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My Savior

1: Chapter 1

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3: Chapter 3

4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

My Savior

togspled

79 Reviews   |   79 Ratings, 0 Likes, 28 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 14,568 Words 8 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Ronald Weasley Severus Snape Draco Malfoy Poppy Pomfrey

Hermione is faced with some tough times emotionally this year. Who will it be who helps her cope and survive? Will he, a fallen angel himself, succeed in saving her?

Ratings and warnings for later chapters.

(this is my first ever fic. be nice!)

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8


About togspled

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togspled

Member Since 2006  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 2  |  386 Reviews Written  |  129 Review Responses

I'm Emilie. I spend most of my time studying, buried in piles of books. It's not the most exciting life, but it's what i do. Other than that, I snowboard, read fanfic, attempt to write, and hang out with my man, Dave. He promises to dress up like Severus and give me detention, but i'm still waiting on that one. :(. Anyone know where I can get a snape costume? lol. Anyways, I like quick updates. I hate seafood.

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http://myspace.com/emilieansay

Reviews for My Savior

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10/10

lalena_laurdania

.... this cant be the end!!! please do finish this fic...the first u ever wrote u said.wow! this is pretty good.and also very sad fic. hopefully snape hexes the hell outta ron.

0/10

snapefan2007

oooh... i can't wait to read more!  this story rocks!

0/10

sinbad

Hi, I'm really enjoying this story, will there be an update soon?

9/10

Morganabythesea

Whether your first fic or not it is very good!  I look forward to the rest of it. 

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

sigh, real life, don'tcha hate it? hopefully real life will slow down and i can get the next chappie out. A lot of people were really mad about the last one, and I hope to redeem myself as an author with this next one.
and yup, my first.

0/10

gigi1678

I have loved the story so far.  It has been great!  I can't wait for future chapters.

10/10

sinbad

Wow, I see you got a few flames.  I'm sorry to see that.  I think you are doing a great job with this story, if people are upset by non con then they shouldn't read a story with that warning.  Don't let it get you down, I want to know what will happen next so update soon with your head held high!

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

thank you so much, you have no idea how badly i needed to hear that. yeah, i thought i had made that pretty clear in the warnings, but oh well. chappie 9 is in the planning/writing

9/10

Sampdoria

I must admit that I really, really, really hated that you let Ron sucseed in raping her. Wanting and trying to, yes, but sucseeding, I absolutely hate it when the villains in the story gets to have their will. Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about. I see from previous reviews that you promise that Ron and Ginny will get their due for their actions, but in my book rape ain't entertaining and the violation of another person should be punished almost as hard as murder. You write very well though so I will give you a chance to redeem yourself:-) (But, again, the story lost a bit of it brilliance with allowing the rape).

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

"Ron took something away from her that she can never have back and that she can never willingly give to a man she cares about." -- when i read that, i have to admit i almost cried. that is exactly what it feels like. and it is horrible. i dont wanna get too woe-is-me and sobby, but if there is anything i could have, that i wish for more than anything else, is to have it back, so i could share the experience with a man i really love. i always intended to save myself for marriage, and well... yeah. didnt happen. anyways, i had said in a review a few chapters back that this is based on real life. given there's no magic in real life, and the people involved got away with it, scot-free, thats the beauty of fan fic.i can make "him" recieve a just and (in my mind) fair punishment. anyways. enough of my little sob-fest... i'm glad you like my writing. i'll try my best to redeem myself. :)

10/10

sinbad

Nice twist with Draco being at the door.  Well, Ron got her, I suspect he will be made miserable by several people.  I wonder if Severus can/will cover his tracks?

1/10

blue artemis

Ginny helped Ron rape Hermione.  That is disgusting.  I think I've had it with this story. 

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

im sorry you didn't like it. They both will get what they have coming to them in the end. Thanks for reading this far anyways.

8/10

Merlinsbeard

Fabulous start.

0/10

Mint Stick

Oh dear. I hope Ron gets punished, soon, and with something suitable. Azkaban would sound about right.

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

no worries, Ron will get what he deserves, and maybe more. *evil grin* he'll pay dearly for what he's done to our 'mione. lol. Back to typing chapter 9!

9/10

ladyluv

This story is very interesting and well written - cannot wait to see what happens

9/10

chyara

please update soon...  i want to see Ron and ginny get what's coming to them!

10/10

sinbad

I hope you update soon this is really good!

10/10

hevenly620

Is this storie going to be updated soon? Because this is one of my favorites.

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

once real life calms down, ya

0/10

deathbyshikon

Whoa, Evil!Ron... I like this story a lot, and I can't wait to read more of it! I especially liked the line about Ron not being the loudest Mandrake in the bunch - it made me giggle. ^_^

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

Thanks! Yea, that one i like.

10/10

sinbad

I can't belive this is your first story. It is excellent! I can't wait to see more!

10/10

bassiunia

Really great story. I'm waiting for next part with all my patience ^^ Good luck for you! And hugs from Poland :)

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

Dzien Dobry!  *hugs back to PL*

The next part is coming-- i just have to write it first. lol.

Dziekuje.

8/10

amsev

OOOOOH! Evil cliffie at the end of Ch.7!  I look forward to reading more.

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

it is evil indeed...

10/10

SlytherinGirl_260489

Wow, awesome story...I can't wait for the next chapter!

By the way, I agree with blue artemis , we SHOULD feed him to the acromantulas! Although knowing Snape and that little...potion, he slipped in Ron's tea...the acromantulas may be TOO easy on him...

10/10

blue artemis

Can we feed Ron to the acromantulas?

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

Oooohhh... that might be fun...

but dont worry.... Snape's got a plan for him.

0/10

harrypotterfan2005

ron is nuts

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

yes, yes he is.

Response from harrypotterfan2005 (Reviewer)

ginny is being mean she needs to see that her brother is nuts

0/10

loveeyourhatee

do update soon, i like this story

Response from togspled (Author of My Savior)

its going through the validation process right now. :)

10/10

sinbad

I just re-read the entire story.  This has the makings of a masterpiece, update as soon as you can.

10/10

xoxox_Gabby_xoxox

♥ ♥ ♥ Love it!!! Update Soon!!! ♥ ♥ ♥ § Gabz §

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