Chapter 2
Chapter 2 of 8
togspledAggravated assult arrives ardently
ReviewedThe next morning, Hermione awoke to a knocking outside her door.
"Mione! Mione, open up please!"
"Mmmm," she moaned as she stretched, her aching muscles complaining. "Hold your hippogriffs, Ron! I'm coming."
Swinging her legs over the side of the bed, Hermione grimaced at the cold floor beneath her feet. As she made her way over to the door, she straightened her nightdress out and tried to pat her hair down so she wouldn't look a complete mess for her boyfriend.
"Hallo," she mumbled, opening the door slowly.
"Mione..."
"Yes, Ron?" Her tongue felt thick, and her speech sounded slurred from lack of sleep.
"Gods, you're beautiful in the morning." He pushed his way inside her room roughly.
Although she was surprised at first, Hermione remembered Dumbledore taking off the wards for her room when she had explained that she, Harry, and Ron needed a place to be alone for their Order work. The head girl's room was only logical, seeing as nobody else, save for the head boy and the teachers, had entry. She thought he would have put them back on by now, but no matter; it felt too good being kissed like this to care.
She wrapped her arms around Ron's neck and admired how sculpted he had become from Quidditch. She didn't realize they were moving until she felt her back pressed up against the wall. She moaned slightly as Ron's lips caressed her neck. As soon as she felt his hands pulling her nightdress up, though, she panicked. She tried to push back against him, but his body weight and strength kept her pinned against the rough stone.
"Ron. Slow down. Ron, stop, you're hurting me! Please!"
"Mmmm, yeah, baby, beg for me," he murmured against her as his hands kept up their ministrations.
A feeling of dread hit Hermione like an Expelliarmus. Was he going to rape her, right here, before breakfast even started? What would happen if she kept saying no? Would her beloved Ron stop? Would he respect her wishes to remain a virgin until marriage? The way he was acting, she didn't know.
"Ron, STOP!" She yelled as loudly as she could, hoping it would bring him back to reason. Instead, it angered him.
He grabbed both her arms and shook her violently. "Don't you tell me to stop, woman! You think you're better than me? You think you're stronger than me?" Her head started slamming against her haven's wall. With each rough hit, her mind started losing more of its ability to focus. "Don't. You. Tell. Me. No!" On the last word, she gave in to the overwhelming pain and crumpled against him, blood on the wall and dripping out of the back of her skull, her world gone black.
Ron, realizing what he had just done, dropped her to the floor, whispered, "Obliviate, " and ran.
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Draco Malfoy, proud Slytherin, and Hogwarts head boy, had seen a lot in his young days. He had personal experience with the giving and receiving of Crucio. He had watched as dozens of Muggles were subjected to Avada Kedavra and had Obliviated many people on several occasions. He knew what carnage was, understood death all too well. It was because of his extensive knowledge of the dead that when he found Granger on the floor in her room, he knew she was not far from the netherworld. Not bothering to take care with her quickly cooling body, Draco muttered a lightening charm and lifted the girl in a fireman's carry. Kicking open the unlocked door, he ran as quickly as he could to the hospital wing.
This would be so much easier on a broomstick, he thought miserably, as his legs seemed to fill with lead. Yet, having the dead weight of an unconscious girl on his broom would definitely make flying through the halls difficult. As he reached the hospital wing, he began to yell.
"Madam Pomfrey! Help! Please, it's Hermione!"
Taking her to the nearest bed, he laid her as gently as he could. Madam Pomfrey flew out of her office. As she cast healing spells, she queried as to the nature of the injuries.
"Well, Mister Malfoy, if you wouldn't mind, I know these wounds are blunt force trauma, but a little better picture might be able to help me save Miss Granger. What happened?"
"To be honest Madam Pomfrey, I wish I knew. I haven't the slightest idea. Maybe the stupid Mudbl..." He coughed slightly at her raised eyebrow. "Maybe Miss Granger fell and hit her head on the way down?"
"Hardly. There are multiple injuries to her skull. How did you carry her?"
"One arm under her knees and one under her shoulders. Why?"
"She has extensive bruising on her arms. See?" Madam Pomfrey pulled back Hermione's sleeves to demonstrate.
"Are you saying somebody did this to her?" he asked, brows knit in frustration.
"Sir, are you making a joke out of this? Look at these!" She commanded before rubbing a bruise healing salve over the ugly marks which were turning blue and a purplish-black. "The sort of strength that made those is something like a Quidditch player would have. That, and it was most likely somebody who hates Miss Granger," she added, while wrapping a turban type bandage around Hermione's head. "Somebody like a pureblood or a Slytherin." She looked pointedly at him.
"WHAT? Are you saying I did this? That's outrageous!" He was near yelling, completely flabbergasted. "I brought her here to you. I helped save her! Did you notice she wasn't at breakfast? Did you go to check on the bookworm? Did you try to find her? No, no, no! I did, Madam Pomfrey! So before you say one more accus..."
"That's enough, Mister Malfoy," a sharp voice commanded. "Face me."
Draco turned to face his Head of house and godfather, Professor Severus Snape. He felt a cold, though not painful, probing in his head. He opened his mind as he recognized the feeling as he got when his father used Legilimency on him. He focused his thoughts on that morning: breakfast, not seeing Hermione in the Great Hall, wondering where she was, going up to his dorm and hearing a moan from her room, barging in and finding her there. He knew that would be enough for Snape and closed his mind.
Snape nodded curtly. "Draco, go fetch the headmaster please."
Not needing to be told twice, Draco went to inform Albus of what had happened.
Severus looked at the girl on the bed. "Poppy, can she be awoken?" Holding the vial Madam Pomfrey gave him, he administered it to the girl. Opening her eyes, Hermione looked confused and frightened.
"Would it be safe...?" he asked Madam Pomfrey. When she nodded, he bent to the girl.
"Miss Granger, will you allow me to perform Legilimency on you?"
Shaking, she nodded her approval and he began. He saw her waking up in a flimsy nightdress, a voice, muffled, calling through the door. Severus watched as she opened the door and saw black. He tried again, going back a little in her memory and playing through them again. Each time, her memory went black before he could see her attacker's face. He tried going backwards, but the next thing she remembered after opening the door was waking up here, in the hospital wing. He sighed in frustration.
"She's been Obliviated. While her attacker was not the young Mister Malfoy, you were correct that who ever did this plays Quidditch or participates in some other strenuous physical activity. Of the people who are granted access to the head girl's rooms, that leaves only Mister Potter or Mister Weasley. Did you happen to notice the pale sheen on Mister Weasley's face at breakfast?" With that, he left without another word to Hermione.
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As he turned out of the hospital wing, Severus braced himself against the wall. Who the hell had done this to her? They would pay dearly for hurting his girl like this. The girl, he corrected himself. Not his girl. He shook his head to clear that traitorous thought from his head. Gods, he needed a firewhisky.
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Thanks so much to RobisonRocket for all her genius work on this. Lord knows what I'd do without her!
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Latest 25 Reviews for My Savior
79 Reviews | 5.72/10 Average
.... this cant be the end!!! please do finish this fic...the first u ever wrote u said.wow! this is pretty good.and also very sad fic. hopefully snape hexes the hell outta ron.
oooh... i can't wait to read more! this story rocks!
Hi, I'm really enjoying this story, will there be an update soon?
Whether your first fic or not it is very good! I look forward to the rest of it.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
sigh, real life, don'tcha hate it? hopefully real life will slow down and i can get the next chappie out. A lot of people were really mad about the last one, and I hope to redeem myself as an author with this next one.
and yup, my first.
I have loved the story so far. It has been great! I can't wait for future chapters.
Wow, I see you got a few flames. I'm sorry to see that. I think you are doing a great job with this story, if people are upset by non con then they shouldn't read a story with that warning. Don't let it get you down, I want to know what will happen next so update soon with your head held high!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
thank you so much, you have no idea how badly i needed to hear that. yeah, i thought i had made that pretty clear in the warnings, but oh well. chappie 9 is in the planning/writing
I must admit that I really, really, really hated that you let Ron sucseed in raping her. Wanting and trying to, yes, but sucseeding, I absolutely hate it when the villains in the story gets to have their will. Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about. I see from previous reviews that you promise that Ron and Ginny will get their due for their actions, but in my book rape ain't entertaining and the violation of another person should be punished almost as hard as murder. You write very well though so I will give you a chance to redeem yourself:-) (But, again, the story lost a bit of it brilliance with allowing the rape).
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
"Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about." -- when i read that, i have to admit i almost cried. that is exactly what it feels like. and it is horrible. i dont wanna get too woe-is-me and sobby, but if there is anything i could have, that i wish for more than anything else, is to have it back, so i could share the experience with a man i really love. i always intended to save myself for marriage, and well... yeah. didnt happen. anyways, i had said in a review a few chapters back that this is based on real life. given there's no magic in real life, and the people involved got away with it, scot-free, thats the beauty of fan fic.i can make "him" recieve a just and (in my mind) fair punishment. anyways. enough of my little sob-fest... i'm glad you like my writing. i'll try my best to redeem myself. :)
Nice twist with Draco being at the door. Well, Ron got her, I suspect he will be made miserable by several people. I wonder if Severus can/will cover his tracks?
Ginny helped Ron rape Hermione. That is disgusting. I think I've had it with this story.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
im sorry you didn't like it. They both will get what they have coming to them in the end. Thanks for reading this far anyways.
Fabulous start.
Oh dear. I hope Ron gets punished, soon, and with something suitable. Azkaban would sound about right.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
no worries, Ron will get what he deserves, and maybe more. *evil grin* he'll pay dearly for what he's done to our 'mione. lol. Back to typing chapter 9!
This story is very interesting and well written - cannot wait to see what happens
please update soon... i want to see Ron and ginny get what's coming to them!
I hope you update soon this is really good!
Is this storie going to be updated soon? Because this is one of my favorites.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
once real life calms down, ya
Whoa, Evil!Ron... I like this story a lot, and I can't wait to read more of it! I especially liked the line about Ron not being the loudest Mandrake in the bunch - it made me giggle. ^_^
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Thanks! Yea, that one i like.
I can't belive this is your first story. It is excellent! I can't wait to see more!
Really great story. I'm waiting for next part with all my patience ^^ Good luck for you! And hugs from Poland :)
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Dzien Dobry! *hugs back to PL*
The next part is coming-- i just have to write it first. lol.
Dziekuje.
OOOOOH! Evil cliffie at the end of Ch.7! I look forward to reading more.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
it is evil indeed...
Wow, awesome story...I can't wait for the next chapter!
By the way, I agree with blue artemis , we SHOULD feed him to the acromantulas! Although knowing Snape and that little...potion, he slipped in Ron's tea...the acromantulas may be TOO easy on him...
Can we feed Ron to the acromantulas?
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Oooohhh... that might be fun...
but dont worry.... Snape's got a plan for him.
ron is nuts
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
yes, yes he is.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
ginny is being mean she needs to see that her brother is nuts
do update soon, i like this story
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
its going through the validation process right now. :)
I just re-read the entire story. This has the makings of a masterpiece, update as soon as you can.
♥ ♥ ♥ Love it!!! Update Soon!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ § Gabz §