Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream
melusin52 Reviews | 52 Ratings, 0 Likes, 117 Favorites )
Oh and there's a Blindfold - I forgot to mention the Blindfold!
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Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.
Reviews for Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream
Nice sustained smut. I think this was very well-written, and the feeling of being overwhelmed post anal sex was particularly realistic- you rarely see that in fic. I think perhaps your strongest skill is the humor in your stories. Fantastic.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you. I remember it was more difficult to convey a sense of intimacy than describe the sex at the time. I still find it difficult to some extent. And I'm afraid I can never resist putting humour in somewhere - 'cos life's like that. :)
sustained smuttyness?! I SHOULD THINK SO!!! Got me all hot n bothered. now where's that guy I wanna jump...?? 
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
LOL! Glad you thought so. If you're in the mood for more, follow the link to my journal on my bio page and go to Needs Must (but only if you like a submissive Severus)
Thank you for reviewing.
really good job, I did like that they secretly loved each other.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
thanks. Glad you enjoyed it
This was absolutely exquisite! Keep writing, please.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thanks for the reviews, I'm glad you enjoyed.
*dies* I think I'll change my opinion about ice-cream. My, how I managed to miss this when it was first posted I have no idea. But I'm making up for it. Pure enjoyment, so far.
Whew! *mops forehead with large green silk hanky* what a particularly juicy smutlet. I just know my dreams tonight will revolve around a snarky potions master, large tub of B&J's Phish Food, maybe a little whipped cream.......*drifts off into own warped imagination*.....Mmmmmmmmm........Oh sorry, got a little carried away there. A fabulous literary work with so much lemony goodness in it. Now all I need to do is persuade hubby that I really DO need a large tub of Ice Cream tonight!Blessings :)x
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I wonder if B&J would give me commission for the increase in their sales? Thank you very much for reviewing.
Mmhh... What a yummy dessert! And something to laugh about: Marriage Law! LOL! Great smut! I wish there would be more.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you . I'm not a big fan of the MLC as you've probably guessed!
I love this story, I've got a silly grin plastered over my face that just wont leave. Excellent.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to review
Oooohhhhh, more!And you answered the picture question, tt!Sandra
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Afraid that's it for this fic but I'm glad you enjoyed it.
*PURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR*Only one problem--it was too short! Go write something else SS/HG, please!~Lotm
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you Lotm. I wrote the smut as practice for a much longer story which I shall start posting soon.
I loved the sharing of fantasies near the end. I laughed about the Marriage Law one and, of course, the detention one! (*raises hand* Can I have detention?)
Absolutely breathtaking!
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you NSS - I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow. Now THAT was sexy. The whole fantasy thing... Hermione being in control... Severus letting her be in control. My head is swimming. Thank you. (And I know I read the second chapter before the first earlier, but now I get to go read it again!!)
Fantabulous smut writing! Loved the anal bit, you wrote that so very well. It's one part of smut I really want to write too, but never got around to. I may, just for the hell of it now. Anyway, funny, hot, and sweet. Nice combo.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you for that
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
- I must admit it was something I had to push myself to write - I'm glad you think it worked
Loved this. Short and sweet.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you
Nicely done. You've pandered to my love of smut AND my love of romance! I'm happy that they both were able to confess their dreams / fantasies and desires without being ridiculed by the other. 
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Glad you think I got the balance right - thanks for reviewing
Just stopping in to say that I bought some ice cream last night. I sent an owl off to Snape, but he's not shown up yet. Damn.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
LOL - thanks Southern
Forgot to mention it earlyer. The photo by his bedside, the one he put away, what did it show?Sandra
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
It's in the second chapter
Mmmhhh... That was yummy! I want a dessert, please!
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you. There's more on the way.
I've just eaten some ice cream, now I consider the idea of taking some more.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
Thank you for taking the time to review
Mmmmmhhhhhh, what to say? Ah, yes, I know!HOT, HOT, HOT!and delicious!Sandra
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
I'm glad you think so. Thank you for reviewing.
AAAUGH--where's the rest of it?!~Lotmthe frustrated(and whom is definitely raiding her stash of medicinal ice cream, now) (she has a sore throat, so it's truly for medicinal purposes...even if it is thin mint cookie flavoured)
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
The second (and final) chapter is still in the queue - should be up shortly - thanks for reviewing
I'm having ice-cream right now. Great stuff. I can't wait for more.
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
I'm glad you're enjoying it - thank you for reviewing
Oh God! I so wish I was not at work right now!
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
LOL - make sure you're at home with the doors locked for the second part *wink* - thanks for the review
Your story lives up to the promise of the title. thank you
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
thank you
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
thank you
....I think I may have blacked out at one point! That was just incredible from start to finish. He was so very careful and loving about anal sex, it was a joy to read. It's not often you come across such a thoughtfully written encounter between them and it really shone through. Absolutely beautiful story!!
Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)
thank you