lose her new family. I look forward to the next chapter when it's ready!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
I'm so glad it's finally up! Jessie's a terrific little girl, I think she'll find a way to work out any situation. If I can ever get the next chapter (which is finished) off my laptop and onto a computer with internet, I will be a happy person! Thanks for the review!
Sweet chapter and i hope that Severus does keep Jessie in his custody. Go, Sev, go! And for the love of Merlin, learn how to braid the girl's hair! heehee!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I would have to be very cruel to take her away, wouldn't I? Hmmm. Well, Severus really hasn't decided if he's going to let Hermione teach him to braid hair... I'm trying to prod him, but he's a very stubborn man. Thanks so much for the reivew! Hope to see you next chapter!
Oh, I really want Jessie to stay with Severus. Thanks for the chapter.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
It would be terribly mean of me to separate them, wouldn't it? Thanks for the review!
So glad you're back. I just thought you let this go. Very lovely chapter. I love Daddy Severus : he is so sweet.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Oh, I will never let this go. This has been a three year project and has seen me through all the major changes in my life, lol. It's my baby! Thanks so much for the review, I love Daddy Severus, too! See you next chapter, I hope!
Response from snitchette (Reviewer)
Don't worry : the one who will succeed to help me reading isn't born yet.
This story is so sweet! I can't wait to read more of it!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Aww thanks! I can't wait to write more of it! lol... Thanks so much for the review! Hope to see you next chapter!
I love the story! Great plot with a good writing style too.Living relatives . . . what the?I think a chapter from Jessica's POV would have to be extremely well written to be pulled off. I've read some other fics from the point of view of a child, and they were sometimes downright annoying. I would suggest establishing Jessica's character more fully before doing a chapter in her POV. Or maybe that would be the best way to establish her character. Who knows?Looking forward to your next update!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks so much for the review! I definitely value my reader's input and I'll take into account keeping any chapter written in Jessica's POV not annoying. lol... Thanks again!
Interesting how the girls take defense for Severus, not that he needed it but it still please someone when his abilities are recognized. Now I have to wait, not too long I hope, for the next chapter to read.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Hermione and Blaise had obviously argued about him confronting Snape before and she has her reasons for choosing to believe in him. Luna, she's so interesting, isn't she? But anyway, the next chapter should be up within the week. Thanks so much for reviewing!
“Oh? May I ask what is, then?”“You may ask, but I don’t have to answer.”That is so SeverusStill looking for his newly adopted daughter out of the corner of his eye [...] He walked to the sniffling girl and picked her up easily. [...] wiping her tears softly with his thumbAnd all that is so sweeeeet. You know it was hard to imagine Severus beeing kind to someone but actually it's getting easier each word you write that I read. Thank you.PS : this deserves 7 stars at least to my opinion ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Awww, you're too sweet! When I set out to write this, Severus was not meant to settle into the role of caring father so easily, but the muse was determined to see him so —and who am I to deny the muse? Thanks so much for the review!
Severus is enjoying her company, isn't he. That's so nice and so unexepected regarding his feelings when he learnt he had to adopt a child. Now he has to make a new encounter with Hermione and get to know and love her and everything will be perfect. *grin* *big sigh of satisfaction*. Well I stop here my stupidities and I go read the two next chapters. Thanks for all your writings.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Yes, he certainly -though undoubtedly unexpectedly- is... He's not quite over the bridge into fatherhood yet, though. He has much to learn! Thanks for the review!
Fab chapter!
I feel a smidgen sorry for Blaise... but not really *grin*
I look forward to your next chapter!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I think everyone might feel sorry for Blaise by the time the reason for his anger toward Snape is revealed.... I look forward to the next chapter too *looks expectantly at her wonderful beta* Thanks for the review!
I can't wait to find out if Severus decorated, or if he had help. I'd love to think that it was Severus' hidden sweet side.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus did not change his quarters at all, except to add a bedroom and bathroom for Jessica. I don't believe I actually explain the decor of her rooms, but I'll keep it in mind for future reference... Thanks so much for the review!
<i>The unusual pair soon reached the hidden entrance to Severus’ chambers (the whereabouts of which shall remain unnamed). Severus muttered the incantation (the words to which cannot be revealed) to expose the entrance door.</i>I love this!!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol, I was half tempted to pull the cute bits out of that sentence, but I enjoy them being there. It's just the right amount of silly that this fic needs! Thanks so much for the review!
It's cute. I'm surprised to see Severus' behavior towards the kid : he really acts like a father and considering his experience (or lack of it) it's good news for the next. I suppose we'll meet Hermione again in the next chapter, and her child of course ;)
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Severus is trying very hard to be a good boy, lol.... I've taken the route that he's gotten so tired of being alone, that he's not going to screw up his first chance at someone actually enjoying his company. Hermione will come into the picture in Chapter Five. Thanks so much for the review!
I reviewed this yesterday, but it apparently got deleted when the server crashed. So far I like this story line: it's a novel idea and that's refreshing. I know you can't tell me if i'm right, but I think Hermione will end up adopting the little sister of the child Severus chose.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Alas, no, I cannot tell you if you're right, nor would I be able to even if I could... *twinkle* lol, thanks so much for the review!
I very much look forward to the next chapter!
I'm kind of guessing that Hermione is going to get the younger of the two syblings... and they're gonna get together... on Hermione's insistance or something.
Even if I'm wrong I look forward to reading the outcome!
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
lol thanks for the speculation and the review! I love hearing what people think of this little fic!
OOOO good start!!! You got me hooked!! Can't wait to read more.
Response from Delayed Poet (Author of Parenthood: Ready or Not)
Thanks! I can't wait to write more! *grin* Thanks so much for the review!