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Catspaws
Doomspark213 Reviews | 6.94/10 (213 Ratings, 0 Likes, 193 Favorites )
Chaos ensues when the Familiars at Hogwarts decide to play matchmaker.
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Doomspark
Member Since 2005 | 27 Stories | Favorited by 152 | 35 Reviews Written | 531 Review Responses
Male. Married. Live in Florida. Owned by two Egyptian Maus, a red tabby, and a hairball-emitting pile of fluff.
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Good to see Thunder's ploy with Lucius' broom worked so well. So one down and a probable change of direction for Sprout and Argus is in order. Heaven help Hermione if Severus gets a whiff of what she's planning to do. One one hand he'll be in awe, on the other livid. I'm thinking livid may well outweigh any awe. Harry, however, needs to grow up and though he's been through a horrendous time, trying to change his friends so that he is secure is definitely not the right way to go about it.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Harry is definitely being a prat here. And yes, Snape would be definitely livid.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Harry is definitely being a prat here. And yes, Snape would be definitely livid.
I should imagine Lucius will be ecstatic about the thought of Xia having his children.
I love the perplexed conversation between the familiar's as they try and understand that the ritual need not be done in order to have a litter. :p
So, the sidhe actually did Hermione and Severus a favour of sorts once they'd escaped the hunt.
No doubt Duster and Crooks will be well pleased that their dream magic seems to have done the trick, and that a thorough exploration will be on the cards when the pair of them stop bandying words around.
I love the way the familiars are plotting, trying to find ways to get their pets together, though tripping Argus down the stairs might be a little drastic. ;)The detention and research with Duster keeping an eye on proceedings - and keeping his pet in line, is just gorgeous, as well as the clawed touch to keep Severus in line and stop him cocking things up. :)I think they need to get Harry occupied too.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Well ... this is pretty much my "Harry is a prat" fic. It was supposed to be a complete comedy but ended up with quite a few serious overtones.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Well ... this is pretty much my "Harry is a prat" fic. It was supposed to be a complete comedy but ended up with quite a few serious overtones.
The familiars plans appear to be paying off for Lucius and Xia, as well as Argus and Ivy.Severus, however, seems determined to wring Hermione's neck for stupid stunts instead, and of course he knew how to force her out of the dodgy transformation. A shetland pony and a sea serpent sren't really suited to swimming together either, unfortunately.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Originally, Snape was going to be a zebra - but my inner Goblin kept making bad jokes about them "horsing around".
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Originally, Snape was going to be a zebra - but my inner Goblin kept making bad jokes about them "horsing around".
I adore this story, Doom, and I'm so pleased you managed to coax the familiars out to play again. :)I'm re-reading again because though I know the premise, I've forgotten a lot of the backstory. It's not a struggle to re-read, in fact I'm planning to thoroughly enjoy myself. I love their matchmaking attempts, and though Minerva has the idea of creating such a potion, I daresay they'll be experiments that meet with marked failures if Duster and the others have their way.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I'm really glad you're enjoying this story enough to reread it. That's quite a compliment to any writer! Thank you!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I'm really glad you're enjoying this story enough to reread it. That's quite a compliment to any writer! Thank you!
This in-depth look at 'pets,' both human and other species, is absorbing, humorous and revealing. The last few, crazy hours before students arrive is written so clearly, I wonder if you, Doomspark, are not an educator? On the other hand, I also like your animal characters...except you lack an animal familiar who is truly a dummy. As in humans, some can't find their way out of a paper bag without help...although cat familiars are not unknown around my house. Those are truly scary. Worse, I'm almost sure they have the ability to apparate, practice human mind control and plot...a lot. Great story that makes me happy to see continued. JF
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
*grin* Not educator but former priest. Also student of human nature. A really dumb Familiar... I will certainly think about it.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
*grin* Not educator but former priest. Also student of human nature. A really dumb Familiar... I will certainly think about it.
Thank you so much for another update, I am so trilled to see a new chapter added, not to mention the knowlegde that you are still writing fanfics:-))
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Oh I'm still writing - just juggling Real Life at the same time. I need to win the lottery so I can afford to write full-time.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Oh I'm still writing - just juggling Real Life at the same time. I need to win the lottery so I can afford to write full-time.
So glad to see an update .
I feel no sorrow for Peeves, as he feels no sorrow for those he has hurt, he is not sorry for what he has done, he is sorry that he will have to pay the price for his cruelty.
It is good to see Hermione opening her mind, to the magic that exists beyond the pages of a book.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Glad you're enjoying it! I'll try to be better about updates.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Glad you're enjoying it! I'll try to be better about updates.
Harry has "lost so may people he cares about" that he stalks Hermione into the potions classroom for fear that she will be, not insulted, annoyed, or given tiresome tasks, but KILLED by...Professor Snape? Snape, who puts more effort into protecting children from actual danger (as opposed to preventing injuries to their tender little egos) than any other ten characters in the Potterverse combined. Alright, maybe Harry is dunderheaded enough to believe that, but how can Hermione be such an idiot as to put that forward as an excuse? Duster had better look elsewhere for a woman intelligent enough to partner with his pet. Hermione has just disqualified herself. Surely there are women in their thirties and forties available somewhere in wizarding Britain who won't insult Severus with such childish nonsense.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Well... I'm sorry you don't care for my story, but I appreciate the con-crit nonetheless.
Response from Very Small Prophet (Reviewer)
I never said I don't care for your story; I don't bother commenting on stories that I think aren't worth reading. For Harry to be an idiot about Professor Snape is perfectly in character. I suppose if Hermione isn't at least a bit stupid to begin with she had no room for growth.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Well... I'm sorry you don't care for my story, but I appreciate the con-crit nonetheless.
Response from Very Small Prophet (Reviewer)
I never said I don't care for your story; I don't bother commenting on stories that I think aren't worth reading. For Harry to be an idiot about Professor Snape is perfectly in character. I suppose if Hermione isn't at least a bit stupid to begin with she had no room for growth.
Snape doesn't seem to me the sort to carry on long conversations with his pet. A word or two here and there, but that's all.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
And I've always seen him as the type to talk to his cat - as cats can't be made to tell secrets.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
And I've always seen him as the type to talk to his cat - as cats can't be made to tell secrets.
I am so happy to see you have updated!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Oh noooooooooo! Doom, you've made me feel sorry for Peeves! I mean, I still think he's a terrible trial to tolerate, and if I lived in the castle I'd do what I could to be stop him causing trouble, but.... in that last section, you made me pity the beastly bu— You made me look at things through his eyes. Just a bit.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Glad you're enjoying the story. Hopefully it won't be quite as long between updates.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Glad you're enjoying the story. Hopefully it won't be quite as long between updates.
Love this little universe you created where the familiars seem to be leading their pets around lol Thanks for a very amusing read in places and darker in others. I do hope you are going to finish this at some stage.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I'm working on it! Trust me!Wildcard's response: Oooh lovely to hear that. I'm purring with pleasure with anticipation. Thanks.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I'm working on it! Trust me!Wildcard's response: Oooh lovely to hear that. I'm purring with pleasure with anticipation. Thanks.
Sorry for the late review, and thanks for the update! Great chapter. Loving the various developments. Can't wait to see how many pregnancies Fawkes tries to manipulate. Looking forward to seeing how Neville and Millie's joining goes and what the by-product result will be on Severus and Hermione!
Totally happy to see the update, you made my day.
Hi,I'm so glad you came back to this story. Are you also updating on Ashwinder?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
I will be, yes.
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Catspaws is mostly updated on Ashwinder now, and I'm beginning to add some of my other stories there as well.
Squeeee!!! Thank you for the new chapter. I am thrilled that Duster and Crooks will not erase Severus and Hermione's memories. I do hope they can make the potion in secret just for themselves; I hate to see all their work go to naught.I hope they succeed in controlling Peeves, although I will not be hasty in guessing who or what was responsible for trashing the student potions stores. Those stains sound dangerous, almost sentient.Thanks again for the new chapter! BTW, can you give us a quick list of what has changed in the rewrite, in terms of plot or characters?
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Two major changes in terms of plot: I added the thread with Neville and the Sidhe, and I trashed the original ending. Originally, I was going to just rewrite it to tie things up a bit more neatly - but it kind of took on a life of its own.No major changes in terms of characters. Lots of minor spelling and grammar fixes. Things to come: A few new OCs (human and otherwise), more about those stains on the storeroom floor, and a hopefully tidier ending than the first time around.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
Cool! Thanks for explaining. Can't guess what you'll do with Neville and the Sidhe. Will we ever again see Hermione as the Animagus Shetland pony? That cracked me up! (BTW, did you ever sell your house? I didn't see an update on your LJ.)
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
Hint: Think about where Neville is getting married, and the last line of the wedding invitation.
Response from June W (Reviewer)
Ahhh..... very nice! Thanks.
Love the familiars' voices and all the side stories, such as Neville and the Sidhe. :)
What a terrific story! I can hardly wait for the next installment. The familiars are so individual and appropriate to their 'pets.' Severus and Hermione are well characterized. Congratulations!
How nice to see an update for this! Hmmm, the familiars are missing, but black and orange stains are winding around Severus and Hermione's feet. Crookshanks and Duster after being covered by potion ingredients??
Response from Doomspark (Author of Catspaws)
*whistles innocently*
First of all thank you so much for a great update to a great story, I was so happy to see it!!! Seccond, I am just as trilled to see that you still write fanfiction for your avid fans to enjoy! I do allow myself to hope that a new update will come along in the not so distant future, both to this story and to " The Varlet", both stories on the top-10 list over WIPs I would love to see finished.
Again, thank you so much for this update, you really made my day!!!
What a brilliant idea for a story! I'm enjoying myself very much as I read this. Great job!
I didn’t see Lucius as Headmaster coming!
Those familiars had better think fast or the jig will be up!
I can imagine that exploration will be extremely thorough. 😉