Chapter 7
Chapter 7 of 8
togspledEnter extraordinarily eerie epistles, eccentric elegies of engagement.
ReviewedMolly Weasley was not overly pleased with her youngest son. He had ruined his relationship with Hermione, his grades were falling steadily, and he did not sound like himself in his letters home. Molly looked over his latest owl.
Dear Mother,
I know you are worried about Hermione
and me, but do not worry... she shall be a
Weasley in due time. You see, dear Mother,
Hermione and I will share something
unbreakable. Can you decipher what it is?
The Gardeners sowed The One.
And in doing, had much fun.
The Dragon from Devil and Self.
Mine future a mischievous elf.
Oh, you need not have fear,
My steadfast mother dear,
Of one thing I am quite sure:
That Weasley will endure.
Your son,
Ronald
Molly shook her head. The boy always did like Divination class, and now here he was, writing like a Seer. Whatever Ron was up to, though, she would trust Albus Dumbledore to maintain control. After all, the man had handled Fred and George quite well with all their pranks. Whatever stunt Ron was planning on pulling, she was certain the headmaster would manage it.
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The number of times Harry and Ron turned to Hermione for help was lost to Ronald. He wasn't quite sure how often she helped them focus or reminded them of an upcoming assignment. Now that she wasn't readily available to him, Ron's grades were slipping.
In fact, his Potions grade had fallen so low that he was actually asking Neville Longbottom for help. Neville was of no help... Ron's grade kept falling. In fact, he blew up more than one cauldron before Professor Snape decided to put a stop to his reckless brewing.
"Mister Weasley."
"Yes, sir?" Ron said in clipped tones. His recent habit of insubordination threatened to run through his voice every time he spoke to a teacher, and Ronald knew Severus Snape was not the man to cross.
"You will see me after class to discuss the extent of your cauldron-destroying abilities. I will not tolerate any more emergency runs to the hospital wing on your account. Do you understand?"
"Yes, sir," Ron replied, anger beginning to surface. Snape or not, no one had the right to speak to him like that! Still, he sat quietly and waited for class to end.
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Ronald Weasley's persona had hardened considerably over the last few weeks. Ever since his misunderstanding with Hermione, Ron had been on edge. The littlest thing could set him off. He wasn't paying much attention in class, his homework (when he remembered to do it) was less than satisfactory, and his friends were limited to his sister and Rubeus Hagrid.
Hagrid didn't like what Ron had done, but he knew full well that every person, no matter how vile, needed company. Even Hagrid was starting to get annoyed by Ron's short fuse and common outbursts. He chalked it up to guilt and hormones though. Little did Hagrid know, though, Ron had no guilt whatsoever.
In fact, Ronald was planning to further his conquest. He spent hours upon days upon weeks scheming. It was difficult to concentrate on his plan with all sorts of people interrupting him. Every interruption made him more irate than the last. Some nights, he went to bed early while everyone else was at dinner, just to have some peace and quiet to think about his Hermione. Every night, he had the same thoughts:
She was so beautiful. Her honey eyes were deep brown pools of kindness and love. Her face, although hardened by the war, still held a warm smile for everyone she talked to. Her soft, golden-brown hair, which looked so regal and perfect in the candle-light, fell a few inches below her shoulders. Shoulders that he longed to touch, to caress, to rub. To smooth warm oil over her skin and massage it, just to feel her and make her feel good. To slide his hands all over her person, kneading out the knots that stress had created. To run his fingers farther down her body, that body of a goddess. To follow the path his fingers took with his mouth, his tongue and lips playing at every inch of her supple flesh. He wanted to cup her breasts with his hands while his tongue flicked across her hardened nipples. He imagined tasting her skin as he licked, so sweet and divine. He fantasized about suckling on those beautiful breasts while she ran her hands through his shaggy hair, holding him close. His favorite fantasy of his Hermione, though, was of lying between her legs. He would lay lie there for hours, he decided, not stopping his ministrations until she was satisfied. He wanted so badly to take his tongue and lick her there, in her secret place. He wanted to take his mouth and cover her sensitized nub with it, licking it furiously, sucking on it, and perhaps nipping it oh, so gently. He would dart his tongue about her soft folds, tasting her delectable nectar. Ron wanted to delve his tongue into her, to thrust it like he would his manhood. He wished to do so while rubbing her tiny jewel of pleasure with his hand, listening to her mewling cries of orgasm. He wanted all these things and more. Every night, Ron Weasley fantasized about Hermione Granger, and he promised himself that soon he would have her as his own.
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After Potions class had ended, Ron made his way, looking bored as anything, to the front of the room where Professor Snape was waiting. The professor had his typical scowl etched deep into his pale visage. Ron stood before the man, placing his arms akimbo and giving Severus a look of complete disdain. Severus mirrored his expression and began to ream the boy. He scolded him about his lack of caution, his carelessness, warned him about his slipping grades, and then said something completely out of character: "But I'm glad you're doing the work yourself, Mister Weasley."
Ron stood dumbfounded. Had the Greasy Git actually given him a somewhat compliment? Hah. Next thing he knew, the professor would be asking him to tea.
"Come, sit, let's have a spot of tea and discuss how to get your grade up." Ron's jaw dropped, but he snapped it shut to hide his shock. A spot of tea, what? Severus led him into his personal office to two plush chairs. Ron sat, slumping down in an effort to show that he was unfazed by Snape's sudden change of heart. As Severus poured the tea, Ron asked, "So, Professor, why do you suddenly want to help?"
"Well, Mister Weasley, I don't like to see any student of mine fail, even if they are from Gryffindor. The grades and work you are displaying simply do not accurately portray my abilities as a teacher. Besides, I cannot tolerate having another cauldron ruined by your efforts."
Snape's explanation satisfied Ron...there was no way the professor would suggest help merely for the student's behalf. He looked at the teacup before him. The steam rose from the cup and swirled as if beckoning Ron to take a taste. He held the cup gingerly and took a cautious sniff. Chamomile. Hermione. Holding the cup in one hand, he cast Specialis Revelio. Severus cocked an eyebrow at him.
"Checking for poisons, Weasley? I assure you, you'll find none." Of course you won't find them. You're far too stupid, you clumsy dunderhead.
Ron took a deep sip of the hot beverage. It filled him with warmness, the same kind he got when he had snuck some firewhisky from Madam Rosmerta.
"Mister Weasley, I propose that you begin seeing a tutor on a weekly basis. Start perhaps at one or two times a week. I suggest a Ravenclaw." Ron started to interrupt, but Severus raised a hand. "I'll see to it that things are managed financially, so you don't need to worry about that. It's not like you can go to Miss Granger to have her do your work for free."
That did it. Ron's face colored deeply. He quickly drained his tea and stood to leave. "If that is all?"
Severus nodded slightly. "Have a good evening, Mister Weasley. I trust you can show yourself out?"
"I can," Ron stated defiantly as he stormed out.
My, my, thought Severus, I seem to have struck a chord with Weasley. Soon enough, though, he'll see what happens when you mess with another man's witch. Not that she's my witch, of course. His fingers played idly with the small vial in his pocket, the contents of which had just found their way into Ron's tea.
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Hermione Granger sat in front of the fire in the Head's common room, awaiting her supper. She hated how she had to stay in her rooms for meals just because of having to keep distance from Ron. She hated how Ginny had turned from being one of her best friends to not even speaking to Hermione. She hated how different her life had become. She hated how she missed Ron. She was supposed to hate him, so why was she missing his friendship? She tried to think about every mean and hurtful thing he had said or done to her, but happy memories kept creeping into her thoughts. She sighed.
"Harry, is that you?" Hermione called when she heard the painting swing open.
"No, guess again... Mione."
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Loads of gratitude go to RobisonRocket for her amazing beta work!
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Latest 25 Reviews for My Savior
79 Reviews | 5.72/10 Average
.... this cant be the end!!! please do finish this fic...the first u ever wrote u said.wow! this is pretty good.and also very sad fic. hopefully snape hexes the hell outta ron.
oooh... i can't wait to read more! this story rocks!
Hi, I'm really enjoying this story, will there be an update soon?
Whether your first fic or not it is very good! I look forward to the rest of it.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
sigh, real life, don'tcha hate it? hopefully real life will slow down and i can get the next chappie out. A lot of people were really mad about the last one, and I hope to redeem myself as an author with this next one.
and yup, my first.
I have loved the story so far. It has been great! I can't wait for future chapters.
Wow, I see you got a few flames. I'm sorry to see that. I think you are doing a great job with this story, if people are upset by non con then they shouldn't read a story with that warning. Don't let it get you down, I want to know what will happen next so update soon with your head held high!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
thank you so much, you have no idea how badly i needed to hear that. yeah, i thought i had made that pretty clear in the warnings, but oh well. chappie 9 is in the planning/writing
I must admit that I really, really, really hated that you let Ron sucseed in raping her. Wanting and trying to, yes, but sucseeding, I absolutely hate it when the villains in the story gets to have their will. Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about. I see from previous reviews that you promise that Ron and Ginny will get their due for their actions, but in my book rape ain't entertaining and the violation of another person should be punished almost as hard as murder. You write very well though so I will give you a chance to redeem yourself:-) (But, again, the story lost a bit of it brilliance with allowing the rape).
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
"Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about." -- when i read that, i have to admit i almost cried. that is exactly what it feels like. and it is horrible. i dont wanna get too woe-is-me and sobby, but if there is anything i could have, that i wish for more than anything else, is to have it back, so i could share the experience with a man i really love. i always intended to save myself for marriage, and well... yeah. didnt happen. anyways, i had said in a review a few chapters back that this is based on real life. given there's no magic in real life, and the people involved got away with it, scot-free, thats the beauty of fan fic.i can make "him" recieve a just and (in my mind) fair punishment. anyways. enough of my little sob-fest... i'm glad you like my writing. i'll try my best to redeem myself. :)
Nice twist with Draco being at the door. Well, Ron got her, I suspect he will be made miserable by several people. I wonder if Severus can/will cover his tracks?
Ginny helped Ron rape Hermione. That is disgusting. I think I've had it with this story.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
im sorry you didn't like it. They both will get what they have coming to them in the end. Thanks for reading this far anyways.
Fabulous start.
Oh dear. I hope Ron gets punished, soon, and with something suitable. Azkaban would sound about right.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
no worries, Ron will get what he deserves, and maybe more. *evil grin* he'll pay dearly for what he's done to our 'mione. lol. Back to typing chapter 9!
This story is very interesting and well written - cannot wait to see what happens
please update soon... i want to see Ron and ginny get what's coming to them!
I hope you update soon this is really good!
Is this storie going to be updated soon? Because this is one of my favorites.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
once real life calms down, ya
Whoa, Evil!Ron... I like this story a lot, and I can't wait to read more of it! I especially liked the line about Ron not being the loudest Mandrake in the bunch - it made me giggle. ^_^
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Thanks! Yea, that one i like.
I can't belive this is your first story. It is excellent! I can't wait to see more!
Really great story. I'm waiting for next part with all my patience ^^ Good luck for you! And hugs from Poland :)
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Dzien Dobry! *hugs back to PL*
The next part is coming-- i just have to write it first. lol.
Dziekuje.
OOOOOH! Evil cliffie at the end of Ch.7! I look forward to reading more.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
it is evil indeed...
Wow, awesome story...I can't wait for the next chapter!
By the way, I agree with blue artemis , we SHOULD feed him to the acromantulas! Although knowing Snape and that little...potion, he slipped in Ron's tea...the acromantulas may be TOO easy on him...
Can we feed Ron to the acromantulas?
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Oooohhh... that might be fun...
but dont worry.... Snape's got a plan for him.
ron is nuts
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
yes, yes he is.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
ginny is being mean she needs to see that her brother is nuts
do update soon, i like this story
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
its going through the validation process right now. :)
I just re-read the entire story. This has the makings of a masterpiece, update as soon as you can.
♥ ♥ ♥ Love it!!! Update Soon!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ § Gabz §