Just when you think they're finally going to share a kiss. But, I didn't think you'd make things that easy.  Where would the fun be in that. However, I think Hermione has a valid point, and it just might work. Then she can tell Severus that she told him so.

*sighs happily*  Lovely chapter.  I do hope the kiss works and I really like how you're keeping him conflicted (for now), it all rings very 'true' to him. 

Hmmm interesting theory.  Well I'll have to wait and see.  Great chapter, wonderful story.

I love the idea of her being woken by a kiss. 

Amazing concept for a story.  I'm hooked.

*sighs*Fantastic story, I've read through what you've written so far and I'm spellbound.  I usually don't beg authors for updates, so, "Imperio!  Update soon!"

Well thank Merlin her mind is Ok.  Severus had better get cracking on getting the curse reversed.

This chapter was just so romantic with the interaction between Severus and Hermione, even though it was inside her mind. They are definitely in love with each other, and I can't wait to see how they come up with a cure. The relationship will definitely be more heated at that point, and I can imagine Harry interfering.

Yay Snape!

I just started to read this story, and I wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying it. I'm really glad Severus was able to use Legilimency on Hermione. Perhaps it's because of the bond he already had with her through giving Harry his magic. That's probably why Dumbledore couldn't do it; he doesn't have that bond. Perhaps, the two of them can work together in Hermione's mind to find a way to counteract the curse.

Argh, there used to be more of this, it's vanished!

This is brilliant. I'm on tenterhooks here, and the tension level -- while painful -- is wonderful!

Even with the evil, evil cliffie, I'm so happy to be reading this. So suspenseful and haunting. Here's hoping somebody comes up with the key to breaking the curse soon!

Wonderful to see this updated.  Thanks! I can't wait to read the next installment.

I thought you've given up on this story!  I was happy to see an update for it.  And now I'll shameless beg for a happy ending.  Please?  Pretty please?  Sugar and a cherry on top?You hooked me a long time ago with this story and I'd love to see it end happily.  All I really want is Severus and Hermione well and happy together, but having the gossip-loving, life-ruining Nettie fired and Harry smacked upside the head would be welcome, too.  ;)  Thanks for your work!

This is indeed very sad. I want to scream at Harry and the others for thinking she isn't able to hear them... I want to slap snap for not thinking of using legilimancy! I wan to beg her to hang on and have faith that SOMEONE will realize what is going on and find a way to save her. I like angsty stories, but I prefer the ones that find a happy ending... PLEASE? Waiting anxiously for more,Shiloh

I don't know if I've read anything quite so romantic. It's a very beautiful story - I'm prepping the kleenex!

Please write faster this is such a great story....I will beg if I must I'm not above groveling either. You have such great ideas about the problems I can't wait to see how they end up being solved.

This fic is magnificent. The pain, emotion and angst is leeching off the cpmuter screen in waves.  Fab creative process might I add. Now I just need MORE PLEEEEASE? A dozen Sugar Quills for your museBlessings

Aww that's so sad....  Why won't he visit her?! Surely he's not stupid enough to think its a real coma! Why does Lucius Malfoy have to be such an evil git?!Please update soon!~Sarah

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Im gonna killlll him if he doesnt go and visit her soon. Do the mind reading thingy... Ya... *shifty eyes* cant wait for more updates!

I know I've read this somewhere. Where else do you post at? Its a very good story and I love it.Red

I love it i must know more. Very compelling story.

This is a very interesting and beautiful story. I look forward to updates to see how you develop an already intriguing and heartwrenching storyline. Keep up the outstanding work! ~The Mistress

Very touching, and quite the puzzle. I'm glad you posted this and look forward to reading more.