Chapter Two: An Improbable Alliance
Chapter 3 of 7
septentrionA deal, a success and a quandary.
ReviewedDisclaimer: see prologue.
Thanks to Somigliana for correcting my mistakes and giving her input in this story.
When she woke, Hermione found herself seated on an old chair, tied with ropes, in what looked like a basement. By the look of it, it was probably the basement of the orphanage. Only two candles were lighting the place, giving it the dim and fearful atmosphere of a horror film. She thought that she wouldn't be surprised to see a masked man holding a big knife suddenly appear in front of her. Indeed, a man appeared in front of her, but he wasn't masked he was holding a wand.
"Good evening, Miss Granger," Severus said in that silky voice of his.
Hermione's eyes grew as big as saucers, showing her fear to her captor. He was going to extract information from her, then kill her and her friends, and she couldn't do anything to prevent him from acting. She remembered what she knew of Legilimency, and she averted her eyes. Her ex-professor cupped her chin with a bit of brutality and forced her to look at him. She shut her eyes in hope that he would only kill her ... she didn't want to be tortured she had no idea if she could keep Harry's secrets in such circumstances, and she wasn't eager to find out. She heard him sigh deeply.
"I'm not going to kill you, Miss Granger, unless you leave me no other choice. We don't have much time, so I'll get straight to the point. I want to make an agreement with you, one that would be beneficial to both of us."
He sighed once more; her distrust in him was so blatant.
"Don't even think to scream for help. I put an Imperturbable Charm on the door; no one outside the basement can hear us," he told her, when it was obvious that she had regrouped enough and was thinking of this. "I know why you and your friends are here. You want to get the Dark Lord's Horcruxes and destroy them. I know what they are, and where they are. My information could help you to gain some valuable time in your quest, don't you think?"
Hermione was horror-struck. If Snape knew what they were doing here, then Voldemort also knew. And it had taken them nine months to find only one Horcrux while the tyrant wasn't in the know. Her mind became frantic. On one hand, they could do with Snape's information, but on the other hand, he could be misleading them. It struck her as odd, however, that he hadn't killed her, or tortured her, or tried to extract information from her. She wasn't in a situation where she could make demands; she was at his mercy. Perhaps she could stall a bit ...
"What do you want from me?"
"Nothing much, Miss Granger. If the Dark Lord is defeated, I want you to testify in my favour in front of the Wizengamot."
"That's all?" she asked, incredulous.
"It is more than you think. You are one of Potter's best friends, and you will be a hero; your word will weigh heavily in the decision of the court. You will help me to spend as few years in Azkaban as possible."
"You don't want to escape, hide, or something?" She really had a hard time believing that he would content himself with something so easy, so undemanding.
"And pull a Pettigrew? I think not. I want to walk in the outside unimpeded and as myself." He realised then and there that power wasn't as important as it used to be to him.
A slight trace of weariness could be heard in his voice. That and her weak position of the moment made Hermione accept his terms. Yet she wouldn't let him know of her decision too quickly.
"I still need reassurance that you're not going to betray us." The words 'like you did with Dumbledore' were hanging in the air between them.
"That won't be too difficult, Miss Granger. The first proof of my good-will will be to allow you to leave alive. But before that, I'll have to duplicate Rowena Ravenclaw's codex and take it to the Dark Lord. It will be your responsibility to give me access to the object for five minutes, and to keep your friends otherwise occupied while I do so. If I let you leave alive AND with the original codex, will it be proof enough?"
"I think so," Hermione said slowly. "However, how will you explain the lack of a piece of soul in the codex to ... You-Know-Who?"
The question was a very valid one. How indeed? The Dark Lord would have a way to check. He'd have to do some quick research before he went back to his master.
"I'll find a way. That question shouldn't bother you, Miss Granger," Severus answered quite abruptly.
Hermione then did something very impulsive: she volunteered information to a Death Eater.
"I know the incantation to check if there's a soul or a piece of soul in an object or a living being. It's the same to make a Horcrux."
Later, she would call it 'gut instinct'; her rational mind would never wrap itself around the fact that she had told him this, although he'd had no idea she was in possession of such knowledge. She would always be satisfied, however, to have rendered him speechless and gobsmacked. He managed just in time not to look like a fish.
"How such a prim and proper girl like you could ever know such foul magic?"
"The library at Grimmauld Place," she whispered.
Trust the swot to put her nose in any library, no matter how unsavoury it might be.
"And what would this incantation be?"
"Anima Dispergere. The only difference between making a Horcrux and checking if there's one somewhere is the wand movement. You speak the incantation while moving the tip of your wand from your heart to the object to make a Horcrux, and you tap the object with your wand to check for the presence of a Horcrux."
Severus had listened to her intently and memorized what she'd said. It was now time to set her free.
"Well, Miss Granger, I will now let you go. Do you agree to testify in my favour, should the Dark Lord be defeated, in exchange for information from me to help you defeat him?"
"I agree," she answered simply.
Severus wished a third person was with them, so that he could have bound the girl with an Unbreakable Vow. He would just have to trust her Gryffindor tendencies of honour instead. He waved his wand, and the cords which were tying her fell apart. He literally thrust her wand into her hand and took a step back from her. She got up slowly, unsure if she would be able to stand, and she found she could feel her limbs. She didn't quite turn her back on him when she reached and climbed the stairs. She went into the room where she had left the boys not a moment too soon, for they emerged from the staircase leading to the upper floors a few seconds after. Harry was holding Ravenclaw's codex in his right hand.
"Where've you been?" Ron asked without preamble, an accusatory edge to his voice.
"Sorry, I've been taking in the enchantment on the paintings, it was so fascinating ..."
"Never mind, we could have been killed, and Madame was examining an enchantment."
'That was it,' Hermione thought. Ron would be back to his place as a best friend no later than tonight.
"You can't exactly reproach me for studying something that could be useful to ward us against Death Eaters!"
Harry felt it was high time that he intervened.
"There's no need for quarrelling. Actually, it was a good thing you didn't come with us, Hermione. I had a hard enough time keeping the Runespoors away from Ron. The codex itself wasn't that well concealed; it was more of a game compared to that expedition in the cave last year."
"Harry," Hermione said, "don't you think it'd be a good idea to search Voldemort's old room, just in case? I can stay here and check the codex for any further traps. You shouldn't need more than a few minutes, and then we'll go."
"That's a very good idea, Hermione. Ron and I will just do that."
Ron sent her a dark look before going with Harry.
The boys had barely disappeared from the room, when Severus was at Hermione's side. He snatched the old book from her hands before she could say anything and put it down on a dusty table. Silently, he waved his wand above the codex, chanting some spell under his breath, and a duplicate appeared next to the original. It was nothing more than a dim whitish light at first, then the light darkened, became solid and took the form of Ravenclaw's possession. He checked the copy and put it in the inner pocket of his cloak.
"I will now take my leave, Miss Granger. I'll let you know as soon as I have useful information for you. For now, I can only tell you that Bellatrix Lestrange is responsible for the safety of Helga Hufflepuff's cup."
Hermione blinked, and he was gone. 'What a strange meeting,' she thought. She looked at the innocent-looking codex on the table; it was an illuminated Bible. Even though the current wizarding world wasn't very religious, she remembered that it hadn't always been the case. The proof was the existence of a monk's ghost at Hogwarts. She gingerly poked the sacred book with her wand and uttered the dreadful incantation, "Anima Dispergere". A rainbow-like light emanated from the object; the Bible was proved to be a Horcrux.
Ron and Harry arrived just in time to see the light fading into nothingness. Hermione had told them about the incantation, and they knew at once what she'd been doing. Harry shivered at the idea of the spell escaping his best friend's mouth; Voldemort had intended to speak it, had he succeeded in killing him all those years ago.
Ron stammered, "So, this is a ...?" He couldn't bring himself to speak the word, as if the reality of it had just sunk in his mind.
Hermione nodded. "Perhaps we shouldn't linger, now that we've found what we were looking for?"
A few minutes later, they were at Grimmauld Place. The Horcrux was tossed in the hearth where it burnt quickly. Hermione felt a pang to destroy such a fine artefact, but so many lives were at stake; she couldn't afford to be sentimental. She had some thinking to do, especially how to use the information she got from Snape without raising the suspicions of her friends.
For his part, Severus was in a quandary. He had to bring his master the fake codex before the night ended if he wanted to live, but it lacked something essential: a piece of soul. How to pull off this charade?
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33 Reviews | 4.21/10 Average
I certainly hope this is not the end. Although, what a tragic ending.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
No, there's still an epilogue to come, very soon.
Oh, man... say it isn't so? *psst~will it end well?~
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Yes, it is so ... for now. The epilogue is the next chapter, you will then know what their future is.
What a twist at the end! Interesting that he was unrepentant and still so self-centered even while he recognized the possibility of love with her. I really enjoyed this and applaud your characterization of Snape--out for himself until the bitter end.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I loved to write this Snape, so full of contradictions. The epilogue is the next chapter, and will join the queue very soon. Thank you for commenting every chapter.
Oh, man--the Horcrux saved him in the end! This was a very action-packed chapter! And I like how you had them tentatively start to come together. Will there be more of that? *grins in anticipation*
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
They're a bit shy about it, though, aren't they? But I don't think they will have a lot of time to develop a relationship.
Oh, he did it!!! I'm really torn by his action--while I realize his instict for survival is strong, I didn't think he would actually kill. Interesting plot twist! I love how he duped Bellatrix.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Of course this Severus would kill, without remorse to boot. He's more sorry for himself. And Bellatrix seems the kind who can be mislead by too much enthusiasm.
Oooh--prim and proper Hermione made a pact with the devil--and is the devil going to make his own Horcrux? It requires a kill, right? Your story is developing nicely and I need to go see what Severus does next!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Perhaps she isn't as prim and proper as she seems to be **hint: Polyjuice Potion, Umbridge and the centaurs** You're lucky to read the story now, it's nearly entirely published.
Oh, my goodness, Septentrion! This is quite a start--you've drawn a really complex (and not very likable) Severus--lines like, "That’s why Dumbledore was so sure of him; he knew Severus Snape would be where the power was," are really powerful. I'm off to read more and I'm very pleased that I was able to convince you to explore/expand your drabbles!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm so glad you like it, as you were the one to coax me into it. Severus is such a complex character, you can make him as despicable or likeable as you like. Thank you for commenting.
thats not bloody fair
i dont like that chapter its not very fair and i just dont like it!
I want a happy ending, can you tell me if that will happen at least...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Next chapter is the epilogue, so you'll know very soon what will happen. I understand your feeling as a reader - I've written enough of such reviews myself - but I like a bit of angst. Thank you for reviewing.
I'm still so intrigued by your desperate--yet--depressed Severus. You're moving the plot along at a nice pace. The Horcrux-hiding traps were cool!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
A lot of people like my traps, and it pleases me to no end because they have caused me to have a bit of a brain-storming. And what could a desperate Severus do? Glad you're still with me.
Go on...please! Well. It seems that Snape's victim hasn't been killed complety in vain; not that I like what he's done, Snape, not at all. But the young mans death has saved at least two lives and secured the Dark Lord's demise. And nobody but DE's can complain about that. I wonder if Snape realises that he, in fact, owes a junkie, an absolute low life in his opinion, his and Granger's life? His own, at least - but would he have thrown himself in AK's way if he didn't carry the Horcrux? As you describe Snape (and you do that very well!), I'm not quite sure.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
This Snape would never, ever think he owed his life to the junkie he'd killed. He perceived the junkie as a part of a spell, not like a human being - he's horrible, isn't he? And yes, he'd have thrown himself in the curse's way with or without Horcrux. He's a contradiction in flesh. Thank you for commenting.
Very good. It took me until the very end to remember that Severus was carrying his Horcrux, so, of course the Killing Curse would not work. Yeah!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Even if he wasn't carrying his Horcrux, he couldn't die, but it may have helped him to keep his body ;) Thanks for commenting.
The end of this chapter pushes the timeline forward past alot of intervening events indicating only that Snape and Hermione are forming an attachment leading to a post-war relationship. I'm both fascinated and concerned for Hermione becoming involved with the Snape you've introduced here. He's amoral, aiding or betraying either side depending on the perceived benefit to himself, a truly gray!Snape who regards the AK curse as a "long-time friend" and overcomes his brief hesitancy to create a Horcrux. Of course, she was the one who gave him the spell to do it, indicating her own willingness to engage Dark Magic when it fits her purpose. Still, she's less knowledgable, less experienced, less cynical than Snape which definitely tilts the balance in his favor somewhat. I understand that he's also lonely and craves a loyal companion and a normal existence but I'm hoping those needs won't be an easy excuse to turn him into devotedly-in-love!Severus. With this beginning I see the potential for a very interesting story about the politics of relationships which, hopefully, hews a line equidistant between AU fluff and romantic angst. I see a notice that the next chapter is already enqued so I suspect you've decided where you're going. I'll look forward to more and hope I've correctly detected your direction. Tres bon. ~
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you for the thorough comment. I hope I didn't write fluff with this story, it was not my purpose! This Snape is amoral and self-serving, including in his need for a relationship. He does what's necessary to serve his purpose, and if his purpose is to have a steady relationship, well, you can guess he's in for a rather big effort on his part. Hermione doesn't know it, but she has power over Snape.Hermione can be cunning, the idea of brewing Polyjuice in CoS proves it. She can be somewhat ruthless too: her setting off of birds on Ron in HBP is one of her best moments in canon, IMO. I hope you'll like the next chapter as much as this one. BTW the story is finished,so you won't wait for the ending too much.
I'm happy he's not going to betray her and that things are going along well. :) Alas, now I have to wait for the next update! I hope it's soon.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Next chapter will be up tomorrow at the latest. I hope you'll still like it. Thank you for reviewing each chapter so far.
Still interesting. I'm glad they made a pact.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm glad that I've kept your interest.
Red jet of light, eh? Teehee. Good plot here. Moving on to next.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you! Well, I supposed everyone in the fandom knows what a red jet of light is for.
I've finally had a chance to start reading it. I'm curious to see where this goes, but considering that I don't like a Snape that really wanted to murder Dumbledore for his own reasons, I think what he's feeling is a lot less terrible than what he deserves. Hehehe. On to the next.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Well, I like to explore different Snapes, and I'm having a moment when I feel like exploring a dark!Snape. Of course,he deserves his fate, but he doesn't have to like it, and he might want to do something about it. Thank you for reviewing.
poor severus, he had to make a horcrux... i hope he gets his soul back...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Even if he got it back, the piece of soul is severed. Is it possible to mend it? The answer will be somewhere in one of the next chapters.
Oh no...what a horrible thing he has done, Snape. But very credible, unfortunately. I'm sorry for his victim as well as for him, but quite delighted that you keep him in what I consider "in character". Great to hear that your tale will be completed, too. I found it recommended on a site I happened to come across the other day, a very useful one, I think, and I hope that the people managing it won't be angry with me for writing the adress here: community.livejournal.com/hgss_digest/It mentions updates of good stories and you can even find lists of completed and well written stories recommended. It's a great idea - there are lots of stories out there, but only a few really good ones - and they may sometimes be difficult to find for busy people (and picky readers) like many of us.Well, English is not my language, either - but I'm able to tell well written from badly written (though not able to write it very well myself, which may be quite evident reading my reviews!). Looking forward to the next chapter!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I had the feeling you've seen this story recommended on this site, and I was right. I agree to say it's a very good idea. I don't see anything wrong with your English, and I'm glad you think the same about mine. I most often try to keep Snape "in character", though I'm not again some OOCness when there is a purpose to it, but the only one to do this successfully is Jo herself ;) Next chapter will be submitted soon. Thank you for leaving a comment.
Oh noooooo. I feared that you would make him do this. You can't leave him like that. This sacrifice is too high. Please, make Hermione help him restore his soul.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
What if there isn't a way to restore his soul? Alas, I fear you'll have to wait and see how things go. Thank you for taking time to leave a comment.
I found this story recommended at another site - and I'm very glad that I decided to give it a try - it's quite intriguing and very well written! Another great thing is that it seems to be updated regularly - which I appreciate very much, too; it's so depressing when one's favourite stories are either rarely updated, or worse still: are abandoned completely. It's a writer's right, of course, but a reader's disappointment. I'm looking forward to read on! Thank you for writing and posting it!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Your words warm me so much: to read that my story is very well written, while English isn't my language, is enormous encouragement to me. The story is completed, so no fear of it being abandoned - unless an accident would prevent me from updating. Next chapter is in the queue, it should be up very soon. Thank you very much for reading and taking time to leave a review.PS: out of curiosity, could you tell me where you've seen it recommended? You can send me a private message if you don't want it to appear in a public review.
OOO he might have to make it into his own horcrux, or put the soul of an animal or something inside it...thats my idea anyway...
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
You, readers, are very insightful. The answer is in the next chapter, which is in the queue.
the horcurx saves him... very very clever! I aplaud you!
-KarlaMarie
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
Thank you! What good would there be in making a Horcrux if he didn't have a use for it?
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!I just wonder if Voldemort would have made a horcrux that would be so easily destroyed.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I believe a Horcrux itself can be easily destroyed, like the diary was. What's dangerous is the hexes and curses put on it to protect it. Dumbledore wasn't harmed by the ring itself, but by a curse protecting it.Thanks for commenting. Next chapter coming soon.
Just discovered this story and I'm very much hooked. Wondering, of course, how Severus is going to get around the fake-Horcrux problem. And if he has to make one... well, THAT's a pretty messy situation... Very suspenseful.
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
I'm so glad to have you hooked. Yes, it's a messy situation Severus is in, but he'll find a way around. Seemed that I wasn't very subtle though, I had hoped no one would think of the solution. Thank you very much for your very nice comment.
Would Voldemort be able to tell the difference between a piece of his own soul and someone elses? If he can't, then... and Hermione told Snape how to make a Horcrux... hmmm, interesting. More please!
Response from septentrion (Author of To Put Him Out Of His Misery)
You certainly seem ready to draw the right conclusion. More will come soon, probably next week. Thank you for commenting.