My Savior
togspled79 Reviews | 79 Ratings, 0 Likes, 28 Favorites )
Hermione is faced with some tough times emotionally this year. Who will it be who helps her cope and survive? Will he, a fallen angel himself, succeed in saving her?
Ratings and warnings for later chapters.
(this is my first ever fic. be nice!)
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togspled
Member Since 2006 | 2 Stories | Favorited by 2 | 386 Reviews Written | 129 Review Responses
I'm Emilie. I spend most of my time studying, buried in piles of books. It's not the most exciting life, but it's what i do. Other than that, I snowboard, read fanfic, attempt to write, and hang out with my man, Dave. He promises to dress up like Severus and give me detention, but i'm still waiting on that one. :(. Anyone know where I can get a snape costume? lol. Anyways, I like quick updates. I hate seafood.
Reviews for My Savior
Ron is such a tosser...
well im interested so far and can't wait to read the rest!
-karlamarie
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Ron IS a bloody tosser!I'm glad some people out there agree with me. I'd kill him off, but I'm not that cruel. lol.
Response from KMJ (Reviewer)
Mate if you killed him off you only be doing him a favour (not to mention everyone else) hehehe
-k
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
hmmm... that might not be such a bad idea.... *ponders* hmmmm *evil laugh!!!*
Excellent story so far ... I know how Ron is portrayed in the books - but as, to me anyway, he always comes over as someone that is resentful of anybody that is better than him or has something more than he does - he would act exactly like you have portrayed him, weak of character and cowardly ... I hope he gets found out and I wait impatiently for more of your story!!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Exactly! Ron has always struck me as the one who won't use wit, bravery, romance, or any thing other than force to get his way. Given he knows how to play chess, but chess and getting shagged are quite different. I think you'll like the next chapter.
still looking good. Looking forward to more!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
lets hope it stays that way! more is coming, rest assured.
i like this story did you have this posted on another site at one time. i this feeling that i might have read it before.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
nope. this came straight outta my head, only for TPP.if you remember where you read it, can you forward me the link? I'd like to read it and see just how close it is.I'd hate to have to change my plot now, but if it will help me avoid any accusations of plagiarism, I'll do it.Is this like a popular topic or something and I'm just not getting it? I thought i had something pretty original. Ok, original other than the whole HG/SS thing. lol
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
i just reread it now i know why it seem like i read something like this the scene where ron attacks hermionei read that in a story call the reaven he attacks her in room in that story to. sorry if i worried you.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
*puts my hand over my heart to make it stop racing*phew! oh goodness I was worried. woah. *searches frantically for a calming draught*thanks for that. I'll have to go search for that story to make sure there arent going to be further similarities.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
the story you want is raven i can not spell very good
An interesting start.
The-Boy-Who-Couldn’t-Just-Bloody-Die-Already and his sidekick, "Measly", LOL!!! Classic!!!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
ty, ty.
Congratulations on your first fanfic! You don't actually mention the time-frame in this chapter, but timeturner or not, Hermione would have been 17 in her 6th year and 18 in her 7th year at Hogwarts. Therefore, any implication of timeturner use as a means of aging Miss Granger isn't actually necessary.
Don't you dare try backing out after having the guts to publish the first few chapters! If you were not sure about your story, you should have considered that before publishing. Granted I've only read the first chapter, but so far so good;)
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
i dont know what the time frame is...I'm thinking seventh year... but i kinda killed canon anyways. oops.
I do want to continue this story, but right now there is tons of drama going on in my own life , so idk how long the next chapter is going to take me to finish. I don't wanna write while under the influence of tears cuz then nothing will turn out how it is supposed to. but thank you for the compliment.
This seems like a good start, so I think you should continue. Can't wait to read more.
That's a quite interesting start, please go on and don't be shy, it's really well written! Why does she need to be saved? What is going to happen? I'm curious now! :-)
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
*giggles* i really wanna tell you. but if i do, then it wont be a suprise anymore. I'll tell you this much, its heading to be a dark fic.
Uhhuh... see, I told ya it was good. Carry on then.:)
A promising start. I recommend you pick up a reliable beta (if you don't have one already) to go over your work before you post. I know mine has pulled my ass out of a sling more than once. Otherwise, well done. I could find no major errors and the premise is intriguing. Looking forward to the next installment.
Short and sweet. However, it does feel sort of incomplete. I'm not sure where you'd take this, but feel free to keep going!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
It is incomplete. lol. I'm writing the rest as we speak. lol. I am in dire need of a beta though. Any suggestions?
Response from ayerf (Reviewer)
A beta? Well, I got mine from Perfect Imagination. They may have the right one for you. A link is in the Links & Affiliations bit of this site.
Sorry, an updated remark to my earlier post. Your writing is certainly equivalent to other works on this site. I had just left another fiction site which has a number of sub-par writers with far too many errors. I did not want to leave the impression that "The Petulant Poetess" has poor writers -- far from it.
You have no reason for nervousness -- your writing is far better than that of many writers posting to this site! I look forward to reading more of your work, particularly the continuation of "My Savior."
My regards.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
I'm responding to both your comments in one. lol.I knew what you meant, and I must say im quite flattered. I look up to the other authors on this site so much. They all, whether they know it or not, are like mentors to me. I read their stories, (tried to) learn(ed) the tricks of fanfic, and prayed to Merlin that someday my work might have even a fraction of their brilliance.As they say in firefighting, I'm the probie. lol.
Enjoyed the chapter. Looking forwrd to the next part of the story.
So far so good. Please continue.
I think your doing a bang up job with your first fic. Waiting for more.
P
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
ty! you have no idea how much comments like yours brighten up my day. <3!Thanks!
Don't stop now!! i like the beginning and i'd love to be able to read more
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
The rest will be up as soon as i:
a) write it
b) find a beta
c) get it approved
lol!
I haven't seen an update from you in a while. Is everything OK? I hope you won't abandon this story. i hope real life is treating you well.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Hey, im trying not to abandon it but life is craaaazyhopefully ill get working on this next chapter within the next week. sorry about the long time!ive got teh whole story planned, just have to write it
rons a prick and snapes a twat what else is there to say? lol update again soon though.
Hiya, Poppet! Ohmigods, I am totally loving your story so far! I really hope that you post more chapters soon, it's great!!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
it is reviews like this that totally make my day. thank you so much. I'll try to get working on the rest asap.
Oh my, you better hurry up adding the next chapter. I guess that Ron is the one comming into her rooms at the end of this chapter? Don't you dare letting him rape her, I am sure he will try, but don't let him take that away from her, giving him the satisfaction of victory. Somebody should teach him a much harder lesson than the ones he has been given so far, they havent worked it seems. And, when they are about it, teach Ginny some lessons about what is right and wrong too! So, Harry and Draco, well why not. I liked the silent conversation they had in their minds while they were talking, very well done!!!!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
ooooohhh... pretty stars!
just you wait for the next chapter, my dear. lol
Another great chapter! Hmmm, I wonder what Severus is up to.
mmmmm Albus is a junkie! Letting that prick stay, i was really hoping for more Ron bashing, but the new Draco and Harry thing going on... well that will have to do!
-KarlaMarie
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
What sort of evil!ron story would this be without ron bashing? worry not, KarlaMarie, its in the writing...
