Chapter One: Chance Meeting, or Lucky Meeting?
Chapter 2 of 7
septentrionSeverus is given a task by the Dark Lord. He will find on his way Harry, Hermione and Ron
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Severus entered the room where the Dark Lord spent most of his time with his usual silent and gliding gait. He didn't feel particularly happy about being summoned, but it was a reprieve from his dull, everyday life. Perhaps his Lord would tell him something, or give him an assignment that would pull him out of his stupor, that would prevent him from thinking too much about his state of mind.
"My Lord." He bowed to the scarlet-eyed man who was standing near a velvety armchair. "Bellatrix." He nodded to a dark-haired woman standing on the other side of the armchair.
"Severus," the other man greeted him.
"How may I be of service to you, my Lord?"
This was the clichéd question a Death Eater was expected to ask his master when summoned, especially when summoned before such a thin audience.
"Severus, I have a task for you. I need you to retrieve an object, an object that is very precious to me."
Out of the corner of his eye, he saw that Bellatrix glaring daggers at him. It meant that the mission was important, and that she was jealous. It also meant failure would be sanctioned by death. Well, he wasn't depressed enough to serenely consider his own demise, so he paid close attention to what the Dark Lord told him next.
"I suppose that you do remember, Severus, what I have told you about the steps that I have taken to guard myself against mortal death? You and Bellatrix are the only ones who know what it was that I did to ensure my survival, whatever happened." He waited for a sign of acknowledgment from his servant and then resumed. "One of Potter's friends, a Mudblood girl, was spotted near the place where I have hidden one of my Horcruxes. I have therefore checked every location where I put them. I found, to my greatest displeasure, that two of them were missing. Bellatrix guards Helga Hufflepuff's cup, Nagini is quite safe at my side. I need you to retrieve Rowena Ravenclaw's codex from the orphanage where I grew up. It is concealed by a charm amongst the rafters, so that it looks like wood and a part of the roof structure."
The Dark Lord headed towards the hearth, interrupting his speech for a few minutes to answer Nagini's hisses, then took back his place near the armchair and resumed speaking in human fashion.
"The building itself looks abandoned and is protected by Muggle-Repelling Charms. Once inside, do not let yourself be distracted by the female singing that you will hear; it emanates from the paintings of sirens hanging all over the place. If you ever follow their song, you will touch the paintings and be absorbed into them. Climb up the stairs until you reach the door of the attic. You must cut your palm and let it bleed, and only with your hand bleeding will you be able open the door, or else you will be glued to the handle until you die from starvation. Be careful in the attic; I have placed several Runespoors there, and they might have reproduced. Do not kill them, but do not let yourself be bitten either. The codex is hidden near the second rafter on the right. With your still bleeding hand, you will be able to touch the rafter until you find the codex. It will regain its normal appearance then, and you will be able to pick it up. Do not dally and bring it back to me straightaway."
"I'll do as you ask, my Lord," was Severus' answer. Then the Dark Lord turned to Bellatrix; it seemed to be the cue she was waiting for.
"I believe, as I have already suggested to you, my Lord, that it would be more efficient if Severus didn't go alone. What if he's caught in a trap in spite of all your warnings, my Lord? If I were with him, I could help him to get out of it."
His master's eyes were on him. "I believe, Severus, that she has made a good point. What say you? Do you think that you need support to fulfil your mission?"
Severus pondered what his answer would be. He didn't want Bellatrix with him; he was sure that she was plotting to get some harm come his way. She may even be plotting a way to get rid of him permanently; she wouldn't have any more rivals for the Dark Lord's right hand job if that were the case.
"My Lord, those traps that you set are clever, but you know that I am very proficient at this sort of thing. And too much attention could be drawn to us if we both went. Let's not forget that I know the Muggle world rather well, and I have the ability to blend in that Bellatrix, however gifted she is, doesn't have."
"I agree, Severus," the Dark Lord answered. "You will go alone no later than tomorrow."
"As you wish, my Lord." Severus bowed and withdrew. He wanted to smirk at Bellatrix, but the way his master was placed, he would catch his silent taunting.
So Potter was after the Dark Lord's Horcruxes? He would never have thought the boy would be clever enough to be able to find and destroy them and remain alive. Or more probably it was Dumbledore who had found the two which had been destroyed. That would explain that strange black hand of his. He had wondered at the time what had led the Headmaster to come across such a powerful jinx. It had obviously been the Dark Lord's work; only he had the power and knowledge to use such magic. Severus had just never made the connection between his master's Horcruxes and Dumbledore's injury until now.
He sighed inwardly. He didn't like this mission one bit. It would be only too easy to get caught either by the Dark Lord's traps even for someone forewarned or by the Order, if indeed Potter was interested in the old orphanage. Not to mention that those pieces of Dark Magic were responsible, in a way, for his current state. If you thought about it logically, if the Dark Lord had contented himself with being mortal, he would have died when he'd tried to kill the brat Potter, and he, Severus, would still be a respected Hogwarts teacher. He'd even begun to miss the dunderheads; they'd be better than the wall of his house! And his fellow Death Eaters were too preoccupied with their own ambitions to be reliable acquaintances. At least he had been able to converse with McGonagall not to say quarrel and in all honesty, she would never have used what he let her see of himself against him. That was it, he needed a Gryffindor in his life, but currently there was only Wormtail.
With a mental jerk, he straightened his thoughts and got prepared for his foray in the Muggle world.
In the chilly air of the March evening, dressed in black trousers, jumper and jacket, and looking just like an ordinary Muggle, Severus was treading to the orphanage. The outside door was easily opened. He slipped in the dark and damp corridor and shut it behind him. As soon as it was done, he heard the sirens' chant. He put his hands on his ears and reached the end of the corridor as quickly as possible. Once in the next room, he breathed with relief. For a short while. The outside door was being opened, and he could hear voices, young voices. Potter and his friends. He dashed into a closet nearby and stood still.
Hermione just had time to grab the boys by their collars and to shove them forwards to the door at the end of the corridor. The trio came into the room where the closet hiding Severus was situated.
"What was that for, Hermione?" whined Ron. He was rubbing the nape of his neck. Harry was doing the same in silence.
"I saved your necks, Ron. Those paintings were enchanted to attract people. Had you touched them, you'd probably have died."
"And you were miraculously immune to them, of course?" Irony was dripping from Ron's words.
Hermione rolled her eyes with annoyance. When had her very attractive best friend turned into an irritating boyfriend? He had taken to contesting everything she said. If that went on, he would soon go back to his place as her best friend, and no more. Well, now wasn't the moment to ponder her love life.
"That enchantment was a very usual one in Antiquity. It was used in wizarding households to distract strange men from the gynaecium, or if you prefer, the harem. That's why only men are sensitive to it."
This time, it was Ron who rolled his eyes, wondering why his girlfriend felt the need to be such the show-off. He didn't realise that, had he held his tongue a bit more, he would have escaped the lecture. In the meantime, Harry had already reached the staircase and was calling for them. Ron joined him at once, but Hermione claimed that she wanted to have a closer look at the enchantment of the paintings, and that she would join them later. She soon found herself alone on the ground floor, but she didn't make it to the sirens' corridor, for a flash of red light had struck her.
A/N:
"I suppose that you do remember, Severus, what I have told you about the steps that I have taken to guard myself against mortal death?" Adapted from Chapter 33, Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire.
A codex is an ancient text in the form of a book (Oxford OAD).
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33 Reviews | 4.21/10 Average
I certainly hope this is not the end. Although, what a tragic ending.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
No, there's still an epilogue to come, very soon.
Oh, man... say it isn't so? *psst~will it end well?~
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Yes, it is so ... for now. The epilogue is the next chapter, you will then know what their future is.
What a twist at the end! Interesting that he was unrepentant and still so self-centered even while he recognized the possibility of love with her. I really enjoyed this and applaud your characterization of Snape--out for himself until the bitter end.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I loved to write this Snape, so full of contradictions. The epilogue is the next chapter, and will join the queue very soon. Thank you for commenting every chapter.
Oh, man--the Horcrux saved him in the end! This was a very action-packed chapter! And I like how you had them tentatively start to come together. Will there be more of that? *grins in anticipation*
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
They're a bit shy about it, though, aren't they? But I don't think they will have a lot of time to develop a relationship.
Oh, he did it!!! I'm really torn by his action--while I realize his instict for survival is strong, I didn't think he would actually kill. Interesting plot twist! I love how he duped Bellatrix.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Of course this Severus would kill, without remorse to boot. He's more sorry for himself. And Bellatrix seems the kind who can be mislead by too much enthusiasm.
Oooh--prim and proper Hermione made a pact with the devil--and is the devil going to make his own Horcrux? It requires a kill, right? Your story is developing nicely and I need to go see what Severus does next!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Perhaps she isn't as prim and proper as she seems to be **hint: Polyjuice Potion, Umbridge and the centaurs** You're lucky to read the story now, it's nearly entirely published.
Oh, my goodness, Septentrion! This is quite a start--you've drawn a really complex (and not very likable) Severus--lines like, "That’s why Dumbledore was so sure of him; he knew Severus Snape would be where the power was," are really powerful. I'm off to read more and I'm very pleased that I was able to convince you to explore/expand your drabbles!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm so glad you like it, as you were the one to coax me into it. Severus is such a complex character, you can make him as despicable or likeable as you like. Thank you for commenting.
thats not bloody fair
i dont like that chapter its not very fair and i just dont like it!
I want a happy ending, can you tell me if that will happen at least...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Next chapter is the epilogue, so you'll know very soon what will happen. I understand your feeling as a reader - I've written enough of such reviews myself - but I like a bit of angst. Thank you for reviewing.
I'm still so intrigued by your desperate--yet--depressed Severus. You're moving the plot along at a nice pace. The Horcrux-hiding traps were cool!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
A lot of people like my traps, and it pleases me to no end because they have caused me to have a bit of a brain-storming. And what could a desperate Severus do? Glad you're still with me.
Go on...please! Well. It seems that Snape's victim hasn't been killed complety in vain; not that I like what he's done, Snape, not at all. But the young mans death has saved at least two lives and secured the Dark Lord's demise. And nobody but DE's can complain about that. I wonder if Snape realises that he, in fact, owes a junkie, an absolute low life in his opinion, his and Granger's life? His own, at least - but would he have thrown himself in AK's way if he didn't carry the Horcrux? As you describe Snape (and you do that very well!), I'm not quite sure.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
This Snape would never, ever think he owed his life to the junkie he'd killed. He perceived the junkie as a part of a spell, not like a human being - he's horrible, isn't he? And yes, he'd have thrown himself in the curse's way with or without Horcrux. He's a contradiction in flesh. Thank you for commenting.
Very good. It took me until the very end to remember that Severus was carrying his Horcrux, so, of course the Killing Curse would not work. Yeah!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Even if he wasn't carrying his Horcrux, he couldn't die, but it may have helped him to keep his body ;) Thanks for commenting.
The end of this chapter pushes the timeline forward past alot of intervening events indicating only that Snape and Hermione are forming an attachment leading to a post-war relationship. I'm both fascinated and concerned for Hermione becoming involved with the Snape you've introduced here. He's amoral, aiding or betraying either side depending on the perceived benefit to himself, a truly gray!Snape who regards the AK curse as a "long-time friend" and overcomes his brief hesitancy to create a Horcrux. Of course, she was the one who gave him the spell to do it, indicating her own willingness to engage Dark Magic when it fits her purpose. Still, she's less knowledgable, less experienced, less cynical than Snape which definitely tilts the balance in his favor somewhat. I understand that he's also lonely and craves a loyal companion and a normal existence but I'm hoping those needs won't be an easy excuse to turn him into devotedly-in-love!Severus. With this beginning I see the potential for a very interesting story about the politics of relationships which, hopefully, hews a line equidistant between AU fluff and romantic angst. I see a notice that the next chapter is already enqued so I suspect you've decided where you're going. I'll look forward to more and hope I've correctly detected your direction. Tres bon. ~
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you for the thorough comment. I hope I didn't write fluff with this story, it was not my purpose! This Snape is amoral and self-serving, including in his need for a relationship. He does what's necessary to serve his purpose, and if his purpose is to have a steady relationship, well, you can guess he's in for a rather big effort on his part. Hermione doesn't know it, but she has power over Snape.Hermione can be cunning, the idea of brewing Polyjuice in CoS proves it. She can be somewhat ruthless too: her setting off of birds on Ron in HBP is one of her best moments in canon, IMO. I hope you'll like the next chapter as much as this one. BTW the story is finished,so you won't wait for the ending too much.
I'm happy he's not going to betray her and that things are going along well. :) Alas, now I have to wait for the next update! I hope it's soon.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Next chapter will be up tomorrow at the latest. I hope you'll still like it. Thank you for reviewing each chapter so far.
Still interesting. I'm glad they made a pact.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm glad that I've kept your interest.
Red jet of light, eh? Teehee. Good plot here. Moving on to next.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you! Well, I supposed everyone in the fandom knows what a red jet of light is for.
I've finally had a chance to start reading it. I'm curious to see where this goes, but considering that I don't like a Snape that really wanted to murder Dumbledore for his own reasons, I think what he's feeling is a lot less terrible than what he deserves. Hehehe. On to the next.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Well, I like to explore different Snapes, and I'm having a moment when I feel like exploring a dark!Snape. Of course,he deserves his fate, but he doesn't have to like it, and he might want to do something about it. Thank you for reviewing.
poor severus, he had to make a horcrux... i hope he gets his soul back...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Even if he got it back, the piece of soul is severed. Is it possible to mend it? The answer will be somewhere in one of the next chapters.
Oh no...what a horrible thing he has done, Snape. But very credible, unfortunately. I'm sorry for his victim as well as for him, but quite delighted that you keep him in what I consider "in character". Great to hear that your tale will be completed, too. I found it recommended on a site I happened to come across the other day, a very useful one, I think, and I hope that the people managing it won't be angry with me for writing the adress here: community.livejournal.com/hgss_digest/It mentions updates of good stories and you can even find lists of completed and well written stories recommended. It's a great idea - there are lots of stories out there, but only a few really good ones - and they may sometimes be difficult to find for busy people (and picky readers) like many of us.Well, English is not my language, either - but I'm able to tell well written from badly written (though not able to write it very well myself, which may be quite evident reading my reviews!). Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I had the feeling you've seen this story recommended on this site, and I was right. I agree to say it's a very good idea. I don't see anything wrong with your English, and I'm glad you think the same about mine. I most often try to keep Snape "in character", though I'm not again some OOCness when there is a purpose to it, but the only one to do this successfully is Jo herself ;) Next chapter will be submitted soon. Thank you for leaving a comment.
Oh noooooo. I feared that you would make him do this. You can't leave him like that. This sacrifice is too high. Please, make Hermione help him restore his soul.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
What if there isn't a way to restore his soul? Alas, I fear you'll have to wait and see how things go. Thank you for taking time to leave a comment.
I found this story recommended at another site - and I'm very glad that I decided to give it a try - it's quite intriguing and very well written! Another great thing is that it seems to be updated regularly - which I appreciate very much, too; it's so depressing when one's favourite stories are either rarely updated, or worse still: are abandoned completely. It's a writer's right, of course, but a reader's disappointment. I'm looking forward to read on! Thank you for writing and posting it!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Your words warm me so much: to read that my story is very well written, while English isn't my language, is enormous encouragement to me. The story is completed, so no fear of it being abandoned - unless an accident would prevent me from updating. Next chapter is in the queue, it should be up very soon. Thank you very much for reading and taking time to leave a review.PS: out of curiosity, could you tell me where you've seen it recommended? You can send me a private message if you don't want it to appear in a public review.
OOO he might have to make it into his own horcrux, or put the soul of an animal or something inside it...thats my idea anyway...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
You, readers, are very insightful. The answer is in the next chapter, which is in the queue.
the horcurx saves him... very very clever! I aplaud you!
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you! What good would there be in making a Horcrux if he didn't have a use for it?
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!I just wonder if Voldemort would have made a horcrux that would be so easily destroyed.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I believe a Horcrux itself can be easily destroyed, like the diary was. What's dangerous is the hexes and curses put on it to protect it. Dumbledore wasn't harmed by the ring itself, but by a curse protecting it.Thanks for commenting. Next chapter coming soon.
Just discovered this story and I'm very much hooked. Wondering, of course, how Severus is going to get around the fake-Horcrux problem. And if he has to make one... well, THAT's a pretty messy situation... Very suspenseful.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm so glad to have you hooked. Yes, it's a messy situation Severus is in, but he'll find a way around. Seemed that I wasn't very subtle though, I had hoped no one would think of the solution. Thank you very much for your very nice comment.
Would Voldemort be able to tell the difference between a piece of his own soul and someone elses? If he can't, then... and Hermione told Snape how to make a Horcrux... hmmm, interesting. More please!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
You certainly seem ready to draw the right conclusion. More will come soon, probably next week. Thank you for commenting.