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New Beginning
phoenix125 Reviews | 7.11/10 (125 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Five years after the war Hermione's life is stuck in a rut. She's not sure what she wants in life, but she knows it's not starting a family with her husband, Ron. What will it take for her to find direction again?
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I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for New Beginning
I love this story. Thank younfor the wonderful read.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so glad you are enjoying it. I know it's a little out of the ordinary on the pairing front, but I'm trying to keep it reasonably close to the books. I did seriously consider finding a way for Severus to survive, but perhaps another time.
I love this story. Thank younfor the wonderful read.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm so very glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for your review and I hope you enjoy the rest of it as it unfolds.
Lucius is playing a very long game , now Hermione is thinking in the right direction, he sees he can nolonger ignore his sister. Will Delilah come back to the fold ? only time will tell.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
The advantage of getting older is that you learn patience is a virtue. And it's nice to see him trying to right one last wrong in his life. Hopefully Delilah can see that he has changed into a decent person.
Finally Hermione has come to her scenes and want to seek a divorce! Intelligent womanAnd Lucius's meeting with his sister would be fun after all these years:-)Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Thank you. I know poor Hermione the know-it-all is having to come with terms that perhaps she doesn't know it all, but she is making strides. As is Lucius, who is finally learning to think about someone other than himself. Nice to see that he does have some humanity.
Connor is nudging him along (what are friends for?) and has succeeded in helping Lucius make a choice, a step forward--hmmmn, dating versus a fling... look forward to seeing how this pans out for him and the witch of his choice!:-)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I really waffled on having Severus survive, but found that it was more interesting to have a married friend with a wife who keeps trying to fix Lucius up. And he did get Lucius to actually consider breaking his self-imposed isolation from eligible witches. Hopefully this is the right nudge.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I really waffled on having Severus survive, but found that it was more interesting to have a married friend with a wife who keeps trying to fix Lucius up. And he did get Lucius to actually consider breaking his self-imposed isolation from eligible witches. Hopefully this is the right nudge.
Mmmmn, love the simmering step by step advancement of Lucius into Hermione's life; it's wonderfully balanced with Ron's attentiveness to her and the steady interactions and build ups going on between all the characters--each wizard assuming he knows what she needs or how she needs to be, what she needs to be doing to fit in with their own picture, with her in it... I'm wondering what Hermione will decide... Great Chapter!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Nothing like a bored Lucius, is there? LOL And Ron... Well, Ron's always been a tad clueless when it comes to interpersonal relationships and I think we're going to see that come through. He does have a good heart and he tries, but will it be enough?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Nothing like a bored Lucius, is there? LOL And Ron... Well, Ron's always been a tad clueless when it comes to interpersonal relationships and I think we're going to see that come through. He does have a good heart and he tries, but will it be enough?
Thank you for the update, I cross my fingers that Hermione will finally find the courrage and mindset to end the hopeless marriage with Ron. The sooner she does that, the sooner I can aknowlegde her as a smart woman again, and I really want her to be smart.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
LOL That was my thought exactly on her marriage to Ron. The fun part has been finding some sort of semi-logical reason such a smart person would have married someone she was so clearly unsuited for a long term relationship and then have her take the long road of discovery. More coming soon. :)
Ohh! It's not becoming for Ron to make Such a cunning plan. Of course Hermione knows better than give in.......And for Lucius, this is a wonderful situation for him, i can't wait to know how he's going to use it:-)Good job
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
It was rather cunning for Ron, wasn't it? Of course, he did actually think about using the Basilisk tooth so he is prone to occasional flashes of brilliance. And Lucius simply must be salivating, mustn't he?
You did a good job to not depict Ron as the black sheep! They simply don't fit so well together, but at some point one item leads to the other... Now I'm curious, where is Lucius going to lead her?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I never really saw Ron as a heel or a bad guy, just seriously wondered what JKR was thinking pairing them up (and I see that she has finally seen the light and admitted that perhaps it wasn't the best match). The answer to your question will be out later this week. Awful trusting of her, wasn't it? Of course, she likely did not realize that he can come and go at will because it's his company.
I think Ron must know by now that Hermione is just not capable of giving him what he needs. It is so painful to watch a marriage die, I just hope it will be quick.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Ron is still in a bit of denial. Other reasons for him being so obstinate will be coming to light very shortly. As to quick, we can all hope.
Lucius is going to have to be very patient , to let Hermione end her marriage to Ron in her own time, and in her own way.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
He definitely is, but as a Slytherin and astute businessman, I believe he has the patience. :)
And where will he seek that fling, I wonder?I still look forward to Hermione's holiday. Especially the five days where she'll be on holiday without husband. (I considered writing alone, but I don't want to jump to conclusions...) :)
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Oh, we'll see what Lucius decides. As to Hermione, I think being sans Ron will be really good for some soul searching on her part, and not necessarily about her job alone.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Oh, we'll see what Lucius decides. As to Hermione, I think being sans Ron will be really good for some soul searching on her part, and not necessarily about her job alone.
I like what you've done with Lucius here. He's been through a great deal, and he has learned from it, but he's still opportunistic and well, still Lucius.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well Lucius still has to be Lucius, even if he is a bit enlightened. I'm glad you are enjoying so far. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Well Lucius still has to be Lucius, even if he is a bit enlightened. I'm glad you are enjoying so far. Thanks for reviewing.
I enjoyed this first chapter very much. It's well written and honest. Looking forward to reading more.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like it so far. The first few chapters obviously have to provide some set up and give a look where their lives are. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Thanks for reviewing.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad you like it so far. The first few chapters obviously have to provide some set up and give a look where their lives are. I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Thanks for reviewing.
Ahh Lucius, once the fling has been flung it can not be unflung, and you know the name of the witch you want to fling, now don't you?
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Sadly he does know the witch he wants, but he actually has some morals here, which interfere with his desires. But at least he's not moping around anymore.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Sadly he does know the witch he wants, but he actually has some morals here, which interfere with his desires. But at least he's not moping around anymore.
I really feel for Hremione, banging hre head againt a brick wall called Ron.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
She really is, isn't she? Emotional range of a teaspoon kind of says it all, doesn't it?
I don't know why, but I don't think Ron will mind that much, just a hunch.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Oh, I think Ron might mind greatly.
Avoiding Lucius may prove harder than it looks.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
That is quite likely true. He does seem to be showing up wherever she is, doesn't he?
YES! UPDATE!!Love the suspicion/uncertainty you're building up with Lucius and Kesselwerks; a nice counter-balance for his attention/focus with Hermione. ;) I really like reading his POV.Thanks for the update! Looking forward to more. ^_^b
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
I'm glad your enjoying his POV. It was hard for me to not use it during the vacation, but it was so important to see what was going on with Hermione. I'm trying to do every other or at most every third chapter from Lucius' POV since he has a lot going on in his life as well, more than he would probably like. LOL
Why do I think it wasn't really a dream? Ron is a twat, no news there.
I am much more interested in what Lucius might be up to. If Hermione thinks she won't be working directly under Lucius, she should consider getting her head examined.
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Yeah, no big revelation there about Ron, was there? As to dream or no dream, Hermione's a good girl on that front. :) We'll just have to see how her working for Lucius happens.
Ahhhh, noooo! It stops there?I love how well-written this is; and also, and importantly, how believably you portray Hermione and Ron's relationship issues. ... and Lucius is love. :)Thank you for sharing!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Oh, yes, there will be plenty of 'it stops there?' moments. Lucius really is the anti-Ron. Come on, Hermione, you picked someone beneath you, open your eyes. And I'm glad you find the relationship issues believable. I think it's much more dramatic to build up to something rather than bombshell it and wave everything away. I'm not utterly discounting what JKR did, just correcting this whopper of a mistake. :)
Great tension and disappointment depicted--can really feel how Ron is just so oblivious to her and to what she needs... on so many levels... Great chapter! Looking forward to more!
Response from phoenix (Author of New Beginning)
Poor Hermione having to deal with her subconscious. It's trying to show her how oblivious Ron is, and he really obliged this chapter, didn't he? After all, she's not the type of person to have a fling, is she. ;)
Very well written story about a marriage falling apart. It shows how it is (almost) always both-sided and how your effort to make things better from the other's point of view is just the oppposite.
Hermione's progress and change of thought is very believable.
You got Lucius out lightly, but then so many German and especially Italian fascist war criminals after www2 didn't even got a slap on the wrist.
Lucius is very likeable here. He had a profound reason for change, but ingraned beliefs are the hardest to overcome, so I would expect that they would come up from time to time, usually in time of stress ...
You also made believable clash between muggleborn and pureblood culture.
Side characters are well done, Connor in particular. I'm looking forward to read about dinner at his home.
And I would like to see Lucius meet Hermione's parents ...
Hope you will update soon.
I'm so happy that everything seems to go smoothly!!!!
Oh, I am still completely enthralled by your lusciously detailed and very well-crafted tale. I hadn't reviewed again, after my first, simply because I just wanted to watch developments as they occurred. WOW! These chapters have been so well-paced, so beautifully written... ah! I don't have the superlatives to describe my intense enjoyment.Happy New Year