love it....

Arthus arrived home at the wrong time!! Suprise know protection, was abe to hold voldmort from the burrow.. wondering the background story of what missing & that we don't know about.. Love the suspense of the plot...

Love dogeball as a kid!! great chapter: like  severus are teaching the kids learning how to be a fighters.. wish more stories has the kids learning how to fight & the mind games, too!!

love molly's personality: only know she was a powerful witch, cool she a figher( knowledge as a nfrom Arthur). She woukd made a goodcurse breaker!!

Love the plot: it's just beginning to heat up.... Great writing!!

Onward to read what next!!

Fantastic, this story has had me on the edge of my seat, i hope you update soon, can't wait to read more chapters. xxx

What is your fav. CS Lewis book? just have to ask because it seems like you've read them all.

the latin word is correct according to my crazy latin professor...we studied it last spring. Crazy language but fun to know sometimes.

Treebeard!  :D  (who says that first quote in your little bit at the end ;))

Let me guess Inuyasha? :P

I also love the idea of weaving this into Narnia...please update soon!

I am glad to have discovered that PP is ahead of Ashwinder on this story, as I needed a "fix."  These sites all provide a much more satisfying conclusion than DH - and so many different ways of finishing the story.  I'm really enjoying yours, particularly as I am also a huge C.S. Lewis fan (and had already noticed a tinge of Aslan's resurrection in Harry's return from the dead in DH - the pure sacrifice that conquers death - a lovely, lovely concept).

This is not the Snape we know at all, but I am very willing to buy your proposal that much of the "greasy git of the dungeons" was simply an act, so I look forward to getting to know your version of the real man - and having Hermione meet him, as well.

Do press on - I for one am very interested in seeing where you are headed.  

I truly hate to quote Dickens but here goes " More please. May I have some more?" Great story. Waiting with bated breath for additional chapters. Thanks 

Thank you so much for the update, I am so glad to see that you are still writing on this wonderful fic! I loved the way you showed us another face of Trewlany, that was a brilliant twist. Keep writing and update again soon!!!

Oh! I hope they save Arthur and Molly!!! Damn pesimistic Snape! This fic is wonderful and I am beside myself waiting for more . . . (so, technicaly, there are two of us waiting! *lol*)

Please have Hermione find a cure to help Molly and Arthur. Not only because I think Severus should have to "eat" his words about her intelligence and the way he (and others) have treated her, but you owe it to her after all the down-putting you have let her go through so far in your story. And if you have Severus involvement in the cure, it should be by helping her based on her instruction and ideas, not as the one who steals the "glory" and she is just "a helping hand to his command".  I am still a bit miffed about Harry and Ron too, the way they were laughing of her when Severus had her tied  up was not reactions of true friends. Seems like the one-for-all-all-for-one only applies if the boys are one of the "ones". I would find it quite hard to forgive them, considering they "sided" with one of the persons they hate most in the world when making fun of her. But, most of all, a well written chapter, I do look forward to the next update (even if I complains every now and then:-))

That's progress, calling each other by their first names, even if they do occasionally lapse.

Keep up with the inventive spells/objects! 

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it! I am so worried about Sev and everyone at the Burrow right now. I hope that your personal issues resolve so we can get a new chapter soon.

Thank you for the update, a nice chapter. I would have loved to see what Hermiones and Prof. Vectors Arithmancy equation predicts, but I guess you are saving that for another day:-) I also hope that there is a way to destroy the Horocrux without destroying the original floorplans of Hogwarths, those plans is a part of history one shouldn't loose. (but, if needed to get rid of Voldemort....)I look forward to the next chapter, an attack at the Burrow and Severus cover being blown are the recipt for an interesting turn of the story!

Panda - because they're black and white, and are bears but are really gentle, and are endangered?

Thank you for the update.

Great chapter.

Hermione tickled with mind solving probelms..

wonder how ron/harry are doing...

waiting for more. 

BoB is a pretty nifty invention!

I'll have to investigate why Snape's Patronus is a panda, presuming that the next chapter isn't out before I get round to it.

Hope your personal issues have cleared up... I'm willing to wait for more. 

Thanks for the update. I hope RL and your muse will cooperate on the next chapters.

Yay! Another chapter!