Chapter 3
Chapter 3 of 8
togspledRon realizes recognition ?round rascal reactions receives reprimanding
Reviewed“Mr. Potter, Mr. Weasley, you will see me after class,” Snape snarled.
The two boys looked at each other. Ron had fear in his eyes while Harry was confused. Why would Snape want to see them? It had been years since they took anything from his private stores—what could the Potions master want?
As the other students fled the dank classroom, Harry and Ron approached Professor Snape’s desk.
“Sir?”
“Ah, yes. I trust you are aware of Miss Granger’s condition?”
“Well, sir,” Harry started, “we don’t know too many details, but Professor McGonagall said that she’s resting in the hospital wing. What happened, sir?”
“Funny, you say that as though I need to inform you of your own deeds.”
Ron looked pale, and his hands began to tremble slightly.
“My own deeds? What do you mean? Are you insinuating that I hurt her somehow?” Harry’s voice rose in anger and disbelief. “She’s one of my best friends! I would never hurt Hermione!”
“Well then, Mr. Potter,” replied Snape, “you won’t mind allowing me to use Legilimency?”
“Of course not, Professor,” Harry said as he looked Severus straight in the eyes, “go right ahead.”
As Snape probed Harry’s memories, he remembered that he had trained the boy in Occlumency. Potter could easily be hiding that morning’s events from him. He groaned slightly in frustration. However, there was no lapse of time or missing bits to be found. Harry hid nothing: waking up, relaxing in the common room, getting his books ready for the day, but something was missing: Ronald Weasley. Where was Weasley? Weren’t he and Potter inseparable? It was then that Snape knew who Miss Granger’s attacker was.
Looking up sharply from Harry’s eyes, Severus all but yelled, “Mr. Weasley, you will come to the headmaster’s office with me immediately! Mr. Potter, you may go.” Snape gave a cold, hard stare to Ron. The boy will pay dearly for hurting her, he angrily thought. How could he do this to such a beautiful, intelligent, innocent girl? Sweet Circe, if I had a witch like Hermione in my life, I would never hurt her in any manner! He had to get these thoughts out of his head! No! No, she is a student; there is nothing special about her. I have no feelings for the girl! Deep down, however, his soul knew it wasn’t true.
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Grasping Ron by the arm, Snape dragged him roughly to Albus Dumbledore’s office. Ron tried to hide his fear and guilt as they approached the stone gargoyle outside the headmaster’s office, but his emotions were too powerful. Before Albus could even offer a lemon drop, Ron rushed though a garbled confession of the whole story. Snape smiled softly to himself, as he knew justice would be served.
It wasn’t until Albus said his name that Severus realized Ron had left. Snape had been too busy thinking of all possible poisons that would inflict as much pain as possible on the boy. His head snapped up.
“Yes, sir?”
“I would like you to keep an eye on Miss Granger. I noticed you let your mind wander during my discussion with Mr. Weasley. I don’t blame you—one student hurting another is not a pleasant topic. Just so we know you understand, the head girl’s rooms have now been re-warded. Only staff and Miss Granger are allowed in. While Mr. Weasley is going to remain schooling here, he is to have no contact with Miss Granger outside of class. He also will be seeing her shortly to explain what he did to her this morning. I will ask you to please keep an eye on her and to go to the hospital wing now. She may need someone to help her cope with this shock.”
“Headmaster,” Severus interjected, “I am not a babysitter— I am a Potions master! It is not in my contract to hold Miss Granger’s hand when things do not go her way!”
Albus’ voice took on a sharp tone. “Severus Snape. While your contract does not say to hold her hand, it does say that you will protect the students from all harm. That includes psychological trauma. Now then…” He motioned at the door.
Severus sighed. “Sir, I hope you know what you’re doing.” He turned and left for the infirmary. How dare he! What is that old man up to? Did Dumbledore know the inner battle he was fighting? The emotions he was so desperately trying to repress?
Back in his office, Albus Dumbledore shook his head. “Oh, Fawkes,” he commented to the beautiful red-gold bird beside him, “as tragic as these events are, it may be just what those two need to realize their kismet.” With that, he popped a lemon drop into his mouth.
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Special thanks to my beta, RobisonRocket! Gods, she's brilliant! Don't know how I'd do it without her.
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Latest 25 Reviews for My Savior
79 Reviews | 5.72/10 Average
.... this cant be the end!!! please do finish this fic...the first u ever wrote u said.wow! this is pretty good.and also very sad fic. hopefully snape hexes the hell outta ron.
oooh... i can't wait to read more! this story rocks!
Hi, I'm really enjoying this story, will there be an update soon?
Whether your first fic or not it is very good! I look forward to the rest of it.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
sigh, real life, don'tcha hate it? hopefully real life will slow down and i can get the next chappie out. A lot of people were really mad about the last one, and I hope to redeem myself as an author with this next one.
and yup, my first.
I have loved the story so far. It has been great! I can't wait for future chapters.
Wow, I see you got a few flames. I'm sorry to see that. I think you are doing a great job with this story, if people are upset by non con then they shouldn't read a story with that warning. Don't let it get you down, I want to know what will happen next so update soon with your head held high!
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
thank you so much, you have no idea how badly i needed to hear that. yeah, i thought i had made that pretty clear in the warnings, but oh well. chappie 9 is in the planning/writing
I must admit that I really, really, really hated that you let Ron sucseed in raping her. Wanting and trying to, yes, but sucseeding, I absolutely hate it when the villains in the story gets to have their will. Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about. I see from previous reviews that you promise that Ron and Ginny will get their due for their actions, but in my book rape ain't entertaining and the violation of another person should be punished almost as hard as murder. You write very well though so I will give you a chance to redeem yourself:-) (But, again, the story lost a bit of it brilliance with allowing the rape).
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
"Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about." -- when i read that, i have to admit i almost cried. that is exactly what it feels like. and it is horrible. i dont wanna get too woe-is-me and sobby, but if there is anything i could have, that i wish for more than anything else, is to have it back, so i could share the experience with a man i really love. i always intended to save myself for marriage, and well... yeah. didnt happen. anyways, i had said in a review a few chapters back that this is based on real life. given there's no magic in real life, and the people involved got away with it, scot-free, thats the beauty of fan fic.i can make "him" recieve a just and (in my mind) fair punishment. anyways. enough of my little sob-fest... i'm glad you like my writing. i'll try my best to redeem myself. :)
Nice twist with Draco being at the door. Well, Ron got her, I suspect he will be made miserable by several people. I wonder if Severus can/will cover his tracks?
Ginny helped Ron rape Hermione. That is disgusting. I think I've had it with this story.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
im sorry you didn't like it. They both will get what they have coming to them in the end. Thanks for reading this far anyways.
Fabulous start.
Oh dear. I hope Ron gets punished, soon, and with something suitable. Azkaban would sound about right.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
no worries, Ron will get what he deserves, and maybe more. *evil grin* he'll pay dearly for what he's done to our 'mione. lol. Back to typing chapter 9!
This story is very interesting and well written - cannot wait to see what happens
please update soon... i want to see Ron and ginny get what's coming to them!
I hope you update soon this is really good!
Is this storie going to be updated soon? Because this is one of my favorites.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
once real life calms down, ya
Whoa, Evil!Ron... I like this story a lot, and I can't wait to read more of it! I especially liked the line about Ron not being the loudest Mandrake in the bunch - it made me giggle. ^_^
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Thanks! Yea, that one i like.
I can't belive this is your first story. It is excellent! I can't wait to see more!
Really great story. I'm waiting for next part with all my patience ^^ Good luck for you! And hugs from Poland :)
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Dzien Dobry! *hugs back to PL*
The next part is coming-- i just have to write it first. lol.
Dziekuje.
OOOOOH! Evil cliffie at the end of Ch.7! I look forward to reading more.
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
it is evil indeed...
Wow, awesome story...I can't wait for the next chapter!
By the way, I agree with blue artemis , we SHOULD feed him to the acromantulas! Although knowing Snape and that little...potion, he slipped in Ron's tea...the acromantulas may be TOO easy on him...
Can we feed Ron to the acromantulas?
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
Oooohhh... that might be fun...
but dont worry.... Snape's got a plan for him.
ron is nuts
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
yes, yes he is.
Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)
ginny is being mean she needs to see that her brother is nuts
do update soon, i like this story
Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)
its going through the validation process right now. :)
I just re-read the entire story. This has the makings of a masterpiece, update as soon as you can.
♥ ♥ ♥ Love it!!! Update Soon!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ § Gabz §