What a fancinating story. I have just read it for the first time and must compliment you on a job well done, I look forward to see more of this story. I am very satisfied with how you present the caracters; First of all Molly, very nice to see you present her as a smart and clever woman in stead of the meddeling busybody so many fic's present her as. I am also very satisfied with your Harry, I firmly belive that he must have some brain and ability to see behind the lines for him to one day being the one to take out the Dark Lord.  There is only so much you can count on luck to achieve. Your Ron, well, since he was under the imperious curse I shouldn't blame him for being an idiot, but then again what he did against Hermione was pretty bad and even though I am pleased with you giving him a brain too, I am not completely able to forgive him.  Then we have Hermione:  I am  happy that you present her as more "human" than many stories, but you are at times rather close to present her as ignorant, unpolite, thickhedded and rather unable to think logical. I guess you probably want to present a Hermione who is able to fail just as anyone else, and that is great. But so far you have let her fail at almost every turn and more likely to be a burden towards the final battle than someone able to contribute with something good. The Hermione you present so far is not very likely to end in a romantic relationship with a grown man as Severus, but I noticed that romance is not mention among the genres describing this story, so I am probably asuming wrong thinking of them as a couple. The plot is great though,  bringing Narnia into the HP-fanfiction world is brilliant and I do look forward for your updates.

Molly meets up with some guy and marries him -- arthur? ron and hermione are saved from the enemy by molly. hermione approaches snape. i bet that she's the one dumbledore wants to take care of snape.

I am jumping into this fic just now but I feel compelled to leave a review because I love the way you are writing this. Some thoughts:

- The concept of sacrifice - it is a very, very important thing in fantasy writing, and was used by many including the Master (JRRT), and his friend whose writing you are incorporating into this story - I like it very much, especially because it has not been used often in fanfiction. JKR herself touches upon this with HP's mother, but I always disliked that this was never expounded upon. Well done!

-Molly - I am eternally grateful you have decided to write her as a competent witch. A woman can choose to remain at home and raise a family, but this does not mean she has mush for brains, nor that she doesn't have any skills - it is a perfectly valid choice, just like having a career, there is no difference, so am very thankful you've gone down this path - you have kept her in character, while touching upon her skills as background, which is great in my book, because you enhanced her character while not really changing her.

- The boys also seem more intelligent and mature, something which often lacks in many fanfics, while Hermy is made out to be a genious thus superpowering her, and underpowering them in a way - lovely ballance in your writing, which brings us to Hermy who I think is very real here, not some Super!Hermy which I personally do not like as they tend to be rather lacking in believability - again well done.

- Lovely Dumbles, just how I have always seen him - this is just like something he would do. In all honesty, while I know JKR will not bring him back, I do wish that she goes this way in the sense of Snape/Dumbles relationship because honestly both have made the sacrifice.

- Lastly, Snape - ultimate sacrifice indeed, because he does sacrifice himself, perhaps even more than Dumbledore at that point in time. Also, you are writing him very well indeed (the touches of humor are nicely done, nothing over the top, and quite Snapish - I rather enjoy them). You are carring on the theme of sacrifice really nicely.

- ah yes, I forgot - wonderful, wonderful work with arithmancy - I was thrilled to see what you've done with it. I do believe this is probably the first time I've seen this take on things, and I've read many a fic, and very, very ingenious my dear!

So, much thanks, fully intend to keep on following this. Never mind that it's your first fic, you are doing wonderfully and it is a pleasure to read - do not anyone tell you any differently. Thanks again, looking forward to more!

I like the way you are weaving this story.

Snape won't be pleased with her.    It will be interesting to see how she gets herself out of this one.

Waiting for more. 

fabulous concept...the interweaving of cs lewis and potterverse.  i especially like the way you handle arithmancy.  thanks and i look forward to further chapters.

The Arithmancy equations were quite fascinating.

Hermione really is biting off more than she can chew at the moment! First the impossible Arithmancy equation, then rummaging in Snape's stuff. I hope she won't choke. Or get hexed into next year, even if she deserves it.I look forward to reading more.

Yay! Old Dumbkedore -erm, Albus- is up to his tricks again... oh bother.

Love the idea of Albus' sacrifice saving his own life.

Interesting story.  Looking forward to the next part.

I'm rather enjoying this pleasant little story.  Thanks!

For reference purposes, you've left one comment in yet.  "It was Ron’s turn to blush, and he stammered, 'Th-thank you, Professor.' I put the h there because when you stutter out ‘thank’ you stutter on the first sound or the last sound-which would be ‘th,’ not ‘t.’ Just a thing with me, lol."

Interesting chapter. There are still some beta-comments floating in the text though. Might want to check it again.

oh no! dumbledore has gone!

I love the story so far, but what happened to Dumbledore?  Evil author... leaving us on a cliffie like that!  ;)Looking forward to more great story telling... Cheers!

I don't know what happened, but this is a repost, isn't it? The review that I have left for the first post was deleted, so I thought I'd let you know I appreciate your story.

"Back to the Future: A Magical Approach to Time by Dr. Emmett Brown"?!?  ROTFLMAO!

i really do enjoy this! and harry was right, ans hermione was wrong! go harry!but everyone thinks he's mental, just like they thought of lucy...

I love this story already.  Such a creative parallel you're drawing, especially with Edmund/Snape, and Dumbledore's sacrifice!<>  *scuttling off to read chapter two*

Gads, another cliff hanger! I like the lines you are drawing between "The Lion, the Witch, and the Wordrobe" and the Harry Potter story. Very interesting theories you are throwing out here....hummm...you make us think. JKR had said in one of her interviews when asked about Dumbledore's death that Dumbledore was not going to be a "Gandalf and come back to life. She said that dead is dead. Yet Voldemort was suppose to be dead and yet was not. Harry should have been dead but survived. So, unless she is confused about her own line of thinking, she may not have Gandalf in mind, but that doesn't mean that there could be some other "life" for Albus. Besides, the pheonix is his symbol is it not?

Oooh, is this where you start giving hints about what's going on with Ron? Or is he about to encounter Hermione and do something unforgivably stupid causing her to shove him down the stairs and break his neck?Hope to see more of this soon!

Hi,The first chapter was really good, I really loved the analogy between Dumbledore/Aslan death. I liked the fact that it's Harry voting for Snape. That in itself was tricky, not because I don't think he could not, because I'm sure He could if it's mean Dumbledore was still alive. So, here I was reading a good fic and than..... well, it became a bit ridiculous. The thing with Ron. Don't take it badly, but if you're going to write a comedy or a parodie you should say it ! Not Mystery/Suspense, Drama, Action/Adventure. Because there is those who read everything and those who read everything apart for the parodie, lol. It was, well, I guess I was just disapointed.Bye ByeMaeve

Though you'd explained the bit of not-speaking hostility in the previous chapter, there's something else to have caused Ron to go on a 'Mudblood' comment.Relevant, perhaps?

Until you brought this up, I never even thought to notice the connection between "The Lion..." and HPB.  Superb!  And the fact that the Lion (or rather, Griffin) is the animal form of Gryffindor of which AD was a student, is another excellent point.Funny as well as insightful.  “It’s funny as long as it’s not you!” - for those of us growing up (or having grown up) with siblings, it's quite accurate.Very nice point made.

Whoah!  Hello, earth to Ron!  So, who put Ron under the influence of...well, something.  The blank look.....but obviously nobody caught it because they thought he was just being a git again.  As much as I like the premise of the story, the reactions we're seeing, from Harry and Hermione especially, are very OOC.  You'd think that after Ron hexed himself trying to defend Hermione from Malfoy calling her a mudblood that it's the last thing he'd say.....and everyone around him would know that.Not flaming....just saying.  I am interested to see where this goes.

This certainly has an original take on Harry's reaction after HBP with the right hints, a role reversal with the Snape-might-be-good stance usually given to Hermione.Ron definitely deserved his comeuppance, although I'm kinda hoping he was right about someone putting him under Imperio. This is the boy who ended up spitting slugs when he tried to hex Malfoy for calling Hermione the same thing.Eagerly waiting to see where you take this.