I enjoyed your literary license...Sometimes we don't need to see the follow through...I can read that his hair went pink and finish the scene in my mind, I feel fairly confident in my minds Snape that he would not go out of the house with pink hair.Is this series done? If so, it was nice...I'm not normally a fan of fluffy stuff, but while this was fluffy, your characters were not...and that is why for me this was extra enjoyable.

Hilarious! Yes, she did not get Snapes nose, but did inherit Hermione's inquisitiveness! Although, I would imagine a young Snape being similar to that as well.

I have never liked a fluffy, warm, and fuzzy Snape. However, I have never doubted that when presented with his own child Snape would be awestruck and the little scene you have here is just perfect, I love it.

This is cute, but it's maddening.  I have dial-up connection to the internet, and it is taking me longer to download each chapter than to read it. 

Perhaps I shall finish it when I am visiting someone with that real fast acable connection.  It is sweet, thouth, just so long to load each snippit.

Because James like every boy his age is too stupid to admit first to himself then to you that he's in love with you. I'm not sure he even knows it already.I was afraid you had dropped this si I'm very glad you're back.

I read through your chapters, and I loved each of them, laughed at a few, agreed with quite a few and looked upon some as hints for the future.  How do you condense it all down so neatly and succinctly?  You possess a great skill to present something so complex and revealing in something so small... I can only liken it to all those petals hidden within a rosebud.  Thoroughly enjoyed them all... I will look out for more beautiful insights and snippets.  Thank you for sharing these. 

I really feel that this has evolved organically from the toothsome and fluffy onset, to the far more evocative prose that we're reading now.  The change and pubescent angst coupled with the nurturing, protective role of the parent is brilliant.  I love how the fierce protective Severus is being almost overwhelmed by his emotions and the fact that the worries are really playing on his psyche.  Brilliant writing SB!  Blessings

Uh, oh! Those awful pangs of not being needed any more. Even if it is just for the littlest of things. Poor Severus.

this is excellent.... i'm so glad u've started updating it again

I am *really* enjoying this series of drabbles you have going. I haven't been reviewing after every update, but I wanted to make sure I do so every so often so you know people are reading and loving it!

I am also glad that you are updating again.  I look forward to James' punishment from both Snape and his daughter.  Heaven knows she won't let him get away with that behavior.

wow!!!!! thank God u u[pdated this at long last!!!!! was despairing that u'd abandones it...please update this sooner now.....really love it

wow!!!!! thank God u u[pdated this at long last!!!!! was despairing that u'd abandones it...please update this sooner now.....really love it

It's been a while? I was afraid you had let this go.I'm glad you arent'. Hope for more soon. And by the way This is delighted and so fun. Thank you

Oh those were adorable! You wrote Snape perfectly, ever watchful and suspecting, and, in this case, an overly-protective father.Loved it,Sue:o)

Oh, please don't tell me you gave up on this drabble series.  It was just getting good.  I found that I couldn't keep up with my reviews, and I apologize.  This is a great series please finish it.  Of course this series could take years to finish now that Amanda is in school.  Shoot at this point you could write your own Hogwarts series.  There are so many talented fanfic writers, this includes you, that if JK wanted to she could sell rights to produce further serial books about Hogwarts.  I could see Hogwarts becoming like Starwars and Startrek book series.  So many possibilities.  Please finish this drabble series.  I miss it.

At least he realizes how stupid he was, and took the punishment he deserved.

Oh that is perfect. It is so likely too. My friend's son's first words were "Damnit!" so I just see the baby calling her daddy by his first name.

Just catching up here. Hahaha... That was good for Adonis, the little git. Still going great. :)

I dont like anyone named potter!

although i must admit... it was clever that combination of spells...

-karlamarie 

Oh, I don't like James.  LOL, just like I don't like Harry's father James. 

Hmm, looks like James is about to get his revenge.  I liked seeing what all three kids thought about the situation.  Good chapter.

Interesting chapter.  Nothing like making a girl feel "used".  More soon please.

What a place to leave off at! More, more, we want more!

you can't just stop the story right now ! it's cruel. Every author is an EVIL. Every time the story begins to become really interesting (not that the rest wasn't, don't misunderstand me ) you, the authors, seemed to be forced by an unknown evil monster to put a cliffie. It's quite boring. could you just stop doing that ? I really appreciate. Now I want to say that the chapter is so brilliant. These three POV are so funny especially the last one. A lovestory also contains a third person. You said you were trying something and it seemed you've succeeded. Congratulations