This is awesome, I just love it! 

Hahahahahhahahah! Love the ending!

As Ron would say '' BLOODY BRILLANT''

I have no idea how I came to miss this,  but I'm glad I found it,an MLC that gives the muggle born the power; brillant , as always.

That was pure enjoyment!

Great story! 

This is wonderful! I don't think I've read it before, which is amazing given that I adore marriage law challenges. Thanks for the neat story.

- if she tried to bring her own extensive collection to such cramped quarters, they’d run out of air to breathe. An inconvenience, when breathing was very helpful if one wanted to keep reading.

LOL! Priorities and Hermione - always a winning combination! Then again, you're the person who had Hermione say after Sev had his nose reduced for a new identity, "I don’t know if this new nose is even going to reach my clit, let alone rub it in all the right ways!"

- an I’ll consider it from the man who was now her husband was a lot more encouraging than almost anyone else’s outright yes

Well said!

- “I’ll reserve judgement, if you don’t mind. At least until you’ve proved you can do it again. It might’ve been a lucky one-off, after all.”
The shock in his dark gaze was priceless. 

rofl

- May all your children be Ravenclaws

good one

- With potentially bad hair and teeth, but there were plenty of Muggle and magical ways of fixing such things. One couldn’t, however, cure an inherited lack of intelligence.

something that every smart kid should hear from their parents but never repeat to their classmates

- As much as I love the Weasleys, you only have to look at them to see how they’ll inbreed themselves into utter stupidity in two to three more generations.

Good point, though I suspect that growing up with an imbecile like Ron and a delusional fangirl like Ginny might bias her opinion somewhat.

- the congenital defects clearly inherent within Bellatrix Lestrange and her cousin, Sirius Black....He was an immature arse....he still thought the man hung the bloody moon, rather than should be hung from it...

It's a pity that so many fics still have Sirius as a good guy. Mind you, I have no objection to him pursuing a career as a gigolo, as long as he slunk back into his kennel before dawn broke.

- You may bind me, you may spank me, you may tease me with your luscious body until I scream with frustration, but you will not cut me off from my books!

LOL! Bookworms of the world unite!

I like the way they both contributed to the Marriage Law. The MLC was a horrible, evil, idea, as anyone who came from a culture were arranged marriages were the norm would know, so it's nice seeing someone treat it with the disrespect that it deserves.

For once, a marriage law that makes sense - though saying that the Mudbloods will be in charge of the checkbook (and that the Ministry acknowledges that most of the Magicals are halfies) makes it clear that the fic is meant to be a parody of the MLC. But it sure is nice to see something different!Lol @ Hermione telling Dumbles to "Fetch me paper and pen"Umbridge is a Mudblood? Crikey crikey. (That's a double crikey, in case you didnt recognize it)- “Purple! You like the colour purple.I was greatly reassured of the intelligence of the students surrounding Ron when they heard this. How could anyone be that dumb? Just because he's male and Gryffindor and ... oh, right, that's reason enough already. No need to mention that inherited brains only go to the five oldest boys.- “I will not even begin to touch Miss Umbridge’s claim of her age, since her point was that she and Professor Snape are chronological contemporaries,” Hermione stated dryly, causing two of the wizards to choke, and Madam Philliston’ lips to twitch upward before it was struggled back down into firm neutrality...Ah, Hermione... a noble Gryffindor would never stoop to baiting her inferiors - thank Merlin you're a Slytherin in all but name!children who really should’ve been taught how to wield the English language a lot better than like some dunderheaded AmericanLOL! Though it does bring up the question - why have I never seen a copy of the New Yorker in a fic? Oh wait, I just remembered, I did see it in one Azkaban!Hermione fic, but really, one fic out of tens of thousands! Surely there must be greater overlap between New Yorker readers and fanfic writers!

Love it!  Great story.

Oh ick.  Dolores Umbridge.  GAG ACK BARF.  Go Hermione!  Fun story so far.  Love the bit of humor Snape shows with his note about Chapter 6.

omg to cute the love makeing book for dunderheads was brilliant i lmaothank you for making the story short and sweetit gave me a chance to read a whole story while the baby napped yours trulyjulie

What a great story!  I had read the first chapter before but for some reason I had never read the second.  Definitely a story to put in 'my favorite stories.'Thank you for writing it and I eagerly await more.  (That's my not-so-subtle hint, lol!)                               

I don't even want to know how you get papercuts on your you-know-what...ah, nevermind. That was devilishly funny, and a wonderful distraction from my own writing. Now if I only had the self dicipline to get back to work...

Oh how I love your writing.  Devilish good smut.

Great laughs over many of these scenes.  I most appreciated the final tongue-in-cheek revenge of our favorite underappreciated spy. ~

Great laughs over many of these scenes.  I most appreciated the final tongue-in-cheek revenge of our favorite underappreciated spy. ~

Lovely role reversal -- witty and sweet!  Well-written as always, LOTM!

"Hasn't he suffered enough?"It's a good thing I'm not eating as I read this, or my death by asphixiation would be on your shoulders.Hermione's determination is something too many authors neglect. Smashing first chapter!

"Hasn't he suffered enough?"It's a good thing I'm not eating as I read this, or my death by asphixiation would be on your shoulders.Hermione's determination is something too many authors neglect. Smashing first chapter!

What a lovely story! It was a great read; hot and a lot of fun too. The paper-cuts and Hermione's speech in the court room had me lmao ^^Thanks!

Excellent. Fluffy. Just lovely. :-)

very cute

very funny and very sexy! i just loved the ending and all the references to 'sex for dunderheads.' great story!

Very amusing. I haven't been reading much recently as I've been busy writing, so it's pleasant to come back and be so enjoyably entertained.