Chapter Four: He Was Never Dead
Chapter 5 of 7
septentrionThe plan to defeat the Dark Lord is put into motion.
ReviewedDisclaimer: see prologue.
Chapter reread numerous times by my beta, Somigliana. She's made it readable
Severus never knew how Granger convinced the Order to search the Death Eaters' properties. Each of them was thoroughly investigated. Luckily, Bellatrix Lestrange's house was the first to be targeted. The female Death Eater was caught off guard and didn't have time to relocate Helga Hufflepuff's cup elsewhere. She herself managed to escape in the nick of time before she was completely surrounded by a vengeful Potter, an irritated Shacklebolt who still remembered how she'd hurt him in the Department of Mysteries, a very determined McGonagall, and a niece Tonks who dreamed of ridding her family tree of evil relatives. She had to run to the courtyard, slipping between two of her assailants, where she could Apparate to the Dark Lord's mansion and inform him about the Order's attack on her house. She had had to leave the Dark Lord's Horcrux behind, a mistake for which she'd nearly paid with her life. It had already been a fortnight since she'd admitted her failure to the Dark Lord, and she hadn't shown any sign of recovery yet.
The Dark Lord himself had gone to Bellatrix's house after the Order left; he could only observe that the cup was missing. Potter had once more succeeded in thwarting his plans. What he didn't know was that Bellatrix's house-elf had been taken by the Aurors. The creature had been "interrogated" until he'd given the location of Voldemort's dwelling. Even Ron, who could be so ruthless sometimes, was horrified at the idea: to get a house-elf to spill his master's secrets, you'd have to torture the creature to death, which was what probably what had happened.
However, the information was useful, and they were going to use it. A plan was hatched to attack Voldemort and to get rid of him for good. Careful preparations were made to counter every known Intruder Charm, to take on Inferi and magical creatures. Everybody had to take part in intensive spells practice and duelling sessions until the attack, which was planned for June.
Hermione, against her logical mind, but in tow with her heart, told Severus everything about the Order's plans. They then hatched their own plan to further the Order's one. It was decided that Severus would dose or spray as many Death Eaters as possible with Sleeping Draught to diminish the resistance. He would also unlock the main door if he could manage it and attack the building's defences from the inside five minutes before the Order's attack, which was planned for one a.m. Before they separated from each other at that last meeting before the battle, he asked her if she intended to take part in the action.
"Of course," she answered. "I can't let Harry down."
"I wish that you would remain behind," he pleaded.
"You know I can't. Would you remain behind if I asked you, Severus?"
"No."
"Be careful, and try to live," were her last words to him. A watery screen shielded her eyes.
"No, you be careful." He showed how important it was to him by hugging her briefly before he left.
The next days were busy ones for Severus: he needed to brew large amounts of Sleeping Draught and to retrieve his Horcrux. The brewing wasn't much trouble; he could do it at Spinner's End. He was, after all, living there alone now. Finding the faux Ravenclaw codex was another matter altogether. He took to wandering in the Dark Lord's mansion under the pretext of "socializing", as was fitting for a Death Eater of high rank. He happened to overhear a conversation between Wormtail and Merchbank, the guardian of the Dark Lord's safe. He hadn't known that his Master owned a magical safe which could only be opened by a password uttered in Parseltongue. The first solution to this problem to open the safe that occurred to Severus' mind was to fetch Potter; definitively not a practical solution. Then he blessed his Muggle heritage: he would use a tape recorder. It took him a few more days to find the opportunity to hide the Muggle device near the safe and two days more of waiting for the Dark Lord to use his safe. At last, Severus had the password on tape; he tried it: it worked. He was now ready for the Order's attack.
On the evening of the twenty-first of June, Severus pretended that he wanted to have a stroll in the park after dinner. His aim was actually to place a few counter-spells on the enchantments that were defending the Dark Lord's property. He found that a bunch of Inferi had been set free, like guard dogs. He dodged them stealthily, but they prevented him from staying as long as he'd have liked in the park.
His next action was to retrieve the codex from the Dark Lord's safe. He used the old radio cassette recorder that he'd inherited from his father to open the door. The Horcrux was simply placed on a shelf with just a Warning Spell on it. Severus undid the spell, took the book, and slipped it in his pocket. It was time for the third part of the plan.
He strolled in the mansion's corridors, discreetly spraying the Death Eaters he met with Sleeping Draught. He counted thirty out of the usual fifty that were constantly present there. That should make the Order's attack very much easier.
Finally, he Disillusioned himself before going back into the park where he opened the gate slightly. The onslaught was scheduled in five minutes.
The rest of the night went by in a blur. The Order's attack was swift and almost brutal. They were a bit detained by the Inferi, but a strong fire sent at them by Moody had them turned to ashes within ten minutes. It was time enough though to raise the alarm and for Voldemort to summon more Death Eaters. If it hadn't been for Severus' treason, the Order would have been quickly outnumbered. In the meantime, Severus wasn't idle and attacked as many of his "co-workers" as he could without betraying himself. Jets of light were flying around him, giving a multi-coloured shine to the night. Smoke was rising from everywhere in the building. It was difficult to distinguish friend from foe.
"Ouch," somebody said after bumping into his Disillusioned form. He recognized the small stature of Alecto. She soon fell to the floor, unconscious. Severus then surveyed the scene unfolding in front of him. He saw Emmeline Vance's brother taunting Amycus, sending red and purple jets of light at the Death Eater, his face screaming for revenge upon his sister's murder. He heard insults being hurled through the room; cries of "Murderer", "Bastard", or "Filth" brushed his ears.
Suddenly, he spotted Hermione. She was battling with Bellatrix Lestrange.
"The Mudblood doesn't know how to play. Don't you know the Dark Lord's rules? Filth like you will be eradicated from our world." She slashed at Hermione with a white spell that had her falling backwards. The young woman didn't waste time to get back on her knees, intending to stand up, but the mad woman clearly had the upper hand. She probably would have killed the young woman on the spot had the rumour that Harry Potter was facing the Dark Lord at the other side of the vast room not reached them. It seemed as if everyone was holding their breath all of a sudden. This, however, lasted only a few seconds, and soon, Bellatrix resumed her duel. "It's a pity I don't have time to torture you, Mudblood. Maybe if you're still alive at the end ..." Hermione wisely kept her mouth shut, but the female Death Eater seemed like she didn't need to be egged on to go on taunting her. She was hardly even deterred by the inhuman howl of her Master when Harry sliced Nagini with a well placed Sectumsempra. Hermione was on her knees now, cradling her bleeding wand hand. Bellatrix raised her wand and pointed it directly at Hermione. "I'll kill you now, filthy Mudblood. Avada Kedavra."
Severus didn't think twice he threw himself on the path of Bellatrix's curse. The green light cancelled his Disillusionment Charm, and both women gasped at the sight of his unmoving body. Rage invaded Hermione, and Bellatrix found herself being brutally thrown against the wall. At the same moment, general panic seized the Death Eaters' ranks at high speed: the unthinkable had happened Harry Potter had destroyed their Lord. Yes, destroyed was the right word: the boy had cast an enhanced form of the Reducto spell on his Nemesis, and what was left of the tyrant was rather ... gory. How Harry had managed to take on the Dark Lord had been lost on Hermione, Severus and Bellatrix, the last two being unconscious.
Many Death Eaters tried to flee, but to no avail. The Ministry had turned up, and the Aurors were efficiently rounding up those who were trying to escape. Very soon, elation and joy replaced battle and curses.
Hermione took no notice of the situation; she was sobbing on Severus' body. "No ... no ... why? Please, Severus, don't leave me." She was so lost in her grief that she didn't see him blink. But she felt him breathe. She looked at his face and saw him watching her, wonderment in his eyes. It couldn't be! She'd seen him take the Killing Curse! Or she thought that he'd taken the Killing Curse. But it was impossible to escape that curse. Her head began to spin, and her logical mind came to the only possible conclusion: he must have been protected by something, an object that he was carrying in his pocket perhaps, and that must have intercepted the curse. In fact, he had never been dead.
Thank you for reading. I didn't expect this story to be that much appreciated. I hope you're still enjoying it.
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33 Reviews | 4.21/10 Average
I certainly hope this is not the end. Although, what a tragic ending.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
No, there's still an epilogue to come, very soon.
Oh, man... say it isn't so? *psst~will it end well?~
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Yes, it is so ... for now. The epilogue is the next chapter, you will then know what their future is.
What a twist at the end! Interesting that he was unrepentant and still so self-centered even while he recognized the possibility of love with her. I really enjoyed this and applaud your characterization of Snape--out for himself until the bitter end.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I loved to write this Snape, so full of contradictions. The epilogue is the next chapter, and will join the queue very soon. Thank you for commenting every chapter.
Oh, man--the Horcrux saved him in the end! This was a very action-packed chapter! And I like how you had them tentatively start to come together. Will there be more of that? *grins in anticipation*
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
They're a bit shy about it, though, aren't they? But I don't think they will have a lot of time to develop a relationship.
Oh, he did it!!! I'm really torn by his action--while I realize his instict for survival is strong, I didn't think he would actually kill. Interesting plot twist! I love how he duped Bellatrix.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Of course this Severus would kill, without remorse to boot. He's more sorry for himself. And Bellatrix seems the kind who can be mislead by too much enthusiasm.
Oooh--prim and proper Hermione made a pact with the devil--and is the devil going to make his own Horcrux? It requires a kill, right? Your story is developing nicely and I need to go see what Severus does next!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Perhaps she isn't as prim and proper as she seems to be **hint: Polyjuice Potion, Umbridge and the centaurs** You're lucky to read the story now, it's nearly entirely published.
Oh, my goodness, Septentrion! This is quite a start--you've drawn a really complex (and not very likable) Severus--lines like, "That’s why Dumbledore was so sure of him; he knew Severus Snape would be where the power was," are really powerful. I'm off to read more and I'm very pleased that I was able to convince you to explore/expand your drabbles!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm so glad you like it, as you were the one to coax me into it. Severus is such a complex character, you can make him as despicable or likeable as you like. Thank you for commenting.
thats not bloody fair
i dont like that chapter its not very fair and i just dont like it!
I want a happy ending, can you tell me if that will happen at least...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Next chapter is the epilogue, so you'll know very soon what will happen. I understand your feeling as a reader - I've written enough of such reviews myself - but I like a bit of angst. Thank you for reviewing.
I'm still so intrigued by your desperate--yet--depressed Severus. You're moving the plot along at a nice pace. The Horcrux-hiding traps were cool!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
A lot of people like my traps, and it pleases me to no end because they have caused me to have a bit of a brain-storming. And what could a desperate Severus do? Glad you're still with me.
Go on...please! Well. It seems that Snape's victim hasn't been killed complety in vain; not that I like what he's done, Snape, not at all. But the young mans death has saved at least two lives and secured the Dark Lord's demise. And nobody but DE's can complain about that. I wonder if Snape realises that he, in fact, owes a junkie, an absolute low life in his opinion, his and Granger's life? His own, at least - but would he have thrown himself in AK's way if he didn't carry the Horcrux? As you describe Snape (and you do that very well!), I'm not quite sure.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
This Snape would never, ever think he owed his life to the junkie he'd killed. He perceived the junkie as a part of a spell, not like a human being - he's horrible, isn't he? And yes, he'd have thrown himself in the curse's way with or without Horcrux. He's a contradiction in flesh. Thank you for commenting.
Very good. It took me until the very end to remember that Severus was carrying his Horcrux, so, of course the Killing Curse would not work. Yeah!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Even if he wasn't carrying his Horcrux, he couldn't die, but it may have helped him to keep his body ;) Thanks for commenting.
The end of this chapter pushes the timeline forward past alot of intervening events indicating only that Snape and Hermione are forming an attachment leading to a post-war relationship. I'm both fascinated and concerned for Hermione becoming involved with the Snape you've introduced here. He's amoral, aiding or betraying either side depending on the perceived benefit to himself, a truly gray!Snape who regards the AK curse as a "long-time friend" and overcomes his brief hesitancy to create a Horcrux. Of course, she was the one who gave him the spell to do it, indicating her own willingness to engage Dark Magic when it fits her purpose. Still, she's less knowledgable, less experienced, less cynical than Snape which definitely tilts the balance in his favor somewhat. I understand that he's also lonely and craves a loyal companion and a normal existence but I'm hoping those needs won't be an easy excuse to turn him into devotedly-in-love!Severus. With this beginning I see the potential for a very interesting story about the politics of relationships which, hopefully, hews a line equidistant between AU fluff and romantic angst. I see a notice that the next chapter is already enqued so I suspect you've decided where you're going. I'll look forward to more and hope I've correctly detected your direction. Tres bon. ~
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you for the thorough comment. I hope I didn't write fluff with this story, it was not my purpose! This Snape is amoral and self-serving, including in his need for a relationship. He does what's necessary to serve his purpose, and if his purpose is to have a steady relationship, well, you can guess he's in for a rather big effort on his part. Hermione doesn't know it, but she has power over Snape.Hermione can be cunning, the idea of brewing Polyjuice in CoS proves it. She can be somewhat ruthless too: her setting off of birds on Ron in HBP is one of her best moments in canon, IMO. I hope you'll like the next chapter as much as this one. BTW the story is finished,so you won't wait for the ending too much.
I'm happy he's not going to betray her and that things are going along well. :) Alas, now I have to wait for the next update! I hope it's soon.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Next chapter will be up tomorrow at the latest. I hope you'll still like it. Thank you for reviewing each chapter so far.
Still interesting. I'm glad they made a pact.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm glad that I've kept your interest.
Red jet of light, eh? Teehee. Good plot here. Moving on to next.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you! Well, I supposed everyone in the fandom knows what a red jet of light is for.
I've finally had a chance to start reading it. I'm curious to see where this goes, but considering that I don't like a Snape that really wanted to murder Dumbledore for his own reasons, I think what he's feeling is a lot less terrible than what he deserves. Hehehe. On to the next.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Well, I like to explore different Snapes, and I'm having a moment when I feel like exploring a dark!Snape. Of course,he deserves his fate, but he doesn't have to like it, and he might want to do something about it. Thank you for reviewing.
poor severus, he had to make a horcrux... i hope he gets his soul back...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Even if he got it back, the piece of soul is severed. Is it possible to mend it? The answer will be somewhere in one of the next chapters.
Oh no...what a horrible thing he has done, Snape. But very credible, unfortunately. I'm sorry for his victim as well as for him, but quite delighted that you keep him in what I consider "in character". Great to hear that your tale will be completed, too. I found it recommended on a site I happened to come across the other day, a very useful one, I think, and I hope that the people managing it won't be angry with me for writing the adress here: community.livejournal.com/hgss_digest/It mentions updates of good stories and you can even find lists of completed and well written stories recommended. It's a great idea - there are lots of stories out there, but only a few really good ones - and they may sometimes be difficult to find for busy people (and picky readers) like many of us.Well, English is not my language, either - but I'm able to tell well written from badly written (though not able to write it very well myself, which may be quite evident reading my reviews!). Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I had the feeling you've seen this story recommended on this site, and I was right. I agree to say it's a very good idea. I don't see anything wrong with your English, and I'm glad you think the same about mine. I most often try to keep Snape "in character", though I'm not again some OOCness when there is a purpose to it, but the only one to do this successfully is Jo herself ;) Next chapter will be submitted soon. Thank you for leaving a comment.
Oh noooooo. I feared that you would make him do this. You can't leave him like that. This sacrifice is too high. Please, make Hermione help him restore his soul.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
What if there isn't a way to restore his soul? Alas, I fear you'll have to wait and see how things go. Thank you for taking time to leave a comment.
I found this story recommended at another site - and I'm very glad that I decided to give it a try - it's quite intriguing and very well written! Another great thing is that it seems to be updated regularly - which I appreciate very much, too; it's so depressing when one's favourite stories are either rarely updated, or worse still: are abandoned completely. It's a writer's right, of course, but a reader's disappointment. I'm looking forward to read on! Thank you for writing and posting it!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Your words warm me so much: to read that my story is very well written, while English isn't my language, is enormous encouragement to me. The story is completed, so no fear of it being abandoned - unless an accident would prevent me from updating. Next chapter is in the queue, it should be up very soon. Thank you very much for reading and taking time to leave a review.PS: out of curiosity, could you tell me where you've seen it recommended? You can send me a private message if you don't want it to appear in a public review.
OOO he might have to make it into his own horcrux, or put the soul of an animal or something inside it...thats my idea anyway...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
You, readers, are very insightful. The answer is in the next chapter, which is in the queue.
the horcurx saves him... very very clever! I aplaud you!
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you! What good would there be in making a Horcrux if he didn't have a use for it?
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!I just wonder if Voldemort would have made a horcrux that would be so easily destroyed.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I believe a Horcrux itself can be easily destroyed, like the diary was. What's dangerous is the hexes and curses put on it to protect it. Dumbledore wasn't harmed by the ring itself, but by a curse protecting it.Thanks for commenting. Next chapter coming soon.
Just discovered this story and I'm very much hooked. Wondering, of course, how Severus is going to get around the fake-Horcrux problem. And if he has to make one... well, THAT's a pretty messy situation... Very suspenseful.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm so glad to have you hooked. Yes, it's a messy situation Severus is in, but he'll find a way around. Seemed that I wasn't very subtle though, I had hoped no one would think of the solution. Thank you very much for your very nice comment.
Would Voldemort be able to tell the difference between a piece of his own soul and someone elses? If he can't, then... and Hermione told Snape how to make a Horcrux... hmmm, interesting. More please!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
You certainly seem ready to draw the right conclusion. More will come soon, probably next week. Thank you for commenting.