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Heart With No Companion
michmak160 Reviews | 6.53/10 (160 Ratings, 0 Likes, 89 Favorites )
"Well, Miss Granger, even incapacitated as you are, you are still causing me trouble."
Snape-Hermione angst/romance with a twist.
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Mother of three, working out of the house in the field of public relations. I have a very understanding husband and lots of quirks, which probably make me more irritiating than interesting. I used to write lots of fanfiction, but have fallen away from it the past little while, mostly due to personal issues (although some fandom issues surfaced as well). Snape/Hermione is still my 'ship of choice, and that won't change despite what Rowling presents in the last book.
Reviews for Heart With No Companion
Aarg you are killing me with that cliffie. Excellent chapter anyway.
Ah man! A cliffie... I'm really, really, really eager to see the next chapter. But this one was a whopper, filled with angst and knuckle-whitening tension. Wonderful job!
Great chapter. It brought tears to my eyes and I was literally 'on the edge of my seat' reading it. Lovely job!
This was very creepy and exciting all at once, with a strong dose of Orpheus and Eurydice (all that "Don't look back" stuff!) But what a heartbreaking cliffhanger! Hermione better have one amazing plan...
Oh poo, you better save themboth or I will cry! What a scary chapter good job.
Oh, that was kind of scary and sad at the end. I really enjoyed the singing, by the way, that detail was lovely.
You made me cry! That is a dramatic chapter. I can't wait for more.
I just discover your story a few days ago and I read it practicly (save for a little sleep) in one shot . This is brilliant and I long to know if the potion will succeed. As I saw you are updating quickly I hope I won't have to wait to long.
Uhoh, it would seem the curse knows what they're trying to do. I hope it does work, however. It would be nice to see Hermione and Severus together in the real world, and not just in her mind. I'm so happy Severus told Hermione how she felt. I can't wait to see the next chapter(s).
Well that was rather ominous! Why do I have a very bad feeling about their attempts to break the curse? I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter!
Oh I hope this works, delish tention!
Actually, Snape said "welcome" in Cantonese. As in "Welcome to my home." So it's a little odd for the man to be saying "thank you" while Snape seems to be welcoming him to China, haha. The translation for "you're welcome" in Cantonese is something more like "Doesn't matter."
Just thought you would like to know for future references.
Personally, I found this chapter a little boring with the Potions talk being a little dragged on but I love the story. Awaiting your next update.
Oh my. That last paragraph sounds ominous after all those reassurances about this potion!
What mixed feelings in this chapter. Is Snape's appearance due solely to neglecting himself, or is the curse now beginning to work on him as well? What if the only way to bring Hermione out of it is for him to succumb to it? And then what would that do to her? But yet it sounds like he has some promising leads, and Harry's even trying to be helpful. You've planted so many intriguing questions! I look forward to your next update.
I knew things wouldn't go smoothly. I was quite shocked when I saw that the chapter was called "Harry." I really wasn't expecting that, but it was rather refreshing. I can't wait to find out what happens--though I'm not too sure that I really want to know. Wonderful chapter.
Thank you for writing this most wonderful version of Snape in love, and in character.
I just adore Nettie! I always love her perspective and commentary. She's very well-written. Harry and Severus united at last? I can't wait to see how this tentative partnership will fare.
Great story! Keep up the good work. I hope Severus does not have to take the curse into himself to save Hermione
Stunning. Cant wait to see if this plan works!
I really liked that chapter. Harry is hardheaded, but mainly good hearted. And you showed that.
This story just keeps getting better. I can't wait to see what happens next, I almost picture an exorcism type action.
This is shaping up to be very very interesting. So happy that I came across it. Hopefully, you will update soon and often cause I think that I am a little addicted...
I think that this is one of my favorite stories. I always come away smiling. Mary.
*sighs happily*Lovely chapter. Nettie rocks! Keep all those old gossipy cows away. And I love that Severus is starting to trust her, too. Can't wait for the kiss! (My fingers and toes are crossed that it will work.)
Wonderful chapter. I'm basically in love with Nettie; she's one of my favorite original characters in the world of fanfiction :o) Can't wait for more awesome-ness; I hope Hermione wakes up soon. Sue.