EXCELLENT!!

This is a really beautifully poignant tale.  I'm reviewing with tears rolling down my face at the love and sadness in this final chapter.  I have enjoyed the whole tale and think that you should be commended for a plot that is undulating with twists and turns that lead the readers down a fascinating path.  I particularly enjoyed the descriptive passages where you created the replicated Hogwarts within the confines of Hermione's mind.Your dialogue was flowing and wonderful.Altogether a jolly good weepy!!!Blessings for you and your Oma & Opa

Now my son is wondering why I'm crying at the computer screen...  That was a beautiful, tragic story.  Though the thought of living in mental constructs when the body begins to fail has its own allure.Thank you for this fic.

I loved this story, even with its happy/sad ending. I'm happy that Severus and Hermione are living their lives together, and it seems that to them it's real. But it's sad that they're not awake in the real world.  But at least they're together.

A lovely finish for our favourite duo.  That curse was a real 'bugger', a cackling Lucius? LMAO!!This was a wonderful story, thanks for sharing!  Cheers!

You may not believe this, but it is 5:45 am where I am. I have followed your story from the beginning and now did th unthinkable. Stayed up until this very hour to finish reading it. All I could say about this whole thing is...wow...5 stars, and if there were 10 stars, that's what I would give. Exquisite work!

Despite the fact that I have tears streaming down my face and that this story really was angst, I like this ending better than the overall happy one that I had originally thought.  It seems to make it more 3-D. And more beautiful.Also, thanks for the lyrics to "Storybook Love."  I've heard the first verse and chorus so many times at the end of the "Princess Bride,"  but I never knew the rest of the song.  Great fic.  Sad, but beautiful.

They did it!  And it all ended happy, despite your angst categorization.  I will no proceed to the epilogue.  Great, great job with this chapter!

I cried.

Then smiled. 

At least they are together. 

as sad as it was, it was also heartening.  Of course, I'm crying and it's almost 11 pm, barely able to focus on the computer screen through the haze of tears.  It is absolutely brilliant and a few chapters ago I wondered if they might end up together like this, but didn't believe you'd do it!Well done, thank you for the wonderful story.

Oh that was fun. Bravo! *throws confetti* Thank you for completeing this one I really enjoyed it :) 

wow, that actually made me tear up a bit. which is saying something, as i've never cried during any other fanfic. i mean, i did cry a bit during hp6, but its jkr. =]wonderful story, though i almost wish i hadn't read the epilogue, but not really.

This is beautiful ending but ... while I was reading this chapter I was alerted that you've already updated the epilogue. I'm curious so I just decided to have a look. The first phrase almost devastated me. And I couldn't take my eyes off of the screen. They filled with tears with each line read. At the end I was completely crying. So I dried my eyes and came back here. To finish the "happy ending". I don't know what to add. This is unexpected but so beautiful. I'm not sure I will review the epilogue : it is too overwhelming for me. I can't say I'm easily touched like that by a fic nor have I cried like that for a long time. Anyway Huge thanks for that brilliant story.

Urg!  I feel like I've been kicked in the gut.  But that's good, it's the mark of a well-done story.  Tragic, and I'm crying now, but very, very well-done!

Yay!  I love this ending, and I've loved your story through all its permutations as it unfolded.  Thanks so much for a lovely journey!

That chapter was very well written, I actually cried for them.  I hope they are happy in their minds even if their bodies can no longer go on.

Well, ok, definitely less happy and more teary than I was at the end of the last chapter.  But at least they are together in their way.

Thanks so much for the lovely happy ending!  What an insidious curse, and so cleverly realized.  This has been an excellent story.  I look forward to the epilogue.

Ah, what an evil cliffhanger!

Oh man, just when I thought everyone would get out. I should've realized it wouldn't be that easy. I hope Hermione is able to get Severus out, and that Harry can get all three of them out.  I would hate to see Severus and Hermione forever trapped in her mind. That would really suck. But all-in-all, this whole chapter was heroically romantic.

This was great. I love Trelawney sudden appearance. What a great use of her.

I LOVED Hermione telling off Harry.  He can be a lovable protective prat sometimes! After all, he did think to ask Snape what was happening with her.I glad Hermione finally was able to communicate.You are doing a wonderful job with the change in perspective yet moving the story forward.

Ack!  No!  Oh, I hope you're planning to save them both!

Aarg you are killing me with that cliffie. Excellent chapter anyway.