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One Who Is Loved
Soul Bound221 Reviews | 8.39/10 (221 Ratings, 0 Likes, 36 Favorites )
A series of 100 word snapshots, telling the story of Severus and Hermione's daughter from their points of view.
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Soul Bound
Member Since 2006 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 103 | 203 Reviews Written | 378 Review Responses
I'm 22, happily unmarried and happily enrolled in the University of my somewhat limited choice... I read constantly and write whenever I have the chance to do so. I sing, I work, I sleep, and I enjoy bickering with my awesome family. That is all.
PS: DMHP. Always.
Reviews for One Who Is Loved
I've been following through all 31 chapters... I love the fact that these are snippets. It leaves so much to the imagination!
Thanks for fun...will potter/snape/malfoy families finally come together?
Yeah, if dumbass Adonis would get his head out of his butt he'd realize his date is quickly losing interest.
I think Amanda should find her own entertainment. Maybe there's a Longbottom to have some fun with.
Keep up the good work!
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Thanks, I'll try!
LOL, poor Severus indeed. And poor Amanda!
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Sympathy all around, I think. lol
I have been reading your story, and I like it. It is a cute story. Good work.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Thanks for reviewing! :D
Poor Severus...if my own experience is anything to go on, he probably doesn't really want to know how long Amanda has been wearing a bra even if she doesn't have a whole lot to put in it! Odds are that she's been wearing one for at least a year, if not longer. Unfortunately, if he thought this was bad, he really doesn't want to know what's next!
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Hehe... I know. Can't you just imagine his reaction to overhearing her complain that she's on her period? *snorts*
These snippets of life have the taste of real life. I like them.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Thank you!
Oh, the tears are welling in my eyes. I feel terrible for him, but he does have to realize that she's growing up.
I'm almost hoping you'll surprise us and she'll marry Draco's son LOL!
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
As tempting as that is... I don't think it would bother Severus nearly as much. lol Poor guy, I love to torture him...
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
It is fun to make him squirm a bit.
Poor Severus...
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Yup. Too much information...
What a great story this is so far. It seems like my own girls have grown up just that fast I look forward to reading what happens with the new Golden Trio
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
I hope you won't be disappointed, thanks!
Oh no! LOL, not only does he have to deal with a Potter, but a Weasley too?
Now I really feel bad for him.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
I really need to stay on top of these reviews... lol Seems a bit late, but thanks for your steady stream of support! :D
Haha, brilliant. “Don’t be ridiculous, Hermione. Why would I… HE’S HUGGING HER!” -Made me laugh so much.:D
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
lol, I'm glad. Thanks!
LOL, oh that's hilarious! I think I would have to agree with Amanda.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Lol, thanks. Yeah, I just know she would be able to see right through him. Thanks for reviewing so often, you rule!
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
No, you rule! I'm really enjoying this so very much. It's just enough to see what their family life is like and how much Severus cares for his daughter, with not so many words.
That's not easy to do, but you have done so here. I look forward to each chapter.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Thanks. I really don't know where these are coming from. Maybe they are the expression of my inner wish of what my relationship with my own father was like. That's probably true, since I named Amanda after myself. I just know I love writing them and I find myself with a fuzzy feeling at the thought of Severus loving his daughter so much. I wrote the first part, on its own, several months ago, to be an expression of Severus and Hermione's realtionship. But somewhere along the way, the focus shifted to his relationship with Amanda. I try to keep Hermione involved, though. Hopefully people aren't too bothered by me ignoring her as much as I have here. lolThanks again!
~Amanda
Really enjoy these drabbles. Looking forward to seeing what happens when she gets a bit older. lol
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Stick with me and you will! Thanks for reviewing!
Very nice. She has to realize she's his student in class, not just his daughter.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Yes, but somehow I don't think he'd be able to bring himself to deduct points, even though she's a Gryffindor. lol
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
Yeah, that's now. I think by the time she's a 4th or 5th year his tune might change.
What sweet little stories...thanks
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Thank you!
That's so funny and soooo sweeeet and so funny, and so funny, and so funny. Really I like this. I've read the story in one time laughing alone (I think my neighbourg believes I'm totally crazy). You know that since chapter 5 when Sev' was so proud of his baby daughter and chapter 6 when Herm's "pitied the poor fool who tried to come between them" I'm wondering what he'll feel when Amanda will have a boyfriend or will marry someone. Then I read chapter 7 and I really want to know how he will react when he'll understand that his so beloved daughter has fallen in love with his son's ennemy. Please don't make me wait too long
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Good call. Yep, I'm about as opaque a waterv... lol
I like reading about Severus' relationship with is daughter. It's different and it allows you to do something else with the character.
I thought she'd be sorted into Slytherin, but I guess being a Gryffindor will serve as a better plot device, especially if poor Sev is having problems accepting a certain young Potter in the picture.
Poor Sev.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Yes, James Potter was the main reason I put her there. You have me figured out... lol Don't tell... ;)
Response from ancientgirl (Reviewer)
Mum's the word!
While Severus may have excelled at the art of subterfuge during the War, he's not fooling anybody at all now -- in this instance, he's as easy to read as a book. He might not want to admit it even to himself, but it's as clear as the nose on his face that he decided to resume his post as Potions professor so that he can keep an eye on his precious little girl -- she really has him wrapped right around her finger, doesn't she? I think it's sweet that Severus is such a softie where his daughter is concerned...
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Yep, I couldn't help myself. I love daddy!Severus too much. lol
And watching after her and that James Potter had nothing to do with it either. LOL.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
My goodness. You people keep calling my story before it's even been posted. LOL I'm either very predictable or you're very observant, or both. Kudos to you, and thanks for following along, and for reviewing! :-)
Oh how sweet! Little girl getting excited and daddy getting nervous. Yep just like mine. My daughter went to secondary school (7th grade upwards) and my hubby was having coniptions about his baby in the big bad world, boys, drugs, detention, sex education, the list went on and on. His last words were..." Any problems baby and daddy will come sort it out for you." I'm feeling nauseous just thinking about it! Brilliant snapshots though.Blessings
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
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Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Lol, that's too funny. I don't even know where these drabbles are coming from... what is it about some men and their daughters? It makes you want to roll your eyes and melt into a puddle all at once... :D
While Amanda asks a lot of questions just like her mother, it's becoming more and more apparent that she's very much Daddy's Little Girl. After all, even if her first word wasn't quite "da-da", she was referring to him! Wonder how Severus will react if and when she's Sorted into Gryffindor rather than Slytherin! She really doesn't seem like the devious type who usually winds up in the dungeons -- and the last chapter certainly demonstrated that she can be a bit impulsive and reckless, which seem to be common Gryffindor traits!
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Yup, she's definitely a daddy's girl. No way around that one. lol And that was observant of you to figure she's going to be in Gryffindor. That part is coming soon and you'll see Severus' reaction. Thanks!
Awww, I feel bad for Severus. His little girl is growing up.
Just so you know, you have an extra "to" at the end there.
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Me too. lol
Thanks for letting me know, I fixed it. :)
These drabbles are fantastic so sweet and funny. I like how you've taken everyday events and made them special. Also I think the pink hair is possible - Didn't Harry turn his teacher's wig blue before he went to Hogwarts? Big Hugs
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
lol, I had to put in the pink hair, whether it made sense or not. So I'm glad it worked... It's the ultimate sacrifice for Severus... :D
Teeeheee... I don't blame him one bit! :)
Response from Soul Bound (Author of One Who Is Loved)
Nor I! lol