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Potions Under Duress Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream
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Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream

1: Hermione's Fantasy

2: Severus' Fantasy

Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream

melusin

52 Reviews   |   52 Ratings, 0 Likes, 117 Favorites )

Humor Erotica Smut Potions Under Duress 11,019 Words 2 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Oh and there's a Blindfold - I forgot to mention the Blindfold!

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Chapters (2)

Chapter 1: Hermione's Fantasy

Chapter 2: Severus' Fantasy


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Alan Rickman obsessed ex-civil servant now living the good life in France. I only write in the good ship SS/HG. However, if you think that the only way these two can get together is by some sort of forced marriage, 'binding' or whatever, don't read my stories. You will be disappointed.

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OWL Ashwinder and my IJ asylum (see above).

Reviews for Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream

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0/10

Corylea

Fun!

I think my favorite part was when Snape told Hermione that he wouldn't let her leave until he was sated, and she took a deliberate step over the threshold.  Slytherin cunning, meet Gryffindor bravery! :-)

10/10

HBAR

Love it!  A nice mix of cozy and hot.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thanks

10/10

HBAR

How have I not read this?!  *fans self* I loved every minute.  Her fantasy was sexy yet simplistic, and for me that made it believable. I can't say anything else because I'm off to read the next part.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

thank you

10/10

mick42

I have the oddest craving for ice cream, I can't think why.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

thanks :)

10/10

Tiz Lestrange

That was HOOOOT!!!!! Wow!!! I want Severus, too!!!!!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thanks. Well, who wouldn't?

0/10

Owlbait

Oh, deary my :o)    lurrrve the fanfic plot fantasies.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

thanks

0/10

Cerydden M_Layne

Just re-read this one.  Still one of my favorites.  I love your work -- thanks!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

glad you like itthanks for reviewing

10/10

katielady08

yummy!  I really liked this!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Goodthanks for reviewing

0/10

Karfinwen

Holy. Crap.  Easily the sexiest SS/HG story I've ever read.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

thank you

0/10

EverMystique

Very hot and sexy story. Nicely done.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

thanks

0/10

tudorpot

Oh, lots of lovely fantasies- I love the ones with the blindfold and ice cream. Great writing, very hot.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thanks glad you enjoyed it.

0/10

Florws

I love your stories, they are fantastically naughty!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

LOL! Thank you

10/10

sevfank

great story.  thanks for writing - who wouldn't fantasize about snape in the bedroom with the chocolate ice cream yummy!!!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Yeah... works for me ;)Thanks for reviewing.

0/10

GinnyW

Lovely bit 'o smut and a lovely ending. Loved that his fantasies included the MLC, raped!virgin=rescue his true love, and the ever-popular detention. :)

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thanks, glad you liked it :)

10/10

breastlady

I absolutely loved it!  It was very sexy and very emotionally stirring at the same time.  Who could ask for more!  I will save this in my favorites a read this one again.  No matter how much I think I like reading smut, smut with romance is like chocolate ice cream with big chunks of dark chocolate mixed in and has no calories.  You can never get enough.          Breastlady

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Wistful_stargazer

Fantastic anticipation factor going on with the characters.~~Hope you enjoyed my first attempt at sustained smut writing!~~Very HOT and well written.  I couldn't tell that it was your first attempt.Well Done!=D

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thank you.  Yes, it was - a sort of preparation exercise for longer works which took on a life of its own.

10/10

DarkPoetess

Wonderful smut is all I can say.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

You are too kind!

10/10

Mrs_D_Radcliffe

ABSOLUTELY-BLOODY-BRILLIANT *round of applause* now that is what you call a fantasy, Severus Snape, blindfolded AND chocolate ice cream. Correction: Belgian chocolate ice cream. Oh good god you are a genius!! *grin*

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

That's what I call a fantasy too! *smirk*.  Glad you enjoyed and thanks for leaving a review.

10/10

Wolfie

Brilliant. the story line was superb and you captured the characters wonderfully.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

10/10

Miepje

*yum* a delicious little smut-fic! Very enjoyable. I hope you will write more stories; I will certainly read them ^^Thanks!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

I do have a few more planned - thank you for reviewing.

10/10

Kendrasnapeobsessed

Great one! You have a wonderful talent, please write more delicous tales for us.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

That's very kind of you - I'll do my best, lol.  Thank you for reviewing

10/10

pickles

that was excellent.  thank you..

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Glad you think so - thank you for your comments

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

Are you going to do a sequel with whip cream and cherries on top??? ;)

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Funny you should say that.  In my other story there is a scene with whipped cream and strawberries - but it's not a sequel to this.

Response from pickles (Reviewer)

I'll have to check it out.

0/10

Vorona

 This was a fun read.  I really liked the Marriage Law allusion.  You have an excellent sense of humor!  As for the smut... I really like the fact that they switched, and my secret hope is that they will continue to do so in the future. 

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for reviewing.

10/10

amsev

Lovely, lovely! Hot Hot Hottississimo!!! Well done.

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thanks.  Glad you enjoyed.

0/10

justjen

Yummy lemony goodness, I loved it!

Response from melusin (Author of Professor Snape, in the Bedroom, with the Chocolate Ice Cream)

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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